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Teddiursa Warrior
24th November 2005, 8:05 AM
Interviewer and pokemon trainer in his spare time Whirly
Reporter in the field Minky the Mankey
Weathergirl Sunny the Surskit
And your host Sweela the Teddiursa
All together we make the pokemon news team

EPISODE ONE

Sweela: "Hi hi its me Sweela your host for our very first episode of the pokemon news. Today we are interviewing the full evolutions of the three fire starters and so we welcome Charizard, Typhlosion and Blaziken."

Charizard: 'Hello'!

Typhlosion: 'Hi'!

Blaziken: 'Hey'!

Sweela: "Okay so lets hand it over to our interviewer Whirly."

Whirly: "Okay guys my first question is do you enjoy having tests performed on you by the proffesors?"

Charizard: "I dont really mind cos i get to fly around a burn stuff."

Typhlosion: "It can get really frusterating having my teeth checked and i also really hate having to get my hair cut."

Blaziken: "Yeah cos' you like being a dag."

Typhlosion: "Thats not true!"

Blaziken: "You know its true dont deny it."

Typhlosion: "No its because i like my hair to florish in the sun (fixes hair)."

Blaziken: "Nutcrack!"

Typhlosion: "Shut up!"

Whirly: "Okay guys break it up!"

Typhlosion: "She started it!"

Blaziken: "Hey dont blame me for your aggression problem."

Typhlosion: "I DO NOT HAVE AN AGGRESSION PROBLEM!"

Charizard: (Stands up and spreads wings accidently creating a gust that sends Typhlosion and Blaziken opposite ways into walls) "Hey guys break it up."

Blaziken: (Covered in white powder) "Thats it your dead."(Performs a jump kick aimed at Charizards face but Charizard ducks sending Blaziken through the window and falling down the twenty storey building)

Whirly: "Crap shes gonna die!"

Typhlosion: 'So'

Charizard:(To Typhlosion) "How can you be so uncaring you evil wretch."(Sends a full force blow of wind sending Typhlosion out the already shattered window)

Whirly: "Im gonna have a big lawsuit on my hands"

Charizard: "Wait Typhlosions still alive."

Whirly: "Oh good"

Charizard: "Damn I cant beleive hes still alive."

Whirly: "Now whos the heartless wretch."

Charizard:"I dont care nowone will catch me."

Charizard flies out the already broken window into the distance

Sweela: "Okay now lets go to our reporter in the field Minky the Mankey."

Minky is standing in the foyer of a department store which is on fire and in the backround there are people with pokeballs, telivisions etc. running away while other people are taking a much as they can get and taking of as well.

Minky: "Well the great department store that i am ment to be talking about is currently being burned down by a crazy rampaging Typhlosion saying that he will claim revenge on a Blaziken."

Whirly:.......

Sweela: "O.K. a crazy rampaging Typhlosion I dont know how that could have started."

Whirly: "Uh yeah i know what you mean Sweela that attacking Typhlosion was totally out of the blue."

Sweela: "Um Minky how are the citizens reacting to the phycho Typhlosion."

Minky: "Well their looting the whole dept. store and I dont thi...OUCH YOU STEPPED ON MY TAIL!"

Minky goes into a rage and jumps onto a man and starts to pummel him angrily

Sweela: "Okay now were going to see what Sunny has to say about the weather."

Sunny: "Sweela i cant see a thing the sky is covered in thick black smoke and the fumes are making me dizzy."

Whirly: (Sarcastic voice) "I wonder where thats coming from."

Sunny: "Ack' ack' quickly get here i cant breath!"

Sweela: "Oh **** somewoene ****ing get up there and help Sunny!"

Sunny: 'ACK' ACK' ACK'!!!'

Sweela: "Uh i hope you enjoyed the show goodnight."
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please review

Dragonfree
24th November 2005, 12:33 PM
Okay, even though this is an interview fic which excuses the script format, it needs a lot of work. You should spellcheck your fic before posting it, for one thing, and punctuation is your friend.

If you do not show improvement in the next episode, I'll have to close this.

Eileen
24th November 2005, 3:59 PM
Bad grammar, spelling, and script format...

You really need to use Microsoft's Word Spellcheck and grammar check to clean up the improper spelling and grammar. Also, have someone read it over for you.

Teddiursa Warrior
24th November 2005, 10:11 PM
Bad grammar, spelling, and script format...

You really need to use Microsoft's Word Spellcheck and grammar check to clean up the improper spelling and grammar. Also, have someone read it over for you.

this is my first fic so im kind of unsure what tools to use. i know the basics but If i do a second episode of this i will make sure everything is perfected first. my computer shuts down alot so I started to panic with the story so at the time I didn't think of spelling checks and other thing like that.;216; ;216;

Teddiursa Warrior
24th November 2005, 10:46 PM
Interviewer and pokemon trainer in his spare time Whirly
Reporter in the field Minky the Mankey
Weathergirl Sunny the Surskit
And your host Sweela the Teddiursa
All together we make the pokemon news team

EPISODE ONE

Sweela: "Hi hi its me Sweela your host for our very first episode of the pokemon news. Today we are interviewing the full evolutions of the three fire starters and so we welcome Charizard, Typhlosion and Blaziken."

Charizard: 'Hello'!

Typhlosion: 'Hi'!

Blaziken: 'Hey'!

Sweela: "Okay so lets hand it over to our interviewer Whirly."

Whirly: "Okay guys my first question is do you enjoy having tests performed on you by the proffesors?"

Charizard: "I dont really mind cos i get to fly around a burn stuff."

Typhlosion: "It can get really frusterating having my teeth checked and i also really hate having to get my hair cut."

Blaziken: "Yeah cos' you like being a dag."

Typhlosion: "Thats not true!"

Blaziken: "You know its true dont deny it."

Typhlosion: "No its because i like my hair to florish in the sun (fixes hair)."

Blaziken: "Nutcrack!"

Typhlosion: "Shut up!"

Whirly: "Okay guys break it up!"

Typhlosion: "She started it!"

Blaziken: "Hey dont blame me for your aggression problem."

Typhlosion: "I DO NOT HAVE AN AGGRESSION PROBLEM!"

Charizard: (Stands up and spreads wings accidently creating a gust that sends Typhlosion and Blaziken opposite ways into walls) "Hey guys break it up."

Blaziken: (Covered in white powder) "Thats it your dead."(Performs a jump kick aimed at Charizards face but Charizard ducks sending Blaziken through the window and falling down the twenty storey building)

Whirly: "Crap shes gonna die!"

Typhlosion: 'So'

Charizard:(To Typhlosion) "How can you be so uncaring you evil wretch."(Sends a full force blow of wind sending Typhlosion out the already shattered window)

Whirly: "Im gonna have a big lawsuit on my hands"

Charizard: "Wait Typhlosions still alive."

Whirly: "Oh good"

Charizard: "Damn I cant beleive hes still alive."

Whirly: "Now whos the heartless wretch."

Charizard:"I dont care nowone will catch me."

Charizard flies out the already broken window into the distance

Sweela: "Okay now lets go to our reporter in the field Minky the Mankey."

Minky is standing in the foyer of a department store which is on fire and in the backround there are people with pokeballs, telivisions etc. running away while other people are taking a much as they can get and taking of as well.

Minky: "Well the great department store that i am ment to be talking about is currently being burned down by a crazy rampaging Typhlosion saying that he will claim revenge on a Blaziken."

Whirly:.......

Sweela: "O.K. a crazy rampaging Typhlosion I dont know how that could have started."

Whirly: "Uh yeah i know what you mean Sweela that attacking Typhlosion was totally out of the blue."

Sweela: "Um Minky how are the citizens reacting to the phycho Typhlosion."

Minky: "Well their looting the whole dept. store and I dont thi...OUCH YOU STEPPED ON MY TAIL!"

Minky goes into a rage and jumps onto a man and starts to pummel him angrily

Sweela: "Okay now were going to see what Sunny has to say about the weather."

Sunny: "Sweela i cant see a thing the sky is covered in thick black smoke and the fumes are making me dizzy."

Whirly: (Sarcastic voice) "I wonder where thats coming from."

Sunny: "Ack' ack' quickly get here i cant breath!"

Sweela: "Oh **** somewoene ****ing get up there and help Sunny!"

Sunny: 'ACK' ACK' ACK'!!!'

Sweela: "Uh i hope you enjoyed the show goodnight."
;216; ;283; ;056; ;157; ;006; ;257;

please review

Okay I re-did the episode and worked on all the spelling problems so I hpope there is nothing wrong with it. I might have missed fixing some of the words but I do not think they will be noticable.

;216; ;216; ;216; ;216; enjoy-Teddiursa Warrior

hikari_blaze
24th November 2005, 11:51 PM
If you don't know how to spell, try the dictionary. >.>

punk umbreon
25th November 2005, 8:50 AM
hey man try to spell better i thought you where sopose to be the good one at spelling ?

Teddiursa Warrior
8th December 2005, 7:16 AM
Okay the second episode is up finally. My computer kept on shutting down so I did not get much time to work on it and also this time I am going to check for spelling mistakes

Interviewer and trainer in his spare time Whirly
Reporter in the field Minky the Mankey
Weathergirl Sunny the Surskit
And your host Sweela the Teddiursa

Together we make the Pokemon news team

EPISODE TWO

Sweela: "Okay hi everyone and welcome to the second episode of the pokemon news."

Guy from the audience: "Yeah because the first episode was crap!"

Sweela: "Why do we even have an audience if this is a news show."

Guy from the audience: "because we tell you how f****d up the first show was!"

Whirly: "Can you just get over the fact that we were not able to get through one question."

Guy from the audience: 'No'

Whirly: "Thats it whats your name because Im reporting you."

Guy from the audience: 'Frank'

Whirly: (sarcastic)"Oh aren't you Mr.Original."

[Frank]: "What my name's Frank whats wrong with that."

Whirly: (sarcastic)"I really beleive you (serious) Rob and Bob could you please escort [Frank] outside."

Rob and Bob: "Yes sir!"

The two Dusclops by the name of Rob and Bob drag [Frank] off ignoring his kicking, screaming and pleads for help.

Whirly: (In a dangerously pleasant voice) "Sweela please continue."

Sweela: "Okay now today we are going to be interviewing a Pokemon that you will care for it because you will be sucked in by its cut charm. But then it will steal your money and leave you broke so without further ado lets welcome Meowth."

Meowth: "Everything that Teddiursa said is a lie."

Another guy from the audience: "Whatever scumbag!"

Whirly: "Hey shut up or you'll end up like that Frank guy

Frank: (Really badly bruised and cut)"Im still alive!"

Whirly: "Rob and Bob could you please finish him off."

Rob and Bob: "yes sir!"

Frank: "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

Whirly: "Okay so question one is are you sorry for so many people you have stole from?"

Meowth: 'Yes'

Whirly: "Okay question two is why did you steal from them?"

Meowth: "I didn't"

Whirly: "Can you go for five minutes without Lying?"

Meowth: 'Yes'

Whirly: "Good now the next Question is that how did you reduce yourself to doing this?"

Meowth: "Reduced to doing what?"

Whirly: "Reduced to stealing from people."

Meowth: "Why do you want to know?"

Whirly: "Because it's my job."

Meowth: "Say please first."

Whirly: "JUST ANSWER THE BLOODY QUESTION!"

Meowth: "Okay okay calm down and say please."

Whirly: (trying to contain anger)"Could you please answer the question."

Meowth: "Whats the question again?"

Whirly: "RRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!"

Whirly attacks Meowth

Sweela: "Okay lets go to our reporter in the field Minky the Mankey."

Minky: "Well Sweela it seems I have found a bargain at this store called Soft Toy Paradise."

Sweela: "Hey thats where I go to get my collectable soft toys."

Minky: "Yeah well it seems that they are taking fifty percent off all the soft toys."

Sweela: "S**t Im there!"

Sweela runs out of the studio

Minky: "Sweela,Sweela.......oh stuff it lets just go to the Sunny the Weathergirl."

Sunny: "Alright Minky it seems that it will be a very cold night tonight so wrap up and turn your heaters on."

Minky: "Thanks Sunny okay now that concludes our show so goodnight."

Sunny: "Hey whats going on downstairs."

Sunny goes downstair to find Whirly and Meowth fighting and decides to goin in too.

Whirly: (While fighting)"Okay I hope you enjoyed the show goodnight!"

hope you liked it

punk umbreon
13th December 2005, 9:56 AM
That Was Better Than Before