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Hip-Hop Master
25th November 2005, 12:18 AM
WHEN PLAYS GO WRONG

This is a 'Funny set of plays' I made out of boredom:

Rated E10+ (couldnt find a better Rating)

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EPISODE ONE

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(Three quintuplets walk on stage.)

AUDIENCE: Hey! How come Three twins are quintuplets?
GUY WHO MADE PLAY: Oops Sorry. And by the way they aren't TWINS.

(Three triplets* walk on stage.)

AUDIENCE: That's better.

ANNOUNCER: We begin our stor....

GUY WHO MADE PLAY: Hey it aint no story! Tis a funny play!

ANNOUNCER: Oh sorry. We begin our FUNNY PLAY in this studio....

AUDEINCE: BOOOOOOOOO!

(Lights dim... we see a typical studio)

GUY WITH THE TAKE THINGY: Take un

GUY WHO MADE PLAY: Its not french you idiot!

GUY WITH THE TAKE THINGY: TAKE UNO

GUY WHO MADE PLAY: ITS ENGLISH NOT SPANISH

GUY WITH THE TAKE THINGY: Oh sorry. TAKE ONE

GUY WHO MADE PLAY: That's betta.

AUDIENCE: Go on with the play y'all

GUY IN THE PIKACHU COSTUME: Hello lil' girl

GIRL IN CHICKORITA SUIT: I AINT NO LIL GIRL YOU *FLEEP*

ANNOUNCER: Ummmm...We discountinue our play because of Violence and Language.

AUDIENCE 10- : BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

ANNOUNCER: We hoped you liked this show! Stay tuned for Epidsode 2!!!

AUDIENCE: Thank GOD!!!

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Hope you like it! Review Plz. Oh and I'll make more episodes.

CY4 P33P5

~MC

p.s. I know ts short, bear with me

Bu†cH
25th November 2005, 1:10 AM
Another script fanfic, eh?

Well the first chapter is kinda short and boring. But the fleep was funny.

Keep it up and get better the next chapter.

Hip-Hop Master
27th November 2005, 4:33 AM
Another script fanfic, eh?

Well the first chapter is kinda short and boring. But the fleep was funny.

Keep it up and get better the next chapter.

I would like to poinjt out some 'errors'. NO offense.

1. It aint no script fanfic. It's script PLAYS

2. I know it was short. I had to get off the computer.

OK the next play will be up by Monday latest.

CY4 P33P5

~MC

RaZoR LeAf
27th November 2005, 10:57 AM
1. If it's a Script Play then it should be arranged like one, with the correct format and wording. Since it is not, and contains speech from the audience who's interaction with a play is not scripted, it is a script fanfic.

2. If you had to get off the computer, then you must have been writing it in the reply box which is not allowed. IN future, I suggest you write in a Notepad/Word file until you have a decent amount THEN post it. This way, if you have to get off the computer you can save it and go back to it later.

But yeah, it wasn't funny. In the slightest.

Hip-Hop Master
30th November 2005, 10:28 PM
Sorry guys, can't keep my promise. I've been busy and still am. I'll upstae it about Sunday I guess. Excuse me.

CY4 P33P5

~MC

bLASTOIse_MAsTer
30th November 2005, 11:08 PM
uh...

1. Pretty much no originality and really short. how many minutes did it take u to write this? 5? 4?

2. SCRIPT FICS RN'T ALLOWED!

3. not the slighetest bit funny.

Bu†cH
30th November 2005, 11:12 PM
Script fics are allowed, but only if it is well done and took alot of time and effort on making it.

If script fics aren't allowed, even that of what I just said, then Poketalk would never have existed.