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Rukario_captor
2nd December 2005, 5:51 PM
Hey, it old, but i'm new on trhis board and NEED to post! It's been copy&pasted off a notepad document.

;rukario; -LUV Rukario

Quest for Suicune

This gets pretty mad by the end






Suicune....
The ice dog.
I had been on over twenty search engines today.....

Ceri:*daydreaming* w.o.w ONLY ten people worldwide have actualy come close to capturing Suic....
O_0!
Maxie: Hoil! Admin! Any news about Groudoom on Alphasearh377 today?
Ceri:*Hastily turns on at least 14 popup windows of Alpahsearch377* Err, no.
Maxie: HUMPH! No news since the epidemic where that kid scared him off.
Ceri:*mutters* grump. Won't find much, guess who was waiting back at the lava cave
With they're Lv100 EX Charazard?
Maxie: what was that?
Ceri: I said 'yes'
Maxie: *leaves the control room*
Ceri: This is getting daft, he spends all day marching around and getting angrer
than ever about Groundoom!
Computer:*bleeps*
Ceri: Huh?
Computer: POKEMON SPOTTED:
Ceri: Not another caterpie!?
Computer: DATA AVAILABLE
Ceri: better check anyhow *shrugs*
Computer: ID:
.....
SUICUNE....
Ceri: o_0
Computer: .....
Computer: SUICUNE TRACKED TO:
Ceri:*G.A.S.P*
Computer: DRAGONS DEN: JHOTO
Ceri:......


10 Minutes later
Ceri: RETURN! Charcoal!......
Ceri: Hope we got here fast enough.
Maxie: HOIL! Admin! Your meant to be in formation!
Ceri: Uh-oh! I left that computer on! Oh, great! *Runs away*
Ceri: Lucky Lance and I are in the same dragon club....*Phones Lance*
Lance: Hulo....
Ceri: Can you help me out here?
Lance: Watsa time.... AAAHHHHHHGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!! Its 3 O'clock in the morning you maniac!
Ceri: Well, just thought you'd like to know I got that salamance you wanted...
Lance: Uh?
Ceri: Well if I can't trust you with her....
Lance: Ce-ri! Ok, what do you want, I'm awake now anyway.
Ceri: Thanks, can you stand in for me up here at dragons den? If someone
replaces me, there's fifty admins here, well, that includes me. With fifty of us still up
here Maxie won't notice. I need to separate off as champion Firefox for a
while. You do already know Maxie as a part-time member so he'll think you were at dragons
den all this time.


Lance arrives and I skedaddle.
Where now? Is Suicune still at dragons den?


Ceri:*Enters the den*
Ceri:*hits a wall* Ouch!
Ceri: Go! Dragonzi!(mewtwo)
Ceri: Dragonzi, light a fireball and keep it that way, lit!
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -Talk to me as a human will you!-
Ceri: Last time I did that you turned into a power freak and tried to blow my head off!
Dragonzi: *_*;
Ceri: Just do it.
Dragonzi: HzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZJAH!
Ceri: Thanks!
Ceri: Go! Woofy!(Mightyeana)
Woofy: Rrrrrrr
Ceri; you are my most loyal...
Dragonzi: ):-(
Ceri: You did try to blow my head off!
Woofy: Rrrrr! XD
Ceri: Anyhow, Woofy. You need to keep an eye out for.....
Ceri; Everything!
Woofy: RRRRRR!!!!RRRRrrrrRRRRRR!
Ceri: What is it!?
Woofy: *Sniffs Dragonzi*
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -I am NOT a lamppost!-
Ceri: No Woofy, Dragonzi doesn't count! AND NOTMEEITHER!!!!!

*Growling echoes from deep inside the cave*

Ceri: 0.o;
Woofy: Rrrrr?
Dragonzi: (telepathically) -excuse me for telepathizeing, but that sounds like....-

*A creature approaches, too dark too see properly*

Ceri,and Dragonzi(telepathicly, of course!): SUICUNE!
Woofy: RRRrrrrrrrrrrrreeeee!!!!!
Suicune: grrrrrrrr
Ceri: Ahhhhhh!!!!
Woofy: *Uses crunch*
Suicine; *dodges*
Suicune: *Aroura blast*
Woofy: YEELP!
Ceri: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Charcoal(charazard), Kelcon, Candy(Swampert) and hearo(Groundoom): *Burst out off pokeballs*
Ceri: AAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! A TWENTY FOOT DINOSAUR NEARLY STOOD ON ME!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
*Runs in circles* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suicune: AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! WRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAARRRRRRRWWWWWWWW!!!!! (AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! A TWENTY FOOT DINOSAUR NEARLY STOOD ON ME!!!!
AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!)
Kelcon: *Sees Hearo and recalls himself*
Hearo: *Uses stomp*
Suicune: *Squished flat* grrrrrr.... rrrrrrrrrrr......
Charcoal: *Uses Blast Burn*
Hearo: Wrrrrrrr rrrrrr(That was totally unnecessary)
Charcoal: Rwwwwaaaarrr!!!!!(So what? KIIIIILLLLLLL!!!!!)
Suicune: *Looking like an overcooked pancake* rrrrrgggrrr (Bah!)
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -Hey, Ceri, look!-
Ceri; AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -Ceri-
Ceri: ahhhhhhh!!!
Ceri: ahhhh.... ahhh.....
What?
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -We beat Suicune-
Ceri: ACE! LETS CACH IT!
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -If you must o.0-
Ceri: YAY!

*later*
Ceri: WOOOOO!!!!! Look Dragonzi! Zypher is a cool couler! woooo!!!
Dragonzi: *Telepathically* -WAHAHHHHHAAAAAAAA You speak to me as a human!
Now I shall blow your head off!!!!! WAHHHAAAHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-
Ceri: Oh, brother!



By Ceri, Aka: Firefox, THE Firefox, Dragonmaster, The Dragonmaster or Magmamember.
Did I forget any?
Dragonzi: -NOW I SHALL BLOW YOUR HEAD OFF!!!!!- (Telepathically, of course!)

;249-d; So, what do you think? It's old, as well as my 1st attempt, I don't think its very good, but ok for a 1st attempt! Remember, its old, I know it has an auther charicter in it! :p

Naesala
2nd December 2005, 6:07 PM
it stunk.there was no description,you mispelled groudon,and i believe this is a script fic which i've heard is against the rules.i rate this a one.and i believe a lame attempt to be funny.

Dragonfree
2nd December 2005, 6:13 PM
Breaks script rules. Read them.

*closes*