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Typhlogirl
3rd December 2005, 9:42 AM
Hey. Typhlogirl here. I need your opinions.

This is an idea that I thought of today. For any of you who read my comedy fic, 'PokeTalk! The Pokemon based talk show!', you'll know that I have two episodes left before it ends, and I go on hiatus to prepare the second series. Since I'm leaving for Sydney soon, and won't be able to write, I thought of rounding up the season with, instead of two more episodes, one big story/episode thing.

The plot would be this: Typhlogirl (the host for those who don't read) has realised that she is running out of money, and she needs some quickly to buy Christmas presents. So she thinks up some simple ways to get some, enlisting the help of Micheal the Typhlosion (the show's mascot) and Pebbles the Golem (the show's...reporter). Well, anyone who reads PokeTalk knows that nothing ever happens as it should with these three. Here are some of the ways that they are going to try:

-They realised Micheal's life is insured for a large sum. So the three of them fake his death to get the cash. Don't ask.

-Pebbles gets a job at a Daycare. Those poor children.

-Typhlogirl get's the Security guards to do their own dance show. O_o We're doomed.

These are just are few of the ideas I have that I might put in the mini-fic, if I was to write it.

This is a concept that I might save for the Second Series, in which I am going to revamp the fic A LOT, but I was wondering if I should do it now, to end Series One with a bang. It's an option; I'm still writing Episode Nineteen incase I don't decide to do this.

So what do you all think? Any comments are welcome. I really need them A.S.A.P.

Thanks,

-;157;

Another Fan
3rd December 2005, 9:51 AM
Sure, I think it will be great. Just do what you want. I think either way is fine but the Christmas thing sounds very, very nice.

Iron_Mew
3rd December 2005, 10:17 AM
Hmmm, yes I think it would be a good idea to finish it off with a bang but don't change it to much or it just won't be Poketalk. Anyway nomatter what you do I'm sure you'll pull it off!

Timid Kyogre
3rd December 2005, 3:00 PM
...It's not a bad idea, but it has to be very long and you have little time to finish it, so you'll have to focus on it.

It's a good end for Season One, it can't just end with a normal episode. Great idea Typhlogirl, good luck!

~Timid Kyogre

The PikaMew Fanatic
3rd December 2005, 3:46 PM
I agree with Timid Kyogre. You should end the season with a bang. That's why I think you should do a combo of the daycare idea and the fake death idea.

Burnt Flower
3rd December 2005, 4:28 PM
...I'm yet another person who thinks the fic should end with a bang. And this Christmas episode is too good to be left for later. ;)

Sike Saner
3rd December 2005, 7:31 PM
Holy crap on a crap cracker, I'm already envisioning those things happening (DANCING TUTU GUARDS! FRENZIED FEET IN UGG BOOTS! XD) Yes, do put that forth. It sounds like you've already got it quite well-realized, and it sounds promising as hell. Go for it. ^_^

xXSaberXx
3rd December 2005, 9:03 PM
LAWL OMG. GO FOR IT! The comedy must be pure, and it must GO OUT WITH, NOT A BANG, BUT A BOOM!

:3 I say you should do it, dear. Take your time, make it riotously funny, and we'll laugh about it three years from now on some nice day. xP Lucks to you.

Typhlogirl
3rd December 2005, 10:22 PM
Heh, glad everyone thinks its a good idea, because I've already written quite a bit...XP

But I have to hurry my procrastinating *** up. Apparently, according to my parents, we are leaving for Sydney in five days. I thought it was double that X____x. So I have to HURRY UP.

When I post this, it will be a separate fic to "PokeTalk!" itself. Things are easier that way. ;)

Anyway, thanks for the input everyone!

-;157;

The PikaMew Fanatic
3rd December 2005, 11:06 PM
Anytime. I'll be sure to read it when you post it! ^__^

lunic
4th December 2005, 3:49 PM
Sounds like a good idea, when will it be posted?

Psychic
4th December 2005, 5:35 PM
OMFG< Typhlogirl, it sounds positively awesome!
Definitely do it now-as everyone else said, the Season should go out with a bang!

I absolutely adore the faking death idea, so put that in no matter what. The other two ideas are both so cool, but with the dancing Machoke, you won't have much to write unless they go to Hollywood and have their own show for the poor kiddies in the daycare to watch (until they're scarred for life)! XD

Typhlogirl, I just want you to know, YOU ARE MY HERO! *hugs*

~Psychic

BrokenDreams
4th December 2005, 7:50 PM
I say go for it. I know from those words of what to come that it will be totally awesome! I can't wait. And have a nice trip to Sidney. I've always wanted to go to Austrailia.

Typhlogirl
5th December 2005, 12:44 AM
Yay0rz, more support! Excellent! Well, it's halfway done. It's going quicker than I thought it would. O_o XD

It'll be posted when it's finished, a'course.

BD, thanks for the well-wishes. ^_^ It should be fun. Australia is the best. You should visit someday!

Yesh, the Dance Show will be difficult...*goes off to think* XD

Wow Psychic, I'm your hero?! <=O *is honoured* Thankyou!!!! *hugs*

-;157;

Knightblazer
5th December 2005, 12:54 AM
You know T-Girl, you could make the Machokes dance the Can-Can while wearing their pink Ugg boots, and perhaps the childcare Pebbles waiks at is there (I mean the kids) and they somehow throws her to the Machokes, suprising Micheal and releases a Flamethrower and well.... all hell breaks loose.

Its a very random idea, you could use it if you want.... (^.^)

Knightblazer - ;359;