. IC Ghost .

I NO RITE.

Forget about the 'Blackthorn'. I HENCEFORTH DUB HIM LANCE CULLEN. 8D

FFFF I'M SORRY I HAVE TO SHOW YOU THIS 'cos I was just talking about Lance sparkling. Read IC comments + mun title comments. YOU'LL KNOW WHEN YOU GET THAR.

D= IT WAS AN EMERGENCY! I HAS NO SUITABLE FOOD IN THE HOUSE!

... I suppose I could always feed my sister to him. But that's likely to make him sick and he needs his energy for later. =X

Sure, why not? I'm all for giving the condemned a good last meal.

My thoughts ran more along the lines of 'hot, if vampiric'. XD AT LEAST HE'S NOT SPARKLY.

I was thinking about you, actually. If he ate me then I wouldn't be able to eat him. 8D

Psst.

Lance needs to be fed and I offered to get him dinner orz.

Welcome to the ghost type lovers group IC Ghost. I hope you'll enjoy the group ^^.

I thought you were implying that I'm a lot like Yami Ryu.

*head-desk* I shouldn't have bothered reviewing that. I have a feeling that he'll just go on with the show, and disregard any and all advice given to him...he won't be the first, or the last, to do so.

I've given harsher concrit. I've given more neutral concrit. I write what I write depending on the author's reaction to other reviewers' concrit.

Really. coming from an author of a Pokémon fanfic...?

I never said that the guy needs to go back and read the rules. I gave him some examples of what he needs to improve on. I wrote that when I was tired, and bored, which apparently isn't a good combination for me. If I hadn't gone back and taken out This is atrocious. Simply atrocious. from my original shpeel that I would've posted, it would seem a lot more like a Yami review. Then again, I've gotten an infract from Dragonfree about one of my previous reviews, so I thought about what was in my power to write ahead of time. Before I posted. That, and I haven't given fic concrit in months.

._. Besides. I'm thirteen. This person has been writing since my age. Which implies that he's older than me. He should be able to write something better than a thirteen year old can.

I couldn't waaaaaaaaaaaaait. D=

And yes, I know it was prolly silly not to wait another measly 24 hours, but. X3

Editor. :P

You brought up a couple of good points with describing circumstance, though; replied in more detail via PM. ^^ Ta~