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    May_Beautifly: LOL. O.O. No its not ash's. You guys well see why he did that later. ^^ I'm gald you like it.
    Dang you people read fast.
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxkitty
    Kitteh: LOL.Yes, its his baby.
    Yesh! I'm right!! -does the yes-I'm-right dance- XD

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    Calm down.LOL.
    ~"Daisy wants you to be the Bride's mate for our wedding" Brendon said."~
    ^ Spoiler for the next chapter.
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    -does the OMG-Daisy-and-Brendon-are-getting-married dance- Whoaness!

    WEllz, peace and crackers,

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    lol. Your crazy Kitteh.
    Chapter 9
    "You ready to go" Brendon asked helping Daisy get to her feet?
    "Yes, I want to get out of this hospital" Daisy said putting a hand though her long blond hair and tossing it into the air.

    "Calm down. We’re not still outside yet" Brendon said with a laugh.

    "Carry me!" Daisy said laughing.

    "Are you crazy" Brendon asked smiling?

    "No" Daisy said.

    "Anyways you need the excterzise," Brendon said picking up Daisy’s suitcase and heading for the door.

    "Are you calling me fat" Daisy asked mad?

    "What! No of course not" Brendon said surprised and turned around. "What I meant is that you’ve been in a bed for 3 days, you need to walk."

    "Oh, okay" Daisy said embarrssed.

    Daisy walked over to Brendon and they walked out.

    "Misty, Violet, Lily, I’m home!" Daisy yelled when her and Brendon walked in.

    "Hmm" Daisy said walking to the kitchen after nobody came running.

    There was Violet and Wally sitting on Chairs next to each other, their heads tilted about to kiss when Daisy and Brendon walked in.

    Daisy cleared her throat loudly.

    Violet and Wally looked up at her and they both sat up and turned around to face Daisy and Brendon.

    "Don’t I get a hug" Daisy asked with a grin?

    "Uh…welcome back Daisy" Violet said getting up and hugging her sister.

    "Hi…Da…Daisy" Wally said.

    "Oh relax Wally, you’re not going to get in trouble" Daisy said.

    "Oh…okay" Wally said glancing over at Violet who just sat back down in her chair.

    "Wheres Lily and Misty" Daisy asked as Brendon appeared beside her?

    "HI Brendon…Um Lily and Brock went to the carnival," Violet said.

    "And Misty and Ash are in the battle room, because that kid Brandon came back for his rematch" Wally said finishing Violet’s sentence.

    "Hi Violet" Brendon said.

    "Oh…um I’ll talk to Lily when they get back, I’m going to watch Misty’s match" Daisy said.

    "Now you two behave," Daisy said turning around, walking away and Brendon followed.

    When Daisy got to the room Misty was down to her last pokemon and Brendon had one more. It was a three on three. Daisy noticed that Ash was leaning against the right wall. His hat from her angle covered he’s eyes, but she know he was watching the battle.

    Misty had out her Starmie and Brandon had his newly eloved Charmeleon out.

    "Starmie use Bubble Beam" Misty called.

    "Charmeleon di…Flamethrower" Brandon aid changing his mind, remebering the last time.

    Starmie send out a stream of bubble’s at Charmeleon. At the same time Charmeleon opened his mouth and shot out a powerful blast of fire.

    As soon as the bubbles and fire hit the whole room was covered with mist. When the Mist dissappered, Starmie was smashed into the wall right where ash was.

    "As—oh thank god" Misty whispered finding Ash talking to Daisy and Brendon.

    "Good job Brendon" Misty said returning Starmie and walking over to him.

    "Didn’t I say next time you came back you would win" Misty asked him handing him a raindrop shaped badge?

    "Yes…Hey you didn’t let me win did you?" Brandon asked?

    "I promise I didn’t let you win" Misty.

    "Okay…"Brandon said returning his Charmeleon.

    "Bye" Brandon yelled as he raced out the door!

    "Bye" Misty said with a little wave.

    "Daisy, what are you doing up" Misty asked when she got over to them?

    "I can still walk" Daisy said.

    "You shouldn’t push it though," Misty said.

    "Azu" A vice called.

    "Hi, Azuraill" Misty cooed and picked her up. "You need to go back to bed," Misty said to the little aqua mouse that had curled up to her.

    "Azu" She said sleeply.

    "To bed both of you," Misty said pointing to the hall.

    "Fine" Daisy sighed and rolled her eyes.

    Daisy walked out of the room and Azumarill followed her.

    "Misty, come here for a second: Brendon said.

    "What" Misty asked surprised when she walked over to him?

    "Daisy wants you to be the Bride’s mate for our wedding" Brendon said.

    "Wow, really" Misty asked?

    "Yeah, she just didn’t know how to tell you" Brendon said.

    "Well tell her. I’d love too," Misty said.

    "Okay, I’d better g see id she made it to her room" Brendon said running out of the room.

    When Brendon was out of sight, she turned to face Ash, but he was gone.

    "What’s wrong with…" Misty asked herself as she walked back to her room?

    "Mist, we have to talk" Ash said interropting her thoughts.

    "Ash…What about" Misty asked when she snapped back to reality?

    "Come on" Ash said talking her hand and walking into Misty’s room

    Misty sat on her bed. Ash shut the door and leaned against it.

    "Mist, my mom wants me to come home because Mr.Mime died and she’s lonely," Ash said.

    "Aww, you should go" Misty said.

    "Yeah, but I want you to come with me," Ash said.

    "Ash I’d love to—"Misty said.

    "Then come with me" Ash said Interropting.

    "Ash, I have to stay with Daisy" Misty said.

    "Mist, she has hr other sisters and Brendon" Ash said.

    "I know but I can’t" Misty said staring at the floor.

    "Okay…" Ash said opening the door.

    "Ash, I’m sorry," Misty said getting up.

    "It’s okay…," Ash said walking out and closing the door.

    "Ah" Misty said opening the door but Ash was gone.

    "Ash" Misty said slumping back onto her bed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxkitty
    lol. Your crazy Kitteh.
    Chapter 9
    "You ready to go" Brendon asked helping Daisy get to her feet?
    "Yes, I want to get out of this hospital" Daisy said putting a hand though her long blond hair and tossing it into the air.

    "Calm down. We
    Where'd the rest of it go?

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    It keeps doing that to me. Look ^ I got it to work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxkitty
    It keeps doing that to me. Look ^ I got it to work.
    Yay! XD

    WEllz, peace and crackers,

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    Okay...I feel sad for Misty...;_; Why didn't she ask Ash to be the bestman?
    Nice chapter...Can't wait for more! ^^
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    Great last two chapters^_______________^ and it's sad Ash had to go ;; though I'm pretty sure they will see eachother again sometime in your story XD well the story's getting very good and keep it up^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    Okay...I feel sad for Misty...;_; Why didn't she ask Ash to be the bestman?
    Nice chapter...Can't wait for more! ^^
    She couldn't because that's Brendon's job because he is the broom.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kitteh
    Yay! XD

    WEllz, peace and crackers,

    ~Kitteh
    lol, your crazy my lil friend.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mayuko
    Great last two chapters^_______________^ and it's sad Ash had to go ;; though I'm pretty sure they will see eachother again sometime in your story XD well the story's getting very good and keep it up^^
    ^__^ Thanks twiny. Yeah. Of course, it wouldn't be a pokeshipping fanfict then. ^^ Thanks i'm glad you like my chapters.
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxkitty
    She couldn't because that's Brendon's job because he is the broom.


    lol, your crazy my lil friend.


    ^__^ Thanks twiny. Yeah. Of course, it wouldn't be a pokeshipping fanfict then. ^^ Thanks i'm glad you like my chapters.
    The broom? Don't you mean groom? LOL. Yesh, I am very crazy. XD

    ~Ktieth

    EDIT: Gosh, I'm as bad as Mysteria Pearl (no offense to her). I screwed up my name too. Trying again...

    WEllz, peace and crackers,

    ~Kitteh

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    lol. Yeah I mant the groom.
    Yes, If anybody doesn't beieve you tell them to look at my sig, it says it loud and clear. lol.
    (As bad as...oh.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kitteh
    ~Ktieth

    EDIT: Gosh, I'm as bad as Mysteria Pearl (no offense to her). I screwed up my name too. Trying again...,

    ~Kitteh
    Yes, I'm awful, aren't I? XD Muahaha, it's catchng on!

    ooh, I'm reading the first chapter and it's really good! I would kind of want to slap Misty's sisters, though XD

    you're an awesome writer!!!

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    lol. You both are crazy.
    lol. Why? Because they hate Ash? Well of course they would, he's taking their lil sister away from them...Hey that gave me a good idea, cool.
    Aww thank you. Afteryou read all of them to what we're up to, tell me how you think of those chaps.
    P.S the next chap. is etra long so It might take a while, so be patient with me.
    P.S.S Times I'll be gone this week:
    6/8/06 I'll be on a little after school, yes my last day! Yippie! Because i'm spending the night at my oldest sister's house so I can help her watch my Nephews Friday.
    6/9/06 I might get on when I get home from watching my Nephews, but I might not because I could be totally wiped out, so mabye I'll be on.
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    Yes, I'm awful, aren't I? XD Muahaha, it's catchng on!

    ooh, I'm reading the first chapter and it's really good! I would kind of want to slap Misty's sisters, though XD

    you're an awesome writer!!!
    Must be the potion I gave you in your fic thread XDDD It had some effects, you know XD Kitteh, you are learning from her XD She must have spread the disease to you XD

    lol. Why? Because they hate Ash? Well of course they would, he's taking their lil sister away from them...Hey that gave me a good idea, cool.
    Ash has a lil sister? O_o...Wonder what she's like?

    6/8/06 I'll be on a little after school, yes my last day! Yippie! Because i'm spending the night at my oldest sister's house so I can help her watch my newphiews Friday.
    6/9/06 I might get on when I get home from watching my newphiews, but I might not because I could be totally wriped out, so mabyee I'll be on.
    You mean 'Nephew' and 'wiped out' and 'maybe' XD Oh dear, Kitteh, you spread the disease that makes people-correct-every-wrong-word-they-see to me XD Anyhow, I'll be waiting for your next chapter! ^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    Ash has a lil sister? O_o...Wonder what she's like?
    No, I meant that their angry at Ash because he's taking their lil sister away from them.
    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    You mean 'Nephew' and 'wiped out' and 'maybe' XD Oh dear, Kitteh, you spread the disease that makes people-correct-every-wrong-word-they-see to me XD Anyhow, I'll be waiting for your next chapter! ^^
    Yeah, thanks. O.O I don't want it! ^^ thanks.
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    No, I meant that their angry at Ash because he's taking their lil sister away from them.
    Oh...How cruel of her sisters T_T...-takes up a gun and shoot them- Let Ash be with Misty, you cruel-human-beings!
    -the sisters die, and I jump about happily- HIP HP HOORAY! XD

    But, they didn't really say anything about Ash...speaking of that, I don't ever recall them speaking to Ash O.o...
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    Well, their just being overprotective.
    That's because they don't like him.
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    -shakes head- Ash is...is...I mean, living with Ash for a few days/weeks in the gym, they didn't notice he was so kind and caring?

    Speaking of that, they hardly pay attention to him at all...T_T...-sweatdrop-

    ...

    ASH IS GOOD, FOR GOODNESS SAKE! -strangles Violet, Daisy and Lily-

    I hope Ash comes back, and get together with Misty again! ^_^
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    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    shakes head- Ash is...is...I mean, living with Ash for a few days/weeks in the gym, they didn't notice he was so kind and caring?

    Speaking of that, they hardly pay attention to him at all...T_T...-sweatdrop-
    They weren't there when Ash staied in the gym, they went on a cruise, remeber? That's why Daisy asked Misty to come back....Yeah, I know they don't pay attention to hm...

    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    ASH IS GOOD, FOR GOODNESS SAKE! -strangles Violet, Daisy and Lily-
    LOL. They can't see that all they see is a guy trying to ake their lil sister away from them. After all the sisters only have each other left in their whole family.

    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    I hope Ash comes back, and get together with Misty again! ^_^
    ^^ They will.
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    Question Sorry

    Sorry to DP but I need you guys help.
    Do you want Daisy to have a Boy or Girl?
    Thanks in advacne for your guys help.

    Kitteh: I'm glad you got over your Writers' Block. Luckly I did too!

    LOL. You guys don't like Daisy, Violet, and Lily do you? How I get this is from May_Beautifly's posts...Give them a chance guys.
    P.S 1 girl 0 boy
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    Quote Originally Posted by foxkitty
    Sorry to DP but I need you guys help.
    Do you want Daisy to have a Boy or Girl?
    Thanks in advacne for your guys help.

    Kitteh: I'm glad you got over your Writers' Block. Luckly I did too!

    LOL. You guys don't like Daisy, Violet, and Lily do you? How I get this is from May_Beautifly's posts...Give them a chance guys.
    Hey, sorry I haven't been reviewing the past couple of chapters, but I haven't noticed any mistakes to point out, so I thought I would save you some time by not posting.

    But know that you've asked a question for the readers, I now have a reason to post. I think that Daisy should give birth to a girl. But isn't it a bit soon for her to be giving birth? I thought they just found out that she was pregnant a few days ago. People usually develope sighs of pregnancy 4-6 months after becoming pregnant, so either Daisy's one fast girl, or everyone is just very unobservant.

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    Fez: Aw, but I like hearing from you. I know I'm just asking so when it comes i'll know what gender to make it. Its been at least 3 days since they found out.
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    OOOh ok, I want Daisy to have a girl and name her a flowery name as well, it would be adorable ^0^
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