Why? A short SasuSaku poem

[Uzamaki Hinata]

Why a short SasuSaku poem
In Sasukue's point of view.
Enjoy!

Why
Why don’t you hate me?
After rejecting you for so long.
Why don’t you kill me?
If you know that I’m wrong.
Why don’t you stop me?
I’ve been making you blue.
Why do you love me?
When I never wanted you to
Why did you cry?
Making it hard for me to leave
Why did you sigh?
When I was getting what I need
Why did you buy?
Everything for me
Why do you love me?
When you know that I’m mean
Why did you help me?
When I never needed you
Why did you stay?
On the days I was blue
Why did you cry?
When I didn't need you to
Thanks for loving me
But I can’t do the same for you

[Jemi Rose]

Wow! I can't believe this poem! It's amazing on how you captured the feelings or thoughts of Sasuke on how how thinks or feels on Sakura. I thoughts this sentences in your fic could be switched, or maybe I got the wrong thought of this sentence, sorry.

"Why didn’t you help me?-> Why did you help me?
When I really needed you-> When I never needed you
Why didn’t you stay?-> Why did you stay?
When I was blue-> Only on the days I was blue
Why didn’t you cry?Why did you cry?
When I needed you too-> When I didn't need you too
Thanks for loving me
But I can’t do the same for you"

The reason I kinda changed or switched some of the sentence was because Saukue attitude was like that in the series, he was the stubborn one not needed any help from anyone except to help himself on achieveing his selfhish goals.

But, also job anyways!

~*Jemi Rose*~

[Uzamaki Hinata]

Okay I..... edited it!
Thanks for the review and help!

[Xiang]

Wow, this is really nice and the speaker really does sound like Sasuke and his view on Sakura. ^__^ I really liked it.

Each part reflects on different SasuSaku moments, not to mention I really like this couple as well. Poetry isn't easy to do all the time, but I think you did really well.

[DanK84]

Awesome. It's amazing how well you caught Sasuke's feelings. And it really makes sense. This is the first Naruto poem I've ever read and I have to say I'm impressed. And as Hyuuga Hinata said, poetry isn't always easy but you did a great job.