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    Default Whoo whoo whoo whoo whoo!

    Hmm… barely any reviews this time… Must’ve been my fault…

    Demy: Hey! *hugs* Heh heh. Yeah, it’s touching, but this chapter will be the most emotional (I think.)

    icemew: Yay, new reviewer! *hugs* Yes, Mia’s and Daisy’s friendship may not last, but hope’s always on the horizon. But we shall see because I’m an pretty evil at that. Thanks for replying!

    TIME FOR NEW CHAPPY! *break-dances*

    This is the chapter you’ve all been waiting for. Really.

    WARNING: EMOTIONAL CHAPTER APPROACHING!

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    Chapter Eight: The Truth About Daisy

    The next day, Daisy refused to let Mia visit her. “Why not?” the kitten asked from outside. “Why can’t I speak to you?”

    “Because I said so!” Daisy shouted in between sobs. “Now leave me alone!”

    Mia’s heart began to break after that comment. And Daisy would’ve never given her the necklace had she not been her friend… “Yo, Nobody, what in the name of Lugia is that?” Flo asked rudely on Monday morning, pointing at the necklace.

    “Does it matter?” Mia grumbled, staring at the street.

    “Yes it does. Now tell me or I’ll take it,” Flo threatened.

    “I got it from my mother,” was the lie.

    “Then why does it say ‘friend’ on it?” Tina sneered. “Who has the other half, your mom?” Everyone laughed.

    “No. It’s from my friend.”

    “What friend? No one’s your friend,” Kitty retorted. “And we didn’t give it to you.”

    “Daisy gave it to me.”

    “Who’s this Daisy then?” Flo demanded.

    Mia remained silent.

    “Well? Answer me!”

    “I can’t tell you,” Mia said quietly.

    “I can’t hear you,” Flo growled. “Now, if you don’t tell me this instant, then I’ll rip it from your neck and destroy the scum! Now answer!”

    The rosy cat sighed. She knew that Flo wasn’t kidding. She would steal it, but she would just keep it to herself. “I can’t tell you,” Mia repeated.

    “You must or I’ll push you into traffic.”

    “Look, can’t you just leave me alone?” Mia shouted, standing up and facing her perpetrator.

    “Excuse me?” Flo said, raising a brow. “What did you say to me?”

    “I said ‘Leave me alone’.”

    Everyone gasped while Flo got irritated. “No one back-talks to me. Now answer or I swear to Ho-oh you’ll die!”

    Mia scowled. “How did you even make friends, huh? Did you threaten them by giving everyone death messages or what? I bet you were just like me before you moved here.”

    Whispers spread through the throng. “No one’s ever stood up to her before” was the excitement.

    “Listen Nobody,” Flo snarled, “I’ve always had friends. You, on the other hand, didn’t. Now I suggest you tell me right now before the bus comes. If you do, I might allow you into my group. But first, we need to compromise. What do you say? Friends?”

    The Roselia held out her hand. Mia just glared at her and slapped away the hand. “I’ll never be your friend,” she growled.

    “You shall answer, or I’ll steal your necklace. Now answer!”

    “I refuse.”

    Flo started to fume. “Then I shall rip off your precious friendship necklace, even if it kills me.”

    “OVER MY DEAD BODY!” the cat screamed.

    “You asked for it.” Flo lunged at her, causing the second fight. Everyone cheered for Flo as she punched and clawed at Mia who kicked her off after several attempts.

    “Cat fights are fun to watch!” whooped a random jock from the crowd.

    “Magical Leaf!” Flo cried out. From her roses came flashing leaves that were curved like a regular Razor Leaf, only they were more speedy. They slashed at Mia, knocking her onto the ground. She slowly stood up and faced her opponent, hot tears spilling down her face. Flo cackled. “What’s the matter, Nobody? Got no one to root for you?” she taunted, still shrieking with laughter.

    Mia had enough. In anger, her eyes were clouded by a teal mist, pink flames surrounding her body. With a yell, Mia sent a blast at Flo who gasped at the attack. She couldn’t move away in time and was flung into the air. The sickening sound of broken bones brought Mia back to consciousness. She stared in horror at the throng and at the unconscious Roselia.

    “What have you done?” shrieked Kitty, running over to Flo with Tina.

    “She’s alive. Barely,” she said, checking Flo’s pulse.

    Everyone glared at Mia who gasped. “Look what you did you idiot!” someone yelled. “You almost killed Flo!”

    “No…” Mia couldn’t believe it. She had never harmed anyone so severely before. “I… I didn’t mean to…”

    “Of course you didn’t, Nobody!” the same person shouted sarcastically. “No one’s ever done that on purpose before. We all saw you! You could’ve been a murderer had you been stronger!”

    “But what did I use?”

    “Stop pretending to forget!” the boy yelled, knocking her down with a punch across the face. “You used a powerful Psychic blast! What’s you think you used, Splash?”

    Mia tried to focus, but because of the tears, her vision was blurred. She started sobbing. “G-Guys!” she said to Tina and Kitty. “Y-You believe me, d-don’t you?” With every word she said, the tears trickled down her face.

    They scowled at her. For a minute, Mia saw what may have been a sincere look from her real friends. But when they answered, it was removed. “Of course not!” Tina said. “We saw you. You did it on purpose!”

    “Why did we become friends with you, you liar?!” Kitty screamed.

    That remark did it. With a wail, Mia got up and flew into the forest just as the bus came up. Her tears trailed behind her as she flew, searching for the one person she trusted.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    “What’re you doing here?” Daisy inquired after Mia shot into her arms. “I thought I told you yesterday to leave me be.”

    Mia wailed out loud in her arms. “I did something t-terrible!” she cried.

    “What’d you do?”

    “I… I harmed a student… badly!” the cat choked, sobbing harder.

    “But why?”

    “She threatened a-and made fun of me!”

    “I understand,” Daisy said sadly.

    “No you don’t! You’ve never harmed a student to near death!”

    Daisy was silent. Then she got up and crawled out of the cave. “Come,” she beckoned to Mia. “Let’s go back to the stump.”

    Mia was confused, but followed. “Why there?”

    Daisy didn’t answer. After a ways, they finally reached it. The girl sat back down on the tree stump and gazed at the blood-red flower that had grown a few centimeters since their last visit. Mia sat down next to her.

    Daisy sighed. “I got something to tell you,” she said. “Something I should’ve said a while ago.”

    “What is it?”

    The girl sighed again more sadly. “Mia, you’re my best friend, but you’re not my first.”

    “Huh? You mean, you had one?” Mia asked slowly.

    The red-head nodded. “But she was from my family…” She looked up at Mia, her eyes welling up. “Mia… I’m a twin.”

    Mia was shocked. “A twin? Where is she?”

    “She’s gone.” Daisy looked away and sobbed.

    “Gone where?”

    Daisy glanced up into the cloudy sky and cried harder. “I see,” Mia said quietly. “What happened?”

    The girl sighed, but didn’t answer. Instead, she said something else. “Mia, my name’s not Daisy.”

    Mia couldn’t believe her ears. “What?”

    “My real name’s Azalea,” she continued. “Daisy is my twin.”

    “But… why use her name?”

    “Because I wanted to be like my twin. She had friends, care and beauty. It was Daisy I was talking about last time. She was the most popular at my school. I’m not jealous, it’s just that I wanted to be like her so I can finish what she couldn’t.”

    “How’d she die?”

    Azalea glanced at Mia. “My mother’s death was known. She had a rare heart disease that was never treated. My twin had the same disease and died last year. My dad’s afraid I might have the same condition as well. But I should’ve died! Daisy was stronger than me! Why’d she have to go?!” Azalea cracked and cried harder into her hands.

    “But why didn’t you tell me?”

    “I-I was afraid you wouldn’t have pity on me… like everyone else,” she sobbed.

    “I would’ve cared.”

    “But you never had two people in your family die from the same disesase, did you?” Azalea snapped.

    “No, but…” Mia was interrupted.

    “But what? You may have lost a father, but I lost a mother and a friend!” Azalea wailed. “It makes no difference!”

    “We do have things in common though,” the cat pointed out.

    “I don’t care!” the red-head screamed. “I don’t care! The point is that I don’t have anyone anymore!”

    “You have me.”

    Azalea didn’t answer.

    “Da- Azalea?”

    “What? Why are you still here?” the girl asked. “How come you’re not at home, huh?”

    “What’re you talking about?”

    “You know what I mean! Just leave me alone! Why don’t you get out of my life?! I should’ve never been your friend. Ever!”

    “But Azalea…”

    “Don’t ‘but Azalea’ me! Just get out of my sight! I don’t want to see you again!” Azalea sobbed and pointed in the direction of the bus stop.

    Mia didn’t dare argue. She felt tears start to leak out from the pain. She obeyed the human and flew off, leaving her alone to drown in her sorrow. “Why Daisy? Why?” Mia heard Azalea cry out.

    The cat choked on a sob. “Why Azalea? Why?” she whispered. Mia activated her invisible coat and flew into the cave for the rest of the day.

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    And there’s the chapter. I got the idea of her having a twin from a girl at my church. She was a twin who also died from a heart condition. That’s where I got the idea.

    But otherwise, I’m evil at leaving it like that, huh? And if you’re confused, let me know. And I hope you had tissues near-by before you read it if you’re crying. Well, I’ll see you next week guys! Sorry I couldn’t post earlier. I had to find a graduation dress for Tuesday.

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    -_- *twitch*...*twitch* Why didn't you PM me?! T^T I missed TWO whole chapters!

    *takes deep breath and sighs* Okay, now I'm up-to-date. I'm okay. So onto the review!

    Actually, I have nothing to review on. Woot!

    'Kay, now. Next time you post a chapter PM me to read it. I don't want to miss more. Okay?

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    Same here, I missed 2 chapters...

    Actually I don't really know what to say, I'm just tired from last night and all.

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    Had it not been for the new chapter posted a few hours back, I might never have found your fic!

    Pokemon living lifestyles similar to humans? Nice twist, but I need some time to adjust to it...

    Pretty emotional story, don't you think? Flo finally got her just desserts, though I must say that was a little too much... Poor Mia. Betrayed by both ex-friends, tortured by schoomates and shoved away by Azalea, she's all alone again... I would snap too if I was in her position! By the time Kitty and Tina realize Mia is telling the truth, it may already be too late...

    Nice work, Kutie Pie. Hopefully the next chapter will roll around soon enough! ^_^

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    Kuite Pie you also didn't PM me

    Great as always.

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    Default Zip-a-dee-doo-da Zip-a-dee-ay!

    Hey y'all!

    Literate: Gah! You changed your name! *hugs* And you caught this first. You sure are fast! Sorry I couldn't PM you. I had to get off a lot. Yeah... STUPID TIME LIMIT!! Heh heh. And you have nothign to review on? Aw... Oh well! Hopefully you will this time! *hugs*

    Lord_sNap: Whoops. *hugs* Sorry about lack of PMs folks. Seriously, time limit stinks. And you were tired... Aw... Sorry. I get tired a lot too. I still am after being woken up a lot on the way to Disneyland and back. Those buses sure are bumpy. XD Thanks for replying though! *hugs*

    Hahahabvc87: HI NEW REVIEWER! *hugs* You love the Pokemon living like humans thing, huh? Yeah, I thought it weird. (Just be glad they're I did not make them wearclothes! They're just themselves!) YES I wanted to do that to a character such as Flo. So I did. But hey, it's PG rating. I wanted her to be like that. And you know what, this is based on what happened to me at school (Except for the Flo part, heh. And the ending.). I had to end friendships one too many times. And I've only been tortured by a few schoolmates, but otherwise I'm ignored by everyone. And I think you're about to give away something right there about Kitty and Tina. *winknudge* And the story is emotional. I wasn't really thinking about it when I created this. Thanks for replying! (Wow, long paragraph.) *hugs*

    Demy: *hugs* AAAIIIEEE! PARENTS KEEP BUGGING MEEEE! *goes insane and slapped* Okay. Well, anyway... Yep! A good story! Uh... what else should I say... That's it. A lot of short replies. Heh. *hugs*

    I'm surprised no one commented on Azalea telling the truth... Hmm... Well, anyway, next chapter right here! Whoop! (And sorry if the chapter name sucks.)

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    Chapter Nine Kidnapped!

    Mia didn't return to the bus-stop until the next day. When she arrived, she received glares and many nasty names. That was how she discovered Flo was announced comatose. Mia felt ashamed about what she did. After her talk with Azalea, she kept on crying whenever she had time to herself.

    On Friday, her mother came into Mia's room to find her crying into the pillow. "Honey, what's the matter?" she asked.

    Mia looked up startled. "What?"

    "Didn't you even hear me?"

    "Yes."

    "What's wrong then?"

    Mia sobbed and at last told Bree about Azalea. She told her about the mysterious departures to visit the forest, how the rabbit was a decoy and even the accident at the bus-stop. All this time, Bree listened to the whole story. "You kept this a secret from me?"

    Her daughter wailed some more and nodded. "Yes! I had to keep her a secret! Everyone was hunting her down!"

    Surpriseingly, Bree wasn't scowling. "Oh baby, you could've told me. I could've helped."

    Mia sniffed. "You would? But you said you would get mad at me."

    "Not anymore. See, I did the same thing at your age," her mother confessed, smiling.

    Mia was shocked. "Really?"

    Bree nodded. "Oh yes. She too ran away, but after a few days and talks, she went home. I never did tell your grandmother until I was married. You should've seen her when I did."

    Mia smiled and hugged her mother. "Oh Mom. But I can't even get near her. She hates me now."

    "Oh dear." That was when Bree noticed Mia's necklace. "Where'd you get this?"

    "Huh? Oh, Azalea gave it to me, back when we were friends..."

    "I think it's cute. She wouldn't have given it to you if you weren't her friend."

    "You mean...?"

    Bree nodded. "If someone gives you something like this, they've announced their friendship. It can never be broken unless she's confisticated it."

    "Well, guess I should comfort her then."

    "Of course you should." Bree kissed her daughter and sent her off. Mia went back to the cave, but Azalea wasn't there. She looked near the stump, in the apple tree, just about everywhere a young girl could hide. But she was gone.

    "I wonder if she's found the lake," Mia muttered, shooting off. The lake was known as Secretive Lake. As it wasn't too far from the Outsiders, humans never discovered it, making it one of the few places on Earth untouched by human activity except for Mount Quena, home of the mysterious Clarity Lake and the mythical Mirage Island. Mia happened to know where Secretive Lake though she's never been near it. It wasn't long before she saw the sparkling waters from between the trees.

    Because it was a large lake, Mia took her time scanning the shores. At last she found Azalea near some lily pads, staring at her reflection sadly. Smiling, Mia flew down and went behind Azalea to the point where she could see her. She gasped and turned around. "What're you doing here?" she asked.

    Mia could see tears stains on her face and her eyes were duller. The red hair wasn't as bright as she last remembered and the clothes were torn, the flower that had hung on the skirt missing. "I came back to..." Mia couldn't find the word.

    "Make fun of me?" the human guessed.

    "No, not that. I told my mom and she said..."

    "What! You told her? But why?"

    "It's okay Azalea. She's done the same thing too. I came back to apologize."

    "No, I should. I was being a jerk. I should've never yelled at you. I'm sorry."

    "It's okay. Friends... again?" Mia held out her hand.

    Azalea stared at it and then to her necklace. She sighed and smiled. "Friends," she agreed, grasping the cat's hands.

    "How touching," a voice sneered.

    The two gasped and looked up to see a young woman with lime-green hair that curled at the ends at the shoulder, piercing scarlet eyes, blue triangle earrings and a uniform with a red "R" on the front. She also sounded familiar.

    "You're Cyndy, aren't you?" blurted out Azalea.

    "How'd you know my name?"

    "We heard you. Remember? You said you and Greg were being overheard. And you were talking about me and the Outsiders."

    "What Outsiders?" Cyndy lied. "Greg, is she telling the truth?" she asked a young man with dark red hair and hazel eyes.

    "Well, let's see," he said in his rough voice, "if she's the girl we're looking for, then yes." He then spotted Mia levitating next to the girl and smirked, taking out a Taser. "It looks like we have two prisoners. Shall we take them both to headquarters?"

    Cyndy cackled. "The boss'll love that."

    Mia and Azalea screamed and ran into the forest as fast as they could. "Oh no! Team Rocket's found us! Mia, go back to the village. Tell them the Rockets are here."

    "But I can't leave you here alone," Mia said.

    "Just go! I'll be fine!"

    Mia sadly nodded. She flew off, but hid in the trees. She watched as Azalea stopped and faced the Rockets. "Hey, where's your friend?" Cyndy asked.

    "I'm not telling! Go Venus!" the girl yelled, throwing a red and white sphere Mia recognized as a PokeBall, an object forbidden near the village. In a flash of white, a dinosaur and plant hybrid with a large flower known as a Venasaur appeared.

    <Let's dance!> it roared.

    Azalea's a Trainer? Mia thought, amazed.

    "How cute, you named it," Cyndy scoffed.

    "That was her name in the first place!"

    "What do you mean?" Greg asked, confused.

    "Don't tell me you didn't take PokeSpeech," Azalea said.

    "It didn't sound that interesting," the woman said. "But forget about it. Houndoom, go!"

    In a flash, a Dark Pokemon with curving horns, a devil-like tail, shackles at the ankles and a menacing growl.

    "Vibrava, you're in!" Greg yelled. A Pokemon with partially-formed wings that create powerful vibrations and a dragonfly feature appeared, buzzing angrily.

    "Venus, Vine Whip, let's go!" Azalea ordered.

    "Not so fast. Houndoom, Flamethrower!"

    <Take this, you mutant plant!> it growled. With a deep breath, it shot out powerful flames from its mouth. Venus was slow and was hit face-on.

    "Venus, return!" The red-head returned her before more damage could happen and grabbed another ball from her fanny-pack. "Go Minnie!"

    In another flash of light, an orange, electric mouse with a long tail that ended in a lightning-bolt shape and a feisty attitude. From its yellow cheeks, sparks shot out. A Raichu.

    "That's its name, huh?" Cyndy asked, bored.

    "Right! Minnie, Thunder!"

    "Quickly Vibrava, while the clouds are forming, use Supersonic!" Greg ordered.

    It buzzed and Vibrava brought forth a powerful sound wave that made Azalea cover her ears and Minnie confused. Mia also got the blast and fell out of the tree.

    "There's the Outsider!" the man yelled.

    "Get it Houndoom!"

    "Mia run!"

    Mia screamed and barely dodged the Flamethrower as she flew off. "Use Faint Attack!" Cyndy ordered. The Houndoom disappeared at once.

    Mia stopped and glanced around quickly, but the dog was no where in sight. <H-H-Here's Doomy!> it cried out from behind. But before Mia could turn around, she was knocked to the ground.

    "No! Minnie, protect Mia!" Azalea demanded.

    Minnie shook off her confusion and ran off. <I'm on it!>

    "Headbutt!"

    "Houndoom, Take Down that mouse!"

    <So long, mini mouse!> the dog growled, slamming into the Raichu.

    "Mia, I'll hold them off! Warn the village!" Azalea shouted.

    Mia nodded and flew off, the Houndoom turning its attetnion away from Minnie. <Time for a little cat-mouse chase then,> it snarled, running after her. Mia panicked as she heard the dog behind her. Because of the density of the trees, she couldn't dodge them all and slammed into one.

    <Cat pancakes, my favorite!> the Houndoom said, raising its tail where it glowed. <But first, the batter!> It swung the tail and knocked Mia to the ground.

    In anger, Mia unleashed a Confusion attack. Thuogh it wasn't very effective, it confused Houndoom, causing it to run into a tree as well. And because Mia's powers hasn't yet developed, she got the blast as well. She shook it off. From behind her, Azalea screamed. "Stay away from me!"

    "Come on kid, we need you for interrogation."

    The Houndoom disappeared in a beam of red light. Mia flew to a small opening and saw Azalea struggling to free herself from the Rockets.

    "Come on kid, we'll release you once we get the Outsiders," Greg said, trying to throw her into the jeep.

    "No! I'll never tell you!"

    "Oh you will, or your friends are history," Cyndy said helping the man.

    "What do you mean?"

    "Oh Sunday, everyone's coming to the village to look for you. And they'll have weapons."

    "Lies, all lies!"

    "Come with us then, stay for a few days, come back and you'll be sorry you called us liars," Greg grunted, trying to dodge Azalea's punches and kicks as he snatched the fanny-pack and stuffed it in a bag.

    "Oh just stun her Greg."

    "Fine." He took out the Taser and started to charge it.

    "You can't use that on me! It's illegal!" Azalea gasped.

    "And illegal's our middle name," Cyndy said. "Ready Greg? Make sure it's working this time."

    The man nodded and aimed. Luckily for Azalea, it jammed and Cyndy started yelling. The red-head escaped from her grasp and started to run. But Cyndy threw a ring-like object that clamped itself around the girl, making her stumble. That was when she sensed someone watching. Someone she knew...

    "Mia, use the song!" she yelled.

    "What's she talking about?" Greg asked.

    "Hurry up Pyro-boy!" Cyndy growled.

    Mia racked her brain for the words seeing as she figured out the title, but nothing came up. She should've written down the lyrics.

    "Hurry Mia!"

    "There, fixed," Greg announced, charging and aiming it.

    "Please Mia... Save me..."

    "Fire it now Greg!"

    He nodded and fired, hitting Azalea in the arm. She screaming as hundreds of volts were zapped into her. Mia gasped as she turned to face her friend to see her unconsious. "I'm coming Azalea!" she cried out, flying into the open.

    "Stun it too," the woman said. "We'll come for it later."

    Greg charged the Taser as Mia got ready to power up an attack. But she wasn't quick enough. The man fired and the Taser hit her in the chest. She screamed as loud as Azalea did and blacked out.

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    I'm evil, aren't I, leaving a cliff-hanger like that? Now you know more about the villains here. They're just a ruthless as Domino was. Remember, this was years before Mewtwo came along. But Giovanni had just become leader of Team Rocket. Domino doesn't come along for a while. So these are the ruthless ones.

    And since I have a feeling people'll ask about the Pokemon, Azalea is a Trainer. And because having the Pokemon talk in their names is boring, I decided to have them "talk". Of course, I think Azalea being a trainer must've confused people anyway, so... I won't talk more about it until there are more questions.

    Well, see you next week! And I can't PM people now. I have to get off. See you next week though, and I apologize.

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    Hello again! ^_^

    I found something:
    Surprisingly, Bree wasn't scowling. "Oh baby, you could've told me. I could've helped."
    No e in there.

    Well, I hardly comment on things but I read it. But what is a Taser?

    Bye for now!

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    ...I haven't visited this place for quite awhile. But it's SUMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Anyways great job kutie pie. Your story is good. And your grammar has improved. But don't expect me to correct it. I am worse than you are! *smiles*
    7/10

    Though he was considered muscular, he's been rumored one too many times he takes steroids.
    that was increadibly funny.

    Thanks Ha...

    Poor Mia and Azalea. If team rocket is like jessie and james they will give mia to the boss or screw up but they probally will use Mia to take over the world...
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    Off topic:
    A taser is a small gun which fires a strong electrical charge, temporarily disabling the unfortunate target.

    Yes, you can quote in quick reply. jut type [ quote]insert text here[ /quote] without the spaces between the "quote" or "/quote" and the "[]". But most people are too lazy to do that and just highlight the text and click on the "quote" button in the quick reply box. It's the one that looks like a speech bubble. XP

    Sarukarisha, I can't see your pictures either. I'll PM you with details about your sig.

    Back on topic:

    Oh no, they both got caught... Mia got the "exam syndrome" and forgot the song... I hate it when that happens. X_X

    Oh my, a Houndoom with puns. What a strange combination, seeing as they are usually portrayed to be bloodthirsty dogs from hell...

    Good cliffhanger I wonder what will happen when they are both in the team Rocket base?

    Gahahaha, I spotted some mistakes too!

    She screaming as hundreds of volts were zapped into her.
    "Screamed"

    "Oh Sunday, everyone's coming to the village to look for you. And they'll have weapons."
    "On"

    Awaiting the next chapter with glee!

    EDIT: Oh noes, someone rated this one star without even saying why. Another phantom of monostar... sigh...
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    that is a great chapter Kutie Pie, one of my fav, so far.

    Poor Daisy who was kiddnapped by aTR.

    Wounder what happens next time on " The Battle for Friendship " cuts theme music

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    Default *runs in forums in flames* AAUUGGH! FIREY CHAPTER!

    Oh look! A new reviewer and it's time for replies! SQUEE! *hugs*

    Literate: First one again, huh? *hugs* You should celebrate here. ANd it's okay, I'm allowing that, as long as there's no spam. *grins*

    Sarukarisha: Hiya new reviewer! *hugs* Whoop! Summer! *parties and is tripped by Cheeky* Yeah, my grammar's getting better! *huggles lap-top* Finally got one! But I don't have Internet on it ;_;. Hey! That's the quote from chapter four! You thought it funny, huh? Well, steroids isn't funny! /serious/ And NO, they're NOT Jessie and James. They come several years later. In fact, this is the year Ash is born. Seriously, it's ten years before *ahem* Mewtwo is born. So... MIA'S THE MEW! *cackles and is shot* Thanks for replying! *adds to Pm list and hugs*

    Hahahabvc87: Thanks for saying you were going off-topic. *hugs* Yes, I hate it when I forget songs too. Especially when I'm singing in the shower and everyone can hear me. *embarrassed* Uh, the Houndoom with the puns was, uh, random. I was originally going to make them growl and roar until I remembered that Azalea took PokéSpeech and could understand them. (And Mia, don't forget, she was chased.) *cackles* EVIL CLIFFHANGER! HA HA HA*SHOT* And next chapter is the Team Rocket base. The old one, ha ha. (Doesn't explode like with Mewtwo, though. *blows up small model*) *gasps* SOMEONE RATED THIS ONE STAR?! *goes off to hunt evil person* Oh, thanks for replying! *hugs*

    Demy: Hi! *hugs* Ha ha, favorite chapter! *strikes pose* I strike again! *in Mr. Burn's voice secretly* Excellent. *notices stares* Sorry. Ahem. Theme music? Oooohh... COOL! Now, to figure out what the music'll sound like... Thanks for that idea! ANd thanks for replying! *hugs*

    Okay, new chapter! This one is short again. Just wanted to warn you. And sorry for not PM'ing people. I had to get off... So... here it is! Next chapter'll be even better. With a new cliffhanger (I think) next chapter. I'm so evil... Er I mean, I'm so nice. ^^; Heh... ROLL FILM! *runs off*
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    Chapter Ten: Rescue Mission

    Mia woke up to some voices above her. She recognized a few of them and some faces from the glare of the sun. From the crowd, she could see Bree along with Tristan and groaned.

    “Honey, what happened?” Bree asked.

    “They… got her,” Mia said slowly. “Azalea… must find…”

    “Azalea? Who’s this ‘Azalea’ you’re talking about?” Tristan inquired suspiciously.

    “Team Rocket… kidnapped…”

    “What do you mean Mia? What happened here?” her mother wondered worriedly.

    “Team Rocket… they got her…”

    “Team Rocket’s got a girl?” Tristan repeated out-loud.

    Once Team Rocket was mentioned, panic spread through the crowd along with a few screams.

    “Team Rocket? Here?!”

    “If they find us, we’re done for!”

    “I bet this Azalea person had something to do with it!”

    “Hey, I think that’s the girl we’ve been looking for!”

    “Honey, is this true?” Bree asked softly. “Has Azalea been kidnapped?”

    Mia nodded weakly. “Paralyzed her… and me.”

    Tristan was shocked to hear this. “Bree, are you saying your daughter knows the girl?”

    She sighed. “It’s true.”

    “How come you didn’t tell any of us this, girl?!” the leader barked at Mia, startling her. “Don’t you have any idea that humans are dangerous? Making friends with them is wrong!”

    The small cat sat up quickly. “That’s not true! Yes, humans can be dangerous, but she’s only twelve, a child! Children would never hurt anyone!”

    “Yes, but when they grow up, they become those Rockets,” the Hariyama said. “And betrayal is the big cause of why we’re Outsiders!”

    Mia’s eyes welled up. “Well, she’s still a friend! She may have lied to me, but it was because she was frightened! It’s only adult humans who cause the trouble, not kids!”

    Tristan refused to believe her. “I think you should come with me young lady,” he requested angrily.

    Mia looked at her mother horrified. “You should go,” was her answer. Mia sighed and followed Tristan to his office.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    “You kept this secret for almost two weeks and now we’re all doomed?!” roared the leader.

    Mia had been sobbing while telling her story. The yelling made her cry even harder. “Y-Yes!” she wailed. “I didn’t mean to! I just wanted t-to protect her because everyone was mean to her a-and her mother and twin d-died from the same disease! She was l-lonely like I was, only she didn’t fight s-someone into a coma!” She then couldn’t say anything else and bawled into her hands.

    Tristan thawed after hearing Mia’s reason. “So she’s your friend?”

    Mia nodded, still crying into her hands. “I’d do a-anything to being her back!”

    “Then you’d let her go.”

    Mia looked back up in shock. “What?”

    “Friends don’t always stay friends forever,” he explained. “They sometimes fall apart and they don’t visit nor call anymore. You must always respect your friends. But sometimes, when things get in the way of it, you sometimes fight, or, in other cases, agree to break up the friendship. I’ve seen it happen many times. However, there are those few cases where the one person decides to give up their friendship, but not tell the other until they ask. From there, horrible heartbreaks occur. That’s what happened to you. Your friends, Tina and Kitty, gave you up for many reasons.”

    “Yeah. They said I was always thinking about the war and that I was weird. I found that out on the first day of school.” Mia stared at her lap, ashamed. “Now they hate me even more.”

    “Well, didn’t Flo bribe them?”

    “I’m sure she did, but saying that got me in this situation in the first place. Why did my friends leave me? I did nothing wrong, except for a couple of fights.”

    “It was their choice. It happens, like I said.”

    Mia stayed silent, thinking about what he said. She thought back to the day they met. Mia was just a tiny kitten in preschool then, always playing in the sandbox. One day, in the middle of the year, a small Ralts asked Mia if she could help build a castle. She agreed and soon a small Skitty came up to assist. Together, they created a normal sandcastle. But from it, they also built a friendship. Mia wasn’t yet thinking about the war then. And every day until recently, they were friends. Until Azalea came…

    “I’m going to let you go home now,” Tristan said.

    “But what about Azalea?” Mia asked. “I have to go save her.”

    “In order to do that, you must give her back to her family in the end.”

    “But then she’ll refuse. She said she ran away because of the lack of Pokemon. She loves the village. But because of me, Team Rocket’s captured her and are probably torturing her. They’ll kill her even if she’s telling the truth about us or not.” When she said those words, Mia had a sick feeling in her heart Azalea was already in danger.

    “If you wish to save her, you must do it by sunrise on Sunday or we’ll perish,” Tristan explained. “It’s your choice, but a…”

    “Hobson’s choice,” Mia finished. “If I stay, we die. If I get Azalea, I might die. But if I survive, I have to give her up or we die.”

    The Hariyama nodded sadly. “It’s your choice.”

    Mia thought about it. Death has always been awful, even if it was in peace. But to give up a precious thing was worse. Her voice full of sorrow, Mia sighed,” I’m going to rescue her. And when I get back, I’ll… let her go.”

    “A wise choice,” Tristan said, oblivious there was a pause. “I suggest you get going right now while there’s still time. I’ll let Bree know where you are. I wish you luck young one. Be brave and please try to avoid Team Rocket as much as possible. If they capture you, they’ll torture you into a fighting machine. If they proceed to, fight for your life and Azalea’s.” He gave her a salute. “Godspeed Mia. Godspeed.”

    “Thanks Tristan,” Mia said, returning the salute. She then flew out of the office window and into the forest. Mia went back to the crime-scene to find the tire tracks. It went West, straight towards the forbidden lands where humans were believe to thrive. She followed the racks like a Growlithe following a random human home, praying that Azalea was okay.
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    Okay now, that was a little short, and mostly talking at that. Looks like Mia's caught in quite a dilemma!

    “I’m sure she did, but saying that got me in this situation in the first place. Why did my friends leave me? I did nothing wrong, except for a couple of fights.”

    “It was their choice. It happens, like I said.”
    “Hobson’s choice,” Mia finished. “If I stay, we die. If I get Azalea, I might die. But if I survive, I have to give her up or we die.”
    Forced to leave friends, and yet unforced friends leave her too... Life for her is sad >_<

    Monostar is undeserved. New vote coming in!

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    yay what a dilemma! I think there is something here that Tristan isen't telling us.

    great chapter as always (:

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    Back again.... *grins evily* And you know what that means.... *evil glint in eye*

    I found somethin'!
    Mia nodded, still crying into her hands. “I’d do a-anything to bring her back!”
    It just stuck out a lot.... I wonder why no one noticed it.

    Anyways, it is better. I want to see what you're going from this. >.> That's why I'm reading. ^.^


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    'Kay, the first time I read that I misinterpreted. >.< I'm so stupid! I thought you were greeting me and stuffs. I got confussed.... Well, you were. But I took it the other way.

    And this time I'm not first. I wasn't feeling well so I was off the computer this entire afternoon. (And started to read Harry Potter again. >.> It annoys me how it's so addicting...)

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    I think there is something here that Tristan isen't telling us.
    I agree. Great chapter. But it is very short. I don't have any comments though.

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    Let's see... *counts* FOUR REPLIES! *hugs*

    Hahahabvc87: Hiya! *hugs* Heh heh, first post, huh? And yes, Mia is in a dilemma! And yes, Mia has a horrible life right now. Bu we'll see what happens in a couple of chapters, huh? And Monostar shall never prevail! *cackles* Thanks for replying! *hugs*

    Demy: Hi! *hugs* Dilemmas are fun XD. Well, Tristan doesn't have anything to hide. Trust me, he doesn't. Otherwise, he would've told a story here. But he has nothing to hide. *hugs*

    Literate: *gasp* Caught up in Harry Potter! *hugs* ZOMG NOT TEH EVIL GLINT! *faints and is revived by Cheeky* Stupid spell-check! I thought Word would catch that. Oh! You were reading Just to see what's happening, huh? Well take this! Thanks for replying anyway! *hugs*

    Sarukarisha: Hiya! *hugs* Like I said to Demy, Tristan has nothing to hide. And yes! The hearts are gone! *wails* I love the hearts... Curse you keyboard! Thanks for replying, though you don't have much to say. *hugs*

    Okay, I'm focusing more on Azalea here. And yes, the title sucks. Now, another villain enters here. *gasp* Who can it be?! (You know anyway, heh. He was due in the story anyway.)
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    Chapter Eleven: The Hide-Out

    The sun had started to set when Mia noticed the tracks were slowly disappearing as they went through thicker grass. She slowly started getting frustrated. No matter what others said, she couldn’t see well at night and the tracks were lost. She sighed and looked up into the sky. “Oh Azalea,” she said, “I wish I could remember the song, but I only heard it once. I’m useless without you.”

    Mia again glanced up at the stars later on from a cave. From there she spotted Polaris, the North Star. She had learned it would always lead the way home a few years back. Mia had been hiking through the woods and lost the trail. There was only a crescent moon, so she couldn’t find a pathway from above. She was about to give up when Polaris caught her attention. After following it, she returned safely to camp.

    However, if Mia was to ever follow it at that moment, it would only lead her home and not to Azalea. She didn’t want to give up hope she would meet up with her. Silently, the young Mew cried as she thought about the event of her friend dying in the hands of the Rockets.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    A while back before Mia was found by the other Outsiders, Azalea woke up in a strange room. She saw she couldn’t move because of the handcuffs around her wrists and ankles chaining her to the wall. Azalea was starting to panic. Last thing she remembered was when the Rockets stunned her with a Taser.

    The only things in the room was a window, benches and torture weapons. When Azalea glanced out of the window, she could only see the trees. Something must’ve harmed Mia, but she could only guess. Maybe she should use the song…

    The sound of footsteps caught Azalea’s attention. She looked up to see Cyndy coming in. She had on a smirk as she strolled over to her prisoner. “So you’re finally awake.”

    “What happened to Mia?” Azalea growled.

    “What?”

    “What’d you do to my friend?”

    “You mean that pink friend of yours?” Cyndy asked. “Well, we stunned it too.”

    “You evil witch!” the red-head gasped.

    The woman smirked her poisonous smile. “Evil now, am I? Well, if you want your friend, we’re sending henchmen over there to fetch her if the Outsiders didn’t get to her first. Speaking of which, where are they?”

    Azalea was afraid of this. Because they were in a room with murderous weapons, she knew she would be tortured by on. “What choices do I have?” she asked.

    “Not many,” Cyndy said. “One: Tell us where the Outsiders are and you live. Two: Lies will get you nowhere. Three: It’s the same as reason two, yet worse. What do you think?”

    “Those are Hobson’s choices,” Azalea said. “And they’re awful privileges, not choices.”

    “You’re a smart little girl, with the exception of the running away from home. So where are the Outsiders?”

    “I refuse to tell you their locations,” the red-head growled. Cyndy scowled and smacked her across the face.

    “I’ll be back later,” she said. “And you better be telling the truth.” She stormed out and slammed the door. Filled with pain and sorrow, Azalea wept through the afternoon.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    Mia tried to sleep, but she couldn’t. Everytime she closed her eyes, disturbing images flashed in her mind. Mia wasn’t sure what was causing this, but it prevented her from falling asleep. She clutched her necklace and thought hard about what the song was, but she could only identify a few lyrics.

    “I can’t just stay here, knowing my friend’s in trouble,” she told herself. “I need to keep going.”

    Thankful there was a moon out, Mia shot off into the darkness.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    Azalea tried to sleep once night fell, but failed. It figured she would. Ever since her twin had died, she has never had any true rest. Another reason was the Rockets. They have been known to torture their victims to insanity if death wasn’t available. Sighing, Azalea tried to fall asleep when voices reached her ears.

    “Well, did you find it?” Cyndy’s voice asked.

    “The body wasn’t there,” came Greg’s voice. “We saw other footprints, but the Houndoom lost the scent. It seems they got to it before us.”

    “We need that Outsider!”

    “As long as we have the brat, we don’t need it.”

    “I’ve tried three times already. She’s refusing to speak.”

    “I should try,” Greg suggested. “She’s not asleep, is she?”

    “Who cares,” Cyndy scoffed, walking off. Azalea quickly shut her eyes when Greg came into the room.

    “Wake up brat!” he shouted.

    Azalea pretended to be half-asleep. “Gosh, I’m asleep! Go away!”

    “Nice try, but you can’t fool me. Now, where are the Outsiders? Don’t make me use this!” Greg pulled out a rifle and aimed at her head.

    With a gasp, the red-head fainted at the sight of gun. Groaning, the man threw the un-loaded weapon into a corner and left. “Did it work?” the woman asked once he closed the door.

    “I over-did it again,” was the answer.

    “You brain-dead git! How many times do I have to tell you, only use weapons as a last resort!” she growled. “We never use them as a second, third, even tenth resort for corn’s sake! Always last!”

    “Why in the world would you worship corn?” Greg said. “It doesn’t sound right.”

    “What, but… I was… Oooh, you’re so lucky I’m not going to rip your head off! Now come on, we need to contact the Boss.”

    Snatching his wrist, Cyndy dragged her partner into another room. Flipping on the light, the woman pressed a button to activate the screen in front of them. A man in shadow appeared on screen. Next to him was a cream-colored cat with three whiskers on each side of his face and a red jewel in the middle of the forehead. “What do you want?” he demanded rudely in a European accent.

    “We were wondering if you could come tomorrow,” Greg said.

    “Why?”

    “We got a little girl who has the Outsiders’ location, but she’s not telling,” Cyndy explained.

    “I’ll come by in the afternoon,” he said. “If she’s the wrong girl, I’ll have to fire you two.”

    “One question Sir.”

    “Yes Greg?”

    “Are we allowed to worship corn here?” he asked, getting a glare from Cyndy.

    The man just growled and broke the connection. Greg squeaked with fright and dashed off before his companion could crack her knuckles.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    Mia woke up in the middle of a field once the sun rose. She must have fallen asleep without knowing. “Okay, note to self: No more night searches,” she grumbled, getting up off the ground.

    Se stretched for a few minutes before continuing onward. She only had until tomorrow to find Azalea, or she fails. Occasionally, the young Mew got lost and had to search around for jeep tracks. After a few hours, Mia came into a clearing where a large building stood, guards walking around the doors, often bumping into each other. Rocket Grunts.

    She quickly made herself invisible and flew silently around the building, peeking into windows. Many of them were from dormitories, but they were all empty. After glancing into several windows in the back building, Mia gasped suddenly as she peeked into the last room.

    ~~:[]: :[]:~~

    Azalea stirred once the sunlight hit her face. When she accustomed to the light, she peeked outside. If it was morning, the sky wouldn’t be that bright. She sighed, wondering why her captors didn’t come to interrogate her.

    When the door opened, Azalea glared at the two Rockets. “We have a visitor for you,” Cyndy said.

    “I don’t trust you,” Azalea growled.

    “Well too bad. She’s ready for you Boss,” Greg called, smirking.

    A man walked in and stopped in front of the prisoner. He was a well-groomed man with a fancy, red suit, spit-shine shoes and slick, brown hair. What was unpleasant about him was the way he smirked, his dark eyes glaring her to paralysis.

    “Who’re you?” Azalea growled.

    “My name is Giovanni, the leader of Team Rocket,” he introduced himself. “And I came to ask you a few questions.”

    “Let me guess: You want the location of the Outsiders.”

    “That’s one of them.”

    “I refuse to answer that.”

    “All right then. Now, who was the Outsider you were with?” Giovanni asked.

    “I can’t tell you. She’s a very special friend of mine.”

    The leader smirked, noticing the necklace. “Are those the magical necklaces I’ve heard so much about? They look ancient.”

    “My grandfather got this and another one at a market one year. They’re friendship necklaces.”

    “I see. Last question: Do you think you can escape the wrath of Giovanni?”

    Greg groaned. “Not this question again.”

    “Shut up!” Cyndy hissed.

    Azalea was stumped. She didn’t know what the boss did, so the real answer never came. Taking a deep breath, she answered, “With my new friend by my side, I’m sure I can.”

    Giovanni smiled. “Interesting. Well, it was nice meeting you… for the last time.”

    Azalea gasped. “What do you mean?”

    Laughing, he revealed a gun from behind his back, loaded and ready to fire. “Last chance, where are the Outsiders?”

    “I’ll never tell you!” she shouted. “I’d rather take that answer to the grave!”

    Giovanni chuckled. “Nice answer. Too bad you’re about to eat those words.” He was about to pull the trigger when something crashed through the window.
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    Muah ha ha! Cliffhanger! I'm so eville. >:3

    Okay, I have a request for you all! Do you all want a sequel to this? I want to know since I started one. (A third done with the story, heh.) And please, I want some answers. Cause I need your permission first before I can do a sequel. The title will be called...

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    Finding the Golden Rule

    That's the title. But I want your permission to see if you want to see the sequel.

    Well, I better get going. See you all later! *hugs and passes out cookies*

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    Hello again! ^.^

    You know why I'm here. ^.^

    “One question, Sir.”

    “Yes, Greg?”
    Missed those commas. You need them if you're addressing someone.
    “Well too bad. She’s ready for you, Boss,” Greg called, smirking.
    Yeah, here too.
    She stretched for a few minutes before continuing onward.
    Yeah, and about the request, I would read it. Hey, I read anything.

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    Well if your work for the next is the same (or more likely better) than I would like a sequel.

    Why must you taunt me with a cliffhanger! Now I must wait to see if my fav chars get out of it ok! Keep up the good work.
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    Wow really good work. I did catch something this time but Literate caught it first... I would read a sequel by you anyday. Maybe not on my birthday or Christmas though... Anyways if you decide to post one just pm me please! Giovanni... wait err lost it. OMG I think Flo will be Mia's friend in the end... Maybe.
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    yes do a squeal to The Battle for Friendship

    why the cliff-hanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!

    great chapter as always Kutie Pie

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    Wow! Nice work here. Also the cliffhanger makes me itch with excitement.

    As for the request, I'd definitely like to see a sequel. Just PM me when it's up.

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    So, the end is near...

    A quote from post 46:
    (So basically, Mia's the Mew today.)
    I hope you can answer the question of how Mia became Mewtwo's origin!

    And a few parts of the story I liked:

    “Nice try, but you can’t fool me. Now, where are the Outsiders? Don’t make me use this!” Greg pulled out a rifle and aimed at her head.

    With a gasp, the red-head fainted at the sight of gun. Groaning, the man threw the un-loaded weapon into a corner and left. “Did it work?” the woman asked once he closed the door.

    “I over-did it again,” was the answer.
    Plan backfire!!

    “Are we allowed to worship corn here?” he asked, getting a glare from Cyndy.
    XDDD CORN!!

    The leader smirked, noticing the necklace. “Are those the magical necklaces I’ve heard so much about? They look ancient.”

    “My grandfather got this and another one at a market one year. They’re friendship necklaces.”
    O_o And he believed that!?

    Giovanni chuckled. “Nice answer. Too bad you’re about to eat those words.” He was about to pull the trigger when something crashed through the window.
    Cliffhanger! But this one doen't really have a very strong "suspense" effect... I wonder why? ~_^

    Anyway, go for a sequel if you feel like it! I totally support yor decision on this!

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    I caught up! *boogies* XD

    As good as always! I like where this story is going... There are a few problems, though. Wouldn't the Rockets have carried Mia off? She can't be that heavy... Or at least try to catch her? She was knocked out... But that is just me.

    I really do pity Mia. She does seem to have some abrupt mood swings, doesn't she? Same with Daisy/Azeala. XD Sorry, I is a little tired. Katie is up past midnight. >.< I'll give you a proper review later...

    Byees!


    Edit: >.< Talk about typos...

    Wells, I is sane now. This is looking very good, as I said before. A quick question, though. Why would the leader allow Mia to go? Don't worry, it is only a small thing.

    Keep up the good work!
    Last edited by katiekitten; 14th June 2006 at 1:16 PM.


    Floating over your rocky spine
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    Exclamation *alarm* Next chapter approaches! *SSMB mode*

    ZOMG SEVEN REPLIES!

    Literate: Hallo again! *hugs* The stupid spell/grammar-check refused that. So the commas were deleted. Yeah... And it's pretty dumb, yep. Check one for a sequel! Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

    Shadows Follower: OMIGOSH YOU'RE HERE!! *squeals and hugs* Another point for sequel! >:3 Muah ha ha! I'm ebil for having a cliffhanger! *cackles* Thanks for replying after a couple of *gasp* months. *hugs*

    Sarkarisha: Hi! *hugs* ANOTHER POINT FOR SEQUEL! And will Flo be Mia's friend after she gets out of a coma? We shall see. Doh! You lost something for Giovanni! Darn. Thanks for replying! *hugs*

    Demy: Hi! *hugs* POINT FOUR FOR SEQUEL! And the cliffhanger? I'm ebil, that's why. >:3 Rawr! Ha ha ha! Thankies for "voting" and replying! *hugs*

    Lord_sNap: Hiya! *hugs* SEQUEL AGAIN! And yes, the cliffhanger is itchy. And don't worry, I will PM you. ^_~ Why should I have my readers pull their hair out trying to find it? Thanks! *hugs*

    Hahahabvc87: Hiya! *hugs* Yes, the end is near. ;_; And Mia being Mewtwo's origin? Err... *goes back to re-read question* If you were hoping it would be explained in the fic, sorry. Won't be explained. The plan back-fire was definately put into the story. The "worshiping corn" joke was put in at the last minute. *been watching too much SpongeBob* And YES, Giovanni believed the story. He's heard of them. And the cliffhanger was because I'm evil. Yep. And another point for sequel! Thanks for replying! *hugs*

    katiekitten: Yay! You caught up! *hugs and joins in boogie* The Rockets (being idiots they were) wanted to come back for Mia later. And mood swings? I don't remember that... Oh oh! Sort of. She's emotional. Been up past midnight. I stayed up till FOUR one time. I was drawing and writing a one-shot I'm planning on posting one day. (Warning: Do not read if you hate Mewshipping!) And the leader let Mia go because... Well, the reason why will be exlpained here, but it refers to all of the Outsiders. Thanks for replying! *hugs*

    Okay, I would've updated earlier, but my brothers were on, mom had to do something for our Family Home Evening this afternoon (everyone's here, we're just eating) so yeah. Here's chapter twelve! We got this, two more and an epilogue before we're *gasp* done. And then the sequel since majority rules. Enjoy this short (Sorry about that) chapter. And yes, I know the title sucks. Just bear with me.
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    Chapter Twelve: The Escaping Truth

    Mia gasped at what she saw. Cyndy and Greg were there along with Azalea and a new man she has never seen. He was talking to her and she could sense there was something wrong with the way he had his hands behind his back. A few moments later, the man revealed the hidden item: a gun aimed for Azalea’s head.

    Mia turned away in horror. She had to do something to stop him, but there was only one way to get inside without depleting her energy. Taking a deep breath, Mia flew as for back as possible and darted towards the window, shattering it. Everyone looked towards its direction to see a small pink cat appear out of thin air.

    “Mia! You came!” Azalea cried.

    The Mew flew in front of the gun, standing between it and Azalea’s head. “Back away from my friend.”

    “Ah ha! You lied!” Greg exclaimed, pointing a shaky finger at the girl. “You do know an Outsider! You should be punished!”

    Giovanni did nothing except keep the weapon aimed at Mia. “So, decided to save your friend at the last second, huh?”

    She glared. “Why do you need us Outsiders? We did nothing to you.”

    “We needed you to lure the other Pokemon to your place. Then, when the people arrive, the war would continue, but in a bloody battle. In the end, humans will rule the world!” he cackled.

    “But the battle would begin if you were to bring all Pokemon together,” Mia said. “The humans would only attack the village. The others haven’t allowed us to rejoin yet. You’re out of out luck.”

    Giovanni smiled. “Oh, but you are the back-up for the other Pokemon. You’ve all been split in half. If one half is destroyed, the other would take its place. Your group is the most powerful out of all of the others. This is why we planned to get rid of the Outsiders to weaken the other Pokemon.”

    The truth hit Mia like the one bullet would if fired. She had no idea they were the strongest out of all Pokemon. She had been worried about the war when all of this time they could win it. But then, why didn’t they do anything, instead letting the other half take the casualties?

    “Are you wondering about why your village is trying to avoid the war?” he asked, noticing the look on the Mew’s face. Without waiting for her answer, he explained, “You’re all peace-makers. That’s why the village is separated from the fighters. They can’t have Poke-hippies running around, throwing flowers in everyone’s faces. Seeing as humanity had the thirst for control for thousands of years, all of the creatures became frightened and turned into enemies.

    “Only half of these were the ones that caused horrible tragic attacks. The other only hid from the world. But when kids started forming ideas to have little friends, the timid ones started to open their hearts for the humans. Only the vicious ones kept away from the villages. They grew more violent as humans continued to migrate across the land, which is why they hate us all.

    “Eventually a massacre happened, destroying several villages. Anger and destruction spread through out the land, causing a war of control between man and beast. All of the men sent off to war are actually battling the Pokemon they all love. Many never return from these violent battles. This is why I’m aiming to be the hero. By destroying the peace-makers, I’ll end up in control over the other half.”

    “So you have to basically destroy all life on Earth just to gain control,” Mia growled, clenching her fists in disgust.

    The Rocket Boss laughed. “Yes, it’s a big price to pay. But this was why Team Rocket was created in the first place. It’s a new Ku Klux Klan for Pokemon. Do you remember the man from the story? He was the Father of Team Rocket. Though he was executed, his followers spread across the world, teaching young children to hunt, kill and destroy.”

    “I can’t believe this is happening,” Azalea spoke up. “I should’ve known Team Rocket was more than just an organization that uses Pokemon as machines. I should’ve paid more attention to the signs they showed.” Mia could tell her voice was starting to shake with sobs.

    Giovanni turned and pointed the gun at her, but Mia flew in front of it. He kept moving it from place to place before noticing her strange behavior. “So, you’re going to risk your life to save her?” he asked.

    The cat nodded. “Yes. She’s my friend. I must protect her.”

    “Well, I only have one bullet, so if you want, I will shoot.”

    “Mia, please don’t do this!” the red-head begged.

    The young Mew turned around to face Azalea. “I must. It’s the only way.”

    “No it isn’t. You can’t just give up your life for me.”

    “It’s the only way,” Mia repeated. Tears forming in her eyes, she hugged her friend with a tight grip.

    “Mia… I’ll miss you.”

    “Oh, how touching,” Giovanni said sarcastically, wiping away a fake tear. “I’m crying already. But I think it’s because I can only enjoy this once. So guess I should go ahead and kill you. So long Outsider!” Moreover, he aimed for her spine and fired.

    At the last second, Mia formed a force field around her and Azalea, deflecting the bullet back to Giovanni, who dodged in time. Azalea smiled at her friend. “You were bluffing, weren’t you?”

    “I sure was,” she smiled. “Now let’s get you out of here!” Using a few attempts with Shadow Balls, the shackles shattered. Nodding, Mia faced the Rockets. “Leave us and my village alone!”

    “Not until I get that power!” he shouted. “I must get it!”

    “It’s important for us!”

    “Boss, what shall we do?” Cyndy asked in a panicked voice.

    “Stop them!”

    Mia blasted a hole in the wall, using her telekinesis to levitate Azalea up next to her. “Now let’s go warn the others!” she said. They shot off to the village while Team Rocket ran around the building to get ready to leave.

    “Mark my words, Outsiders, you shall pay for this!” the Boss yelled, shaking his fist at them. “You hear me? I shall have my revenge! You’ll see!”

    “Boss, we can always have revenge some other day you know,” Greg said, stepping up to him.

    “Shut up, or I’ll fire you!”

    “Oh, and I wanted to tell you something.”

    “What?”

    Saluting, he reported, “We got the weapons all ready. We’re ready to go at your command.”

    Giovanni tried his best to keep from yelling at him. Smirking, he said, “Good work. I won’t fire you for that. Now, let’s go after that Mew! The sooner I get rid of her, the sooner the Outsiders die!”
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    Hey hey! Looks like another cliffhanger! WHOOP! Well, I better get off. Family's here. So I'll just throw these pies at you all and PM you. I'll be back on later. Just look for me, heh heh. *throws pies to readers where they hit the face* O_O; Oops. ^^; Uh... I forgot your forks. Err... AAAUUGGHHHH! *chased away*

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    *is hit by pie* XD

    That was a good chappy. Short, but sweet. Not another cliff hanger?!? XD

    ...Wells, not much to say about this. Keep up the good work!


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