Hey Great Butler! Another great chapter! Okay, here are some highlights:
Like lightkeeper said, it is priceless. That made me laugh quite a bit.Yes. Is Ein there? We need to talk to him right away."
"She's pregnant, isn't she?"
"I'm glad! That's the best honor a scientist can recieve, praise of his inventions. I'm working on getting the upgraded system in the Realgam Tower. Can I have your P*DA number so I can contact you in the future?"In both of these quotes, receive is spelled wrong. (Well, according to my computer. I save it into my computer and read it)."Wait!! Rich, I forgot to give you this!" Krane handed Rich a folder-like device with a Poké Ball carved into its cover. "That's your Colosseum Challenge pass. When you win a knockout challenge at a Colosseum for the first time, you'll recieve an emblem for your victory. Amass them all and you can enter the championship challenge at the Orre Colosseum."
Also, I liked the virtual battling part. Maybe we will see more of those soon?
Well, good luck on the next part of Chapter One!

























Seriously, with all the nonsense going on right now, I'll do it as quickly as I can. Surely you'd want a quality chapter over something crappy and rushed, right?