Hey Great Butler! Another great chapter! Okay, here are some highlights:
Like lightkeeper said, it is priceless. That made me laugh quite a bit.Yes. Is Ein there? We need to talk to him right away."
"She's pregnant, isn't she?"
"I'm glad! That's the best honor a scientist can recieve, praise of his inventions. I'm working on getting the upgraded system in the Realgam Tower. Can I have your P*DA number so I can contact you in the future?"In both of these quotes, receive is spelled wrong. (Well, according to my computer. I save it into my computer and read it)."Wait!! Rich, I forgot to give you this!" Krane handed Rich a folder-like device with a Poké Ball carved into its cover. "That's your Colosseum Challenge pass. When you win a knockout challenge at a Colosseum for the first time, you'll recieve an emblem for your victory. Amass them all and you can enter the championship challenge at the Orre Colosseum."
Also, I liked the virtual battling part. Maybe we will see more of those soon?
Well, good luck on the next part of Chapter One!