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    Finally, the sequel is here! Well, for those of you who are new to the story, I suggest you read the original but then again, you don't have to read 228 pages. XD But you might miss out on the action, comedy, and romance. The original is at my sig!

    Summary: The adventures continues in the hilarious sequel with your favorite characters! Three years have passed, Yoshi finds herself bored with her life but things change when Thomas, Janet, and Prince Atam drop a visit over to Mushai Palace! Yoshi along with Mix travel again while Tyra and Malcin stay behind. Yoshi discovers how things change, learns the true meaning of adventure, and is taught valuable life lessons.

    Genre: Comedy, Romance, Action

    Rating: PG-13 for violence and death

    Shippings: There are several shippings made by me for this story as this is the continuation of The Adventures of Yoshi. I'm not sure how many there will be overall but, it's three and above. The names? Well, I don't want to spoil anything so, you can find out for yourself by reading! ^^

    So, without further ado, let the story begin! ^_^

    The Adventures of Yoshi 2-The Sequel


    Chapter 1: Search for Yoshi

    Three years have passed since the genocide at Mushai. Mushai is now more calmer now that it recovered from the genocide. The clouds slowly moved across the bright blue sky. Boats landed near the docks of the harbor. Seagulls cawed loudly and birds from the forest chirped with delight. The trees were blown calmly as they were moved by the wind. The wind was silent yet serene.

    A small, yellow-green bird flew around the palace of Mushai. His wings floated in the sky as he looked down to see nothing in sight, except for plants and buildings. His dark cerulean eyes only spotted the beauty of the tremendous palace.

    “Where can she be?” he asked himself as he continued to fly.

    The tiny bird flew down, closer to the palace as his feet landed on the soft, green grass. His eyes peeked here and there but, his friend was nowhere to be found. He placed one of his wings under his chin that was hidden by feathers and wondered to himself. He then shook his head as he moved to a different spot. Mix encountered a French door that overlooked inside. He jumped to the doorknob as he struggled to open the door.

    “Stupid door! Why do I have to be so small?!” he complained to himself.

    The door creaked open, astonishing and startling Mix. He shrugged as he entered inside as the door slammed shut behind him. Mix jumped in surprise, but soon sighed.

    “Who’s there?” a voice asked.
    “Huh?”

    Mix walked straight as it led to a massive hallway. The little bird walked in awe as he looked around to see paintings and decorations in the hallway. Mix knew that he was in the Hallway of Paintings, which happens to be one of the longest hallways around the palace. He kept turning his head, staring at the paintings mysteriously until he finally saw some steam coming from one of the rooms. He excitedly waddled to the room and opened the door as it revealed itself to be the kitchen.

    There were many cooks preparing lunch for everyone inside the palace. They were all dressed in white. One of the cooks turned around and looked at Mix with a smile.

    “So it was you making all of that noise.” Malcin stated.
    “Hi Malcin, what are you cooking?” Mix asked.
    “It’s vegetable soup.”
    “Oh, yummy!” Mix squealed as he rubbed his stomach. “Is it ready?”
    “Not yet, it’ll be a while.” Malcin replied as he chopped more vegetables with a knife.
    “Could I have some?” Mix questioned.
    “Sure, knock yourself out!” Malcin said with a chuckle. He knew that Mix loved fruits and vegetables.
    “All right!” Mix shouted with joy as he grabbed some celery and started to eat it. “It’s so good!”
    “Thank Tyra for that. She’s in charge of the garden.” Malcin explained.
    “Oh, now that I remember…have you seen Yoshi?” Mix asked with anticipation.
    “No, sorry.” Malcin replied. “But I thought I heard someone walking around here before.”
    “Maybe it was Yoshi.” Mix suggested.
    “Who knows? She has been sleep-walking lately.” Malcin said with a shrug.
    “Really?” Mix asked, surprised at the fact that Yoshi would do that.
    “Well, that’s what everyone’s been saying.” Malcin said as he continued to cut the vegetables.
    “Anyway, I’ll go check in her room again.” Mix stated.
    “Okay, see ya later Mix.”
    “See ya.” Mix declared as he went to the door of the kitchen but then stopped. “Could I have another veggie?”
    “Here ya go.” Malcin remarked with a smile as he gave the bird another celery.
    “Thanks!” Mix affirmed as he struggled again to open the door.

    Malcin smiled at him as Mix opened the door and left. He continued to chop the vegetables. Mix was back into the Hallway of Paintings. His head tilted to the left and right. He moved towards the right and walked straight again. He passed the room where he first started in though Mix wasn’t aware of what that room was called. Every single room in the palace has a name. Mix continued to walk until he came across something that caught his attention.

    “Hey, a map!” Mix told himself as he read it carefully. “Let’s see…Yoshi’s room is on the third floor. Question is, how to get there.”

    Mix continued to stare at the map to find the quickest way to get to Yoshi’s room.

    “This place is bigger than I thought…” Mix affirmed. “Aha! That’s the way I need to go!”

    He started to walk straight ahead. After about fifth teen minutes, he approached the Royal Stairs. Mix smiled with glee as he flew up the stairs. He soon got to the second floor hallway called the Sun Hallway since it had so many windows that let the sun inside. The second floor also included many other hallways. It also included where all of the guest rooms, meeting rooms, playrooms, training room, classroom, and library were located.

    The first floor consisted of the kitchen, entrance, patio, sunroom, dining room, and living room. But these were no ordinary rooms. These were enormous yet beautiful rooms. Outside was Tyra’s Garden, the Wishing Well, and a large park called Soothing Park. The Third Floor contained everyone’s rooms, each with a bathroom.

    The Mushai Palace was a wondrous place to live. It was built a while after the genocide ended. Not too many people lived in Mushai like it used to. The genocide cut two-thirds of Mushai’s population. Eventually, the people who fled returned to their humble home but to find that it was destroyed. Others were captured by General Acan but were soon rescued. The people united together to build everything once again. They also had the help of the other regions like Alcan, Jushi, Ijo, Taoma, and Bushu.

    Mix flew up the stairs once more and finally got to the Third Floor. He searched for Yoshi’s room as he passed the other rooms. He approached a door that had a sign.

    “Yoshi’s room.” Mix stated as he smiled to himself and realized that Yoshi is the only one who puts up signs at the door of her room.

    Mix knocked on the door. No answer. He knocked again. Nothing happened. He sighed as he turned the doorknob and opened the door.

    There was a bed, night-tables with lamps, drawers, a mirror, two windows, a large closet, a desk with a chair, and a bathroom. All of Yoshi’s other items were around the room. Mix sighed with anxiously.

    “She’s not here…” Mix sulked. “Maybe Malcin is right. Maybe Yoshi is sleepwalking…”

    He left her room as he closed the door. Mix sighed again as he sank to the floor.

    ~*~*~*~

    A girl of twenty entered a large room. She had a traditional yellow dress on, with gold earrings matching her. Her short hair was a beauty brown and her eyes were midnight blue. There was a glorious brown dinner table with five men sitting calmly and one other girl sitting. The men chatted quietly.

    She looked almost like the other girl except that she had long hair. This girl was twenty-two. She wore a light blue dress with white pearls matching. She immediately stood up and walked to the other girl.

    “Where’s Yoshi?” the oldest whispered.
    “I thought she was coming with you.” the other answered.
    “Then where is she? The meeting is about to start!” she shrieked at the other as it caught the men’s’ attention.
    “Is there something wrong Kiori?” the leader asked.

    The two girls sweatdropped.

    “Oh no, sir!” Kiori replied.
    “Well, there’s only twenty more minutes before this meeting starts.” he added as Kiori nodded.

    The men continued to talk. Kiori turned around, facing her sister.

    “Chikara, find Yoshi and bring her here!”
    “Fine, I’ll find her.” Chikara said as she walked out of the room.

    She closed the door behind her and ended up at the waiting room. She left the building and started to head for Mushai Palace.

    “Why me?” she mumbled to herself as she walked. “At least the palace isn’t too far away…”

    After five minutes, she arrived at the foot of Mushai Palace. Four guards were at the massive door.

    “Please enter, Chikara.” one of the guards said as they all opened the door.
    “Thanks!” she called as she ran towards the palace.

    ~*~*~*~

    “Hello there Mix!” a sweet voice greeted.

    Mix flew down to the girl as she sat down on the firm ground.

    “Hi Tyra!” Mix greeted. “What are you doing?”
    “What else do you think I’m doing? I’m gardening, silly!”
    “Oh, right.” Mix replied with a sweatdrop. “By the way, have you seen Yoshi?”
    “No, but I bet she’s sleepwalking again.” Tyra answered. “Did you check her room?”
    “Yeah, but she’s nowhere to be found! She’s making me crazy!” Mix complained.
    “You got that right.” a voice added.
    “Huh?”
    “Oh, it’s you Chikara!” Tyra said with joy. “But I thought you were already at the meeting.”
    “I would be if Yoshi ever shows up!” Chikara complained. “She’s such a bedhead!”
    “She’s been staying up late lately so that explains her long hours of sleep.” Tyra explained.
    “What is that you’re carrying?” Mix asked.
    “Oh, it’s just a pail of water.” Chikara replied while closing her eyes.
    “For what?” Mix questioned.
    “For this,” Tyra stated as she took the pail of water and watered her plants.

    Chikara and Mix were shocked as Tyra smiled. Chikara exploded.

    “Tyra!” she wailed. “Why did you do that?!”
    “The plants needed water.” Tyra replied, not having a clue what she meant.
    “I needed that water! Now I have to go back to the Wishing Well!”
    “Oh, oops.” Tyra said with a sweatdrop.
    “What did you need that water anyway?” Mix restated his question.
    “You’ll see soon. Yoshi’s in her room.”
    “You know where she is?” Mix and Tyra asked at the same time.
    “Yup, up in her room. Sleeping like a baby.”
    “Wha…?” Mix shouted with confusion. “I just checked there before!”
    “Well, she’s back there now. She must have been sleepwalking.”
    “That’s no fair!” Mix sulked.
    “Anyway, I should get some more water since Tyra used it up.” Chikara said while she glared at Tyra.
    “Sorry about that!” Tyra responded with one of her hands at the back of her head and with a nervous smile.
    “It’s okay. The colder, the better! Anyway, I’ll see ya later!” Chikara called as she walked away.
    “Bye!” Tyra called.
    “Wait for me!” Mix shouted as he flew after her.
    “Huh?”
    “Are you sure that Yoshi’s in her room?”
    “Well, yeah.”
    “I took such a long time to get to her room…”
    “Why didn’t you just fly to her window?” Chikara asked.
    “Why didn’t I think of that?” Mix asked himself as he smacked himself.
    “But then again, the windows are hard to tell apart…”
    “Uh…”
    “We better hurry!” Chikara called as she ran to the Wishing Well.
    “Wait up!”
    “You’re such a slowpoke!” Chikara shouted as she took out her tongue.
    “Am not!” Mix yelled as he started to speed up with his power.

    Mix went shockingly fast past Chikara and approached the well quickly.

    “Who’s the slowpoke now?” Mix asked coolly.
    “No fair!” Chikara yelled as she pointed to Mix. “You used your powers!”
    “So what? At least I beat you!” Mix stated as he laughed.
    “Come on, let’s go!” Chikara called from a small distance away, carrying the water. She took out her tongue playfully at Mix.

    “Hey, no head starts!” Mix screamed.
    “Too bad!”
    “We’ll see about that!”
    “No using your powers!”
    “Bring it on!”

    They both raced as once again, Mix passed Chikara instantly. Mix then took out his tongue playfully. She crossed her arms as she continued to run.

    “See ya!” Mix cooed.
    “Cheater!”

    ~*~*~*~

    “And Mix is the winner! Yay!” Mix shouted happily as he started to dance. Chikara’s eyes narrowed.
    “Quiet, so we can surprise her!”
    “Just what exactly are you going to do with the water?” Mix questioned.
    “Just follow my lead.” Chikara replied.
    “Huh?”

    She opened the door to Yoshi’s room silently. She first crawled up to Yoshi’s bed and made her hand signal. Mix nodded as he flew nearby. Chikara put her hand to her mouth.

    “Shh!”
    “I think I know that already!”

    Chikara slowly started to stand up. Mix still stayed down, not knowing what to do. She smiled evilly.

    “Now we…”
    “Yeah?”
    “ATTACK!” Chikara screamed as she threw the water on Yoshi.

    Yoshi screamed as the cold water fell on her. Mix looked shocked as Yoshi’s eyes narrowed. The entire bed was wet and soggy from the water. Chikara and Mix started to laugh hysterically. Yoshi made an angry face.

    “What was that for?!” she yelled while tightening her fists.
    “Chill out Yoshi, it was a wake up call.” Chikara replied, while still laughing.
    “Very funny.”
    “Ha ha! That was great!” Mix said while laughing.

    POW!

    Mix fell to the floor with dizzy eyes. Yoshi then crossed her arms.

    “That hurt…”
    “Serves you right!” Yoshi shouted to Mix on the floor.
    “You’re so violent!” Chikara scolded. “Poor Mix but that was a good punch.”
    “Who’s side…are you on?” Mix asked weakly.
    “What’s going on here?” a voice asked.
    “Tyra! Malcin!”
    “Uh, Yoshi? Had a little accident?” Malcin asked.
    “Wha…?”
    “I can’t believe it! Yoshi, you wet the bed!” Tyra exclaimed.
    “What?! I did not!” Yoshi shouted as she was startled.
    “Shame on you, little cousin!” Chikara teased. “You’re seventeen years old but you still wet the bed!”

    Everyone else but Yoshi started to laugh more.

    “I didn’t wet the bed! Chikara splashed me with the water!” Yoshi complained with her voice rising more.
    “I did it for a good reason since we’re late to the meeting!” Chikara yelled.
    “Huh?”
    “We have a meeting today, remember?” Chikara asked as she knocked on Yoshi’s head.
    “You better get dressed Yoshi!” Tyra added.
    “But I don’t want to go!” Yoshi whined.
    “Too bad. Orders from Kiori.” Chikara answered.
    “Fine.”
    “I’ll meet you there, okay?” Chikara reminded Yoshi.

    Yoshi nodded as her older cousin left.

    “Seems to me that you don’t want to go.” Malcin stated.
    “It’s boring.” Yoshi added.
    “It can’t be that bad.” Tyra affirmed.
    “It is, once I get there that is.”
    “Ow…” Mix ached as he slowly got up.
    “Come on Mix, I’ll put a bandage on you.” Tyra said sweetly.
    “Not to mention, some veggies…” Malcin added.
    “Yay!” Mix said happily. “Good luck on your meeting Yoshi!”
    “Thanks. Sorry about the punch. No hard feelings.” Yoshi apologized.
    “It’s okay, I’m used to your hits.”

    Yoshi’s eyes narrowed again as the others sweatdropped.

    “Good luck Yoshi!” Tyra called.
    “Same here!” Malcin added.
    “Thanks, both of you.” Yoshi said with a small smile.
    “See ya later,” Malcin waved as he and Mix left.

    Tyra started to leave but then stopped.

    “I noticed that you’re not smiling like you used to.” Tyra said in a gentle voice.
    “Three years inside this place can really get to you.” Yoshi replied.
    “Just take it easy.”
    “I will.”
    “Okay, see ya.”
    “Bye.” Yoshi said as she closed the door to get dressed.

    She walked around, looking through her drawers. Nothing. Yoshi looked inside her closet. Nothing.

    “There’s nothing for me to wear!” Yoshi sulked. “Great, just great.”

    Now what? Yoshi thought to herself.

    She looked around one more time and she discovered an old outfit. It was a jean jacket along with jean pants. There was also a black tank top that matched. Red sneakers were next to the clothes. Yoshi stood in awe as she held the clothes.

    “…My old clothes…”


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    Please do tell me how this chapter was! I know the first chapter is usually boring but it'll get better soon with more new characters along the way! ^_~ Chapter 2 will be up soon! ^^

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    nice sequel and chapter........... i love it....... can u PM me if there is a PM list^_^

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    ^Sure thing! I'm so happy that you loved it so far! ^^ You're definetely on the PM List! ^_^

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    I loved it! XD Mix is so funny! I wonder why Yoshi is sleepwalking...oh well...I didn't see any mistakes, etc, so keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Forever Wished
    I loved it! XD Mix is so funny! I wonder why Yoshi is sleepwalking...oh well...I didn't see any mistakes, etc, so keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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    Yay, no mistakes, for once! *dances*

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    That was a nice start. So it wasn't the most exciting chapter; it showed Yoshi's life now in Mushai, and that she's bored stiff. Sets the pace for the story, and hints at what's to come.

    Well, I like the way this is going; a new adventure awaits, no?
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    It was really good. I liked when Mix got hit by Yoshi it was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gladdecease
    That was a nice start. So it wasn't the most exciting chapter; it showed Yoshi's life now in Mushai, and that she's bored stiff. Sets the pace for the story, and hints at what's to come.

    Well, I like the way this is going; a new adventure awaits, no?
    Thankies! For once I did the first chapter right! XD

    Yup, Yoshi is a bit bored but you're right that a new adventure will begin! ^_^

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    It was really good. I liked when Mix got hit by Yoshi it was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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    Hey, great chapter! The plot was appropriate for a first chapter. You've used all the old characters, and introduced some new ones. I did catch some grammar errors, but no biggy. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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    ^Oh thank you so much, Hakajin! Mistakes? I'll look for those things. I also made some art of the characters too. ^^

    I'm already done with the lastest chapter which I think I'll post tomorrow. ^^ I'll be sure to PM everyone!

    EDIT: Finally got Chapter 2 up! I hope you all enjoy!

    The Adventures of Yoshi 2:The Sequel~Chapter 2: Yoshi’s Dream

    “See ya later!” Yoshi waved as she ran through the Main Room.

    Tyra, Malcin, and Mix smiled at her with glee as Yoshi closed the door behind her. They looked a bit surprised to see Yoshi wearing such an outfit to an important meeting that she was going to attend to. The three stared at each other for a minute but then looked away, thinking that they didn’t see Yoshi wearing that outfit.

    Yoshi ran outside the gate, passing the three guards who stood there, motionless. She ran faster as her feet could carry her, believing that she can make it in time. Yoshi was much quicker than in the past five years ago. The teenage girl crossed three short streets before arriving at the building. The Mushai Meeting Center was the name of the building. Yoshi closed her eyes for a minute and soon opened them as she entered the building. A receptionist was at the counter and smiled since she knew Yoshi. Yoshi waved back as she put her right hand on the doorknob. Her hand shook a little before she took a deep breath and entered the room.

    Inside, there were her two older cousins, Kiori and Chikara along with the five men sitting down, staring at the Yoshi.

    “I’m so…sorry that I was late.” Yoshi stated as she broke the silence.

    Kiori shot a glare at Yoshi. She took a step back from the table, started a bit. Chikara crossed her arms madly while the men all adjusted their glasses.

    “Yoshi! What are you-? Why are you so late?!” Kiori asked as her voice raised.
    “Sorry, I overslept again….”
    “Again? Yoshi, how many times am I going to tell you? You can’t be late to meetings like this! You wasted everyone’s time again!” Kiori scolded.
    “Cool your jets, Kiori!” Chikara added.
    “You should have gotten to Yoshi sooner!” Kiori shouted to her younger sister.
    “Don’t blame me! It’s not her fault that she goes to sleep so late!”
    “It was not my fault! I was just…taking care of a few things.” Yoshi replied while tapping her fingers nervously.
    “Taking care of what?” Kiori asked.
    “Just stuff.”
    “Uh, girls?” the man from the head of the table asked.
    “Thanks a lot Yoshi! You ruined the meeting!” Chikara scoffed.
    “Well, look who‘s talking!” Yoshi shouted.
    “Cut it out!” Kiori snapped.
    “Uh…”
    “You made Kiori angry again not to mention embarrassed us again!” Chikara scolded.
    “Was not!” Yoshi yelled.
    “Ladies?”
    “Was too!”
    “Was not!”
    ‘Was too!”
    “Not!”
    “QUIET!!!” the man yelled as he caught the girls’ attention.
    “So sorry about them. I need to teach them manners…” Kiori apologized.

    She’s the one who needs to learn how to calm down, Yoshi thought.

    “I have a suggestion. Maybe we should postpone this meeting for…next week?”
    “Next week?” Kiori asked as she calmed down.

    The head man nodded as Yoshi and Chikara crossed their arms, not looking at each other. Kiori shot a glare at the two.

    “Yes, next week would be fine. That’ll give Chikara and I enough time to teach Yoshi to get up early.” Kiori affirmed as she stared at Yoshi.
    “Agreed.” Chikara added.

    Yoshi’s eyes narrowed.

    “Then next week it is! We’ll see you three in a week.” the head man said as he and the other men stood from their seats. “This meeting is now finished. You are all dismissed.”
    “Thank you sir.” Kiori replied as the men left the room. “Let’s go!” she yelled as she grabbed her two family members and dragged them both out of the building with everyone in the Main Lobby staring.
    “How embarrassing…” Kiori stated.
    “It’s your fault, you know!” Chikara blamed.
    “Is not!” Yoshi said as her voice started to raise.

    Chikara stuck out her tongue at her younger cousin. Yoshi growled with fury at her.

    “You’re so hot tempered!” Chikara teased.
    “Cut it out!” Yoshi complained.
    “Quiet you two or else!” Kiori threatened as she smacked them on the head.
    “Ow!”
    “Now stay quiet!”
    “Kay…” the two cousins replied together with their voices losing power.

    ~*~*~*~

    “Do you think it went well?” Tyra asked.
    “Hopefully.” Mix replied.
    “It would be a miracle if it went well.” Malcin added.

    The door opened with Kiori walking with rage with Yoshi and Chikara dragging behind. Tyra, Malcin, and Mix sweatdropped at the sight of them. Yoshi secretly glared at her two cousins as they both went to another room. She then put her hand on her head shamefully.

    “Didn’t go well again?” Tyra asked.

    Yoshi nodded.

    “Was it that bad?” Mix asked.
    “Yeah, worst than I imagined.” Yoshi stated as she sighed. “I’m going to sleep.”
    “This early?” Malcin asked.
    “I have a curfew now since I’m punished…”
    “Harsh.” Mix affirmed as Yoshi left the room.
    “Poor Yoshi…” Tyra stated sadly.

    ~*~*~*~

    “What should I write this time?” Yoshi asked herself.

    She sat on her desk in her room with a pen in her hand. She tapped it against the table a few times. Yoshi then sighed and looked up.

    I still wonder…how he’s doing…

    Yoshi then started to write a letter. When Yoshi finished, she read it again as she lifted it to her face.

    “Writing to Atam again?”
    “Aahh!” Yoshi screamed to look behind her to see her friend Tyra smiling.
    “I thought you were sleeping!” Tyra said as she put her hands on hips.
    “Don’t scare me like that…”
    “Sorry. Why are you writing to him again?”
    “I don’t know.”
    “Oh, I get it. You still like him!” Tyra squealed with a smile.
    “I do not! I’m just writing to him to ask how he’s going.”
    “But Yoshi, he hasn’t replied to you in years.”
    “I know…”
    “Then why are you writing to him anyway?”
    “I’m just…curious.”
    “Curiosity killed the cat, Yoshi.” Tyra teased.

    Yoshi sighed.

    “I just…don’t want him…to forget about me…” Yoshi admitted while she looked down.
    “Oh, Yoshi…it’s okay. I’m sure he remembers you, somehow, but right now, worry about things here.” Tyra comforted.
    “That’s just it Tyra. I don’t really want to be here.”
    “You want to travel again, right?”
    “I guess.”
    “Then why don’t you ask your cousins? I’m sure they’ll give you a break.”
    “Just forget about it.” Yoshi stated. “
    “Okay, do you want some lunch?”
    “What’s for lunch?”
    “Vegetable soup along with Peruvian food.” Tyra replied.
    “Okay then. I’ll eat.”
    “I’ll meet you downstairs.” Tyra said as she closed Yoshi’s door.

    I hope he didn’t forget…

    ~*~*~*~

    “Oh yum!” Tyra squealed.
    “This food is great!” Kiori complimented.
    “I want more!” Chikara exclaimed as she raised her plate and waved it.
    “Me too! With lots of fried plantains!” Mix cried excitedly.
    “Okay, more for everyone.” Malcin said with a big grin on his face. He gathered the two plates and served more food.
    “You’re all eating without me again?”
    “Yoshi!”
    “About time.” Chikara mumbled. Yoshi raised up an eyebrow at her.
    “Don’t start fighting again,” Malcin stated as he put the three plates on the table for Yoshi, Mix, and Chikara. “Here’s your food!”
    “Thanks,” Yoshi, Mix, and Chikara replied together.

    Yoshi took her fork with the food and tasted it. Yoshi’s eyes sparkled.

    “Oh wow! This is so good!” Yoshi cried with glee.
    “Thanks Yoshi!”
    “I’m glad you put up a smile.” Tyra affirmed.
    “Remember Yoshi, you have to go to bed by 8:30.” Kiori reminded.
    “Uh huh…” Yoshi replied with her bored tone.

    After 15 minutes, everyone finished their food and rubbed their stomachs.

    “I adore your cooking! You‘ve got to give me the recipe!” Tyra squealed as she out her hands on her both sides on her face.
    “Sure Tyra…” Malcin replied with a blush on his cheeks. “Maybe I’ll show you the recipe sometime.”
    Tyra smiled back with happiness. “That sounds great!”
    “Okay…” Malcin blushed.
    “Flirting again, aren’t ya?” Chikara teased.
    “Don’t say it like that!” Malcin replied as he was startled.
    “Yeah, right.”
    “Thanks for the food Malcin,” Yoshi affirmed.
    “No problem Yoshi.”
    “Well, I’m going to my room again. See ya.” Yoshi said as she stood from her seat and left the Dining Room.
    “More!” Mix’s voice cried from the Dining Room as Yoshi walked back to her room.

    She laid down on her bed and looked up at the designed ceiling. The ceiling was a shape of an oval that had a large skylight for the sun to shine. Many thoughts ran into her mind.

    “What do I do?” Yoshi asked herself.
    “Do what you must do.” a voice answered.
    “Who…who are you?”
    “Yoshi, listen to me.”
    “What is it?”
    “You must follow what your mind and body tell you to do.”
    “Who are you…?”
    “Yoshi, do you even know who you’re talking to?”
    “Well, no.”
    “You seem to have forgotten your past, Yoshi.”
    “Can I ask you something?”
    “Ask away.”
    “Should I continue this way that I’m living right now?”
    “Do what you want to do.”
    “I don’t really follow…”
    “I’m sorry Yoshi, but I must go now.”
    “No, please stay, I need to know more. I have questions!”
    “I’m afraid those questions can’t be answered.”
    “But, why?”
    “Remember Yoshi, I’ll always be with you…no matter…what…” the voice stated as it disappeared.
    “No, wait! Mother! Don‘t go!” Yoshi screamed.
    “Yoshi?”
    “Huh?”
    “Yoshi, wake up!”
    “Tyra? Where did she go?”
    “Huh? What are you talking about?”
    “My mother…was trying to tell me something.”
    “It was a dream Yoshi. Calm down. You need to go back to sleep.”
    “Okay.”
    “Just take it easy. Don‘t let everything stress you out.”
    “I’ll try to keep that in mind.”
    “Good night Yoshi.”
    “Night.”

    Tyra closed the door gently as she out her hand under her chin.

    Yoshi’s unhappy but I know how to change that, Tyra thought as she got up and left her room and headed downstairs.

    ~~~

    Next Time On Ch. 3:Tyra and Malcin have suddenly gone missing! Where can they be? Kiori and Chikara try to give more lessons to Yoshi and tell her more about the responsiblity that Yoshi will be given! Later, Yoshi and Mix try to have a little bit of fun!

    So, what do you think of this chapter and the little preview of Chapter 3? I hope I didn't make mistakes, if so, please point them out to me!

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    Awsome! Awsomeness! Sequals are the greatness! I cannot wait for your next chapters to come...do remember to PM. XP I have to say Mix is my all time favorite character...he's so cute. Liked the bit at the end when Yoshi was talking with her mom...so sad. ;_; Anyway, do keep it up! ^^
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    LOL! WHen I first read the title I thought Yoshi was a guy! ^^Sorry um, I'm not familiar with the anime so I dont know what to expect but it does sound interesting! ^^. Yoshi's an interesting, yet unconventional name for a girl..(well in a novel, a female character was called Dante while the guy's called Christine or something) ^_^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sweet_May
    love the chapter and fanart............ great work MistyMix89........... can't wait for the next chapter^_^
    Thankies so much Sweet_May! ^^

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    Awsome! Awsomeness! Sequals are the greatness! I cannot wait for your next chapters to come...do remember to PM. XP I have to say Mix is my all time favorite character...he's so cute. Liked the bit at the end when Yoshi was talking with her mom...so sad. ;_; Anyway, do keep it up! ^^
    I aodre Mix as well! XD So far, on the poll at my site, he got two votes XD One of them was me. XD

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    LOL! WHen I first read the title I thought Yoshi was a guy! ^^Sorry um, I'm not familiar with the anime so I dont know what to expect but it does sound interesting! ^^. Yoshi's an interesting, yet unconventional name for a girl..(well in a novel, a female character was called Dante while the guy's called Christine or something) ^_^

    Your fic's detailed and fluffy fun, MM89! Great job! ^^
    IMAO! That's so funny! XD I'm so glad that you like it so far!
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    Enjoyed the chapter, as always. A bit shorter than your usual, but gave us enough information to absorb for now...Kiori and Chikara are so silly; blaming Yoshi for the ruckus when they did a lot of the shouting. 'Takes two to tango, and more to argue! ^^

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    ^So glad you liked the chapter! Too bad her cousins love to bug her! XD Yoshi will get her revenge...XD
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    ^So glad that you replied topgun! Thankies for loving it!
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    Great second chapter! It was all very interesting, though I would like to know what the meeting was supposed to be about. But I have a feeling you'll get to that sooner or later. I tried to look at your art, but my stupid computer wouldn't let me. Sorry about that. Anyway, update soon!
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    ^Thankies so much Hakajin! ^^ Their meeting won't be spoken again until much later in the story, well...at least I think so XD

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    Sorry I didn't review sooner! *feels bad*

    Awesome second chapter! I really wish Yoshi could see Prince Atam again...*sigh* It kind of reminded me of AAML, Ash not being--er--nevermind, this isn't AAML! XD The fan-art is too cute, and I'll be waiting for the PM about the next chapter!

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    ^Aw, thankies H! I think Ash and Atram would get along well, that is if Atam doesn't flirt with Misty XD

    Oki doki! The next chapter...is up...now!

    The Adventures of Yoshi 2:The Sequel
    Chapter 3: A Mix of Lessons


    (Note:Possible title chapter change, unless you guys like it! XD)

    A young, beautiful girl awaited at the balcony calmly. She wore a sapphire dress that ended at her knees, white shoes, and sapphire earrings that matched. She smiled at the bright blue moonlight. Bright stars covered the dark cerulean sky.

    “I wonder where he can be…”

    She continued to wait for her noble prince to come. She couldn’t stop looking up at the sky. It had her in a trance. The lovely teenager didn’t move an inch after time passed. Yoshi heard the romantic music from the ballroom. She figured that couples were dancing in their best to impress.

    Yoshi then sensed a light tap on her shoulder.

    Could it be…?

    She turned around, slowly as she faced her prince. Yoshi then felt sharp pain coming through. The prince smiled as he took the sword out from Yoshi as she looked at her stomach to find herself bleeding. She touched her stomach in agony as red blood slowly came from inside of her. Yoshi then looked up at her prince to find his face dark and gloomy.

    “No…” Yoshi affirmed silently as she fell to the floor of the balcony.

    The prince smirked as he walked back to the ballroom, as if nothing happened. Yoshi struggled to raise her arm out to him as her teeth growled with rage. The man simply closed the curtains and left. Yoshi’s arm fell as she started to close her eyes. Everything soon became too blurry for Yoshi to see. All she felt was the pain and horror.

    “Yoshi! Yoshi!” a small voice echoed.
    “Help…me.”
    “Yoshi!”
    “Stay away…”
    “Yoshi!”
    “Huh?” Yoshi asked sleepily as she sat up on her bed. “What…? Mix? What‘s the ma-?”
    “It’s terrible, Yoshi!” Mix cried. “Tyra and Malcin are missing!”
    “What?” Yoshi asked as she immediately got up from bed.

    Yoshi wore her long, white, nightdress as she saw Mix with a tiny and cute sleeping hat on his feathery head. The hat was a light blue hue with white stripes.

    She quickly organized her bed, then grabbed Mix and rushed out of the room. The cautious teenager closed the door carelessly. She then let go of the tiny bird as he fell on the floor. Mix narrowed his eyes while Yoshi put her hand behind her head nervously. He located his night hat before he put it back on his head.

    “Sorry about that…”
    “No problem.”
    “But what do you mean they’re missing?!” Yoshi asked as she placed her hands on her hips.
    “They’re not in their rooms!” Mix stuttered as he waved his two wings around.

    Yoshi then turned around, closing her eyes with fury on her mind. She then turned back to Mix and shot a glare.

    “Maybe it’s because they both went out!” Yoshi yelled as the tiny bird sweatdropped.
    “How should I know?” Mix asked nervously.
    “You stupid bird! You woke me up…for this!” the violent teenager screamed while she held Mix and started to shake him. Mix tried his best to hold his hat but his eyes soon turned to swirls. His hat once again, fell to the floor.
    “Help me.” Mix stated in a tiny voice that left him powerless.
    “I’m sorry.”

    Mix was suddenly confused. He felt as if a question mark was above his head.

    Yoshi’s gone from violent to anguish, what’s with her? I’m so confused.

    “Uh, Yoshi?”
    “I’m actually glad you woke me up.”
    “Huh,” Mix asked, “What are you talking about?”
    “I had a dream again. One of those terrible ones,” Yoshi started to explain.

    Mix quietly listened as he picked up his sleeping hat again.

    “It started out like a dream come true but turned into a nightmare.” Yoshi stated as she walked to a nearby window in the hallway. “Don’t you ever have any of those dreams?”
    “Uh…”
    “Well?”
    “I can’t ever remember my dreams…” Mix told as one of his wings was behind his head. Yoshi half face-faulted.
    “Why do I even ask?” Yoshi mumbled.
    “No really! I have them but I never remember them!” Mix declared.
    “Right…” Yoshi sarcastically agreed.
    “But I think you’re lucky Yoshi!” Mix affirmed as he raised one of his wings happily.
    “Why is that?” Yoshi mumbled.
    “You get to dream of anything, from good to bad. Dreams can have to do with anything,” Mix explained, “Some dreams tell you something, some tell you the future, some fade away, and some are fantasies.” Mix told.

    Yoshi turned around and sat on the floor next to Mix.

    “In my family, it’s bad to remember dreams so we all never get to memorize them. A dream can be forgotten or it could stay in your memory. So be thankful you can remember them.”
    “I…I never knew that.” Yoshi stated as she was amazed with her small companion. “I guess we both see dreams in a different point of view.”

    Mix nodded but then looked down with sadness.

    “It’s okay, Mix. People can’t always remember dreams.” Yoshi told Mix. He then smiled as Yoshi petted him. He cooed with delight.
    “Thanks Yoshi.” Mix thanked.
    “Come on, let’s go eat breakfast.” Yoshi stated as Mix jumped to her shoulder with glee. The teenager headed towards the stairs.
    “Uh, Yoshi?”
    “Yeah?”
    “Do you have any idea what time is it?”
    “No,” Yoshi answered.
    “I don’t think we can eat breakfast anymore…”
    “And why is that?”
    “It’s three o’clock.”
    “WHAT?!”

    ~*~*~*~

    “I’m surprised to see you up…so late again.” Chikara teased.
    “Shut up.” Yoshi answered.
    “I take it back Yoshi, it’s better if you go to sleep late.” Kiori declared.
    “Night owl!” Chikara shouted.
    “Quiet! I’m not a night owl!” Yoshi fumed as she squeezed her fists.
    “I like owls. They’re nice.” Mix stated randomly.



    Everyone stared at the tiny bird and sweatdropped.

    “What?” Mix asked, not knowing what was going on.
    “Never mind,” Yoshi stated as she put one of her hands on her face. “What’s for lunch?”
    “There is no lunch.” Kiori answered.
    “Wha…? How is that possible? Where’s Malcin?” Yoshi asked curiously.
    “He’s not here.” Mix answered.
    “And what about-?”
    “Tyra’s not here either.” Chikara replied.
    “Where did they go?” Yoshi asked, wondering where her two close friends would have gone.
    “I don’t know.” Mix stated.
    “But how do you guys not know?!” Yoshi yelled.
    “Calm down, I’m sure they’ll be here soon.” Kiori comforted.
    “I bet I know where they went.” Yoshi muttered to herself.
    “Where?” Mix asked.
    “They probably went on a honeymoon!” Chikara answered.
    “Without telling us?” Mix asked confusedly.
    “It was an example,” Chikara smirked while she sweatdropped.
    “Now what will I eat?” Yoshi moaned with hunger.
    “I can cook something.” Mix suggested joyfully.
    “Since when can you cook?” Yoshi questioned.
    “I have my-”
    “With your mini kitchen set Malcin gave you last year?” Yoshi asked in disbelief.
    “Yeah!” Mix stated happily.
    “You can’t be serious if you’re going to cook with that thing.” Kiori mumbled.
    “I can do it!” Mix declared. “Just give me half a hour to get it right!”

    The three girls stared at Mix, then slowly stared at each other carefully. They all nodded their heads up and down with disbelief. Mix put up a cheerful grin on his face.

    “All right! Now let Mix the Master stir things up!” Mix affirmed as he put on a tiny white chef hat.

    “Aww!” the girls cooed.
    “You look so cute!” Kiori squealed as she hugged Mix. Mix struggled to free himself out of Kiori’s clutches.
    “Too…much…hugging!”
    “I want to hug him too!” Chikara exclaimed as she rushed up to her sister and Mix and hugged him.
    “Stop it!”
    “You’re right!” Yoshi stated sarcastically. “He does look cute! He could use another hug!”
    “No!” Mix cried as the three girls hugged him tight. “Cut it out! You all know I don’t like hugs!”
    “Quit being a baby and let us hug you!” Chikara stated.
    “Do you want me to cook for ya or not?!” Mix yelled.

    The three teenage girls finally let go of the poor powerless bird.

    “Okay, do your stuff.” Chikara stated as she crossed her arms and left.
    “We’ll leave you alone now,” Yoshi added as she and Kiori left as well.

    ~*~*~*~

    “Lunchtime!” Mix called.

    The three hungry girls came into the Dining Room and sat on the elegantly designed chairs. Three waiters places the soup on the large and wide table gracefully. The dumbfounded trio looked at their plates of soup.

    “What is it?” Chikara mumbled quietly as she pointed to it.
    “My secret recipe that everyone adores!” Mix answered.
    “Looks weird. Yoshi, you try it first!” Chikara cried.
    “Fine, goes to show how much of a coward you are!” Yoshi scoffed.
    “It’s pointless arguing with you,” Chikara teased back.
    “Why you-?!” Yoshi fuming with one of her arms waving.

    POW!

    “Shame on you two, arguing at a time like this!” Kiori stated as Yoshi and Chikara were on the floor, with swirls of dizziness replacing their eyes.
    “Ow…”

    Mix sweatdropped at the three.

    “Shouldn’t we eat instead?” Mix asked nervously.
    “You’re right, Mix. Chikara and Yoshi don’t appreciate you enough so they’re going to try the soup first.” Kiori declared while closed her eyes.
    “Say what?!” the two girls shouted.
    “Go right ahead, Mix is waiting.” Kiori affirmed coolly.
    “Please???” Mix questioned innocently as his midnight eyes sparkled.
    “Okay,” Yoshi agreed.
    “I give up…” Chikara added.
    “Hooray! I’m sure you’ll both love it!”
    “Sure..” Chikara mumbled.

    Yoshi put her spoon in the soup and raised it to her mouth. Her cousins looked at her with terror as Mix had a hopeful face. They all stared with anxiously as she inserted the soup into her mouth and started to taste it. Yoshi’s eyes moved in different directions as she continued to taste.

    “Well?” Kiori questioned.
    “It’s…” Yoshi started.
    “Yup?” Mia asked.
    “It’s…so good! It’s great!”
    “Huh???”

    The sisters shrugged and tried the soup. Their eyes immediately turned into sparkles. Mix’s eyes enlightened with glee.

    “I’d knew you’d like it!”
    “What’s it made out of?” Yoshi asked with a smile on her face.
    “Bird seed and millet spray!” Mix squealed.

    Chikara and Kiori’s faces turned white.

    “Something wrong?” Mix questioned curiously.
    “Are you out of your mind?!” Kiori exploded.
    “Do you think we’re birds?!” Chikara fumed.
    “But everybody who tried it liked it…” Mix answered quietly while tapping his feathers together.
    “Yuck, I’m out!”
    “I’m going to puke!”

    The two sisters left the room, disgusted.

    Yoshi gave Mix a thumbs up. Her soup looked similar to Kiori and Chikara’s but had a few different ingredients. Mix exchanged a laugh to Yoshi as the waiters served them two smoothies, except one was bigger and the other was smaller. One was strawberry while the other was mango flavored. Mix and Yoshi both lifted their smoothies gleefully.

    “A toast…” Mix started.
    “To our little revenge,” Yoshi finished as they both tapped their smoothies together and drank them.
    “That recipe of mine sure came in handy!” Mix cried happily.

    Yoshi cheerfully nodded.

    “I wonder why Tyra and Malcin haven’t returned yet…” Mix wondered.
    “Me too. I’m starting to worry.”
    “I’m sure they’ll be back sooner or later.”
    “Yeah, good point.”

    ~*~*~*~

    Hours passed. No sign of Tyra or Malcin. Yoshi and Mix asked all over for Tyra for the rest of the day but haven’t received much. Mix and Yoshi were getting more concerned for their two friends.

    “I’m really worried Mix! Where can they be?” Yoshi asked with anticipation.
    “I have no idea. I’ve asked everyone in the palace but no one has seen them.” Mix replied sadly.
    “It’s pretty weird that they haven’t said anything…” Yoshi stated while putting one of her hands under her chin.
    “I wonder why. Do you think Chikara and Kiori know something we don’t know?” Mix questioned his friend.
    “Hmm, now that you mention it…” Yoshi started, “Let’s have a little talk with them.”

    Mix hopped on Yoshi’s shoulder. She started to go around the palace, looking for her two cousins. After fifth teen minutes, she found them at the library.

    “There you are!” Yoshi cried.
    “We’ve been looking for ya!” Mix added.

    Yoshi approached her cousins suspiciously while Mix stared at them, not keeping his eyes off of them. The two girls looked at each other and nodded their heads. Yoshi and Mix raised an eyebrow.

    “I bet you two know where Tyra and Malcin are!” Yoshi shouted while pointing to her cousins.
    “What makes you say that?” Kiori asked.
    “Don’t play stupid with us!” Mix snapped.
    “Huh? What on earth are you talking about?” Chikara questioned.
    “Tell us where Tyra and Malcin are!” Yoshi cried while she tightened her fists.
    “Sorry Yoshi, but that’s classified.” Kiori answered while closing her eyes.“
    “What do you mean ‘classified’?” Mix questioned.
    “They told us not to tell you two!” Chikara added.
    “Why not?” Yoshi shouted.
    “Classified.” the two sisters answered.

    Yoshi growled with fury while Mix approached Yoshi’s ear.

    “Give it up Yoshi, if they say that it’s classified then they must be okay.” Mix whispered.

    Yoshi huffed madly but then sighed.

    “Fine.” Yoshi affirmed.
    “Don’t worry Yoshi, they’re fine.” Kiori reminded.
    “Whatever you say…”

    ~*~*~*~

    “Okay Yoshi! Time for your lesson!” Kiori called.

    Oh great…

    Yoshi entered the room and sat down on a chair informally. Kiori and Chikara shot her a glare. Mix was too busy eating bird seed on a high tray. Yoshi felt confused.

    Now what did I do?

    “You sit nicely!” Chikara shouted.
    “Sorry about that.”
    “And don’t forget about greeting everyone as you enter the room!” Kiori added.
    “This is so stupid!” Yoshi cried as she crossed her arms.
    “Quiet!” Kiori snapped as she smacked her younger cousin with a paper fan.
    “Do I have to do this? This is boring!” Yoshi whined.
    “Quit complaining and go along with it!” Chikara yelled.
    “Hmph!”
    “Uh oh…” Mix silently stated.
    “Can’t we do something fun today?” Yoshi questioned.
    “Not until you learn something!” Kiori replied.
    “Don’t argue with them Yoshi…” Mix quietly affirmed.
    “Sit up straight!” Chikara cried as she tried to sit Yoshi right. “You’ll get scoliosis if you keep that up!”
    “Fine, sorry.” Yoshi mumbled.
    “Now say your greeting.” Kiori told. “Pretend we’re the head ministers of Mushai.”
    “Good afternoon, everyone.” Yoshi stated in a boring tone.
    “Good. Now shake hands with us.” Chikara added.
    “Okay.” Yoshi replied as she shook hands with her cousins.
    “What are the special words you say…?” Kiori asked.
    “Please, thank you, you’re welcome, excuse me.” Yoshi replied.
    “Great Yoshi, now for the main lesson.” Chikara stated.
    “Today’s lesson is how to dance.” Kiori affirmed.
    “To dance?” Yoshi asked in disbelief.
    “Well, with boys.” Chikara added.
    “Wha…?” Yoshi asked in stupidity. “But there aren’t-”
    “We’ll be the boys.” Kiori told.
    “O-kay.” Yoshi stuttered.

    This should be good, Mix stated in his mind.

    “Mix, put up the waltz,” Chikara stated.
    “The waltz?!” Yoshi cried. “I don’t like that dance…”
    “Quiet!” Kiori shouted.
    “I don’t wanna dance!” Yoshi complained.
    “Yoshi…” Chikara fumed.
    “I give up!” Kiori wailed.

    Mix almost burst out laughing but held it in. Yoshi noticed his struggle and smiled.

    “There, there,” Chikara comforted as she patted her sister’s back. She took out her tongue at Yoshi. Yoshi was outraged.

    “Cut it out!!!” Yoshi yelled as she tried to smack her cousin.
    “First you got catch me!” Chikara cried as she put her hand under her eye and made a face.
    “Come back here!” Yoshi shouted as she and Chikara ran out of the library. Mix and Kiori sweatdropped.
    “We’re hopeless,” Mix affirmed as he shrugged while Chikara nodded.

    ~~~

    I really do think that the title of this chapter sucks unless you guys like it! I've been going buits on what to name this chapter!

    XD! I really liked this chapter! I felt so bad for Mix in this one since he can't ever remember dreams! Poor little guy. XD

    But I loved the jokes everyone played! XD

    As for the preview for the next chapter...

    Tyra and Malcin finally return from their mysterious absence but brought along a surprise for Yoshi! Will she accept her so called 'gift'? Find out on the next chapter! See ya there!

    (Note:I might add more to that chapter like I did with this one!)

    Anyway, feel free to tell me what you thought about this chapter! I'll take any criticitisms-I don't think I spelled that right...Oh well! XD
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    That was a funny chapter! XD

    I liked how it mostly revolved around Mix. I could picture them all hugging him while he was cooking. XD

    The cooking scene reminded me when Misty made Ash that pancake in the Indigo League...LOL. Or maybe that wasn't real? I'm not sure...but...I remember something like that, and Ash spitting it out. Maybe just my imagination...XD

    I can't spell critiscism either...that's probably not right. Oh well. XP

    All in all, it was a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! ^^

    EDIT: I liked the name of the chapter! It made sense 'cause of everything that happened in it. So...yeah. Good name for it ^_^;
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    Sweet_May: So glad you loved it! Yay! You're always the first one to read! XD

    Hoshiko: I could totally picture everyone hugging Mix XD Hooray! I reminded you of somehting cool in pokemon! XD

    I adored the part when Yoshi and Mix palyed their trick on Kiori and Chikara! XD Birdseed and millet spray! XD

    Although I'm curious to know if you guys liked the name of this chapter, I don't know, I'm just so picky XD

    The next chapter should be very...surprising, yes, that's the word. ^^ Thankies for the reviews so far!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    “I like owls. They’re nice.” Mix stated randomly.



    Everyone stared at the tiny bird and sweatdropped.

    “What?” Mix asked, not knowing what was going on.
    I like owls too. What's wrong with owls? ^^
    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    “With your mini kitchen set Malcin gave you last year?” Yoshi asked in disbelief.
    “Yeah!” Mix stated happily.
    “You can’t be serious if you’re going to cook with that thing.” Kiori mumbled.
    “I can do it!” Mix declared. “Just give me half a hour to get it right!”

    The three girls stared at Mix, then slowly stared ate ach other carefully. They all nodded their heads up and down with disbelief. Mix put up a cheerful grin on his face.

    “All right! Now let Mix the Master stir things up!” Mix affirmed as he put on a tiny white chef hat.
    What, no "BAM!" or "Let's kick it up a notch!"? Too bad...Mix the Emril would've been hilarious. A mini-kitchen set? Funny...
    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    “Too…much…hugging!”
    “I want to hug him too!” Chikara exclaimed as she rushed up to her sister and Mix and hugged him.
    “Stop it!”
    “You’re right!” Yoshi stated sarcastically. “He does look cute! He could use another hug!”
    “No!” Mix cried as the three girls hugged him tight. “Cut it out! You all know I don’t like hugs!”
    “Quit being a baby and let us hug you!” Chikara stated.
    Hug-topia! ^^
    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    Yoshi put her fork in the soup and raised it to her mouth. Her cousins looked at her with terror as Mix had a hopeful face. They all stared with anxiously as she inserted the soup into her mouth and started to chew it. Yoshi’s eyes moved in different directions as she continued to chew.

    “Well?” Kiori questioned.
    “It’s…” Yoshi started.
    “Yup?” Mia asked.
    “It’s…so good! It’s great!”
    “Huh???”

    The sisters shrugged and tried the soup. Their eyes immediately turned into sparkles. Mix’s eyes enlightened with glee.

    “I’d knew you’d like it!”
    “What’s it made out of?” Yoshi asked with a smile on her face.
    “Bird seed and millet spray!” Mix squealed.

    Chikara and Kiori’s faces turned white.

    “Something wrong?” Mix questioned curiously.
    “Are you out of your mind?!” Kiori exploded.
    “Do you think we’re birds?!” Chikara fumed.
    “But everybody who tried it liked it…” Mix answered quietly while tapping his feathers together.
    “Yuck, I’m out!”
    “I’m going to puke!”

    The two sisters left the room, disgusted.

    Yoshi gave Mix a thumbs up. Her soup looked similar to Kiori and Chikara’s but had a few different ingredients. Mix exchanged a laugh to Yoshi as the waiters served them two smoothies, except one was bigger and the other was smaller. One was strawberry while the other was mango flavored. Mix and Yoshi both lifted their smoothies gleefully.

    “A toast…” Mix started.
    “To our little revenge,” Yoshi finished as they both tapped their smoothies together and drank them.
    “That recipe of mine sure came in handy!” Mix cried happily.

    Yoshi cheerfully nodded.
    She ate her soup with a fork? Revenge is good! ^^
    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    Yoshi approached her cousins suspiciously while Mix stared at them, not keeping his eyes off of them. The two girls looked at each other and nodded their heads. Yoshi and Mix raised an eyebrow.

    “I bet you two know where Tyra and Malcin are!” Yoshi shouted while pointing to her cousins.
    “What makes you say that?” Kiori asked.
    “Don’t play stupid with us!” Mix snapped.
    “Huh? What on earth are you talking about?” Chikara questioned.
    “Tell us where Tyra and Malcin are!” Yoshi cried while she tightened her fists.
    “Sorry Yoshi, but that’s classified.” Kiori answered while closing her eyes.“
    “What do you mean ‘classified’?” Mix questioned.
    “They told us not to tell you two!” Chikara added.
    “Why not?” Yoshi shouted.
    “Classified.” the two sisters answered.
    Sounds like Percy..."classified information, until the Ministry feels it is the right time to reveal it"...or something like that.
    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    I'll take any criticitisms-I don't think I spelled that right...Oh well! XD
    It was close: criticisms. Also, I have a strong intuition as to what the gift in the upcoming chapter is. But I shall not speak.

    I liked the chapter, and wait for more! Later!

    PS: The title is fine!
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    ^*feels dumb* OMG! I can't believe I made Yoshi eat with a fork! XD I have to correct that, thankies for pointing that out! ^^

    They gave Mix a mini kitchen set since he liked food and wanted to cook but since he's a bird, that kind of makes things difficult XD So Malcin gave him a mini cook set for his size! ^^

    I tried PMing you but yours wouldn't accept it before since you had to delete some PMs so don't think I haven't PMed you. ^^

    Thankies for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MistyMix89
    ^*feels dumb* OMG! I can't believe I made Yoshi eat with a fork! XD I have to correct that, thankies for pointing that out! ^^

    They gave Mix a mini kitchen set since he liked food and wanted to cook but since he's a bird, that kind of makes things difficult XD So Malcin gave him a mini cook set for his size! ^^

    I tried PMing you but yours wouldn't accept it before since you had to delete some PMs so don't think I haven't PMed you. ^^

    Thankies for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter!
    I know you didn't forget me; I was sent an e-mail saying my PM inbox thing was full. I took out some old stuff, and I figured out after reading around what you must have been trying to tell me.

    A bird cooking meals...mmm...mango is good...
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