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    Taking Chances (A Pokeshipping/Contestshipping One-shot)
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    “Ash!” A female voice behind the young, black-haired boy cried. He turned to see Misty, the orange-haired gym leader in Cerulean. What was she doing here in Hoenn, then?

    “Hi! How are you?” Ash cried, hugging his friend, not seeing her blush.

    “I’m okay, I asked your mom where you were, and she said Hoenn, so here I am!” Misty said, smiling, “Who’s this?” She pointed at May.

    “May Maple, from Littleroot Town.” May replied, extending her hand. Misty shook it. Misty was immediately jealous of this brown-haired, blue-eyed girl. Why, she didn’t know, but she was. Another boy hung at the back of the group, hands in the pockets of his turquoise pants, a smirk on his face, and laughter in his green eyes. He unconsciously took a hand out of his pocket and flicked back his green hair.

    “I’m Drew.” He stated, falling silent once more. Misty noticed that his eyes were on May, following her every movement. Misty walked by Ash, seeing that every minute or so he’d look at her out of the corner of his eye.

    Night fell quickly, the noise around them rose to a crescendo, and the stars gleamed above them. The moon was playing hide-and-go-seek behind a cloud. They set up camp on the near-by beach of Lilycove. Most of the group fell asleep immediately, but two shadows sat up, one moving closer to the water, the other sitting still.

    “Come join me, Drew.” May whispered, poking her toes in the water. She heard footsteps behind her as Drew came over and sat beside her. He silently took her hand, staring over the water, seeing the moon reflect off the water. May saw the stars reflecting in Drew’s eyes. It was a pretty sight to see.

    Unconsciously, Drew moved his hand, draping his arm around May’s shoulders.

    “May, don’t we all have to take chances sometimes?” He asked suddenly.

    “Yeah, and I think I’m ready to take my chance.” May whispered, leaning over and kissing Drew. He wrapped his arms around her in a warm embrace, kissing her like there was no tomorrow.

    Behind the couple, Ash and Misty were watching with amusement.

    “What about you, Ash? When are you going to take a chanc-” Misty started to ask, but Ash’s lips on her own stopped her.

    “I’ve taken my chance, Mist. Seems like everyone’s taking chances tonight.” Ash murmured. They didn’t see Brock behind them, holding the camera. Brock had snapped a picture of May and Drew kissing, then a picture of Ash and Misty kissing. Too bad he didn’t have a girl. He’d have to make do with kissing his pillow.

    “Ah, young love. So cute!” Brock said loudly. When everyone looked at him, he held up the camera.

    “I can see the headlines now. Coordinating rivals May and Drew see past their differences! and Gym leader and Pokemon Champion fall in love!” Brock continued, “Now to just take it to the newspa-” The camera was snatched from his hand. Drew stomped on it.

    “No one can know about that, Brock. You can be so cruel sometimes.” Ash snarled, advancing on his buddy.

    See what all can happen, just by taking chances?
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    Whoa, a short one-shot fic... It was 3 pages on my word processor- whoa. Well, R&R please!

    ~Kitteh

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    Yay! Im the first to review and rate! *clapping happily* Mawhahahahahaha! *laughing evily* Anywho... *finally back to reality*

    Very cute and funny! Yet its short but still good! And I love the ending sentence (wateve you want to call it) "See what all can happen, just by taking chances?"

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    Quote Originally Posted by kizara
    Yay! Im the first to review and rate! *clapping happily* Mawhahahahahaha! *laughing evily* Anywho... *finally back to reality*

    Very cute and funny! Yet its short but still good! And I love the ending sentence (wateve you want to call it) "See what all can happen, just by taking chances?"
    Thanks for reviewing, my day is better already!! XD I like the ending sentence too... it was kinda random... cuz it comes right after Ash about to murder Brock... I left out the Ash murdering Brock part because it would have been too much violence for my brain to handle. LOL.

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    Ash murdering Brock? Now tats the day I can't wait to see!^^LoL

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    Quote Originally Posted by kizara
    Ash murdering Brock? Now tats the day I can't wait to see!^^LoL
    Maybe I'll make a sequel where that happens, but the camera wasn't destroyed and the pictures make it to the newspaper. Yeah, I'll do that. XD

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    The camera wasn't detroyed! The pics did make it to the newpaper! *Gasp* And Brock is gona get his butt kicked by Ash! Stay tuned for the sequel "When Ash Murders Brock!" a poke and contest shipping fic Rated: we do not kno yet Coming soon!

    Oooooh very dramatic! Can't wait for the sequel! Tee Hee^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by kizara
    The camera wasn't detroyed! The pics did make it to the newpaper! *Gasp* And Brock is gona get his butt kicked by Ash! Stay tuned for the sequel "When Ash Murders Brock!" a poke and contest shipping fic Rated: we do not kno yet Coming soon!

    Oooooh very dramatic! Can't wait for the sequel! Tee Hee^^
    I'll post it sometime... soon. Probably now. o.O. Peace out.

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    Drew sounds...quiet xD

    Anyway....HEY! You stole my idea of Brock taking picture of them! xD That was copyrighted! xD Okay, just kidding.

    Nice One-shot. Though it only looked half a page to me...0_o....

    I like this! This consists of Pokeshipping and Contestshipping!

    EDIT:Anyway...0_o...I just found out that this story is the same title as Jo-Jo's one xD
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    Quote Originally Posted by May_Beautifly
    Drew sounds...quiet xD

    Anyway....HEY! You stole my idea of Brock taking picture of them! xD That was copyrighted! xD Okay, just kidding.

    Nice One-shot. Though it only looked half a page to me...0_o....

    I like this! This consists of Pokeshipping and Contestshipping!

    EDIT:Anyway...0_o...I just found out that this story is the same title as Jo-Jo's one xD
    I didn't notice that... lol. It was like, three pages on my word processor.... o.O... well, Kitteh's going to go update her fics. Peace out!

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    Very cute^_________^ I love the headlines Brock came up with^^ You're a good writer keep it up
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mayuko
    Very cute^_________^ I love the headlines Brock came up with^^ You're a good writer keep it up
    Thank you for reviewing.

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