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    A/N: This is my first time posting my fan fiction so please go easy on me. I have tried to stay faithful to the characters personality as I can. Please R+R! love Sammy (CuteDrew667)


    May is starting her journey to Kanto alone and finds herself aboard a beautiful ferry that would take her to Vermillion City. She runs into a familiar green-haired person on board and ends up arguing with him. Later at the Pokemon Centre she gets a little shock from the person she least expected to be there for her...

    Rated PG-13 for the first few chapters, rated R/NC-17 in later Parts.

    Part 1 - Starting the Journey


    ‘Well, I guess this is goodbye,’ said May sadly, as she looked at Ash and Brock.
    ‘Yeah, see you May,’ said Ash hugging her.
    ‘Bye, you guys,’ she said, hugging Brock as well.
    As May departed with her brother Max, she felt her eyes brimming with tears. She could not believe that she was beginning her travelling alone in a few days. She unlocked the front door and (after being engulfed in hugs by her mom and dad) hurried up to her room, before her tears threatened to spill down her face. Ash and Brock were her best friends, and now they were going back to Kanto and would probably continue to travel with Misty Waterflower.
    May sighed and lay back on her bed and felt herself drift off to sleep.

    Two days later May left her house again to travel alone to Kanto.
    ‘Why didn’t you just stay with Ash and Brock and travel to Kanto with them?’ Max had asked.
    ‘Because I need to do different things, plus they have Misty and I am sure I will find some friends too,’ she said, though in her mind she was doubtful.
    ‘Go Skitty,’ shouted May, and released Skitty from its Pokéball.
    Skitty jumped up onto Mays shoulder and they continued down the valley. It took her two hours to reach the nearest Port and by then it was almost evening. She flashed her Coordinator pass at the guard and boarded on the ferry to Kanto.
    She collapsed onto the nearest bench and put her head in her hands. She was exhausted, she had been having bad sleep since two weeks ago, when it dawned her that she would be alone.
    ‘Miss, I am sorry, but this café is closed now, would you care to go to your room.’
    May nodded and walked slowly towards her cabin, looking at the floor. She bumped sharply into someone, and fell over in surprise.
    ‘Hey watch it,’ she cried, strapping her waist-bag back on.
    ‘You were the one that…May?’ the person said.
    She looked up. Stood in front of her was a tall, young man of about seventeen years with light emerald coloured hair and green eyes.
    ‘Drew?!’ May exclaimed.
    ‘So, why would a little rookie like you be wanting to go to Kanto?’ Drew asked smirking, after helping May to her feet.
    ‘For God’s sake Drew, after all this you still have to believe that you are better than me. I got all five contest ribbons in both Jhoto and Hoenn and were in both of those regions grand festivals. I have proven myself a good co-ordinator, so why don’t you just leave it,’ May exploded.
    ‘Well, May that is quite a temper you have. Though I think you should remember that though you have made it this far, every time we have battled, I have beaten you,’ said Drew smirking, flicking his hair to the side.
    ‘Oh, you are just a complete jerk Drew,’ shouted May, ‘now if you will excuse me, I am going to my room and I hope to barely see you when I reach Kanto.’
    May pushed passed him and ran into her room with Skitty clinging onto her shoulder. She threw all her Pokéballs into the middle of the room and Combusken, Beautifly, Bulbasaur, Squirtle and Eevee appeared before her (she had passed Munchlax onto Max). Beautifly flew over and sat on her head like it did whenever May was sad.
    ‘Beauti’, Beautifly,’ it said in an attempt to comfort her.
    ‘Thanks Beautifly,’ she said smiling up at it.
    Skitty jumped from her shoulder and curled up on her lap. Her other Pokémon jumped up on the bed and made noises as though to try and give her strength.
    ‘You know what guys, you’re right. Drew isn’t going to make me stay in my room. Beautifly come with me up to deck?’ she asked, and Beautifly nodded and closed its eyes in gratitude, ‘yes, the rest of you can have a nice rest.’
    She returned them to their Pokéballs and walked triumphantly from the room with Beautifly flying next to her. She reached the deck and gasped as she looked out to sea. The sun was starting to set and the glorious colours reflected on the water to make it even more beautiful.
    ‘Oh my God, I am, like, your biggest fan, could I have your autograph please?’ May heard a high pitched squeal come from behind her.
    She turned around to see Drew sat on a bench alone reading a Kanto Contest Guide, and a group of girls running towards him. May rolled her eyes, some things never change. She watched as Drew lazily signed a photograph of himself for a very shaky fan. Anger boiled inside her. He could at least be nice to his fans. She looked at Drew and thought of his attitude and couldn’t understand why these girls were so infatuated with him. Sure, he was known as a great co-ordinator and stuff like that, but what did all these girls see in his actual personality.
    ‘Drew, I have been wanting to meet you for so long, you have no idea. I am honoured, you are an amazing person,’ said a pretty, red-haired girl nervously as Drew scribbled his signature on a book she had given him.
    ‘Well now you have,’ said Drew, not smiling or even looking at the girl.
    May’s anger surged to braking point. She marched over to Drew, pushing past the girls.
    ‘Hey, we were here first, you can get his autograph after us,’ said a tall girl who was holding a photo of Drew’s Roselia.
    May ignored her.
    ‘Drew, you are such a complete jerk,’ May yelled.
    ‘Well, excuse me for sitting here May,’ Drew said sarcastically.
    ‘Honestly, you are so selfish, these girls are your fans and you can’t even be bothered to be nice to them. Well, trust me Drew if they really knew you I doubt they be obsessed with you then,’ May said fiercely.
    ‘Just because you are bitter that I have beaten you and your little friends more times than I can count, there is no need to try and turn these people against me.’
    ‘Yeah Drew, she is probably just jealous because loads of girls like you. How do you know a loser like her?’ said the girl holding the Roselia picture.
    ‘Oh well you know what, I am bloody sorry for defending you girls,’ snapped May, walking back to the deck rail, where Beautifly was waiting for her.
    She leant on the rail and listened to the girls trying to engage Drew in conversation. She felt a shadow form next to her, and saw one of the fans had come over to her.
    ‘I am sorry about what my sister said,’ muttered a pretty girl with light purple hair that looked about thirteen.
    ‘Your sister is the girl with the Roselia picture right?’ May asked realising to resemblance between them.
    ‘Yeah, that’s Suzie, I’m Lillietta,’ said the girl nicely.
    ‘Hi, I’m May.’
    They shook hands and both looked over at Drew.
    ‘So, you actually know him,’ said Lillietta incredulously.
    ‘Yes, unfortunately. Trust me, he isn’t all he seems.’
    ‘I absolutely love him, though I thought I ought to apologise for my sister’s behaviour. I have got his autograph now and I have actually spoken to him,’ she whispered, her eyes almost filling with tears.
    ‘Well, I have known him for years and I personally think he is a complete jerk, but it is sweet that you like him so much, and thank you for coming over here. Are you a trainer?’ asked May.
    ‘Well, I have one Pokémon, a Torchic,’ she said proudly.
    ‘Wow, awesome, I have Beautifly of course, and Skitty, Combusken, Squirtle, Eevee and Bulbasaur. I am going to be entering the Kanto Grand Festival.’
    ‘Oh my God, that means you will be with Drew, he is entering too of course,’ squealed Lillietta.
    ‘I guess, though I am not as excited as you. Are you going to try and enter?’
    ‘Well, I dream of becoming a good co-ordinator, but I have only just started but I want to try and build up a good team of Pokémon and then hopefully enter the next Grand festival. I can’t wait to see you at the festival, I always watch it on TV,’ said the girl, gazing at May in awe.
    ‘Aw, well thank you,’ said May, feeling very flattered.
    ‘Do you think you will win?’ asked Lillietta.
    ‘Oh that is very doubtful, she has never won a Festival.’
    Drew had stood up and the cluster of girls were huddled near him. He flicked his hair and smirked at May.
    ‘Isn’t that true May?’ said Drew, and a couple of the girls looked shocked that he knew May’s name.
    ‘No I have never won a grand festival, but if you remember I almost beat you in the Hoenn Grand Festival,’ said May angrily.
    ‘Well “almost” obviously wasn’t good enough, because I beat you in the end. Oh and maybe we should not relive the contest in which you broke down in tears,’ sneered Drew, flicking his hair again.
    ‘Yes, and I can remember after I defended you to Ash and Brock, you walked out and left me in tears after everything I had done for you. That shows what a complete selfish git you are,’ shrieked May, her voice cracked and she was scared she may cry.
    ‘Oh come on, was there really any need to break down just because I beat you-’
    ‘No wonder Ash hated you, he watched on TV as I cried and you left me there. You were so malicious, it wasn’t what you did, it was the way you did it. You have never been nice to me, even after everything I have done to help you, you couldn’t even find it within you to comfort me.’
    ‘Now you can’t say I have never done anything nice,’ he said, closing his eyes, ‘what about after the Yhuruka convention, on the beach, remember that?’
    May blushed and a couple of the girls looked as though they were boiling with rage.
    ‘Oh, Drew would you like me to tell these lot the thing that you did during at the Yuzuriha Convention?’ said May and it was his turn to blush.
    The fans were all looking from one to the other.
    ‘Hey, you two, were you actually a couple?’ asked Suzie, looking furious.
    ‘NO!’ said both May and Drew at the same time.
    ‘So then what happened at the Yuzuriha convention, it doesn’t say anything on your website about it Drew,’ said Lillietta, speaking for the first time since he had come over.
    Drew frowned and grabbed May’s arm and pulled her closer to him.
    ‘I told you that it wasn’t from me,’ Drew hissed at her.
    ‘Oh really, funny how there was a Roselia’s rose with it,’ May hissed back.
    May saw Lillietta over Drew’s shoulder looking as if she was going to cry and suddenly realised how close her and Drew were. She pushed him away and frowned.
    ‘I’m going back to my room, Lillietta do you want to come?’ May asked, repositioning her waist bag.
    ‘No,’ said Lillietta fatly, and May realised that she was first and foremost Drew’s fan.
    ‘Fine, come on Beautifly,’ said May, beckoning Beautifly to follow her.
    ‘May wait,’ said Drew.
    She turned and looked at him. He put his hand into his jacket and his fans edged closer, trying to see what he was getting. He pulled out a red rose and threw it to her like he had on many other occasions. She frowned and looked down at the beautiful, deep-red flower.
    ‘Like I said before, it is Beautifly not you, so don’t get excited,’ said Drew nastily and his fans looked a little less infuriated as May placed the flower into her waist bag.
    May clenched her fists in fury and marched away, hearing the snide remarks and giggles from the girl fans. She slowed down when she got back to the corridor leading to her room. She pulled the rose out of her bag and threw it onto the floor.
    ‘So do you have a Roselia?’ asked a boy sitting at a bench in the corridor near May, he had his cap pulled down so May could not see his face.
    ‘No, someone gave it to me,’ answered May bitterly.
    ‘So, I am guessing he isn’t your favourite guy,’ said the guy with a small laugh.
    ‘Anything but, Drew is the most arrogant jerk I know,’ said May angrily, ‘just because he has won loads of contests with his bloody Roselia doesn’t mean he has the right to be horrible to me.’
    The boy lifted his cap up to look at May.
    ‘Are you saying that the famous co-ordinator Drew, gave you that flower?’ he said slowly, raising his blue eyebrows that matched his dark hair.
    ‘Yes, but trust me I am not one of his screaming fans. In fact I wouldn’t mind if I never saw him again. He has made my life a misery whenever I have ever been around him, which unfortunately is quite often, because he happens to be at almost every contest I go to. He may have fans, but it is no surprise to me that he has no real friends, no one would ever be able to get close to him, because of how horrible and cocky he is. I have noticed that no one is ever supporting him at Contests apart from his little girl fans,’ May ranted.
    ‘Erm-’ began the guy but May cut across him.
    ‘I almost wish I had never stopped Ash from having a go at him that time at the Hoenn contest. In fact, without me, Drew wouldn’t be alive, I saved his life when we fell into a river on Mirage Island. I told him that it was Wynaut that had saved him, but all they did was pull us out of the river. I didn’t have the strength to lift us both out of the water and I could of easily left him but I kept him above water as best I could while he was unconscious. Even after that, when we were on the boat going away he had to make a snide remark to me. Well, I hope I never see him again, I-’
    ‘What I was trying to say was…’ said the guy pointing behind May.
    May turned to see Drew standing with an expression she had never seen on him before. He knelt and picked up the rose he had given to her and tossed it into a bin that was near him. He flicked his hair and walked away and May felt a rising guilt in her chest.
    ‘I guess you really do know him then, huh?’ said the guy, pulling his cap back down.
    ‘Oh for God’s sake, can this day get any worse!?’ screeched May running the rest of the way to her room, ‘return Beautifly.’

    Eventually the ferry arrived in Kanto (Vermillion City) and May could barely wait to get out into the real air. Seeing as this was her first time in Kanto, she was more excited than most of the other co-ordinators getting off the ferry. She grinned at Beautifly, who (as usual) was the Pokémon accompanying her gracefully. May proceeded towards the Pokémon Centre happily, forgetting completely about the events on the ferry. She really wanted to explore but she needed a place to stay and the Pokémon centre was the nearest place. She beamed as she approached yet another Nurse Joy.
    ‘Hello Joy, could I have a room for the night please,’ asked May smiling.
    ‘Oh I am very sorry dear, the last room was just taken a couple of minutes ago. All the rooms are doubles and most people are on their own, so if you find anyone you know then you could always share.’
    May sighed, her happiness vanishing. She didn’t know anyone in Kanto. She turned and banged into someone, causing her to fall back with the impact.
    ‘Hey, watch where your going?’ said May angrily, looking up.
    It was Drew. Typical! She waited for him to insult her, but he just turned and walked away. May suddenly remembered what had happened on the ferry. What she had said about him. She closed her eyes in frustration and then blurted out his name.
    ‘Drew!’
    ‘What?’ he said turning slowly.
    ‘Listen, I am sorry about everything I said on the ferry. I didn’t mean for it to upset you,’ May said scrambling to her feet.
    ‘It didn’t hurt me, it just ****** me off,’ Drew snapped.
    May gasped, she has never heard Drew swear before. Her eyes started to quiver with emotion.
    ‘Well, I am sorry, okay? I know we aren’t friends, but I don’t want us to be real enemies,’ May said quietly, walking towards him hesitantly.
    ‘Whatever. Don’t go soppy on me,’ Drew said, folding his arms.
    ‘Okay,’ said May quietly.
    ‘What are you doing now?’ asked Drew sighing in a bored way.
    ‘Well, all the rooms have been taken so I am wondering is Wakana or someone else is here and I have missed them, because the only way I can stay is if I am with someone else who already has a room,’ May said closing her eyes and bowing her head slightly.
    Drew didn’t say anything. She looked up and he was staring at her as though thinking hard.
    ‘Well, you know, you could always stay with me,’ muttered Drew off-handily.
    ‘Really?’ exclaimed May, completely taken aback.
    ‘Yeah, just this once though. I am just on my own, and if you really need somewhere to say then it is no real sacrifice for me,’ said Drew flicking his hair and looking out of the Pokémon Centre doors.
    ‘Oh thank you Drew,’ said May, clasping her hands together and beaming.
    ‘No problem, I have the room card though, but I am going up there now anyway, so I can let you in whenever you come back,’ said Drew absently.
    ‘Well, I will come up now too then,’ said May smiling.
    ‘Alright then,’ Drew said walking past her so May had to jog up to keep up with him.
    They got to the room and Drew slid the card through the slot and it opened. May followed him in uneasily. It suddenly dawned on her that she would be sharing a room with Drew. Not only a guy, but a person who is constantly gossiped about and photographed. If she was seen sharing a room with him, the story would spread so fast, it would reach her mom in Pettleburg City before you can say Just Friends.
    Her mother had already made the assumption that her and Drew were more than friends, and she didn’t really want that to be brought up again.
    ‘Are you just going to stand in the doorway all day, or actually come in?’ Drew’s voice snapped May back to reality.
    ‘You know Drew, maybe it wouldn’t be very convenient if I stayed with you,’ May mumbled, looking at the floor.
    ‘What’s the real reason?’
    May looked up at him, but he had his back to her and was taking off his jacket to hang up. May’s eyes widened and she quickly shut the door and got into the room hastily.
    ‘Drew, you are being photographed all the time. The last thing we need is for someone to see you taking your jacket off with me in the room,’ May said, then thought to her that it sounded pretty stupid.
    ‘Taking my jacket off?’ repeated Drew, and then it registered with him what she meant and he closed his eyes in frustration.
    ‘Sorry, but you know what it is like…’
    ‘Well, are you going to stay here or not?’ asked Drew impatiently.
    ‘I- er, yes thank you,’ said May quietly.
    ‘Fine, I am going for a swim,’ he paused to think for a second, ‘here you go,’ he passed her the Room Card, ‘just make sure you stay nearby in case I need to get back in.’
    ‘Ok, thank you Drew,’ said May.
    He shrugged and grabbed his bag and walked out of the room, tossing his light-purple jacket on the desk as he went. May sat slowly on one of the single beds and smiled. It was the first real smile that had appeared on her pretty face in quite a few weeks.

    A/N Hey, I hope you liked it. I am writing Part 2 now. Please let me know what you think. xx




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    That is absolutly brilliant. Gret techneque, storyline and you get the feeling you're with the characters. You can feel the emotions that they're feeling among other things. Keep up the good work!

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    SUPER KAWAII!!! Aww! I liked Shuu's reaction to Haruka insulting him, though. xD And they staying in the same room? Wow, that's...

    AMAZING! XD I mean, anything COULD happen to THEM! Maybe sleeping with each other? xD Tons of other people used that, so it's...Cliche. Oh, whatever! It satisfies me! xD

    I loved this story! Please put me on the PM List if you have one! Thanks!

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    This is sooooo kawaii!!! -squeals- Can I please be on the PM List? Can't wait to see where this fic goes.

    I turned to see Drew standing with an expression I had never seen on him before. He knelt and picked up the rose he had given to me and tossed it into a bin that was near him. He flicked his hair and walked away and May felt a rising guilt in her chest.
    You went from third person POV to first person there.

    ‘It didn’t hurt me, it just ****** me off,’ Drew snapped.
    Drew is such a liar. XD

    WEllz, over and out,

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    I am really sorry about the switch in PoV then. I never noticed. I am actually more used to write from first person. Very sorry about that.


    thank you guys so much the comments.

    p.s how do I get a PM list lol (new to serebii)

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    Quote Originally Posted by CuteDrew667
    I am really sorry about the switch in PoV then. I never noticed. I am actually more used to write from first person. Very sorry about that.


    thank you guys so much the comments.

    p.s how do I get a PM list lol (new to serebii)
    You just make a list like this:

    (Example)
    PM List:
    -name 1-
    -name 2-
    -name 3-

    And you just add people's names when they say they want to be on the PM list.

    Over and out,

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    Thanks larxanne


    er, sorry if I sound thick Kitteh, but where do I post these names?

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    Quote Originally Posted by CuteDrew667
    er, sorry if I sound thick Kitteh, but where do I post these names?
    I'll help answer! (even though I'm not Kitteh...)
    Anyways, you just edit the first post by clicking the little edit button in the very bottom right hand corner under your sig. Then you type a pm list like the one Kitteh suggested. I hope I helped! ~*^_^*~

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    Can we please keep the PM list talk to PMs if we can't do that AND review the fic? Thank you.
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    Can someone tell me how to post Spoilers. I write them after you lick on the icon but then they dont show up on the message...



    Bit of other shipping in this one as well, but I won't say what ones hehe
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    Okay, now you get a formal warning - DON'T double post and if you have a question about forum tools, PM me or a friend who knows how to use them. This thread for your fic and discussion about it, nothing more offtopic.
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    Default Thanks so much

    Heya, thank you so much guys. Of course I will put you on the Pm list and yes I will let you knw. I should have the next chapter up either tomorrow evening or tuesday afternoon.
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    Hot Chocolate Part 2

    May finds herself feeling more happy than she has been for weeks....though it doesn't last long. After going to accompany Drew in the pool, she finds herself seeing something that hurts her more than she realises. PG-13
    Angst, language and mild distress.



    May was lost in thought as she lay back on the snow-white sheet of her single bed. It was as thought Drew had a strange alter-ego on him. One minute he was this horrible, cocky guy who hurt her so much, and the next she felt as though he was the only person she could turn to.
    May rummaged through her bag (bigger than it looks you know) and suddenly came across a red bikini that was next to her pyjamas. She thought for a second and then went into the bathroom and changed into it. If she was actually with Drew, then it wouldn’t matter that she had the Room Card.
    She wrapped one of the customary Pokémon towels around herself and slipped her trainers on her bare feet to walk to the pool. She got to the locker and changing rooms and saw that Drew was leaning against the wall of the pool, water reaching to his chest. May smiled and felt something weird inside her that she couldn’t explain.
    She shook those feelings away and walked out to the pool. Drew hadn’t seen her yet and May turned partially away from him to put her towel, bandanna and trainers on one of the “indoor sun beds”.
    ‘Here you are Drew, I hope I got the one you wanted,’ a female voice said from behind May.
    May spun back around to see a pretty, purple-haired girl crouching down by the pool with a glass of what looked like a cocktail. She was wearing a pair of white trousers and a cream vest that showed her stomach. Her hair was pulled back into two long pigtails and she looked about sixteen. She was obviously one of his crazed fans, but something seemed wrong. Drew usually told his fans to get lost or acted very bored by them, he wasn’t doing either. He looked up at her and smiled, taking the drink and then saying something to her that May could not hear.
    May didn’t know what it was, but an unexplainable feeling shot through her and she watched the girl lower her face to Drew’s to kiss him. May couldn’t stand it anymore, she grabbed her stuff and ran back to her room, all the happiness she had been feeling minutes before, vanished.

    Drew’s PoV

    Kacey came back over with the drink I had asked her for. She seemed a very nice person, and someone who knew a lot more than I did about the Kanto region. I took the glass from her and smiled.
    ‘Thanks Kacey, that was really nice of you. Who knew I would meet another coordinator like you on my first day in Kanto,’ I said warmly.
    ‘Oh that’s so sweet of you Drew,’ said Kacey, smiling and tossing some of her purple side-fringe out of her face.
    I didn’t realise what she was doing as she tilted her head close to mine and put her hand on the side of my face. Just as I was about to pull away she kissed me deeply. I was shocked so I just went along with it until she pulled away.
    ‘Wow, you are a good kisser,’ said Kacey flirtatiously.
    ‘Erm, yeah I guess. I have to go to my room, my friend will be waiting for me,’ I said hastily, taking a long gulp of the drink she had given me and putting it on the side.
    ‘I am sure he won’t mind,’ she said pouting.
    ‘No, I have to go,’ said Drew, pausing and then said, ‘and she is a girl.’
    ‘What?!’ she cried dramatically, standing up as I hoisted myself onto the side of the pool, ‘you have just kissed me and you have a girlfriend?’
    ‘You kissed me Kacey, I didn’t even realise what you were doing. Plus she isn’t my girlfriend,’ I said wrapping my towel around my waist.
    ‘Oh right,’ said Kacey smiling and ignoring my you-kissed-me comment, ‘so, do you want to travel to the first contest with me?’
    ‘I don’t know, I have to go Kacey. Ask me tomorrow,’ I said, making a mental note to get out of the Pokémon Centre as early as possible the next day.
    Kacey walked over and kissed me on the cheek longingly and smiled.
    ‘See you tomorrow then. Oh, and tell your little bandanna friend that I said “hi”,’ she said, smirking and turning away from me.
    ‘When have you seen May?’ I asked a little taken aback.
    ‘Ah, let’s just say that I won’t be her favourite person, from the reaction she gave to us a minute ago,’ she said with a little laugh.
    She stooped down and picked up the half empty glass I had put there and stood back up.
    ‘Like I said, see you tomorrow Drew,’ she said blowing me a kiss and walking away.
    ‘Forget this, I am going for a walk,’ I mutter to myself and walk into the changing rooms to put my normal clothes on.

    Back to Normal PoV

    May climbed into one of the beds after she had changed into her pyjamas and was almost asleep when there was a knock on the door. Damn, she had forgotten Drew had to get in as well. May kicked the quilt off herself and walked over to the door and yanked it open irritably.
    ‘Thanks for disturbing me Drew,’ said May and then realised it wasn’t Drew at all, it was the purple-haired girl she had seen about to kiss him.
    ‘Oh I am so sorry about that,’ she said in a sickly-sweet way.
    ‘Is there a reason why you are here?’ said May a little rudely.
    ‘Well, I was just going to have a little talk to you,’ said the girl, barging into the room.
    ‘Hey, who said you could come in?!’ shouted May, watching as the girl walked over and sat on Drew’s bed.
    ‘Let’s just get to the point. I’m Kacey,’ she said, her eyes lingering on Drew’s jacket, that was still discarded on the desk from earlier.
    May closed the door and stood with her hands on her hips. The girl was now flicking through Drew’s Kanto Contest Guide that he had left on the bed. Though she was usually a happy, shy person, who would never start an argument, May couldn’t help herself.
    ‘Excuse me, I just asked you a question,’ she said loudly, walking over and snatching Drew’s book away from her.
    ‘Ooh, touchy are we…May?’
    Kacey smirked and looked at May, waiting for her reaction.
    ‘How do you know who I am,’ asked May, not realising she was hugging Drew’s book to her.
    ‘Oh, well let’s just say, after you ran off baby, Drew let slip that there was another girl staying in his room. You, May. Of course I wanted to let you know where you stand, as in, I am his girlfriend, and you don’t stand a chance,’ said the girl, still smirking.
    ‘I don’t even like Drew, the only reason I am here is because I needed a place to stay and he is the only one I know here in Kanto. Now get out of my room,’ shouted May, opening the door again.
    Kacey laughed, but rose from the bed nonetheless.
    ‘Well, from your reaction when you saw me kiss him, I totally believe that you don’t like him,’ she said, and then when she got close to May she whispered, ‘you wouldn’t believe what a good kisser he is.’
    Before May could say another word, Kacey had swept out of the room and down the hall. May just stood there…dumbfounded. That COW! She slammed the door shut and threw Drew’s book down onto his bed.
    ‘I don’t give a hell what that girl thinks,’ spat May, and climbed back into bed.
    ‘May, open the door.’
    Someone knocked on the door and May recognised Drew’s voice and reluctantly left her bed (again) and went to answer the door. Drew was soaked. He was back in his normal clothes, carrying the towel and his other things under his arm. His emerald hair was dripping and falling into his eyes.
    ‘Drew what happened to you?’ cried May, allowing him into the room.
    ‘Oh, I went for a walk and it started to rain…heavily,’ he muttered pulling his T-shirt over his head.
    ‘It is a good job I have shut the door,’ snapped May at his bare back.
    ‘Whatever,’ grumbled Drew, pulling on another black shirt that looked too big for him, like a pyjama top.
    ‘I’m going to sleep. Don’t make any noise,’ hissed May, throwing herself back into bed.
    ‘May, there is something I need to ask you first,’ said Drew.
    May turned over in bed to look at him, but he still had his back to her.
    ‘What?’
    ‘Well, I am going to be leaving for the contest in Cerulean tomorrow, because of the amount of travelling and things. Would you come with me?’ said Drew, turning around to look at her surprised face.
    ‘I- er, oh, I don’t know,’ mumbled May, not forgetting about the incident by the pool, ‘why do you want me to go?’
    ‘Well, you are a coordinator and I am sick of always travelling alone. You are the only person I have ever considered travelling with.’
    Suddenly, May could not contain her emotion anymore.
    ‘Well what about that girl who had her tongue down your throat by the pool. Wouldn’t you prefer to travel with her than a person who you have forever insulted?’ May shrieked loudly.
    ‘Woah, have you been spying on me?!’
    ‘No, I came to go into the pool too, and then I saw that Kacey girl with you, so I came back here,’ said May, realising that her throat was sore from shouting.
    ‘Jealous May?’ said Drew smirking.
    ‘For God’s sake Drew, no I am not jealous. Why do you have to be just a git all the time. So for your answer, NO, I will not travel with you. I am grateful that you have let me stay here, but hopefully this will be one of the only times I have to see you,’ yelled May, turning back over and closing her eyes forcefully.
    ‘Fine, I don’t know what I was thinking inviting a stupid brat like you along anyway,’ said Drew nastily, and May heard him climb into his own bed.
    ‘Well if you hate me so much then why did you invite me to stay here?’ said May shrilly.
    ‘I thought I was doing you a bloody favour, but I don’t see why I should bother with you. I could’ve had a peaceful day, but instead you had to ruin it. Well, I want you to get out as soon as you are dressed and ready in the morning because I don’t want you around me,’ shouted Drew in the most angry voice May had ever heard him use.
    Tears started to well up in May’s eyes and she clutched the quilt closer to her. Her breath started to become quicker as tears rolled down her cheeks and onto the pillow. She tried to stop so that Drew wouldn’t hear her, but she was shaking and crying uncontrollably. She closed her eyes as more tears spilled out, and she felt a hand on her shoulder.
    ‘Come on May, there’s really no need to cry. You know I didn’t mean it,’ said Drew quietly.
    May hadn’t even heard him get out of bed, and she tried to look away from him and bury her face into the pillow.
    ‘Just…leave…me…alone…Drew,’ May cried in-between her sobs.
    Drew put his hand under May’s other shoulder and hoisted her up into a sitting position. She pulled away from him cried silently, while looking at the blurred wall through her watery eyes.
    ‘May, what did you do when you saw Kacey kiss me?’ asked Drew suddenly.
    May took an intake of breath sharply, and more tears rolled down her cheeks.
    ‘Nothing, I just thought you would want to be left…alone,’ whispered May, controlling her sobs with difficulty, ‘why?’
    ‘Because Kacey said…something about your reaction,’ muttered Drew.
    ‘I hate her,’ exploded May suddenly.
    ‘Why? Because she said that to me?’
    ‘No, while you must’ve been on your walk, she came to the room. She is an awful person, I can’t believe you go out with someone like her,’ said May, her voice shook slightly, and she quickly tried to hide it by saying: ‘not that you don’t suit.’
    ‘I am not going out with her. We just kissed, she wants to travel with me,’ mumbled Drew.
    ‘Oh, so I was your little second choice then was I Drew,’ said May turning around so fast that they banged heads and May fell off the bed with a short groan.
    Drew stood up to help her hastily.
    ‘AARRRGGHHH, DREW YOU IDIOT,’ screamed may, jumping up and shoving him so that he fell back onto the bed.
    ‘It was your fault May! Don’t you dare try and blame this on me. If you didn’t act so stupidly then stuff like this wouldn’t happen.’
    Drew stood up in front of her. May looked into his eyes nervously. He did look very angry and very tall. He completely towered her small frame of 5”3.
    ‘I’m sorry,’ May said, realising how often she was saying that to him.
    ‘I’m going out,’ said Drew abruptly.
    ‘Drew, you can’t it is late,’ said May in a high voice.
    ‘I just need some space, get some sleep, I will take the key with me, I don’t know how long I will be,’ snapped Drew, grabbing his jacket from the desk and throwing it on.
    ‘Drew, please,’ begged May, looking outside. It was dark and looked cold, though it had stopped raining.
    Drew ignored her and walked out of the door. May collapsed onto the floor in a flood of tears.
    ‘Why do I have to be so oversensitive,’ wailed May through her sobs.
    May cried and cried, until her throat was too sore to carry on. She didn’t even realise she was falling asleep, as she fell sideward and her head rested on the side of the bed. May stirred but was too tired to realise where she was.

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    Drew kicked an empty beer can from his path and he walked through the deserted streets. The only light was the reflection from the moon and the beams of light coming from the odd streetlamp.
    Drew’s emotions were roaring all different messages. He was angry at May, angry at himself and angry at Kacey. Yet, for some reason, he had something else that was bothering him. It was a mixture of guilt and something else that he could not quite capture properly. He knew one thing though, he felt immensely guilty for the things he said to May. He turned and could see the Pokémon centre only a few yards away.
    ‘Is everything okay young man?’ asked Nurse Joy who had noticed him stagger in.
    ‘Yes, I am fine, just went for a walk,’ said Drew hastily, hurrying up the stairs.
    He realised he had left the door unlocked and opened it slowly as not to wake May. He noticed that her bed was empty, and she was slumped on the floor. Obviously, she had stayed where Drew had heard her fall crying when he had left. Drew sighed and walked over to her.
    ‘May,’ he said softly, putting his hand on her shoulder.
    He noticed how red around her eyes were, with evidence that she had still been crying when she had drifted to sleep. He gave her a little shake but she only moaned a bit and then stayed still again. Drew sighed and put his one arm underneath her legs and one arm around her shoulders and under her arm and lifted her up. She was surprisingly light. Drew had a very big shock by what happened next.
    ‘Drew…?’ said May softly, her eyes still closed.
    She moved in his arms so that her head was leaning into his chest. She brought her one hand up so that it was on top of his that was by her shoulder. Drew stiffened and looked down at her, she was still fast asleep.
    ‘Erm, May?’ Drew said uncomfortably.
    May’s eyes remained closed and she just moved closer to him.
    Drew quickly lay May down onto the bed and stepped back so that her hand fell from his. Her eyelids flickered, but she didn’t wake up. Drew heaved a sigh of relief and then got into his own bed. He supposed he would have to ask May again tomorrow, and hopefully straighten everything out between them…


    A/N Hey, that actually took me longer than I expected, it was hard to write. Please comment to let me know what you think.

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    May i have a cup of hot chocolate to with extra marshmellow XD lol. well its going good so far
    Ya Mays comeing back for a small camo

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    Thank you scrapbook, and I am just sorting out your Hot Chocolate request.


    p.s Don't ask why i called it "Hot Chocolate" it just seemed like a warming tital lol,

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    Hey a story needs a weird and uniqe tittle. Besides hot chocolate kind of has its touch in the story. Drew and May are always mad at each other and thats like hot for in away, and chocolate, well i dont know about chocolate. If i were to write a contestshipping fic, i would call it Dark Chocolate (because its bitter and sweet i guess).
    Ya Mays comeing back for a small camo

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    That chapter was... hawt. lolz. I like the part where Drew picked May up to put her on her bed, and she just moved closer to him. That was really cute. Good work, CD667!

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    Aw thank you guys for the lovely comments again. I am writing Part 3 now, and just to let you know, there may be a little more of Kacey in this one...but i won't tell you what circumstances hehe.
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    That was so cool! Yayz for shippyness!

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    CUTE! ^__^ Oh and, put a spacing whenever you type a new paragragh, or else it gets messy...xP Oh well.

    The chapter was Kawaii, and that stupid Kacey kissed Shuu! RAWR! *slaps Kacey* Haruka and Shuu belong together! ^_^ I loved the part where Shuu carried Haruka...UBER-KAWAII! ^_^

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    wow...i like it can i be added to the pm list?

    i like how drew's being extra mean to may O_o *gets shot by the may fans*

    it's very unique unlike most of the fics which gets drew to act completely out of his character *aka begging, crying* ...oh wait...he did cry in the anime didn't he? ...oops.

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    I really like this story. I think you've kept the characters pretty well IC, though the beginning was a bit rushed.
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    A/N Hey people. Here is part three, it took me quite a while to write, because I have been very busy. I hope you like it.


    Hot Chocolate Part 3


    A ray of light crept through the curtains of a Pokémon Centre room and across the face of a chocolate-brown haired girl, who was stirring in her much-needed sleep. May started to slowly open her eyes, that were unwilling to look into the light of day.
    ‘Drew?’ whispered May groggily, suddenly seeing a shadow across the room from her.
    ‘Yeah, I see you finally decided to wake up,’ said Drew, who was putting on his shoes near the foot of May’s bed.
    ‘Oh,’ May suddenly remembered what Drew had said to her the night before and quickly got out of the bed.
    Drew watched her as she quickly brushed her hair into her usual style and put her red bandanna on. She grabbed her clothes and walked into the bathroom to change.
    She sighed as she pulled on her jacket once she was dressed. She had really wanted to say yes to Drew the previous day, but there were too many reasons not to go with him. Kacey being the main one, and also what Drew had said to her about getting out as soon as she was ready.
    May walked back into the room quietly, Drew was throwing his jacket on and he turned to look at May.
    ‘Where are you going?’ he asked as May picked up her bag and headed towards the door.
    ‘You told me to get out as soon as I was ready,’ mumbled May, still not looking into his eyes.
    ‘Come on May, I didn’t mean it.’
    May stopped and turned to look at him. She looked into his green eyes but he looked away dismissively.
    ‘The offer still stands May,’ muttered Drew.
    ‘What offer?’
    ‘About travelling with me, you can still come if you want, I am going for something to eat and then I am leaving dead on ten. I will be in the lobby of the Pokémon centre if you want to meet me.’
    With that, Drew opened the door and through her the room key.
    ‘Wait,’ cried out May suddenly.
    ‘What?’
    ‘Erm, I am pretty hungry myself, can I come with you,’ asked May, swinging her arms nervously.
    ‘Sure, why not?’ said Drew, opening the door fully again to let her through.
    ‘Thanks, where do you want to go?’ asked May, putting her waist bag on and following Drew as he walked down the hall.
    ‘I just want to go to that café near the Pokémon centre.’
    May skipped along next to him, almost completely back to her happy-go-lucky self. Drew rolled his eyes and flicked his emerald hair from his eyes in a bored manner.
    They arrived at the small café and May realised why Drew had wanted to come here. It was small and cosy. The walls were a pale cream colour and the tables all looked like a they had never had food upon them.
    ‘Wow, this is a nice place,’ gasped May, looking at Drew and smiling.
    ‘Er, actually maybe we should go,’ muttered Drew suddenly noticing something shocking about the place.
    ‘No way, come on let’s get a table, there is one over there next to the one that girl and boy are at,’ said May.
    She grabbed his arm and dragged him over to the table and shoved him into the seat opposite hers.
    ‘Exactly May, look around, do you see anyone on their own or in a group?’ hissed Drew though gritted teeth.
    May looked around. He was right, all the tables were occupied by couples.
    ‘Er, Drew, why the hell have you brought me to a couple’s café?’ said May loudly, causing a few people in the vicinity to look up at her.
    ‘I didn’t know May, that is why I tried to get you to walk back out, but you had to drag me down here. Now everyone is going to think we are together.’
    May frowned and looked around to see a waitress coming.
    ‘Aw, very cute couple. What can I get you two?’ said the waitress warmly.
    May blushed brilliantly and Drew went faintly pink but took it in his stride. May glared at him.
    ‘We are not-’
    ‘Two cups of tea please, May what food do you want?’ asked Drew, looking at her and ignoring her outraged expression.
    ‘Um, I don’t know. What are you having?’ May asked in a squeaky voice.
    ‘I am just going to have the Big Brek, please,’ he added to the waitress.
    ‘Oh, I will have the same,’ said May quickly.
    ‘Aw, how sweet. Coming right up kids,’ said the waitress beaming at them.
    ‘Why did you interrupt me when I was telling her that we are not a couple,’ May whispered angrily to him, once the waitress had disappeared from their table again.
    ‘Well, did you really want to make things awkward,’ said Drew, closing his eyes and folding his arms in an off-hand way.
    May opened her mouth to say something but stopped herself and looked out of the window moodily. A flash of light made her jump and she looked to see a photographer doing exactly what she had feared before.
    ‘Right, so that is Drew and an unidentified girl in the Rose Café. Can you two please kiss for the camera,’ said the man with the camera enthusiastically.
    ‘Get away from us,’ shouted Drew.
    ‘Oh come on, please. I will pay you. My name is Eric Granger, I work for Crystal Magazine and it would be such a great story if we actually had a picture of you and your girlfriend kissing,’ begged the photographer, getting his camera ready.
    ‘I said get away,’ said Drew loudly.
    ‘Come on, hey young lady, I will pay you 10,000 pounds if you kiss him.’
    ‘Ten thousand,’ May repeated, gob smacked.
    ‘What? You want more?’ Eric asked.
    ‘I told you to get lost, now do it,’ barked Drew.
    May’s eyes were widened. She didn’t have a lot of money at the moment and she had promised her parents that she had enough and didn’t want to ask them.
    ‘Please, twenty thousand, will that get the picture?’ asked Eric pleadingly.
    ‘I said NO!’ shouted Drew, and all the other couples in the café looked over at him.
    ‘Fine, but I would have gone higher you know,’ snapped Eric.
    ‘Wait!’ yelled May and Eric turned around, ’I need that money.’
    ‘Well, I am afraid, no kiss, no money. So do you want to do what I want or not?’
    ‘Drew, I-’ May started, but then something happened that made her feel as though a volcano had erupted inside her.
    ‘You want a kiss, I will give it to you.’
    From out of nowhere, Kacey appeared and swooped down and kissed Drew hard on the lips. Eric quickly snapped a few shots until Kacey had pulled away again.
    ‘Now, babe, what was that? Twenty thousand I believe,’ said Kacey to Eric.
    Eric quickly scribbled out a cheque and left happily.
    ‘Now, what are you doing here with her,’ said Kacey, turning back to Drew and May.
    Drew seemed too shocked to speak. So May spoke for him.
    ‘What the hell do you think you are doing? I didn’t see Drew inviting you to kiss him,’ said May shaking with fury.
    ‘Aw, jealous baby?’ sneered Kacey pouting.
    ‘Kacey, I am going to travel with May. She is the one I have known for years, not you. I am sorry,’ muttered Drew, ignoring the fact that May hadn’t yet given him an answer.
    ‘Fine then, I know where I am not wanted,’ said Kacey dramatically.
    May smirked at her as Kacey started to walk away, but she stopped when Kacey turned back to them and smiled.
    ‘Oh, and just for the journey,’ she said and quickly kissed Drew again, before skipping out of the café.
    ‘That cow,’ spat May angrily.
    ‘God, that is just TOO much will power,’ grumbled Drew, wiping his mouth.
    ‘Erm, Drew I-’
    ‘Here’s your breakfast lovies,’ the waitress appeared again and May jumped.
    ‘Thanks,’ said Drew, taking the plates and placing one in front of himself and one in front of May.
    The waitress grinned at them and walked away again.
    ‘May, what were you saying?’ asked Drew, taking a bite out of his toast.
    ‘I, er, never mind,’ mumbled May, cutting up her food into May-mouth-size-pieces.
    ‘So, I know I just told Kacey that you would, but are you going to travel with me?’ asked Drew, not looking up from his food.
    ‘Um, yeah sure. I guess it will be fun,’ said May smiling.
    ‘Cool, I want to head towards Cerulean City first. There is a new contest arena there, so it should be a good one!’
    ‘Cerulean?’ said May, suddenly remembering that is what he told her the night before.
    ‘Yeah, what’s wrong with that?’ asked Drew, frowning slightly.
    ‘Oh nothing,’ mumbled May, knowing that she would probably see Misty.
    She didn’t know why, because Misty had never done anything to her, but she always felt intimidated when she was around her. Though at first she had been practically awestruck when she met her, and she always acted nice, but deep down May couldn’t help feeling a little…scared, or jealous maybe? She couldn’t really explain the feeling, it was weird.
    ‘I better let Ash and the others know I am ok,’ said May, ‘I will leave them a message at Ash’s house in Pallet Town. I know they are heading there first so they should pick it up soon.’
    ‘Whatever,’ grumbled Drew.
    ‘I am going to go now,’ said May, even though she had barely eaten anything.
    She put her hand in her pocket and pulled out some money and gave it to Drew.
    ‘For my breakfast when the bill comes,’ she said simply.
    ‘No, I will pay, don’t worry about it,’ said Drew and May was worried that he sensed that she had hardly any money with her.
    ‘Thank you,’ said May quietly.
    She turned quickly and walked out and back towards the Pokémon Centre. Of course, she needed to talk to Ash, but for some reason she felt she had to get away from Drew. Something shifted inside her when she saw Kacey kiss him, and she didn’t know what it was.
    May trudged into the Pokémon Centre and sat at one of the video phones (A/N does anyone know what they are called? Is it Pokegear?). She dialled in Ash’s home number and waited. Delia answered and beamed at May.
    ‘Hello honey, I suppose you want to speak to Ash?’ she said brightly.
    ‘What? He’s there?’ said May, shocked.
    ‘Yes, he and Misty got here this morning,’ squealed Delia, obviously very excited by the whole situation.
    Delia moved away and Ash appeared on the screen, Misty slightly behind him.
    ‘Hey May, where are you?’ asked Ash grinning.
    ‘I am in Vermillion City. Ash where’s Brock?’ asked May, a little confused.
    ‘Oh he went back to Pewter City, so I am going to travel with Misty now,’ said Ash, gesturing to Misty who smiled and waved at May.
    ‘Oh, hi Misty, I am just with-’
    ‘DREW,’ said Ash loudly in a shocked voice, looking past May.
    May looked behind her, and Drew was standing there with his hands in his pockets.
    ‘What? You didn’t expect me to stay in the café on my own did you?’ said Drew, looking at May’s surprised expression.
    ‘That is what I was about to tell you Ash, Misty, I am going to be travelling with Drew,’ said May, closing her eyes and smiling happily.
    ‘Ooh, don’t let your brother hear that,’ said Ash grimacing.
    ‘Why not?’
    ‘Well, he has never been too taken with Drew.’
    ‘How charming,’ muttered Drew, sitting next to May so he could see the screen.
    ‘Misty, this is Drew,’ said May to Misty who had just moved so she was next to Ash.
    ‘Hello Drew, I have heard about you partially.’
    ‘You have?’ asked Drew, flicking his hair absently.
    ‘Yes, I saw you on television with your Roselia and Ash has told me a little about you,’ said Misty smiling, ‘you are an amazing trainer Drew.’
    She smiled slightly and Drew blushed. Ash fell off his chair abruptly and Misty laughed. May just sat there silently, wondering why a sad feeling had just swept over her.
    ‘Yeah, I, er, have heard a lot about the Cerulean Gym, from what I heard you are an excellent Water Pokémon trainer, one of the best,’ Drew complimented her and May gasped.
    He hardly ever complimented her and he had known her for years, and he had only just met Misty, and already he was saying nice things to her.
    ‘Oh, thank you Drew,’ said Misty, going very slightly pink.
    ‘She could beat you,’ said Ash sharply, as he climbed back onto his chair.
    ‘I seriously doubt that,’ said May, not even realising what she had said.
    Even Drew looked surprised as he answered coolly.
    ‘Well, if we ever meet Misty, I guess we will just see,’ said Drew closing his eyes and smirking.
    ‘We have to go now, I want to travel back towards Cerulean for the Pokémon Contest that is taking place there,’ said Misty.
    ‘You are going to be at the Cerulean Contest?!’ May exclaimed, ‘why?’
    ‘I am the Gym Leader of Cerulean and they think that I will make a good judge. I hope to see you there May, and you too Drew. Bye!’ Misty said laughing slightly.
    ‘See you May,’ said Ash, ignoring Drew.
    With that, the screen went blank as Misty hung up.
    ‘We better get going to May,’ said Drew, as though they had not just had one of the most awkward and shocking conversations to date.
    ‘Yeah, ok,’ May said, for some reason feeling breathless.
    After collecting their things, they left Vermillion city and headed towards the long, stretching road that would lead them to Cerulean City. May stayed unusually quiet and Drew was as subdued as ever. Though surprisingly, it was Drew who broke the silence.
    ‘That Misty girl seems really cool. It will be good to meet a trainer as good as her when we get to Cerulean,’ said Drew folding his arms.
    ‘Yeah she is a nice person,’ muttered May, hiding the fact that she was very ticked off.
    ‘I am guessing you know her pretty well then?’ asked Drew.
    ‘Well, I know her, but not really, really well,’ said May tightening her bandanna.
    ‘Hmm, you don’t seem to be too fond of her,’ said Drew slyly.
    ‘I have nothing against Misty. Why do you think that?’ exclaimed May, a little too dramatically.
    Drew merely laughed and shrugged at her. May stopped and put her hands on her hips, frowning.
    ‘If you have something to say Drew, then just say it,’ said May fiercely.
    ‘Well, I was actually wondering if maybe you were jealous?’
    ‘Why would I be jealous of the fact that you thought she was a brilliant trainer. I don’t care what you think of her,’ said May quickly and loudly.
    Drew laughed and looked at her and smiled.
    ‘I was actually thinking of the fact that she was with Ash. I never even thought of me, but funny how that was the first thing that came into your head,’ said Drew, not looking down from May’s astounded face.
    ‘Oh shut up Drew,’ said May blushing furiously.
    She started to walk quicker so that she was about five metres in front of Drew. She kept shooting furtive glances back at Drew, who smirked at her every time she looked around.
    ‘A quote from you: “if you have something to say, then say it”,’ Drew called to her, after about the fifth time she looked around.
    ‘Nothing,’ shouted May, ‘I just wanted to make sure you were keeping up.’
    She heard Drew laughing, but she tried to ignore him.
    It was only when May was just too tired to keep up her fast pace, half an hour later, did she start to walk at Drew’s side again. She could feel him watching her, but she kept her eyes averted firmly away from him.
    ‘I’m hungry,’ May whined eventually.
    ‘Well, you should have eaten that breakfast you ordered at that café, it’s your own fault,’ said Drew unsympathetically.
    May didn’t answer him, she just stopped and sat on a patch of grass that was near her.
    ‘What are you doing May?’ said Drew in a snobbish voice, looking down at her with his eyebrows raised.
    ‘If you won’t take me to a café or restaurant somewhere, then I am forced to eat some of these snacks I have in my bag,’ snapped May, ‘and I hope you don’t expect me to walk and eat at the same time.’
    Drew sighed and sat next to her.
    ‘Girls, and especially you, will always be a complete enigma to me,’ muttered Drew.
    ‘Cool,’ said May, getting a little book out of her bag after her snack bar.
    ‘What’s that?’ asked Drew leaning sideward towards May to have a look.
    ‘Nothing that you need to see,’ said May snapping the book shut and pushing Drew away.
    ‘Ah I get it. You have a secret little diary that has stuff that you don’t want me to see in it,’ said Drew smirking.
    ‘You wouldn’t be interested about anything or anyone that I have written about in this book,’ said May, consciously avoiding Drew’s eyes.
    ‘Oh I see. You think that I think that it is about me. Oh, of course, it is all about that Ash guy isn’t it?’ said Drew in a strange tone.
    ‘No it isn’t,’ yelled May, tightening her grip angrily around the pen she had just gotten out of her bag.
    ‘Well, so-orry,’ said Drew holding up his hands sarcastically.
    May ignored him and flicked through the pages of her diary until she reached an empty page. The pages were like parchment, soft and sort-of old looking. Though she watched Drew out of the corner of her eye at first, once May got started writing, her eyes became so focused on the words she was writing, that she seemed almost oblivious to the other things around her.
    Drew watched her write silently. He couldn’t see what she was writing, but he could tell that whatever it was, was important, because May’s expressions kept changing as she wrote and she looked very…different.
    Her expression wasn’t the usual, childish, girly expression. It was focused and intelligent.
    May suddenly felt Drew’s gaze upon her and looked up. She quickly covered up her book and frowned at him.
    ‘What?’
    ‘Oh nothing, it is just…nothing,’ mumbled Drew, looking back towards the dusty track they had been walking along before.


    ‘I see it, I see Cerulean City,’ said May, bouncing up and down the day after the diary incident had happened.
    ‘I’m overjoyed,’ said Drew in a surly voice.
    ‘Come on, we have to sign up for the contest,’ squealed May, thoughts of Ash or Misty completely disintegrating from her head.
    Drew continued to walk as slow as ever, his hands in his pockets.
    ‘Come ON,’ shouted May, ‘there is still a little walk once we get down the hill.’
    She grabbed his arm and started to pull him down the hill towards Cerulean.
    ‘May, get off me,’ said Drew loudly, but May ignored him.
    As they got to the bottom of the hill May tripped and dragged Drew down with her. Drew hit the ground hard, but someone caught May just in time.
    ‘Thank you,’ she said looking up.
    ‘No problem, May,’ said the boy.
    May gasped.
    ‘Joshua?!’ May exclaimed.
    ‘Yes its me,’ he laughed.
    ‘Oh wow, it is so good to see you,’ said May.
    ‘Yes, you too. Are you entering the Cerulean Contest then May?’ asked Joshua smiling.
    ‘Yes,’ said May a little breathlessly.
    She noticed how much Joshua had changed since she had last seen him at the Pacifidlog Contest. His dark green hair was still the same length and shade, but he had grown taller and more mature. May couldn’t help but admit it…he was gorgeous.
    ‘Yeah May, just bloody leave me on the floor,’ she heard an angry voice say behind her.
    ‘Oh sorry,’ May said hastily.
    She helped Drew to his feet and then turned back to Joshua.
    ‘I don’t believe we have met,’ said Joshua kindly, smiling at Drew.
    ‘Whatever,’ said Drew, not looking at him.
    ‘Drew!’ said May, a little anxious that the two might start arguing.
    ‘Oh, so your Drew? I remember now, I saw you on TV at the Hoenn Grand Festival. It was a shame Robert beat you in the finals,’ said Joshua, obviously trying to make pleasant conversation.
    ‘Yeah, so it was,’ said Drew, grabbing May’s arm and pulling her forward slightly.
    ‘Drew what are you doing?’ said Drew, pushing his hand off her arm.
    ‘You said you wanted to get to Cerulean, so let’s go,’ said Drew bitterly.
    ‘Oh ok, Joshua are you coming?’ asked May sweetly, turning back to him.
    ‘Sure why not?’ said Joshua.
    ‘Fine then, I am not being held up,’ said Drew throwing a Pokéball in the air. Flygon appeared.
    ‘See you there May,’ he said in an annoyed tone.
    He jumped on Flygon’s back and it started to fly in the direction of Cerulean City.
    ‘Wait Drew…’ called May, but he was already too far for him to hear.
    ‘I’m sorry, I don’t think he is too keen on me,’ mumbled Joshua.
    ‘No, I am sorry about how he acted, he can be so mean at times,’ said May.
    ‘I guess we better head there too then,’ said Joshua, smiling.
    ‘Yeah, let’s go.’
    May started to walk and found herself thinking about the way Drew reacted to Joshua. Was he…jealous? No, that couldn’t possibly be it, could it? He was like it with everyone. She needed to ask him something though. Something she had been writing about in her diary, but now, with Joshua there. She didn’t know if she could. She would have to ponder over it when they got to the Pokémon Centre.

    A/N: So, who do you think May likes more? The kind one, who has never hurt her: Joshua. Or the one that is forever making her cry and is mean to her and her friends: Drew.
    Well, I am writing part 4 now. Let me know what you think of this one!



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    With that, Drew opened the door and through her the room key.
    It should be "With that, Drew opened the door and threw her the room key.
    They arrived at the small café and May realised why Drew had wanted to come here. It was small and cosy. The walls were a pale cream colour and the tables all looked like a they had never had food upon them.
    Nice description. This is exactly why I like cafes.
    Right, so that is Drew and an unidentified girl in the Rose Café.
    Haha, no wonder why Drew wanted to go there. Nice touch.
    She didn’t know why, because Misty had never done anything to her, but she always felt intimidated when she was around her.
    I felt that too. Especially in the Mirage Pokemon episode when May caught Misty before she fell...it was like she had to prove herself. I think she feels a bit overshadowed, maybe I'll start a thread on that if there isn't all ready one. Nice touch again.
    May trudged into the Pokémon Centre and sat at one of the video phones (A/N does anyone know what they are called? Is it Pokegear?).
    They're called video phones.
    ‘See you May,’ said Ash, ignoring Drew.
    I love jealous Ash! It makes him so adorable!
    ‘Well, I was actually wondering if maybe you were jealous?’
    ‘Why would I be jealous of the fact that you thought she was a brilliant trainer. I don’t care what you think of her,’ said May quickly and loudly.
    Drew laughed and looked at her and smiled.
    ‘I was actually thinking of the fact that she was with Ash. I never even thought of me, but funny how that was the first thing that came into your head,’ said Drew, not looking down from May’s astounded face.
    Hehehehehe. I love it.
    ‘Girls, and especially you, will always be a complete enigma to me,’ muttered Drew.
    I believe this should read: "Girls, especially you, will always be completely enigmatic and confusing to me." I don't think enigmatic is strong enough on its own in this context.
    ‘Fine then, I am not being held up,’ said Drew throwing a Pokéball in the air. Flygon appeared.
    ‘See you there May,’ he said in an annoyed tone.
    He jumped on Flygon’s back and it started to fly in the direction of Cerulean City.
    Hahahahaha. Drew is jealous. Good job making it subtle to the characters but obvious to the readers.
    Good work. I hope to see part four up soon. If you need an editor, I'm an english major and would be more than happy to help you. Just PM me.

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