DarkLegend your article was really great. You wrote in exactly the right kind of style. The information provided is great as it looks at Steelix as if it were really real.
The only problem i have with it is my personal opinion that Steelix cannot spin on the tip of its tail, it would require immense balance and does not seem feasable possible for a beast of Steelix's size. I see it as an anime thing. However thats just my view. A job well done and i look forward to any future articles.