Ahhhhh....(rests in relaxation and uncontrollable happiness). Perfect WS. Just freaking perfect. Could not have done better than that myself. That was awesome, and you answered a lot of the questions I have for your story. VERY nice job, cool cliffhanger for Misty's fainting, and the Lapras was cool too.
Words can not really express how well I think of this to be made. I would definitely give it a 10. If it could, I would have it exceed that meter, cause it deserves more than that ^_^. Now that you have got this one done and over with, there's only one chapter left to go. I'm sure it will be the best of all of the ones we've seen thus far. Loved how you made her come back. That was perfectly dramatic and soooo something I would expect to see from Misty.
I only wish now that I would've asked for my name in the story, lol. Awesome job WS, and I'm very much looking forward to the last chapter. Also, I'm betting the part that May messed around with was the PS part, huh? I guess I'll see. You did nicely.