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    Water Spirit, that was BEAUTIFUL! Well worth the wait. And yowch, three posts for one chapter? Quite an eyefull, but I'm glad you went the extra mile and didn't break it up. I'd have gone nuts if at the end of the chapter Misty was still out and alone. I won't lie, I got a little scared when I saw that line at the end of your post for Part 1. Then I scrolled down. *sweat drop*

    Just looked back to page 1, it's been 17 months since this thread started. Just....wow. Your dedication to this is an inspiration to us all. You have nothing short of a masterpiece on your hands. Even though it's not quite over yet, I still feel the need to say, congrats on an epic well done (almost).

    And a sequel? Who WOULDN'T like a sequel? If we had our way you'd do nothing but write for us, and it'd never end! *laughs maniacly*

    Okay, maybe not. Gotta respect your right to a life and all. Seriously, though, unless you REALLY run out of ideas, we'll probably still be begging for more when we're old and grey. =P
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    I JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!
    And Happy Halloween Water Spirt
    Quote Originally Posted by Redsoxpsyco
    Ok, I'm out, this is turning into a game of spin the bottle O_o.


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    I love this Fic and wish I could read it without my eyes *sighs*Misty and Wallace should hook up some time

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    Happy Halloween, WS! ^^ Hope you gets lotsa candy! ^^

    Now we wait for last chapter. I remember reading this for my first time!

    Paradise is Calling... Are You Ready to Answer?

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    Unbelievable. I must say, WS, I am impressed.

    I love you - now and for always
    So that's what the latin phrase means? WOW! I didn't expect that. Maybe I'll use it sometime in my stories. Though I'm not sure I can make it work out.

    I can't believe he chose to use Luvdisc for his match. Then again, Ash really does care about Misty. I should've seen it coming.

    No words can truly express how great the romance was in this. You have a talent that can't be matched by anyone else.

    I hope you get the final chapter done soon.

    Oh, and check out my R rated fic, The Deadliest Tournament, as I've got a little surprise for you. ^_^

    Oh, and PM me when you have it up.

    See ya later.

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    I'll start by responding to Brian Powell here,

    Quote Originally Posted by Brian Powell
    I have a feeling that when you place this fic in the completed fics forum, I’m sure that a bunch more people will be reading this, pokemon fan or not, AAML fan or not, for years to come.
    Indeed, I've never been a fan of shipping, however I can't help but eagerly anticipate this Fan Fiction, It is too good to ignore, and indeed, what is one factor to put someone off a story as good as this? It is beautifully written after all.

    Water Spirit, What can I say that hasn't already been said? This chapter was worth that wait, and I place great emphasis on that sentence. Indeed, I think the wait was a factor in what made it so amazingly good. Anticipation, anxiety and speculation played a large role, and of course made this chapter all the more enjoyable.

    The battle scenes were incredible, they're probably my favourite part, and the latest chapter certainly delivers. Amazing descriptions made it all the more easy to picture in your mind as you read it, the way the emotions of Ash were portrayed as the fight went on, and all the time staying within character.

    The sense of mystery surrounding the voice was kept under-wraps rather well, indeed, it was perhaps clear that Ash and/or Misty would confront the Lapras at some point when it was first mentioned, yet even with that possibility burned into our minds it was still a surprise to see Misty confronting it, and indeed a surprise to learn of Wallace and his connection in the entire story.

    I can't think of anything else to say really, indeed I suppose you would like some critisism, but alas I seriously cannot think of any bar some minor grammatical and spelling errors, which can and should be overlooked.

    Kudos once more WS, and, I am certainly looking forward to the final chapter, I hope it is a triumphant finish to a fantastic storyline.

    -Josh

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    OH wow wow wow! This chapter was so easy to get glued to tha I forgot if I already reviewed! Well maybe I didn't but I feel like I didn't.

    Ah the chapter was so great I'm not myself. I don't even know what I'm typing.

    Or maybe I do!

    Another wel done chapter, WS. You know, when I first say your name it was on the award for best Shippy fic, and I decided to check it out. I got more than I expected, but I never regretted looking at the list of awards for SPPf fanfictions. You've come a long way, and I'll never stop complimenting your work! (Unless you switch to Advanceshipping. *is shot* I'm sure that won't happen!)
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    ... awesome.

    That chapter was simply awesome. I'm so glad ash and misty got back together. I really can't wait for chapter 30.

    I bet you're already working on it XD

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    Awesome chapter! it rocks! ive been waiting a while now for it!

    We thank you!
    :you've got the best story ever!

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    I've read all 29 of your chapters and I must say that I'm impressed. You actually bring out the emotions of all the characters and for that I applaud you.

    The other thing I must say is that you convey realism in the story. (Now I'm sounding like my English teacher) I can actually see the story and play it in my mind.

    The only minor (extremely minor) mistake is a nitpick, You spelled Pokemon Centre when it should be Pokemon Center.

    I'll save my rating until you post your last chapter but I doubt it will be anything less than perfect.

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    I think that british spell centre instead of center.
    SInce i´m here ì´ll praise your story. I haven´t read the last chapters yet, but i liked what i´ve read so far. Make that last chapter for history books!

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    Quote Originally Posted by funkymonk
    I think that british spell centre instead of center.
    Yup.

    Like "theatre," if you've ever seen that.
    Heart Break - ff.net - LJ - PotS

    COLLEGE. >.<

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    I'm really patince right now on waiting for the next chapter
    Quote Originally Posted by Redsoxpsyco
    Ok, I'm out, this is turning into a game of spin the bottle O_o.


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    WS I have been in love with this fic for over a year now, Your fic is awesome and real. I can watch it all happen in my head as I read it, you should go into writing as a profession(sp? I know mine sucks)

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    Congratulations, WS! Click here to know what I mean.

    And another thing, I found another song that could suit this fanfic.

    My Sacrifice by Creed

    Hello my friend, we meet again
    It's been awhile, where should we begin?
    Feels like forever
    Within my heart a memory
    A perfect love that you gave to me
    Oh, I remember

    When you are with me I'm free
    I'm careless, I believe
    Above all the others we'll fly
    This brings tears to my eyes
    My Sacrifice

    We've seen our share of ups and downs
    Oh how quickly life can turn around
    In an instant
    It feels so good to realize
    What's in yourself and within your mind
    Let's find peace there

    When you are with me I'm free
    I'm careless, I believe
    Above all the others we'll fly
    This brings tears to my eyes
    My Sacrifice

    I just want to say hello again
    I just want to say hello again

    When you are with me I'm free
    I'm careless, I believe
    Above all the others we'll fly
    This brings tears to my eyes
    Cause when you are with me I am free
    I'm careless, I believe
    Above all the others we'll fly
    This brings tears to my eyes
    My Sacrifice, My Sacrifice

    I just want to say hello again
    I just want to say hello again

    My Sacrifice


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    Yesh! *acts all silly and whatnot*

    Many congratulations for winning Best Chaptered Romance/Shipping Fic of the summer, WS! *does weird little dance of celebration*

    You earned it, once again!
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    Congratulations,WS! For a fan-fic like that the result must be good, like that

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    I finally read those long chapters! Best ones yet!
    Can't wait for the last one!
    In pokemon R/B/Y, there was a graveyard called pokemon tower where dead pokemon were laid to rest. In G/S/C the spot that was known as pokemon tower is now a radio station. So basically, they were like, "Screw the graveyard, we're gonna destroy it and put a radio tower there instead! Nobody's gonna miss the pokemon anyway; they're dead, right?" that's just cruel...

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    Congrats WS!!!!! (Sends Fireworks up in the Sky Saying Water Spirit) U Should have won More Awards
    Quote Originally Posted by Redsoxpsyco
    Ok, I'm out, this is turning into a game of spin the bottle O_o.


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    Congrats too!! Though I reckon you seriously deserve more. ^^;;
    But winning Best Chaptered Romance/Shipping Fic...you've done a great thing for Pokeshipper! lol
    Congratulations and Thankyou! Over these holidays, I'll be reading it all over again.
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    Wow, congratulation WS! You deserve it. You worked really hard on this story and it paid off big time.


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    Thats awesome WS, like everyone said you really deserve it. This fic is the best I have read, and it always keeps me entertained.
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    Great job WS!You reli deserve it!
    Im a proud Pokeshipper!

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    Heck if this was published I wouldn't be surprised. The is one of the best fanfics on Serebii, and whatever comes out next, we couldn't possibly be disappointed! Unless it wasn't your work. ^^
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    Wow! That was really great! Yayyy! That was so cute, the whole part between Ash and Misty! Great job! And keep up the good work!

    Bisbald! TschuB!

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