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    Author's Note: Since Pokemon Diamond and Pearl aren't out yet, I am going to make up the gym leaders, cities, etc. don't worry, i will keep Shinou and the 4th generation pokemon the same. Also, beware of 4th wall break-ins(Characters knowing they are in a story), Script format, and humour(maybe)

    Pokemon: The Pearl of Shinou

    Episode 0: Prologue(AKA: Fire the cannons!)

    Ash: Well this is good-bye.

    May: Oh Ash, why do you have to leave?

    May cries.

    Ash: To start on a new journey. Duh.

    May: BUT WHY!?!?!?!

    Ash: Pokemon Diamond and Pearl is coming out soon so I must rush this in order to advertise the game via anime. Besides, you always have Drew.

    May: But he dumped me for Harley, then Drew dumped Harley for Saori.

    Ash: Then that leaves Harley then, May.

    May: I guess we can make up for the times he tried to make me fumble and lose.

    MayXHarley Shippers: YAY!

    May: ...

    Brock: Ash, I love you!

    Ash: WTF? YOUR A QUEER? BUT YOU USED TO DATE NURSES!

    Brock: That was just what I wanted you to think.

    Ash: This might refresh your love life.

    Nurse Joy: Oh Brock, come make sweet love to me!

    Officer Jenny: No, Me!

    CAT FIGHT!

    Brock: Now I love women!

    Prof. Ivy: What about me?

    Brock kills her by using Forretress as a bomb.

    Brock: I hate that freaking ***** so much.

    Max: Ash, I love you as well.

    Ash: WHAT THE HELL IS WITH EVERYONE? WHO IS WRITING THIS CRAP? MAX? AND ME? **** THIS **** I’M OUT OF HERE!

    Ash goes on plane where he finds Ekanses on the plane.

    Ash: NOW WERE PARODYING SNAKES ON A PLANE? AHHHHHHHH!

    Ash Gets out of the plane via free fall without a parachute all the way to Shinou.

    MEANWHILE

    Mewthreee: So, the deal’s set. You use my 2 original characters and i will give you a million dollars. Deal?

    Giovanni: Ok. Deal. What will be my team’s new name?

    Mewthreee: How about Team Galaxy?

    Giovanni: Ok.

    TO BE CONTINUED!

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    LOL Ekans on a PLane LOL MORE CHAPTERS!!!! can't wait till the PearlShipping part put me on your pm list ^_^

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    YAY PearlShipping, tell me when your done pretty please ^_^
    I'm loving is so far.

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    Hey, this was funny, and I know it's a Script format...but wasn't a little rushed? Anyways, good luck in your next chapter

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    New chapter

    Pokemon Pearl Of Shinou

    Episode 1: Interaction! Begin the ship!

    When we left Ash, he jumped out of a plane due to ekanses on the plane. Now he’s plummeting to his doom.

    We see Hikari leaving Futaba Town, her home, for the first time to begin her journey. She sees a comet falling down, it was Ash. Ash fell all the way down into the lab.

    Ash: AHHHHHHHH!

    Ash Crashes through the roof of the lab.

    Professor Nanakamado: Hello, I’ve been expecting you.

    Ash: Who are you?

    Professor Nanakamado: I’m Professor Nanakamado. Please Pick a pokemon.

    Ash: No. I choose to get the starter pokemon on my journey.

    Professor Nanakamado: Well, you can trade pokemon in order to get the starter pokemon.

    Ash: I do not want to do that. Ever since the trade at SS Anne, I never wanted to trade again. Can you tell me the pokemon though?

    Professor Nanakamado: Ok. The Grass is Naetoru, The Young Leaf Pokémon, He looks like a turtle.

    Ash: Ok, So it can use withdraw?

    Professor Nanakamado: Well, I did not study enough, but I might say yes. Next, we have Hikozaru, The Young Monkey Pokémon, He looks like a-

    Ash: Let me guess, a monkey? Can it evolve into an ape? Does it know kung fu? Or is it stupid? Like all monkeys?

    Professor Nanakamado: Yes, it’s an monkey, Maybe it can evolve into an ape, No it does not know kung fu, and no he is not stupid. He just likes to play with fire. Next we have Pocchama, The Penguin Pokémon-

    Ash: Should it be the YOUNG Penguin Pokémon?

    Professor Nanakamado: Your right! Remind me to fire Bill.

    Ash: Well, I’m out.

    Ash leaves giving Professor Nanakamado the finger. Now he bumps into Hikari.

    Ash: Hi, I’m As-

    Hikari: I say, Nice to meet you, My name is Hikari which is japanese for light. Did you that without the sun, all the plants would die?
    ???1: PREPARE FOR TROUBLE!

    ???2: MAKE IT DOUBLE!

    Ash: Ah crap. Not Team Rocket!

    ???1: We are not Team Rocket

    ???2: Ya! And we don’t rhyme like them either!

    ???1: Now we have been hired by the author to ruin the shipping by throwing you worst case scenarios!

    ???2: It’s time to introduce ourselves!

    ???1: Yaoi!

    ???2: Yuri!

    Yaoi: Team Galaxy Blast off to the speed of the milky way!!

    Yuri: Surrender now or die!

    Yaoi hits Hikari in the head which makes her a stupid ditz. Like all women in ships.

    Author’s note: We do not mean to insult women. We mean to make it a funny ship.

    TO BE CONTINUED!
    Pokemon: The Pearl of Shinou - A fanfiction supporting Pearlshipping.

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    *falls out of chair laughing* this is hilarious! moremoremore!!! i demand more of this hilarious shipping!!!
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    Okay this is longer than 1 page {On my openoffice} which I guess is the only thing right you did so far.

    I'll point out some apparent things I noticed you did wrong.

    Ash Crashes through the roof of the lab.
    Okay unless this story is designed to defy logic if Ash really feel out of his plane and crashed into a lab, oh yeah HE WOULD BE DEAD!

    Yaoi hits Hikari in the head which makes her a stupid ditz. Like all women in ships.
    I'm new to the shipping fic forum so really I'm confused wehter to say that was good or bad.


    Now unless once again this story is designed to defy logic, you could have been patient and let some more info about D/P that would have been helpful cause really the lack of info on D/P really makes it diffcult to write a good Shinou fic.

    Description ain't there either which is also really bad, and really this looks real boring.
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    ROFLMAO!!! This is hilarious- like a PS parody fic. The two villians being Yaoi and Yuri,(homo ships) while PS is a straight ship... ingeneous idea. Please continue!

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    ZOMG! awesome story even though it's in script format. XDD Yaoi? Yuri? Hilarious. Love the parody, keep on writing!
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    I see some of you have got the Yaoi/Yuri refrence. Now here's chapter 2.

    Pokemon: Pearl Of Shinou

    Episode 2: Return! Crimson Sea Serpent Sighted!

    When we last left Ash and Hikari they were confronted by Team Galaxy.

    Team Galaxy begin to attack when the author came.

    Author: Stop!

    Yaoi: Why?

    Author: Because we are not running ahead of the diamond and pearl games so we must move with the plot and stop with this filler. I think you will find the news interesting, Ash.

    The Author disappears.

    Ash: WAIT! Darn it.

    Hikari: Let’s check the news, Ash.

    Ash and Hikari watch the news to find out a shocking truth.

    TV announcer: This just in, a red Gyarados appeared earlier and is seen hurting the people. A man with red hair is currently standing atop of this monster burning people to a 3rd degree burn. He goes by the name of Axel, the Flurry of Dancing Flames.

    Ash: Crap, not only did the author bring the Red Gyarados but also brought someone from another game to hurt more people.

    Hikari: Is it ok to break 4th walls Ash?

    Ash: Look, all I know is that this is some lame shipping/season/crossover of sorts and we have to put an end to the author’s schemes!

    Hikari: The sighting is at the Lake of Trust! Follow me!

    Ash: What’s up these lame names.

    Ash follows Hikari to find Axel and his Red Gyarados. On the way the gang are attacked by a swarm of Mukkuru. Hikari picks up a rock but before she throws it, Ash grabs her wrist, stoping her from throwing the rock.

    Ash: You will make these pokemon angry, trust me. PIKACHU, THUNDER BOLT!

    Pikachu thunder bolts the swarm, they fall dead like raindrops.

    Hikari: Are they dead?

    Ash: Well what do you expect? That those pokemon would faint to the almighty power of Pikachu?

    Hikari: Well... Maybe.

    Ash: Let’s go then.

    As they leave the author comes.

    Author: Deja Vu all over again. No wonder why Nintendo arn’t orginal.

    The author revives one of the Mukkuru and feeds it rare candy.

    Author: Now then, what level do you evolve at my little friend?

    TO BE CONTUINED!
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    Oh my gosh, this is pure comedy! Never read anything like it. Am so favoriting this. But No romance.

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    That Shipping Fic is so FUNNY!
    Haha... Thnx for this fic

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    Yay new chapter. XDD Funny as always. Axel from Kingdom Hearts whoo!
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    truth be told, I typed the 3rd episode after i posted the 2nd episode, it took me all night, and ash holding Hikari's wrist is a little shippy to me.

    Pokemon: Pearl Of Shinou

    Episode 3: Battle! Red Fire vs. Yellow Thunder!

    FYI: Axel is from kingdom hearts.

    Hikari and Ash arrive at the Lake of Trust, where it is ablaze with fire.

    Axel: Ash! Right on time!

    Ash: What are you doing here Axel?

    Axel: I wanna join Team Galaxy!

    Ash: They will never accept someone who is FILLER!

    Axel: Enough talk! Gyarados! Dragon Rage!

    Ash: Pikachu! Thunder Bolt!

    Axel: A weak attack won’t stop me.

    Ash: But It will stop the Gyarados!

    Axel: Huh?

    Ash: Water and Flying elements are weak against Electric attacks. Even the littlest shock will kill the serpent.

    Axel: Hm... You forgot Ash, I have fire on my side.

    Axel creates a ring of fire around the Red Gyarados.

    Ash: How did you...

    Axel: Create a ring of fire that did not extinguish in water? The author made me unstoppable.

    Ash: Oh ****. I knew I should’ve stayed at home today!

    Suddenly, a pokeball smacks Axel in the face.

    Axel: WHO THE **** ****ING *****SMACK ME WITH A ****ING BALL?

    Hikari: I DID!

    The Pokemon inside the pokeball pops out reviling to be a Korinku.

    Hikari: You Ready Kimba!

    Kimba: Rinku!

    Kimba the Korinku prepares to do Thunder.

    Axel: That won’t do **** on me.

    Hikari: Not if Pikachu combines his Thunder with Kimba’s

    Ash: I get it.

    Hikari: READY!

    Ash: OK!

    Kimba and Pikachu stand together check to check and combine the two Thunders to make one big *** thunder cloud.

    Hikari and Ash: We call this move: YELLOW THUNDER ATTACK!

    The thunder cloud sends a screeching eagle shaped thunder bolt at Axel, however, while Pikachu and Kimba were combining Thunders. Axel put his to index fingers together while Gyarados was charging up his Dragon Rage. A tiny fireball began to form atop of Axel’s two fingers, growing and growing into a big *** fireball.

    Axel: RED FIRE RAGE ATTACK!

    The dragon rage quickly transforms into a flaming hyper beam when Axel launched the fire ball. The two combined attacks hit each other and caused an explosion. When the smoke cleared, Axel and the Red Gyarados were gone.

    Hikari: What happened?

    Ash: We won.

    Old Man: HEY! You ruined a wonder of Shinou.

    Ash: Wonder?

    Old Man: Yes, It is one of the 7 wonders of Shinou and you ruined it with your thunder attack.

    Ash and Hikari: Sorry.

    Meanwhile...

    Author: Sorry Axel, but it was for your own good, I could not allow you to go on with your plans.

    Yaoi: What plans?

    Author: He was planning to bring the Gyarados to the game from whence he came and conquer the world. I would not allow that to happen.

    Yaoi: What now boss?

    Author: We got what we needed.

    The Author has a pokemon in a jar, the pokemon was Emrith.

    TO BE CONTINUED.
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    Bring DK in next! ROFL

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    2 chapters in one day. W00T!

    Pokemon: Pearl Of Shinou

    Episode 4: Date! A date in Shinou!?

    When we last left our heroes, Hikari was unexplainably given a Korinku she calls “Kimba”, and the author stole a pokemon.

    Ash and Hikari were walking in the woods after the fight they had.

    Ash: So, where did you get that pokemon?

    Hikari: Well, I got it from a strange man in a black coat. He told me to use it against Axel.

    Ash: But how does he know about Axel?

    Hikari: Beats me.

    Meanwhile...

    Yaoi: Why do we need a stupid small pokemon for?

    Author: Because they hold a special ability to summon the Space-Ruling pokemon known as Palkia.

    Yaoi: And we need Palkia because?

    Author: Because then, we will overwhelm Shinou and destroy it! Taking Ash and Hikari with them!

    Yaoi: Sir, 3 new ladies have arrived.

    Author: Send them in.

    The door opens but before the faces of the girls were seen, it focused on Ash and Hikari arriving at Masago Town.

    Ash: It’s Beautiful!

    Hikari: I go here every week to get food for my family.

    Ash: So, what do you want to do?

    Hikari: We have to do shippy stuff in order to make this a shipping story, So I have made a to do list. First thing on the list is giving you a nickname Ashy-Poo. Oh wait, I already gave you a nickname. Check. Now it’s time for a montage.

    A montage is seen as Ash and Hikari eating spaghetti and eventually they kiss, Juggling balls then make out, and see what there kids would look like if they reproduce and they kissed when the result was a pretty kid. What? All shippings have kisses.

    Later that day...

    Hikari: Ash, I love you!

    Ash: Wha?

    Hikari: It had to be either me or you to confess.

    Ash: Why the hell are you rushing this?

    Hikari: We have an entire episode to do this, and episodes have 30 minutes

    Ash: Oh.

    Then, a samurai comes.

    Samurai: So, you must be Ash Ketchem.

    Ash: What do you want and who are you?

    Samurai: I am Cam. I have heard you have alot of pokemon.

    Ash: Well, I always give them to Prof. Oak, so I could begin a new adventure.

    Cam: So you would have no trouble facing me with the one pokemon you have?

    Hikari: Lets make this more interesting! A double battle.

    Cam: Yes. Double battles are more fun.

    Cam reveals two pokeballs.

    Cam: Scyther! Scizor!

    Ash: Pikachu!

    Hikari: Kimba!

    Ash: Why do you want to battle me?

    Cam: Because I want to see how skilled you are!

    Ash: Huh?

    Cam: You might have defeated my father, Spencer, but you will need more than the power of the sun to beat me.

    Ash: Oh.

    A flashback tells how Ash had beaten Spencer’s Claydol with his Sceptile’s Solarbeam. Then the flashback ends.

    Ash: Let’s do this.

    Hikari: Ok!

    Cam: Scyther, Scizor, use Iron Claw

    Scyther and Scizor’s claws turn into claws made out of Iron.

    Ash and Hikari: Kimba, Pikachu, use Iron Tail!

    Kimba and Pikachu’s tails turn into tails made out of Iron.

    Cam, Hikari, and Ash: ATTACK!

    A big *** battle begins as the 4 pokemon attack each other. Pikachu swings his tail at Scyther but he blocks his attack with his scythe. Kimba does an overhead swing of his tail but is was grabbed by Scizor’s claws, Kimba whines in pain as Scizor’s grip gets tighter. Scizor throws Kimba against a wall. Scyther stabs Pikachu, then throws him, Pikachu hits Donkey Kong who is wearing a shirt saying, “Giving The Fans What They Want.” Donkey Kong gets ****** and throws it back at Scyther. Scyther gets hit by the thrown Pikachu and is knocked back all the way to Scizor. Scizor gets hit too and Scyther and Scizor hit a wall. Kimba and Pikachu take the chance to attack, they make a mini grey tornado.

    Ash and Hikari: We call this Move: Sword-nado!

    Scyther and Scizor get sucked in the tornado and when they came out of it, their bodies had so many scratches. They fall fainted on the floor.

    Hikari: We did it!

    Hikari then noticed a poster saying about a singing contest.

    Hikari: Look! A singing contest tonight, winner gets a rare pokemon.

    Ash: Let’s do this!

    Meanwhile...

    Author: So, you three want to be in Team Galaxy, it does not come easy. Show me your resume!

    The 3 girls hand in their resumes.

    Author: Ah, so you girls must be the Sailor Scouts I’ve been hearing about. Welcome to Team Galaxy, Mars, Saturn, and Jupiter. You girls will make an excellent addition.

    To Be Continued.
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    Awesome! Go DK! He's smarter than your average bea- er... ape

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    Pokemon: Pearl Of Shinou

    Episode 5: Song! Another Song and Dance!

    Author’s note: This episode is a song fic. Each song will be italicised to prevent confusion.

    When we last left Ash and Hikari, they went to a singing contest.

    Ash and Hikari were inside a building waiting for the contest to start.

    Meanwhile...

    Yaoi: So... what are you planning all mighty author?

    Author: We will make a songfic! Sure it might sound crazy but it’s so crazy it would work!

    Yaoi: Work with what?

    Author: Remember that pokemon I captured? The one I had in a jar? Well, we need 2 more of those pokemon, I made the song contest so I could hear about the whereabouts of the remaining 2.

    Yaoi: So that’s why you sent your lackeys Jupiter and Saturn to compete?

    Author: Yep.

    Yaoi: Nice.

    Back at the singing contest...

    Announcer: Welcome to the 1st annual Singing Contest sponsored by Serebii.net, the best Pokemon info known to mankind. We have 4 contestants, our first contestant is from Japan, please welcome, MARY!

    Jupiter comes clothed like a normal woman.

    Jupiter: Thank you. My song is “Simple and Clean”.

    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please
    Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
    It's hard to let it go

    You're giving me too many things
    Lately you're all I need
    You smiled at me and said,

    Don't get me wrong I love you
    But does that mean I have to meet your father?
    When we are older you'll understand
    What I meant when I said "No,
    I don't think life is quite that simple"

    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please
    Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
    It's hard to let it go

    The daily things
    that keep us all busy
    all confusing me that's when u came to me and said,

    Wish I could prove I love you
    but does that mean I have to walk on water?
    When we are older you'll understand
    It's enough when I say so,
    And maybe somethings are that simple

    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please
    Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
    It's hard to let it go

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
    Nothing's like before

    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please
    Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
    It's hard to let it go

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
    Nothing's like before

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all
    Nothing's like before


    Audience: W00T!

    Jupiter leaves the stage as the announcer begins to announce yet again.

    Announcer: Now, from the same place as Mary, please welcome SUE!

    Saturn wears normal clothing like Jupiter.

    Saturn: My song is “Sanctuary”

    Author’s note: Lines in {brackets} are actually reversed in the song.

    In you and I, there's a new land,
    Angels in flight,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    My sanctuary, my sanctuary,
    Where fears and lies melt away,
    Music in time,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    What's left of me,
    What's left of me now?

    I watch you fast asleep,
    All I fear means nothing,
    In you and I, there's a new land,
    Angels in flight,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    My sanctuary, my sanctuary,
    Where fears and lies melt away,
    Music in time,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    What's left of me,
    What's left of me?

    {So many ups and downs}
    My heart's a battleground
    {I need true emotions}
    {I need more affection than you know}
    {I need true emotions}

    You show me how to see
    That nothing is whole and nothing is broken,
    In you and I there's a new land,
    Angels in flight,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    My sanctuary, my sanctuary,
    Where fears and lies melt away,
    Music in time,
    {I need more affection than you know}
    What's left of me,
    What's left of me now?

    My fears, my lies..
    Melt away

    {I need more affection than you know}


    The audience screams in happiness as the announcer introduces the next person.

    Announcer: Now comes someone who is a nobody, I’m not kidding. Here’s Demyx, the Melodious Nocturne!

    Meanwhile...

    Author: HOW THE HELL DID SOMEONE FROM ORG. 13 SHOW UP AFTER AXEL GOT KILLED?

    Yaoi: Calm, don’t talk in caps. We can hear you fine.

    Author: I know, calm down. At least he’s the most defenceless member.

    Back at the singing contest...

    Demyx: Hello, Here’s my song Wind.

    Cultivate your hunger before you idealise.
    Motivate your anger to make them all realise.
    Climbing the mountain, never coming down.
    Break into the contents, never falling down.

    My knee is still shaking, like I was twelve,
    Sneaking out of the classroom, by the back door.
    A man railed at me twice though, but I didn't care.
    Waiting is wasting for people like me.

    Don't try to live so wise.
    Don't cry 'cause you're so right.
    Don't dry with fakes or fears,
    'Cause you will hate yourself in the end.

    Don't try to live so wise.
    Don't cry 'cause you're so right.
    Don't dry with fakes or fears,
    'Cause you will hate yourself in the end.

    You say, "Dreams are dreams.
    "I ain't gonna play the fool anymore."
    You say, "'Cause I still got my soul."

    Take your time, baby, your blood needs slowing down.
    Breach your soul to reach yourself before you gloom.
    Reflection of fear makes shadows of nothing, shadows of nothing.

    You still are blind, if you see a winding road,
    'Cause there's always a straight way to the point you see.

    Don't try to live so wise.
    Don't cry 'cause you're so right.
    Don't dry with fakes or fears,
    'Cause you will hate yourself in the end.

    Don't try to live so wise.
    Don't cry 'cause you're so right.
    Don't dry with fakes or fears,
    'Cause you will hate yourself in the end.


    The Audience lit candles.

    Announcer: We’ve have saved best for last, here’s Hikari!

    Hikari: I dedicate this song to Ash.

    Ash: WTF???

    Hikari:
    Out here in the quiet of the night,
    Beneath the stars and moon
    We both know we've got somethin' on our minds
    We won't admit, but it's true

    You look at me, I look away.

    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I
    don't know how to start
    I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that
    you might break my heart
    Oh, why should anything so easy, ever be so hard to do?
    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, and to
    say that, I love you.

    I practice all the thing that I could say,
    Line by line, every word
    I tell myself today could be the day,
    But every time, I lose my nerve

    I look at you, you look away

    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I
    don't know how to start
    I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that
    you might break my heart
    Oh, why should anything so easy, ever be so hard to do?
    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, and to
    say that, I love you.

    Why, do you turn away?
    It must be, you're afraid like me
    I try, but I can't pretend that I
    Don't feel for you the way I do
    Can't you see?

    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I
    don't know how to start
    I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that
    you might break my heart
    Oh, why should anything so easy, ever be so hard to do?
    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, and to
    say that, I love you.

    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I
    don't know how to start
    I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that
    you might break my heart
    Oh, why should anything so easy, ever be so hard to do?
    I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, and to
    say that, I love you.


    The audience woo.

    Announcer: Well, that’s the contest. The winner is will be tallied by the judges.

    A couple of minutes later...

    Announcer: The Winner is... Hikari!

    The audience cheers as Hikari gets a check of $123 but as she approaches Demyx interrupts the contest.

    Demyx: You might have won, but kiss my ***, I shall see you in hell.

    Demyx brings out a green dagger, and plays it like a flute.

    Announcer: What is he doing?

    Meanwhile...

    Author: ****! Just as I feared!

    Yaoi: What?

    Author: Well...

    Just as the author explains what it is he feared a giant roar is heard from Masago Town.

    Author: That could happen.

    At Masago Town there was a giant Godzilla covered in armour.

    Ash: We’re boned.

    To Be Continued.

    Author’s Copyright notes: Simple and Clean is from Kingdom Hearts, Sauntray is from Kingdom Hearts 2, Wind is from Naruto, and Misty’s Song is from Pokemon.
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    Funny, Funny, Sailor scouts? Will they be like Sailor Mars, Jupiter, and Saturn or something? This is getting interesting! a little Infraredshipping thrown in anyone?
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    I really don't understand how anyone can read this. It's in script format, it's too short, and everyone is very OOC. I'm not trying to bash you, but this needs ALOT of work.
    Under construction ^_^;;

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    You keep on writing and writing, yet your not getting any better at it.
    Read what everyone is posting, they all say: this isnt even in a proper format. You need to work more. Yet you still posting these... nah, im not gonna say it.
    if you honestly want to include humor into ur fic, go ahead. tons of people are able to do it with a proper format, just go read a few fics like rumours by masterwannabe, mylovelyego by raider, or the fic by me.
    if you are using the format to enhance your story and the atomposphere, thats okay. but 5 chapts in a row?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ranger Registeel View Post
    I really don't understand how anyone can read this. It's in script format, it's too short, and everyone is very OOC. I'm not trying to bash you, but this needs ALOT of work.
    Aggreed. Sorry, but this is one of the worst fics I've ever seen. I can bearly read it. You need better grammer. No commas were where they should've been. Second, your obivously to lazy to not use script format. Third, this was extremely bad again. I'm suprised people even like this. It's horrible.
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