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    Hey everyone! I'm Ranger Registeel. You may or may not know me from my currently on-hiatus fic Pokemon: Secret of the Sevii Islands. This is my first ever shipping fic. It's a Pokeshipping Halloween story. It will have about 10 chapters, 2 of which are already written. I plan to post a new chapter every few days and conclude it on Halloween. However, I need people to PM me to remind me to write EVERYDAY. It'll just help me out. Minor shippings are Contestshipping, Advanceshipping (GASP!), BreederShipping, Luckshipping(BrockXLucy?), and Revelationshipping. Others are so minor I can't put them xP
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    Chapter 1- A Conversation and an Invitation

    Hot’n’Sassy: So I’m having a party here at the Battle Pike on October 31st and you guys are all invited
    LoveBoulder: Of course I’ll be there my sweet and beautiful Lucy. Your hot passion will obviously make this party prevail over all others
    2theMAX: he sucks at flirting online
    SpringCutie99: Max, don’t say “sucks”……but I do agree
    LoveBoulder: Hey!!

    May laughed. Two doors down the hall, she heard her brother laughing too. Brock was usually really funny online. Although, since Lucy didn’t reject him like most other girls did, it wasn’t as funny. Oh well. At least Brock could finally be happy, Yeah right, May thought.

    “May, you have a phone call!” Caroline shouted from downstairs.

    “Who is it?” May yelled back to her mother.

    “Drew!” her mother replied.

    May smiled and typed ‘brb’ before picking up the phone.


    MistyEyedPrincess: Is there a theme to this party?
    Hot’n’Sassy: Halloween of course!


    Misty slapped her forehead. Lucy may be a powerful trainer, but her brains were definitely limited. Misty was reminded her of her sister Daisy. She had been training with her for a while now and had become a worthy opponent for most challengers. However, she was still as ditzy as ever.


    Thunderbolt2000: I think she meant do the costumes have a specific theme
    Hot’n’Sassy: No. You can wear anything from an underused Wurmple costume to a classic Dracula outfit


    Misty sighed. There’s a reason Wurmple costumes are underused.


    SketchingOranges: Who else is invited?
    EmeraldCurse666 has entered the chat room.
    SpringCutie99: Guys, that’s Drew
    EmeraldCurse666: Sup guys
    Hot’n’Sassy: Drew, you wanna come to a Halloween party at the Battle Pike?
    EmeraldCurse666: Sure.
    EmeraldCurse666: Do I need to bring a date?


    Everyone stared at their computer screens.

    Brock’s eyes filled with hearts as he thought of the possibilities.

    Max sighed and seemed indifferent.

    May gasped in a happy surprise, half knowing what Drew had in mind.

    Tracey frowned. He didn’t have many female friends.

    Misty’s eyes lit up. She had already decided who she wanted as a date.

    Ash felt an odd sensation slowly build up inside of him. He felt very strange and awkward. What’s going on? he thought.


    Hot’n’Sassy: You don’t have to…..but I guess if you guys are then I’ll tell all my guests to…..
    SketchingOranges: I object!
    Hot’n’Sassy: You can find a date while you’re at the party if you have too.
    SketchingOranges: Fine…..Who else did you invite?
    Hot’n’Sassy: Well, the other frontier brains are invited. So are the Kanto and Johto gym leaders. I’ve also invited some people that you guys have met along the road…..
    MistyEyedPrincess: Oh God, who?
    Hot’n’Sassy: Sorry guys my ‘business screen name’ is getting tons of messages from my fans so I g2g
    MistyEyedPrincess: TELL ME WHO NOW D:<


    Misty shook the computer screen and screamed. She and Ash had met some odd people during their travels.

    Thunderbolt2000: Misty, it can’t be that bad
    Hot’n’Sassy: I’ll tell you three
    Hot’n’Sassy: Melody, Casey, and Sakura
    Thunderbolt2000: NOT THEM!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU? WHY DIDN’T YOU ASK US FIRST????????


    Ash yelled angrily at the computer. Three people that had a crush on him would be at the same party. Asking him to dance. Following him.

    Melody had liked him from the second they met. It took Casey and Sakura longer. As they had grown into their teenage years, both had gradually started to like him.

    “ANABEL!” Ash screamed as he remembered she would also be there. Anabel was a Frontier Brain that Ash had lost to once before beating her. She had an enormous crush on him. He hadn’t found out about it till about two years ago when he received a large Valentine Card in the mail from her.


    Hot’n’Sassy has left the chat room.
    MistyEyedPrincess: Not that bad, huh Ash? [/sarcasm]
    LoveBoulder: All those girls from across Kanto and Johto…..it’s a dream come true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    2theMAX: How do we eject him from this chat room?
    LoveBoulder: >:P I need to go find a costume….bye everyone
    2theMax: bye
    EmeraldCurse666: by
    Thunderbolt2000: cya Brock
    MistyEyedPrincess: bye bye Brock <3
    SpringCutie99: byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee <3
    LoveBoulder has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: he didn’t wait till I said bye
    SpringCutie99: aw poor Tracey
    SpringCutie99: Do u need a hug?
    SketchingOranges: No, but a date for the party would be nice
    SpringCutie99 has left the chat room.
    EmeraldCurse666 has left the chat room.
    2theMAX has left the chat room.
    Thunderbolt2000 has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Misty?
    MistyEyedPrincess: Uhhhhhhhhh
    MistyEyedPrincess has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Always me
    SketchingOranges has left the chat room. Chat room 45336729190 is ended.


    Misty opened a new IM window. Before typing anything, she looked at her small calendar beside her computer monitor. After seeing she was free tomorrow, she typed:


    MistyEyedPrincess: hey Ash, you wanna check out the Safari Zone tomorrow? They just redesigned it
    Thunderbolt2000: I wish I could Mist, but May just asked me to go to the Dewford Island beach with her tomorrow


    Misty looked at the computer in angry shock. Furiously she typed


    MistyEyedPrincess: Why would you wanna go so far away to see May when you could travel a few miles to see me?!?
    Thunderbolt2000: Sorry Misty….how about later this week?
    MistyEyedPrincess: I’m busy all this week
    Thunderbolt2000: How about next week then? We can go on Tuesday
    MistyEyedPrincess: Alright….see you then
    Thunderbolt2000: Great…..g2g cya then
    MistyEyedPrincess: Bye Ash
    Thunderbolt2000 has signed off.
    MistyEyedPrincess: :-*


    Misty looked at the screen slightly annoyed. Her last smiley was sent right after he signed off. That’s not so bad I guess. At least he won’t find out how I feel about him…not yet at least.

    Tomorrow he’ll be in for a big surprise, Misty thought sneakily.

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    So? Advice? Comments? Suggestions?
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    I liked the online chat and I really like their screen names! LoveBoulder. xD

    Oooh! I want to know what the big surprise will be! And I want to see the girls hanging all over Ash!

    "SketchingOranges: he didn’t wait till I said bye
    SpringCutie99: aw poor Tracey
    SpringCutie99: Do u need a hug?
    SketchingOranges: No, but a date for the party would be nice
    SpringCutie99 has left the chat room.
    EmeraldCurse666 has left the chat room.
    2theMAX has left the chat room.
    Thunderbolt2000 has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Misty?
    MistyEyedPrincess: Uhhhhhhhhh
    MistyEyedPrincess has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Always me
    SketchingOranges has left the chat room. Chat room 45336729190 is ended."

    I loved that part! Tracey is so lonesome And Misty just left the room.

    This is a really good start!! Can't wait until the next chap!


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    It's pretty cool. especially cince it's all written in IM's. It seems very porimising.

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    Thanks guys! I'm currently working on Chapter 3, so when I finish that, I'll post Chapter 2. I know my logic is slightly odd xD
    Under construction ^_^;;

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    This story looks like it'll turn out to be very good. I also like the fact that you'll end it on Halloween. Very creative. Can't wait for the next chapter
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    I can't wait for the next chappie!!!!

    ooo ash is in trooouuuuublllllllllllllle.

    Very creative idea, having the entire message on IM.

    Keep writing!!!

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    Chapter 2 will be up tomorrow or Monday. I'm glad you guys like it so far. Thanks for the great reviews!
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    It's funny and cool! Yay for Halloween! Chatroom style........Interesting idea.
    Mint, your cuteness has earned you my bishie!

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    Aww, that's cute, having the first chapter have the friends chatting online. (I'm lucky to recognize the chatspeak, seeing as I'm not allowed on chatrooms.) Poor Tracey needs a hug. It would be funny if Pikachu was chatting online with them. 8D Ash taught him how to type. (Ignore me, I'm just acting dumb right now.)

    Got my attention, all right! Can't wait for chapter two! (Though I'm only allowed on Saturdays, so I might be able to reply at the ending of the story, maybe.)

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    hey i just thought of something...there's Anabel, Casey, Sakura, and Melody, and all of them had a crush on Ash, but what about Macey? You know, the girl with the quilava that Ash battled in the Johto championships? It wouldn't be a pokeshippy story without her getting in the way!

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    Ah but you missed the part were Lucy says
    Hot’n’Sassy: I’ll tell you three
    So, Macey may just enter
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    Default A Shipload of Ideas...

    How could you say Abilityshipping is minor?! It's the chief rival in hint-strength to Pokeshipping(IMO)! (Or at least it will be once the eps are dubbed.)

    I never really saw Melody or Sakura as rivals for Ash's affection. The latter being quite young (though not out of range), and the former seeming to merely toy with Ash to get a rise out of Misty. (Not saying she shouldn't repeat her performance...)

    *sees "Breedershipping" on the list* What's Lucy doing bringing down one of her chief rivals for Brock? (Granted, she may not know it until the party... It would be ironic if one dressed as an Officer Jenny, and the other as a Nurse Joy.)

        Spoiler:- The Pyramid Saga:


        Spoiler:- EDIT: More from the end of BF!:


    You may want to bring in Gary as well...

        Spoiler:- Final Episode of Battle Frontier:


    And with Tracey as he is this chapter, a little Replacementshipping hit is necesary. Although you are free to bring Daisy down as well if you think Handymanshipping has half a shot. Still, TraceyXMelody would be a good enough help on its own...

    And if you do decide to bring down Daisy and bring up Melody, you might as well let her sisters join her and bring up Rudy and his sister. The latter for Max's sake (Though he'd already be covered by Sakura) and the former... well... he may decide on an older Sensational Sister in the end...

    And where's Duplica?!

    Finally, I had an idea involving the Legend of Raikou kids... but I gave you enough already with Gary, Duplica, Rudy, and the Sisters... EDIT: Besides, When plumbing for humor, It's easy to forget that you emphisised Pokeshipping in the classification. So giving Ash a new girl-to-run-from, which comes with 2 Assassins of her own, would be overkill... And you would need to finish it for Halloween, after all. Except perhaps for Epilouges, which would still be good for All Souls' Day (2 days later...) Just need to get the Climax done for Halloween, really.
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    XD Best thing ever.

    I love this fic already. Any hope for future chapters containting IM convos?

    And I hope you can finish it before Halloween. :P

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    Ay, Tom, you've opened up a whole new world of possibilities...
    O_O

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        Spoiler:- HUGE Spoiler:

    Chapter 2 will be posted tonight.
    I like your ideas Tom Greenville...I may use some
    Under construction ^_^;;

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    As promised:
    Chapter 2 - Jealousy at the Beach

    Ash was on a boat going to Dewford Island. It was 11:30 AM. The warm sun cooked his bare forearms. A cool sea breeze blew from the north. Ash knew a beautiful day was waiting. He was think about having fun with his friends, May and Max. May hadn’t actually said Max would be there, but Ash thought it was safe to assume he would be.

    Ash heard a splash and ran to the side of the boat. For a brief second, he thought he saw a shadow in the water. “Pikachupi!” Pikachu shrieked happily.

    “What is it, buddy?” Ash asked the electric rat. Pikachu pointed to the water. The shadow was gone. Ash turned and walked back to where he was sitting. He forgot about the shadow as soon as a waitres came by and asked him what he wanted for brunch.

    Pikachu kept a close eye on the water as Ash began to eat…

    Misty swam up to the surface on the other side of the boat. Azurill followed. “Azurill, don’t use Splash! Ash might find us!” she whispered firmly. She looked at her water proof PokeGear for a map. She could tell they were almost to Dewford.

    “Gyarados, let’s go!” she said throwing up a Pokeball. Her water serpent appeared. “Let’s Dive and get to Dewford fast!” She grabbed on to the fin on its head as it dove down. Azurill clung to her ponytail.

    Gyarados swam down and found a current. It was moving fast. It moved into the current and started beating its tail fins to make them go even faster.

    Misty held her breath with difficulty. She had gotten up extra early so she could beat Ash to the island and surprise him. Her tiredness made holding her breath much harder than usual.

    Azurill seemed to pick up on this and used a Bubble attack. A large bubble surrounded Misty’s head. She breathed in relief.

    Misty looked at her PokeGear map again. The current they were in looped around Dewford and then went to Slateport City. Misty then looked up and realized they had started the loop.

    “Gyarados, go back up,” she said. The sound echoed in her bubble. Gyarados started to ascend.

    As they reached the surface, Misty spotted the boat several miles away. She had enough time to “get ready” for Ash’s arrival.

    Ash climbed off the ship. He walked down a long wooden pier. Pikachu was on his shoulder looking at the water. He raised his nose and sniffed the air looking for a trace of…

    “Hey Pikachu! Look it’s May!” Ash yelled and began running toward the beach. Pikachu lost the brief scent. It jumped to the ground sniffed again before following Ash.

    “Ash! Pikachu!” May shouted happily as she noticed them. Pikachu got to her first and knocked her over. Ash tripped as he got near and rolled across the sand and landed next to his two laughing friends.

    “Ash, it’s so great to see you again!” May said cheerfully has she stood up and brushed the sand off her clothes.

    “It’s great to see you too! Can we go swimming now?” Ash said.

    “Someone’s in a rush today! The changing tents are over there,” she said pointing to a couple of red tents near the life guard stand.

    “I’ll be right back,” Ash said as he ran off to the changing tents. Pikachu’s ears and nosr perked up at the same time. It darted after Ash.

    “Misty, he’s coming right now!” the blue haired lifeguard said.

    “Thanks Brawly!” she said as she ducked into the ditch she had dug behind the changing tents. She saw Ash run into the one closest to the lifeguard stand.

    “Corphish, Dig into that tent!” she whispered to Ash’s orange crab Pokémon. It began to shovel out mounds of sand and soon there was a small tunnel that led right under the tent.

    “Now, Crabhammer!” The crab used its claw to smash the sand directly under the tent. Ash fell through the floor. His hat landed on Misty’s head. She was happy to see his shirt was off.

    “Hey Ash!” she said smiling broadly. Ash looked up at her in confusion. His look then changed to amazement, and then he laughed.

    “I guess you really wanted to see me today, huh Misty?” he said as he laughed again.

    “You know how persistent I am,” she said slyly. She winked at him and said, “Corphish was a big help.”

    “Thanks so much Corphish,” Ash said sarcastically with a laugh.

    “Ash is so hot without a shirt on,” Misty thought to herself. “Wait till he sees me in my bikini,” she thought spicily.

    “Can I get change alone now?” Ash said pointing to the tunnel. “Otherwise we’ll never get to swim. That is why you followed me here, right?” Ash said raising an eyebrow.

    “Of course,” Misty said as fast as possible. She turned and headed out the tunnel again. As she climbed out of the hole she smiled. Is Ash trying to flirt with me?

    “Thanks Brawly,” she said once more as she passed her fellow Gym Leader. She took off the baggy white t-shirt and the blue shorts she was wearing to reveal a tiny yellow bikini. She stood in front of Ash’s tent waiting for him to come out.

    A minute later he appeared wearing a dark navy bathing suit with a jungle green flower design on it. As he laid his eyes on Misty, his eyes widened and he opened his mouth to speak, but nothing came out.

    Misty posed before turning around and running for the water. Ash was left speechless. Misty looks…hot.

    He continued to stare at her running figure for another few seconds before following.

    “Hey Ash!” a female voice yelled from the other side of the beach.

    Ash turned around in confusion and saw May. He had forgotten about her.

    “Ash, come on!” she shouted. Ash ran to the other side of the beach. “Shouldn’t we wait for Max before we start swimming?” Ash asked, hoping to distract May while he went to Misty.

    “Max isn’t here. Now let’s go.” She said as she ran into the shallow water.

    Ash was speechless. May had planned to see Ash all alone. Did she… like him? It hadn’t seemed like it last night on the computer. It had seemed like she liked Drew then. But… he didn’t feel the same about her. He was more attracted to…

    “Ash!” two voices yelled, interrupting his thoughts. One came from Misty on the other side of the beach and the other came from May a few feet out into the water. He looked between both of them before going to the middle of the beach and jumping into the water there.

    As Ash expected, both girls began swimming toward him. In seconds, both were next to him. They noticed each other and May gawked while Misty smirked.

    “What is she doing here?!” May asked disgustedly.

    “She followed me.”

    “I can’t stay away from my Ashypoo,” Misty said jokingly.

    May bit her tongue to stop the vicious insult she had and instead plastered on a fake smile and said “Let’s play Marco Polo.”

    The three spent the whole day “having fun.” When Ash wasn’t looking, Misty and May glared at each other.

    At the end of the day, as Ash and Misty were about to leave, May pulled Ash aside. “I had a great day. Even with the unexpected additions, I still enjoyed being with you. See you next Friday at the party,” she said sincerely. Then, noticing Misty was watching, she glared at her before kissing Ash on the cheek. The look of shock on Misty’s face almost caused her to burst out laughing.

    Ash seemed surprised too, but not nearly as much. He replied with a simple “Bye” and walked to where Misty was waiting. She linked arms with him as she shot May one final glare. No one messes with me when it comes to Ash. Nobody.
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    Chapter 3 will come Friday or Saturday
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    ooo...things are getting good. Funny, I thought May liked Drew too. Or maybe she's just trying to get Drew jealous or something...

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    Whoaaaaa..... my whole opinion of May has just changed. jk :P I can't wait for what you have in store later on in this story. This was definitely a good chapter as you could feel the tension between both of them. Good job and keep it up!
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    ha, great chapter, so short though, oh well, im a fast reader. Loved it. anyway, i'm lamost outta time, bye.

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    Nice story. ^.^

    Nice beginning, but I'm starting to think this is going to turn into the same fics where "Haruka & Kasumi fight for Satoshi" :< One, I'm tired of seeing the same plot, two, I'M A CONTESTSHIPPER! XD //shot//

    You should add some twisters to the story, not the same plot with two girls fighting over Satoshi and yadda yadda...

    There were no grammer mistakes though.

    ...Now get Haruka to like Shuu or I'll kill you. XD Kidding, it's up to you to do whatever with the story.

    Though Haruka seemed really happy when Shuu called her...//still has hope for some Contestshipping// *shot*

    But nevertheless, great job on the story and I can't wait for more. ^.^
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    This is so funny and enjoyable to read ^^ keep up the good work ne? ^_^
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    Cecilia-chan ! ^.^ Thank you for the review! The next chapter is a huge turning point in Ash's love life. Well, kind of. It's more of a realization. I'll post it very late tonight or sometime tomorrow.
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    *claps*
    WOW, Ranger, that was an awesome beggining for your fic.
    And did you say this is your first ever? Doesn't seem like it that's for sure.
    *laughs* Omigosh, the 'ole cat fight between May and Misty, a very nice classic, and you seemed to master it.
    And the screen names you made up for them are hillarious. Although I do find it strange that May and Max are in the same chatroom and are sitting at completely different computers, but still, a nice touch.
    If it hadon't been for the commercial I saw of Pokemon battle frontier, I would have asked who Lucy was, but now I know.
    And btw, it's a good thing that Ash knows all of those girls have a crush on him and that's he's finally seeming to notice Misty's figure.
    And his reaction to Max not being there at the beack with May, classic.
    Although part of me wishes that Misty hadn't come and May and Ash had some alone time. Or that Misty came in the middle of when May was about to make a move and pulled Ash away or something.
    But that's the advanceshipping side of me for ya.
    I know you've talked about this fic on the pokeshipping thread(you did, didn't you?) And I'm happy that I finally decided to check it out because it was so worth the read.
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    Hey everyone! I'm Ranger Registeel. You may or may not know me from my currently on-hiatus fic Pokemon: Secret of the Sevii Islands. This is my first ever shipping fic. It's a Pokeshipping Halloween story. It will have about 10 chapters, 2 of which are already written. I plan to post a new chapter every few days and conclude it on Halloween. However, I need people to PM me to remind me to write EVERYDAY.
    I'll remind you if I can because you CANNOT LEAVE THIS FIC AT ALLLLLL!!!! Because its off to a good start and I want to know what happens in the end.
    Minor shippings are Contestshipping, Advanceshipping (GASP!), BreederShipping, Luckshipping(BrockXLucy?), and Revelationshipping. Others are so minor I can't put them xP
    Can't wait for the other shippings to come in!
    Oh yeah
    GASP indeed!
    SketchingOranges: he didn’t wait till I said bye
    SpringCutie99: aw poor Tracey
    SpringCutie99: Do u need a hug?
    SketchingOranges: No, but a date for the party would be nice
    SpringCutie99 has left the chat room.
    EmeraldCurse666 has left the chat room.
    2theMAX has left the chat room.
    Thunderbolt2000 has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Misty?
    MistyEyedPrincess: Uhhhhhhhhh
    MistyEyedPrincess has left the chat room.
    SketchingOranges: Always me
    SketchingOranges has left the chat room. Chat room 45336729190 is ended.
    Awe, poor Tracy, but it's so funny thogh. I get the feeling you don't like Tracy.

    Anyway, thats it for my review!
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    Uza-chan! YAY now all my friends are reviewing ^.^ I'm glad you liked it! Chapter 3 is in the works. I'm about 3/4 done with it. I'll post it tonight. Expect Chapter 4 tomorrow or Monday.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ranger Registeel View Post
    “Ash is so hot without a shirt on,” Misty thought to herself.
    Misty posed before turning around and running for the water. Ash was left speechless. Misty looks…hot.
    8D Those made me laugh.

    Cute chapter! I smell a cat fight in the nearby future for Ash. >:3 Muah ha ha, can't wait for THAT! Aw, man, chapter three's coming tonight, and I won't be able to come back on until next week! ;_; That sucks...

    ^_^ Aw well. I'll catch up next Saturday. Can't wait!

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    *Kutie Pie* Please be kind to midgets!
    Winner of Best Pokémon/Pokémon Fic of 2013 in the Shipping Oscars
    Current Chapter: Chapter Ten - 3/17/14 / Current: Last Chance - 11/3/11 - Chapter 20 progress: 75%
    I survived Pupa.

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