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    WOO! New fic for meeeee! Contestshipping as pure as the sea!!! ...Which isn't very much if you think about it...ah, well. This is rated G as i don't know what I'm going to do and I don't want to corrupt minds.

    Unfortunatly, this is the first chapter but the next won't be up fo another week or so as I'm going on meh hols. I hope you all like it and don't think the title is weird!

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    Chapter One

    May Maple sat with her bare-footed feet dangling into the water of a large lake. She was currently on her own in the new region of the Mirayan islands. Max had gone on his journey a long time ago, Brock had finally found true love with a large-chested blonde yet smart girl who actually found him funny and Ash and Pikachu had gone to train with the elite four. She still kept in touch with them on the phone but she was incredibly lonely inside at times.

    She sighed and swirled her feet around in the water, blurring the water. This was one of those times. She took a bite of the chocolate bar she was eating and gazed down into the water again. She then saw someone she hadn’t seen in over a year reflected there, smirking down at her. She nearly choked on the chocolate if it weren’t for him thumping on her back with a worried expression on his face. When she swallowed it, she gasped and turned to face him.

    “D-Drew?!” She asked. He smirked at her and gave his hair a flick, just like he used to. Drew hadn’t changed.

    “Obviously,” He said in his silky-smooth voice. May gasped again at the intensity of it. The last time she had seen him, he looked just like boy-Drew. Now he was man-Drew and he was…fantastic. His shoulders had become wider and he had subtle muscle from his chest to his arms to even his legs. She gulped and then blushed, coming to realise what she had just been doing. “It’s nice to see you May.” He said, smiling slightly.

    “R-really?” she asked him again. Drew could say the exact same things about May too. Her hips had widened, her hair was now just nearing her waist and lets just say she had become a lot more “Developed”. Although Drew did nothing to show it, he found May very attractive. He shook himself mentally.

    “Yeah,” He said, smirking again. “It’ll be a pleasure to beat you again!” He s******ed. May got more angry.

    “WHY YOU LITTLE-” She got broken ff by Drew shoving a Rose into her face, almost pricking her with its thorns. She paused and then took it. She looked at it curiously. “Where do you get all these things?!” She asked him. He shrugged like he didn’t even know. Like they just appeared.

    “So, where are your friends and brother? They ditch you?” He smirked but may didn’t find it funny at all.

    “NO!” She yelled at him with tears stinging her eyes. She threw the rose at his feet. “Max went on his journey, Brock went home and Ash’s with the Elite four!!! So, in fact, yes! You were right! They did ditch me! Thanks for reminding me you jerk!!!” she then turned around and ran away. Sprinted more like. People watched her run off behind a hill and then turned back to glare at Drew. He put his hand to his face.

    “Me and my big mouth…” He said.
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    Drew strode down the sidewalk with his hands in his pockets looking half in front, half at the floor. He felt terribly guilty about what happened with May.

    “So her friends left her?” He thought. “Maybe I can do something to make her feel better…” He stopped in the middle of walking when he realised what he had just thought. He shook it off. “It’s just because I feel guilty, It’s just because I feel guilty, It’s just because I feel guilty…” He thought to himself over and over again to jam it into his head.
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    May sat on her bed in the pokemon center, sobbing.

    “Stupid Drew…” She thought angrily. She then tossed her feet over the edge of the bed and went outside, locking the door on her way out. She walked down the stairs to the videophones. She sat at one and dialled a number she knew very well. She was greeted by a literally red haired man who was smiling at her.

    “Hey May,” He said. “I suppose you want to talk to Ash?” May nodded and the all-knowing Lance smirked. May looked sadly at the floor at that. “What’s up, that way I can tell him.” He said.

    “J-just tell him it’s about an annoying green haired guy…” May said timidly.

    “ASH!!!” Lance yelled from the phone. He had stepped out and yelled out the door towards the battlefeild, where he knew Ash would be. “IT’S MAY!!! SHE’S HAVING A CRICIS AGAIN!!!” He finished. Ash ran straight up to them, sweating with an exhausted Pikachu on his shoulder.

    “What’s happened this time?” He asked. May called by the week with something wrong. She called him during the week as well but only to say hi to him and Pikachu. This was serious time. She always had something to cry about: Feeling alone, worrying about Max, her pokemon, her battling or contest ribbons.

    “Some green haired dude.” Lance replied. Ash gulped worriedly.

    “This is bad…” He said. Lance looked confused. “his name’s Drew and he’s a coordinator like her. They’re bitter rivals and he’s always insulting her…but sometimes he gives her roses and advice…on good day.”

    “Roses?” Lance asked. “Sounds like someone likes May.” He said.

    “Ya think?” Ash said, smiling in happiness for his friend. “Who?” He asked.

    “Drew, you dolt! Now go talk to her-she’s waiting and crying!” Lance said, giving him a push.
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    May, waiting had gazed at her new PokeNav from her parents. It had all sorts of stuff in it but the part she liked the most was her pictures that she had taken. There was one of Ash, Pikachu, both of them, Brock, Max and all the people she had met since getting it. There was also one of all five of them:Max, Ash, Pikachu, Brock and herself, in a picture, grinning. She was a long way from that now.

    She looked at a map of the Mirayan islands: she was at Beginners point at the moment after getting off the ferry. She had participated ina contest and won gracefully…too bad that the Mirayan circuit was longer and took a whole seven ribbons to enter the grand festival. That, and the Beginners point contest was far most the easiest, she had heard.

    “May?” A voice asked. She joyously turned around to see the faces of her best friend and his pokemon. She picked up the receiver and belted out a massive wail.

    “WAAAAAHHHH!!!”

    “May, may! Come on, it’ll be alright!” Ash said.

    “Pikapika!” His yellow rodent friend added as worried as Ash was.

    “Now what’s this about Drew?” Ash asked one May had calmed down a bit.

    “W-well, I think he’s in the c-contest too,” May sniffed. “A-and he asked me where y-you guys were…a-and then he asked if you d-ditched me a-and…” May burst into tears again, causing Ash to hold his end of the phone at an arms length. “S-sorry…” May stammered.

    “It’s okay. Drew should never of said that!” Ash said, angrily. “We didn’t ditch you! We all went out separate ways. We knew we had to at some point,” He smiled. “Drew’s a pompous moron. Don’t listen to him.” May giggled.

    “Thanks Ash,” She said, gratefully. “You’re the thing that keeps me going in this crazy place. But you shouldn’t call Drew a moron…he’s not. He’s really smart…and he looks kinda cute too!” She giggled. Not known to her, Drew was behind a pillar and blushed at that last remark.

    “Where’s your next stop?” Ash asked her.

    “Moonstone island!” May replied, cheerfully. “It’s shaped like a moon and hosts loads of moons stones and places where you can capture pokemon that have been evolved by moon stones. I’m going to catch a load! I’m already setting my sights on an Umbreon, Espeon and a Clefable!” Ash smiled.

    “Gary used to have an Umbreon…he probably stil does…I should call him sometime. He’s working on pre-historic pokemon resuscitation or something…gotta go now. Gotta train!” He said. May smiled and waved him off, smiling. She leapt off her chair in a cheery mood and whacked straight into someone much taller than her’s forehead, almost knocking her down but they grabbed her by the waist to save her the uncomfortable trip. She looked up to see a head of green hair. When he saw her, he grinned. She screamed, causing him to drop her.

    “Oww…..” She said. Drew outstretched hs hand to help her get up. She gladly took it and got up. They both did nothing for a while, still holding the others hand. About two minutes passed them by without any sign of life until they both released at the same time, blushing like tomatoes.

    “M-may?” Drew asked, once he’d gotten over the outrageously awkward moment. She, however, had not and was still blushing a lovely shade of pink. “W-well, I felt kinda guilty over what happened back at the lake so I just wanted to ask you something…do ya want to travel with me?” He blushed again, as did May.

    “Do you mean it?” She asked. “You’re not doing this just to set me up, are you?” she asked him suspiciously. He shook his head.

    “Nope. I’m saying we bury the hatchet…whatever it was. That’s not going to stop me cracking on your coordinating skills but that’s the wonder of Drew Andrews. So, you in?” He asked her, his arm outstretched again in as a white flag, a truce, a sign of almost friendship. May paused for a second and looked up a the boy, then back at his hand. She paused again and then grinned. She slapped her hand against his and then shook it.

    “I’m in. This is a truce,” She said. “A sign of an almost-friendship. And don’t think I won’t come up with wittier comebacks!” She laughed.

    “I won’t hold that one if I were you, my insults are pretty witty.” He said, flicking his hair. May wacked him on the back of the head, or at least tried to seeing as though he dodged it at the last second. “Missed me.” He laughed. She laughed along with him.

    “Come on, you moron. You can share my room tonight. That gave me two beds.” She said. Drew’s heart immediately sped up at the thought of being alone in a room with only him and May in their pyjamas, which for him was shorts, leaving his muscled chest for the world to see…if the world was there, that is. He thought about May’s nightwear...what clothes could she possibly wear to make his heart pound out of its mind. That would, of course, happen tonight and every night from then on. He knew it. He mentally shook himself for the second time that day, the third time he had to come to his sences and all of those times had something to do with May.

    “What is happening to me?!” He asked himself as he followed may down the corridor towards her room…
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    Oh noez!!! Drew in a romm with May?! Alone?! What will happen?!

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    Whoooooa, Nelly! Shuu and Haruka in a room together, alone? And what's this with Satoshi actually understanding people's problems? My gosh, what has the world come to?

    It seems a bit out of character, but oh well. Add me to the PM listeh if there's one- which there probably is, knowing you. ^_^

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    Yeah, I just wanted to get the piccie across that Drew liked May but hasn't realised it and visa-versa. It'll have more insults later! But Ash is still clueless as you can see where he asked who likes May. Doy.

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    What is happening, Drew asked. Well, I know what's happening! Drew is falling in love! WHEE! Good job FR, another fic out from you and I'm already ready to beg for ten chapters...though i won't. No quickiness points for me today, but oh well. I loved how Lance told Ash about May's problem and how he thinks that Drew likes May. Ash is so clueless! Add me to your wonderful pm list, please.
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    Awsome, can't wait till next chapter!!
    so.....May+drew+in a room together=? (i dunno, anything can happen).
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    Thank you two so much! My reviewers are sooo nice!

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    Shuu and Haruka sitting in a room
    K I S S I N... *got hit by both of them*
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    Me: Nah. I won't :P

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    the story was really cool, it seems that may and drew are going to do it... can you add me on your PM list plz?

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    Yay!I finally get too review at the begining of some story! x) I love it so far.
    May and Drew...alone..in a room... xD This shall be interesting. Add me too your PM list, eh?
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    It sure does sound interesting, and I like how Ash immediatly (do you spell it like that?) knew something was wrong when Lance mentioned "some green haired dude" =P. May and Drew in one room?? There sure are going to be some shippy moments =3 can't wait!! oh, and can I be added to the PM list please??

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    nice, i like it. wow drew and may in one room?????!!!! (sorry about that) =) can't wait for the next chapter.

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    Thankies everyone for the nice comments! More soon, I promise!

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    My review of my favourite bits!

    Brock had finally found true love with a large-chested blonde yet smart girl who actually found him funny
    You found someone for brock? AMAZING! O.o

    “Obviously,” He said in his silky-smooth voice. May gasped again at the intensity of it. The last time she had seen him, he looked just like boy-Drew. Now he was man-Drew and he was…fantastic. His shoulders had become wider and he had subtle muscle from his chest to his arms to even his legs.
    Ooooh...he sounds very nice, if only they could grow up like this in the anime...*sigh*

    “ASH!!!” Lance yelled from the phone. He had stepped out and yelled out the door towards the battlefeild, where he knew Ash would be. “IT’S MAY!!! SHE’S HAVING A CRICIS AGAIN!!!” He finished. Ash ran straight up to them, sweating with an exhausted Pikachu on his shoulder.

    “What’s happened this time?” He asked. May called by the week with something wrong.
    *chuckles*

    “Sounds like someone likes May.” He said.

    “Ya think?” Ash said, smiling in happiness for his friend. “Who?” He asked.

    “Drew, you dolt! Now go talk to her-she’s waiting and crying!” Lance said, giving him a push.
    LOL, typical Ash, I was really able to imagine that scene!

    “Thanks Ash,” She said, gratefully. “You’re the thing that keeps me going in this crazy place. But you shouldn’t call Drew a moron…he’s not. He’s really smart…and he looks kinda cute too!” She giggled. Not known to her, Drew was behind a pillar and blushed at that last remark.
    Naughty Drew having an evesdrop...Ash is being like the mentor he really should have turned into near the end of Hoenn and during BF.

    “I won’t hold that one if I were you, my insults are pretty witty.” He said, flicking his hair. May wacked him on the back of the head, or at least tried to seeing as though he dodged it at the last second. “Missed me.” He laughed. She laughed along with him.
    Getting flirty already!

    Loving this fic and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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    You kinda just tripple posted! Thanks for the lovely comments but I'm not doing any work on this at the moment. i have to work at top speed for my christmas fic!!!

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    Yeah, sorry about that ^^ Twas my computer, my internet connection and a rushed me having an argument but I've delete 2 so it's all as normal.

    I likes the sound of this christmas fic!

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    OMG so many people to add, so little time. But what i do have time for is to give you all what you want. ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!! YAY!

    Pounding Hearts Chappie 2
    The day after


    Drew woke up before May that morning. He opened his left eye first and then the right and yawned. He then remembered last night and how he had gone to bed early to make sure he wouldn't make May...uncomfortable. He rubbed his shoulder for some reason. it hurt mysteriously.

    "May..." he mumbled. at that, something let out a loud growl. He first thought it must of been a dog pokemon that had gotten in the room somehow. He looked over the bed, expecting a Houndoom or something but found May instead.

    She was sprawled out on the floor, obviously from falling off her bed in the night. He looked at her for a while, subcontiously. He scanned her full and through, gazing at her messy brown hair and thin yet curvy figure. then, something unexpected happened. He found out where the growling came from. May opened her mouth and let out a snore that could probably break a window.

    He sweatdropped and fell over anime-style. He then heard grunts and yawns and saw may's smiling face peering over him.

    "Good morning sleepy head!" She smiled at him.

    "I am not the sleepy one," Drew laughed to himself over may's little..."Fault". "You are. And has anybody ever told you that you snore like a wild Houndoom? I honestly thought we were under attack by savage dog pokemon!" He grinned. May pouted, picked up her pillow and whacked him with it. He play fell over. "Ow! the pain! Oh, god may why did you do that to me?! I'll have to get my Flygon to avenge me!!!" *A/N I just had to put that in. * Drew said, clutching his stomach in fake agony. may laughed, the first time she had done in so many long weeks and weeks. Drew smiled at that.

    "Oh no, not the flygon! Anything but the Flygon!!!" May laughed. "Please have mercy, oh great Drew!" She begged. she was a pretty good actress, Drew thought.

    "Hmmmm, well I shall have to see about that...HA!" Drew picked up his pillow and whacked her over the head. "GOTCHA!" He yelled. May laughed and picked up her pillow again. "Oh, i see we're ready to duel!" He said, grinning. May picked up the pillow and lunged at him, hitting him head on and sending him actually into the bed. He groaned in pain and she gasped. she ran over to him.

    "Drew! What happened! Oh I'm so sorry! And that makes me feel even more guilty about poking you last night!" She said.

    "Poked me?" Drew said, still in pain.

    "Yeah, you looked kinda weird all sprawled out and I was boooored. I'm so sorry!" she said to him.

    "Ah-ha! I knew it was you!" Drew said, getting up suddenly and picking May up. He whisked her head and torso over his broad shoulders. he had been lying about being hurt! "This is your punishment!!!" He laughed, swirling himself and May around but as may was dangling off his shoulder she got the most impact.

    "I think I'm going to puke!!!" She yelled. They could both hear knocking and so Drew, with may still on him, went to the door and opened it. His face wrinkled into a stipeful frown.

    "It's you!" He yelled.

    "It's who? It's who?!" May yelled.

    "Drew! And May! Or May's butt at least because that's all i can see! I never knew you two were together!" a girlish voice said. May pondered on who it was. It cirtainly sounded familiar.

    "We're not." Drew growled.

    "Well of cource you are or you wouldn't be sharing a room!" He said, lauighing. May gasped and realised who it was.

    Harley.

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    Oh noez!!! Not Haarii!!! Anyone but him!!!

    Mistakes first, fave parts later.

    He rubbed his shoulder for some reason. it hurt mysteriously.
    Capitalize the I in "it".

    He looked at her for a while, subcontiously.
    Could that possibly be "subconsciously"?

    He then heard grunts and yawns and saw may's smiling face peering over him.
    Capitalize the "M", and ad the word "at" between "over" and "him".

    Drew laughed to himself over may's little..."Fault".
    Capitalize the "M" and lowercase the "f".

    may laughed, the first time she had done in so many long weeks and weeks.
    Capitalize the "M". And you could rephrase this a bit, to make more sense. Maybe, "May laughed for the first time in many weeks."

    "Oh no, not the flygon!
    Capitalize the "F."

    she was a pretty good actress, Drew thought.
    Capitalize the "S".

    "Oh, i see we're ready to duel!"
    Capitalize the "I".

    she ran over to him.
    Capitalize the "S".

    he had been lying about being hurt!
    Capitalize the "H".

    ...but as may was dangling off his shoulder she got the most impact.
    Capitalize the "M".

    ...Drew, with may still on him, went...
    Capitalize the "M".

    His face wrinkled into a stipeful frown.
    Depending on what that word is... shouldn't it be "spiteful"?

    Or May's butt at least because that's all i can see!
    Capitalize that "I".

    It cirtainly sounded familiar.
    It should be "certainly".

    Dang. I'm done.

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    I like the new chapter, but it could be a bit longer.

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    Ahhh! I'm so sorry! I was typing fast and did it here rather on word. I am very ashamed of myself. T_T

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    “Roses?” Lance asked. “Sounds like someone likes May.” He said.

    “Ya think?” Ash said, smiling in happiness for his friend. “Who?” He asked.

    “Drew, you dolt! Now go talk to her-she’s waiting and crying!” Lance said, giving him a push.
    I literally LAUGHED OUT LOUD on that part. that is sooo incredibly true to his character, you couldn't have phrased it any better!

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    Sorry about the delay but it's going to get shippy!

    Chapter 3

    “Harley?” May’s voice echoed down the corridor.

    “That’s right!” He laughed sweetly.

    “Sickly sweet idiot…” Drew thought. He put May down so she could face the purple haired monster standing in their doorway…wait… “their” doorway?!

    “So Harley, what brings you here?” May asked him, smiling. Drew looked weirded out.

    “May, the dude’s a psycho that has tried his best to get you out of all the Grand Festivals you’ve been in. I say this because you’re naďve: DON’T TRUST HIM AGAIN!” Drew whispered to her.

    “Relax,” She mouthed to him. He was surprised but he knew she must have a plan. “…Well, do you wanna go get some milkshakes? My treat! We can catch up and stuff!” May asked. Drew sweatdropped.

    “That would be great! Lets go, girlfriend.” Harley said, linking arms with May.

    He thought of the consequences of trusting that sneaky arse and not knowing May’s plan. He was worried…that was until she gave him a sneaky and surprisingly knowing wink.
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    The three coordinators all sat at a table with glasses in front of them. They were in downtown Beginner’s Point and Drew was still worried about Harley and what he would do to May. And possibly him.

    May took a large sip of her chocolate milkshake and smacked her lips together.

    “Hits the spot, huh?” She giggled. Her giggle made the hairs on the back of Drew’s neck stand up on end. “Anyway, Harley, how many ribbons have you got?”

    “None so far. My contest is tomorrow, though. I’ll see you there, right?” Harley asked surprisingly hopeful.

    “I’m sorry, Harley,” May said apologetically. “We’re leaving tomorrow.” This, of course, was a lie to avoid Harley but he didn’t realise it. Drew guessed that May must have another plan.

    “But what about your ribbon?” He asked.

    “I already got mine!“ May flashed her ribbon case, six empty holders there but one filled. The ribbon was turquoise in colour and had purple stripes waving down it.

    “Wow gosh, May, that is pretty!” Harley grinned. Drew made gagging sounds behind their backs.

    “Well, I sure hope I’m good enough to get one of these things too.” He smiled. May smiled back. The gagging sounds intensified until May successfully whacked Drew in the back of the head.

    “Me and the idiot have to go now, Harley! Packing to do, places to go and we need to book a ferry!” May grinned, taking Drew’s arm and carting him off.
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    “May, what in God's name were you thinking?!” Drew demanded that night while they were packing.

    “I was thinking of putting my nightshirts away. Or do you want me to leave them here and sleep in my underwear?” May asked. Drew smacked his head while blushing.

    “NO! I meant about Harley!” He growled, teeth clenched together.

    “Well, I thought exactly what you said. I always trust him and he always gets the best of me. But this time it’s going to be different. What if we trick him first?!” May grinned.

    “May, I thought you were insane before but this really takes the cake.” Drew sighed.

    “Cake, where?!” May yelled, dropping her shirts. Drew sweatdropped. Apparently, she hadn’t been listening.

    “May, there’s no cake…what if Harley’s got a plan of his own. What happens then?” He asked.

    “Drew, I had no idea you cared!” May laughed. Drew blushed.

    “I don’t!” He barked at her. She was taken aback a little. “…May, I’m sorry but who knows what he’ll do to you?! You are going to have to be serious if you don’t want to be pushing up daisies!” May paused for a while and then sighed.

    “You’re right…I’m sorry…” She said, putting the last item of clothing in her travel case, putting it down and walking out.

    When she got outside, however, a small blue case fell out of her purse as she walked off. About ten minutes later, a green sleeved hand picked it up.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    May and Drew were sat on the ferry in complete silence. It had been like that ever since their conversation last night. Nobody said anything when May came back in for bed, through breakfast or running to make sure they didn’t miss the ferry.

    May seemed to be greatly depressed while Drew was having a battle in his head over what he should do. He wanted to talk to her and make sure everything was okay…but he just couldn’t. this was the sort of thing that made him strong and it would do the same for her, hopefully.

    It was around o clock when May opened up her purse to get a sandwich. As she sat there munching it silently, she rifled through her bag to take a look at that beautiful ribbon again. It captivated her the first time she saw it and she wanted to have a look at it again just to remind her that she was doing okay. Drew had one ribbon too, just like her.

    She was getting a little impatient. She couldn’t exactly find her case…her purse was pretty big and it usually took a while…but not this long. She then decided to drop its contents onto her knees to look for it. She knew it was there, where else could it be?

    She swallowed the piece of sandwich as she stood up abruptly, spilling he contents of her bag on the floor. Her face was pale and her eyes were wide. She screamed. People stared as Drew stood up to sit her back down again. It seemed like she was having a mental outburst. May wasn’t mental! …Probably.

    “May, what’s wrong?” Drew asked her as she suddenly began crying.

    “M-my ribbon!” She said in between sobs.

    “It’s gone!” She cried.

    “Harley…that *******…” Drew thought.

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    MY GAWD !!!! AN UPDATE !!! I was getting desperate...
    *gets away from window*

    now, let's R&R...

    Quote Originally Posted by flygonrulz View Post
    “May, what in God's name were you thinking?!” Drew demanded that night while they were packing.

    “I was thinking of putting my nightshirts away. Or do you want me to leave them here and sleep in my underwear?” May asked. Drew smacked his head while blushing.
    do it ! DO IT !!!
    rofl...

    Quote Originally Posted by flygonrulz View Post
    “Cake, where?!” May yelled, dropping her shirts. Drew sweatdropped. Apparently, she hadn’t been listening.

    “May, there’s no cake…
    ROFLMAO !

    Quote Originally Posted by flygonrulz View Post
    “Drew, I had no idea you cared!” May laughed. Drew blushed.

    “I don’t!” He barked at her. She was taken aback a little.
    you....you....YOU BAS*AR* !!

    Quote Originally Posted by flygonrulz View Post
    “…May, I’m sorry”
    You better be...we'll talk later about this xD


    Nice chappie ! can't wait for teh shippyness it's pretty good for now, so I'll wait before I rate it...

    keep up the good work girl !!
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    Very nice. Quite a few spelling errors, but all minor. PM me when the next chapter is out.

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