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    Default Hide and Seek (Krazyshipping)

    Hahahahahaha! I wrote another Krazyshipping fic!! I hope you enjoy!!

    Disclaimer type thing: I hold no claim to these characters. I'm just using them.

    Hide and Seek
    Krazyshipping One-shot
    PG-ish
    Pages in Word: 1 1/2


    Whirling around, the small yellow rodent Pokemon searched frantically for her human.

    “Pika!” She called, listening for a reply. And suddenly, rough hands grabbed her and lifted her into the air.

    “Finally, we have the Pikachu!” A male voice snickered, his female counterpart joining in. Pikachu squeaked and released a bolt of electricity, but James had rubber gloves on, and the attack did nothing. Jesse swung her red hair around, grinning maliciously. She straightened her cropped shirt absent-mindedly, her skirt showing off her long legs. Black boots came up to about mid-calf, and her shirt bore the “R” insignia of Team Rocket. James’ outfit was similar. He wore a long-sleeved shirt with the “R” insignia, and long pants, his boots disappearing up into his pant legs. A white and gold feline stood by his heel.

    “Pika! Pika pi!” Pikachu cried to him. Meowth, the cat, translated it to mean, “Please! Please help!” He mentally shook himself. He couldn’t help the Pikachu. As much as he liked her, he liked getting praise from the Boss- Giovanni- better.

    No can do, Pikachu. Meowth thought, shaking his head. The red spots on Pikachu’s cheeks fizzled out of electricity, and her black-tipped ears flopped. Defeat filled her black eyes, and she hung limply in James’ arms. Her sadness filled Meowth with guilt, and he thought back on all their adventures.

    “Looks like we’re stuck here.” Meowth commented, plopping down on the mossy floor of the Forest, “It could take days for us ta get outta here.”

    “But Ash is probably looking for me now!” Pikachu cried, running in circles, tail standing up straight, cheeks crackling with electricity. Her ears stood proud and tall, and determination filled her eyes.


    Meowth had no other choice. He would help her. He would save her. He would be her knight in shining armor. But he had to wait.

    *********

    That night, when the Team Rocket trio set up camp, Meowth set to work on his plan. He snuck into the tent Jesse and James had put Pikachu in, and told her of the plan.

    “Ya has ta be very quiet. I’m gonna get ya outta here.” He whispered through the net Pikachu had been put in.

    “How do I know I can trust you, though?” Pikachu asked, glaring.

    “Ya don’t.” Meowth answered simply, “I’ll get ya out. Promise.” He stuck out his tail. Pikachu slapped it with hers, and the deal was made.

    *********

    Calls could be heard through out the forest.

    “Pikachu? Where are you?” Several voices held up the cry.

    *********

    Jesse and James were snoring inside their tent, and Pikachu was left unguarded. Meowth snuck into the tent, and said quickly,
    “Their asleep. I’m getting ya outta here.” He tried to untie the top of the net, struggling with the knot. Finally, he got it open, and Pikachu bounded out.

    “I’ll cover for ya.” Meowth said. Pikachu smiled softly, and leaning forward, licked Meowth on the cheek.

    “Thank you. I appreciate it.” She whispered, then ran off into the night.

    Meowth sighed contentedly, then curled up and fell asleep.

    *********

    “Meowth! Where’s Pikachu?” An angry female voice yelled, kicking at Meowth.

    “What?” Meowth asked, groggily opening an eye. Jesse towered over him, glaring and swearing under her breath.

    “Pikachu. It got away. Where is it.” Jesse repeated slowly, her anger seeping into every word.

    “What do ya mean it got away?” Meowth shrieked, jumping up. But at the same time, he was mentally praising himself.

    I saved her. I’m her knight in shining armor. And she knows it. Meowth thought, smiling to himself.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


    Krazyshipping. It's krazyyyy good!

    lol.

    What did you think? Good? Bad? Hate it? Tell me!!!

    ~MK~

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    Default Gotta love that ship.

    I was just surfing the site until I discovered these few ficlets featuring Krazyshipping, then I just had to register. I don't watch or really even like pokémon all that much anymore these days, I ran out of enthusiasm back during the original series and only liked the one movie with Latias since then.

    Anyway... I really like the idea of Meowth and Pikachu getting along together in platonic and romantic ways. This little scene was really cute, with Pikachu being so expressive to Meowth and sealing a deal with thier tails. A very very simple plot and execution but it still leaves the reader with a slight more Waffiness then before they read it.

    I was most happy to read this and look foward to more in the future. Strangely enough this is the only site I have found where a story with this ship can be found. I'd try my hand at one myself, but I'm already commited to several other series already.

    I hope for a day where a full story is made with Pikachu and Meowth.

    ... Is it just me or does that Smiles box have every one BUT Meowth?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lunarian View Post
    I was just surfing the site until I discovered these few ficlets featuring Krazyshipping, then I just had to register. I don't watch or really even like pokémon all that much anymore these days, I ran out of enthusiasm back during the original series and only liked the one movie with Latias since then.

    Anyway... I really like the idea of Meowth and Pikachu getting along together in platonic and romantic ways. This little scene was really cute, with Pikachu being so expressive to Meowth and sealing a deal with thier tails. A very very simple plot and execution but it still leaves the reader with a slight more Waffiness then before they read it.

    I was most happy to read this and look foward to more in the future. Strangely enough this is the only site I have found where a story with this ship can be found. I'd try my hand at one myself, but I'm already commited to several other series already.

    I hope for a day where a full story is made with Pikachu and Meowth.

    ... Is it just me or does that Smiles box have every one BUT Meowth?
    Yay! Another x shipper!!! I'm glad you like my fic, and of course I'll be posting more Krazyshipping fics in the future! You can count on it! (I'll PM you and tell you when I post a full Krazyshipping fic if you want me to.)
    Anywayz, thanks for your review, and I like that it was a good, rule-abiding review. Most people don't give those anymore. -hands cookie-

    ~MK

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    He stuck out his tail. Pikachu slapped it with hers, and the deal was made.
    Aww. :3

    Very cute story! Like Lunarian, I've been keeping my eyes open for Krazyshipping fics, and never saw any except for your's and GeneChildMewtwo's. (So I decided to stop and actually comment on one, for once. x3)
    Hmm... the only critisism I can think of is that I might have liked to see Meowth wrestle with indecisiveness for a little longer, but all in all it was a very nice fic. :3 Write more soon~!

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    That was really good. That was so sweet when they slapped tails and when meowth sets pikachu free. That was great.

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    Krazyshipping! <3 There really isn't enough of this. It's pretty much the only anime ship I support between major chars. Thank you for the adorable fic. The only critiques I have would involve extending the fic, and when I think about that, I much prefer the way you already have it written--short and very, very sweet. *applauds*

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    ANOTHER REViEWER/KRAZYSHiPPiNG FAN!!! Yayz!!!

    *bows* Thank you, thank you very much. *Elvis voice*


    I was thinking about extending it a bit, but the 1 and a bit pages it was looked OK to me, and to meh cousin, who proof-read it for me.

    =]]

    [[If you'd like another Krazyshipping fic, check out my new one "Changing".]]

    ~MK

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    Well done! :] Finally a Krazyshipping fanfic! *Krazyshipper*

    It was so cute! ^^

    If you warm mine, I'll warm yours. ;3

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