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    Default The Adventures Of Mario and Friends

    I hope this Comic goes well not like the other one..........so This Comic is About Super Mario and his Friends, this comic dosen't have a certain plot at times but this should be funny so Enjoy the Comic!
    And Spriters Resource thanks for the Sprites
    Please Post!!

    http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandyv4.png Episode 1 Yoshi Meat
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandzg0.png -Ep 2 Mamma Mia
    http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandzp6.png - Ep3 That Yoshi I ate!
    http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandlz9.png - Ep4 *cough*
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandhm7.png - Ep5 Wario
    http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?i...revengefi9.png - Ep6 Yoshi's Revenge
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandbc3.png - Ep7 Keep Talking
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandba8.png - Ep8 Lets Be Friends Part 1
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandwh4.png - Ep9 Lets Be Friends Part 2
    http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandhn4.png - Ep10 Yesterday It was Link
    http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandqn9.png - Ep11 Too many Questions Part1
    http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandgc5.png -Ep12 Too many Questions Part2
    http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandpg0.png - Ep 13 Tanooki Mario
    http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandrw0.png - Ep 14 Pull My Finger!
    http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandsv7.png - Ep15 The ? Box Part1
    http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?i...arioandap9.png - Ep16 The ? Box Part2

    CURRENTLY MAKING COMICS ONE A WEEK BUT SOMETIMES I TEND TO BE LAZY OF UPDATING
    More Comics Coming soon and If you wan't you can request an Idea!!!
    Last edited by Poke_master!!!!; 16th March 2007 at 12:48 PM.

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    First post!

    Hmm, this is OK, but it needs a bit of work.

    In some panels you need to follow comic mechanics, like when someone says "Aww I'm feeling sick... It must have been that Yoshi I ate" and then somone says "Sir are you alright"?. You just need to follow the right order.

    Also there's the sprites. You've taken different sprites from different Mario games [some even custom] and put them all in on comic. That is a definant "no". Make them all from the same game so that the comic looks nicer. You wouldn't want to mix a extremly bright and vibrant Mario character from ML:SS with one from, say, Super Mario world, right? I'm glad that you changed Luigi after comic 4 to not the custom one but one from Super Mario World so that he matched Mario. Good job on that.

    And then there's the presentation of the comic. You start every comic with the same thing, that one panel with everybody standing there. Do you do that just to give your comic length? It just seems kind of pointless, that's all. Also I'm thinking that these need to be a bit longer. It just looks like you're being a bit lazy with two panels per comic. And one more thing. "The Adventures of Mario and Friends"? How long did you stay up thinking of that one? You could have tried a bit harder and maybe thought of something catchy and less generic.

    Overall I like it, the humour is OK, It's just those areas you need to improve on.

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    Your Right Charazard Champion I'll try to improve on the Sprites and Panels

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    He he he he...it's quite funny, although I didn't get the poo thing.

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    I mucked up that poo episode Slick
    Hey Folks Make sure you check out me Comic The Adventures Of Mario and Friends
    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=178185 Thank Yo!
    Can't wait for brawl!


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    Right, well that explains it!

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