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    Default Ash and Serena's First Date (AmourShipping Caption Story)

    These are my caption stories about Ash and Serena's first date. Enjoy!
    Ash and Serena’s First Date - Part I
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    Ash and Serena's First Date - Part II
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    Pretty good

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    Looking pretty decent tbh. Well done bro, keep up the great work. I'll be looking forward to see how the next stages go so goodluck.
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    Ash and Serena’s First Date - Part II
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    Okay, that was nothing short of epic, and I have no other words to describe this

    P.S. Looks like I'm not the only one who thinks that Ash should activate his Aura in this episode XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blood Red View Post
    Okay, that was nothing short of epic, and I have no other words to describe this

    P.S. Looks like I'm not the only one who thinks that Ash should activate his Aura in this episode XD
    If you go to yt channels of those who does reviews you'll see everyone wanting that. If they don't provide, then inb4 rage.
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    Champions aren't made in gyms. Champions are made from something they have deep inside them-a desire, a dream, a vision. They have to have the skill, and the will. But the will must be stronger than the skill. Quote from the ATG - Muhammad Ali.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pokévision View Post
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    Lol I given you guys torture xD

    This is amazing, fantastic, words can't describe...it's just epic!!
    Your definitely one of my fav members of the thread!!

    EDIT: Guys read the Serebii news thingymajig and it appears theres going to be a bunch of specials and also FUTURE content on upcoming episodes. Can't wait to see what they have in store!
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    Awesome caption story... all we need is this to be in the anime and the hype train will go into hyper drive!!! Just a quick question... do you got a part 3 coming cuz id like to see the part called "the vow tree and the present" in it too....

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    Quote Originally Posted by JSLatios View Post
    This is amazing, fantastic, words can't describe...it's just epic!!
    Your definitely one of my fav members of the thread!!
    Thanks for the kind words! It's great to receive positive feedback! :3

    Quote Originally Posted by shahroze12 View Post
    Awesome caption story... all we need is this to be in the anime and the hype train will go into hyper drive!!! Just a quick question... do you got a part 3 coming cuz id like to see the part called "the vow tree and the present" in it too....
    Haha, indeed XY059 is driving the hype train. I will eventually work on a Part III; I haven't decided on the full plot yet but I'll take your idea into consideration. I'll be taking a break from my story since I worked extra hard at Part II - notice it's much longer than Part I - and I'll also need to wait for more screenshots to work with. :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pokévision View Post
    Thanks for the kind words! It's great to receive positive feedback! :3



    Haha, indeed XY059 is driving the hype train. I will eventually work on a Part III; I haven't decided on the full plot yet but I'll take your idea into consideration. I'll be taking a break from my story since I worked extra hard at Part II - notice it's much longer than Part I - and I'll also need to wait for more screenshots to work with. :P
    Obviously you'll need a break after that work of art!!! can't wait for part 3 ...All the best!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anti luring View Post
    If you go to yt channels of those who does reviews you'll see everyone wanting that. If they don't provide, then inb4 rage.
    Man, I can only hope! If Ash activates his Aura out of his desire to protect Serena, it'll be the biggest hint we've ever been given

    P.S. I think we should discuss this elsewhere

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    *clap clap* Fantastic man! All your work has really paid off. This is just way too good. Great job!

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    Good job dude it really was a good story
    But how is Ash able to Body Slam them to the stratosphere?
    But anyway good work


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    Quote Originally Posted by pokesrini View Post
    *clap clap* Fantastic man! All your work has really paid off. This is just way too good. Great job!
    Thanks! Such compliments make creators happy. :3

    Quote Originally Posted by Ikcatcher View Post
    Good job dude it really was a good story
    But how is Ash able to Body Slam them to the stratosphere?
    But anyway good work
    Haha, Ash has an aura like the Lucario in your avatar! Don't make Ash furious. :P
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    More popcorn please... Oh wait... It's already over?!

    Anyway, part II was the best yet. It's so fluffy yet friendly-centric I can't stop giggling Lol. Is part II the last installment? Cause their date hasn't ended yet. I hope for part III to be fluffier and less friendly-centric.

    One thing that caught my attention though, is that when Satoshi somehow blasted TR away with Giga Impact, I take it as his Aura powers awakening? But anyway, great job. That's a lot of effort you had to put there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by matthew11 View Post
    More popcorn please... Oh wait... It's already over?!

    Anyway, part II was the best yet. It's so fluffy yet friendly-centric I can't stop giggling Lol. Is part II the last installment? Cause their date hasn't ended yet. I hope for part III to be fluffier and less friendly-centric.

    One thing that caught my attention though, is that when Satoshi somehow blasted TR away with Giga Impact, I take it as his Aura powers awakening? But anyway, great job. That's a lot of effort you had to put there.
    Where did you get the popcorn from? XD

    You're right, their date hasn't ended yet! Part III will be happening. You want more fluff? Haha, noted. Thanks for the input!

    Yes, Ash's aura powers awakened.
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    Ash and Serena's First Date:
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