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    Ok here it goes, thx to the people who told me how to make a better story in my last story this will be good (i hope).
    This fic has a song in each one, but all smooshed together
    A/N: Mays boyfriend at the beggining is brock. Drew and may are best friends
    disclaimer:I dont own, the song Pain by three days grace, or pokemon
    Pg-13 abuse, drugs, drinking, oocness (drew cares, brock doesnt)
    May/Drew~21
    Brock~24
    Chapter 1
    Pain
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    Brock slamed May into the wall, she winced in pain. He always beat her when he got drunk. He would blame all his problems on her. Or he would think she was cheating on him. She didnt, she was afriad to. Imagin if she really did, he would probly kill her.

    He raised his hand in smacked her across the face. Once again she winced. She had to do something about it. She kicked him in the place were it counts.

    "Damn you! you b***h! you'll pay for that!!" Brock screamed. But May had already made her way out the door, into her car and started to drive to Drew's house. Ah Drew her best friend. They were always there for eachother.

    May had forgotten to put on her make up. Drew would inquire, and go find Brock. Kick his ***. Make things a lot worse. Or Drew would be smart, call the cops, and have Brock put away for good. She liked both those options.

    She switched on the radio. It was her favorite song, Pain

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    Pain, withou love
    Pain, cant get enough
    Pain, i like it rough
    'cause i'd rather feel pain than nothing at all

    You're sick of feeling down
    You're not the only one
    I'll take you by the hand
    And i'll show you a world that you can understand
    This life is filled with hurt
    when happeness doesnt work
    Trust me and take my hand
    When the lights go out you'll understand

    Pain, without love
    Pain, i cant get enough
    pain, i like it rough
    'Cause i'd rather feel pain than nothing at all

    Anger and agony
    are better than misery
    Trust me I've got a plan
    When the lights go off you will understand

    Pain, without love
    Pain, cant get enough
    Pain, i like it rough
    'cause i'd rather feel pain than nothing
    rather feel pain


    I know
    that you're wounded
    you know
    thati'm here to safe you
    you know
    i'm always here for you
    I know
    Tha you'll thank me later

    Pain without love
    Pain cant get enough
    Pain i like It rough
    'cause i'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain without love
    Pain cant get enough
    Pain, i like it rough
    Cause i rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain without out love
    Pain cant get enough
    Pain i like it rough
    'cause i rather feel pain than nothing at all
    rather feel pain than nothing at all
    rather feel pain!


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    The song faded as she pulled into Drew's driveway, His house was large and white, it was a manshion technically. She ran up to the door, because it had just started to rain cats and dogs. She knock on Drews door.

    "Drew! Open up! this is important!" she yelled, obliviously mad.

    "What!" Drew said opening the door, "Oh My God! What happened to you're face?!"

    "Brock happened" May said, Drew got what she was saying and grew extremely angry at the fact the Brock hit his secret crush since they were kids/ best friend. He picked up his cell and called the cops. He gave them May's Address, and they arrested Brock, with multiple charges such as Abuse, Drug use, And Running from the police.

    "What did he do to you?" Drew asked.

    "He acused me of cheating, and blamed me for everything that went wrong with his life. And obliviously beat me." she said looking Drew Right in the eyes.

    "Go sit on my Couch, we will chat." Drew said. May obeyed.

    " May he is going to rot in prison, if i have anything to say about it." Drew said, "Why didnt you leave him, i mean you could of had me-many other guys." He winced she caught that one, by the look of her face she look pretty questioning.

    "Drew do you like me?" She said as Drew leanded closer.

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    END OF CHAPTER ONE!
    A CLIFF HANGER!
    Last edited by RoseLove; 15th January 2007 at 11:54 PM.
    Contestshipping 4ever!!

    Drew<3s May
    May<3s Drew

    oh and Houndoom rocks my socks!!

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    it's good, although it could use a lot more description.. and it was very short but it's still interesting.
    Thanks Bonemerang for the great user bar!


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    HI!! Okay lets see. Hmmmmm........ The song *looks at it confused* I think some of it is mispelled *goes looking for a correct version* Here it is!!
    THREE DAYS GRACE LYRICS

    "Pain"

    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all

    You're sick of feeling numb
    You're not the only one
    I'll take you by the hand
    And I'll show you a world that you can understand
    This life is filled with hurt
    When happiness doesn't work
    Trust me and take my hand
    When the lights go out you will understand

    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all

    Anger and agony
    Are better than misery
    Trust me I've got a plan
    When the lights go off you will understand

    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing
    Rather feel pain

    I know (I know I know I know I know)
    That you're wounded
    You know (You know you know you know you know)
    That I'm here to save you
    You know (You know you know you know you know)
    I'm always here for you
    I know (I know I know I know I know)
    That you'll thank me later

    Pain, without love
    Pain, can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Pain, without love
    Pain, I can't get enough
    Pain, I like it rough
    'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Rather feel pain than nothing at all
    Rather feel pain!


    But I love this Fic please don't kill me!! *hides underneath the computer*
    I'm a pokemon lover! I'm currently playing Firered, Leafgreen, Sapphire, Ruby, and Emerald!
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    Thanks
    i will do the next chapter tommaro
    1/20/ 06
    Contestshipping 4ever!!

    Drew<3s May
    May<3s Drew

    oh and Houndoom rocks my socks!!

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    OK OK so in this chapter, I want to do the song seperated.
    R (sex, cursing)
    Disclaimer:I dont own POkemon, or losing my grip
    hint:brendan shows up!!

    ~~2: AT THE DOOR~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    The were inches apart, seconds away from kissing.

    "May, I-" Drew began

    "DING DONG!" the door rang(A/N:brendan comes and the song is in May's pov)

    "Who The Hell Is It?!" Drew yelled. Glaring dagers at the door. (Hey you would too!)

    "Oh come on man! im hurt! Its Brendan!" Brendan yelled, (no not hurt like in pain like feelings) Drew got up from the couch they were sitting on.

    "I know that voice." May said, getting up, but then she froze, she got all clamy and pail. Drew opened the door revieling Brendan. Brendan stepped into Drew house.

    "May!" Brendan said, he was going for a hug.

    "Back off Brendan." May said coldly. Her face was angry.

    "But May Baby! I heard about your delimia, and I know where you were, so I wanted to stay with me. I also came to get you to be my girl friend again." Brendan said.

    'Agian? How many bofriends did May have?' Drew thought, looking at May.

    "Never." May said, more coldly than the last time. Her fist were clentched tight now.

    "Why?" Brendan asked.

    " Because i caught you cheating on me, you treated me like I wasnt there. I started to cry but you didnt even care. I fell down outside your door racking with sobbs and you didnt even care!" May yelled, her blue eyes burned with fire.

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    Are you aware of what you make me feel, baby?
    Right now I feel Invisible to you, like I'm not, real.
    Didn't you feel me lock my arms around you?
    Why'd you turn away?

    Here's what i have to say,

    I was left to cry there
    waiting outside there
    grinning with a lost stare
    That's when I decided

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    "I was scared, it was dark, and where were you? Up stairs with that *****. I was screamin your name and you didn't listen, you didn't even stop. Or was that you ex, wait I believe That was your ex, I was just there to fill in, as you put it. I thought you loved me." May said/ yelled.

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    Why should I care?
    'Cause you weren't there,
    When I was scared
    I was so alone
    You, you need to litsen
    I'm starting tp trip
    I'm losing my grip
    And I'm In this thing alone

    Am i just some chick you placed beside you,
    To take somebody's place?
    When you trun around,
    Can you recongnize my face?
    You used to love me
    you used to hug me
    But that wasnt,
    Everthing wasn't okay.

    I was left to cry there
    Waiting outside there
    Grinninh with a lost stare,
    That's when I decided

    Why should I care?
    Cause you weren't there when I was scared I was so Alone.
    You, you need to litsen,
    I'm starting to trip
    I'm losing My grip
    And i'm in this thig alone

    Crying out Loud
    Crying Out loud
    I'm crying out loud
    Crying out loud
    Im crying out loud.

    Open your eyes!
    open up wide!

    Why should i care
    Cause you weren't there when I was scared
    I was so alone (x2)

    Why should I care?
    If you don't care
    Then I dont care
    We're not going anywhere

    Why should I care?
    Cause you werent There when I was scared
    I was so alone

    Why should I care
    if you Dont care
    Then I dont care
    We're Not going anywhere.

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    "So i would aprecieate if you left now." May said, glaring at him.

    "You dont own this place! Drew can decide wether I should Leave or not." Brendan said.

    "Dude you disgusting, get out of my house and NEVER come back." Drew said, looking at Brendan with a disgusted look. Brendan Left soon after that.
    And May And Drew went back to the couch.

    "As I was saying, before we were rudely interrupted, I love you , May." Drew said, looking at May, but not looking at her in the eyes, like she was medusa or something. He was about to speak a again but she started to kiss him. They both Started to ripe off articals of clothing, until they were comepletely undressed. Drew started to kiss May all over, And one thing lead to another, and Drew slid into May and started to trust. This went on for About two Hours. May wasn't Being forced to keep going she was actualy enjoying it.

    Well at about 2:00 am, the past out on the floor, in each others arms, by the fire place.

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    "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h!" May screamed.
    Contestshipping 4ever!!

    Drew<3s May
    May<3s Drew

    oh and Houndoom rocks my socks!!

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