That's great, thanks a lot. =) It's interesting to me too!This gets better and better. It has a very good plot, and is written in a good descriptive way that draws you in and makes you want to know what will happen next.
Yeah, that was one of the big ones. But there are bigger ones to come, of course.I <3's me a new twist
Glad it was unexpected. It had been in the cards from the beginning, in one way or another.I hadn't suspected him to be a member of an evil guild, and much less like it. Also, making him the son... You're very good
lol, I'm glad you liked it. =)That's probably one of my favorite sentences of all time now
Chapter 6 is about half done. I need to revise a bit of the first part, then finishing writing the second, third and fourth parts. It's a long one. :P