PD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!! You finally put this back up. I do remember her going to Kanto in the last one and it seems now like she's going to Johto. Just speculation. I like how you changed it if you did. Pretty much the same as last time i read this cept I thought she won last time. I don't remember tis been at least a year. *glares at PD* Anway great chap and I can't wait to be reading chaps of this every friday and saturday. *hates that his internet is being cut off druing the week and sunday. Tisn't fair* Anyway, i got a lot of mistakes to give ya. I know you remember me doing this all the time no???
that ‘you know they doing it for your benefit’
I think it needs to be either they're or they are
library the clean off the windows in the attic?”
to clean not the clean I think
to buy them once we out to a port,” she said quickly
get out or go out
With practised swiftness she folded up her
Now we get to the spelling mistakes!!! You need to work on this. Practiced no s.
Keegan couldn’t recognise
You got the hard part of the word but the s is a z
but they’re too focussed on trying to control you
only on s in focused. ^^
I would love to beta your chaps if tis okies with you. Cause I wanna read these so much i wanna read em before anyone else. And along with the fact that I will be having trouble getting to serebii to read the chaps so an e-mailed chap will be much better than a chap i can't read. ^^; ANyway, good chap and i hope to read more soon.
PS: I was actually gonna get to the other chaps i was supposed to read/review first but I saw this and i was like "I'm going here first, the others can wait" Sorry Scrap, chibi, and or Saber.
Yes people, I have returned.
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