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    these are alright but mewthree's tail is weird.
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    Elmon? What the crap were you thinking? It sounds like the name of a Digimon.
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    Thanks for advice, I am going to reshade Berbsile now.
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    Elmon? What the crap were you thinking? It sounds like the name of a Digimon.
    But what? It is only name, and this name can be name of Pokemon.
    (in first RSE games Elmon was name of Electrike)

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    Sorry for double-posting.
    That's my last variant of Berbsile:

    This one is the most pokemonish Berbsile of all variants.

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    The shading on the cannons is awkward... the light is on the bottom. Move the light to the middle/top and the dark to the bottom, making more of a circle shape.
    I take it the dithering is trying to show texture. in that case, it's not bad.
    Add some light shading to the front legs and some dark parts under the cannons.
    Add some lighter shading to the outlines, the darkest body shade, and put it over the light parts on the body.

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    With darker head.

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    Mewthree needs a new tail alltogether. Otheriwse- GOOD!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mex View Post

    With darker head.
    Much better.
    the darkest shade just needs to be darker.

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    Maybe too much "taxi", but I think it is the best one.
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    This new berbsile is much better than previous ones, although you say there might be to much 'taxi', but it's about right except along the back and near the cannon, that could do with a touch less but it's a great improvement
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    So that one would be in gallery.
    Next- Baltork and Baglame.

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    (sorry for double-posting)

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    And why haven't you done anything else? You've just barely edited the sprites shading and coloring, the contrast between light and dark is too soft, to light for the shade of red you chose. The feet are still too straight, the legs are still too straight, why are you still only doing minimal edits? Everyone has basically pointed out the same things over and over to you again, yet you ignore it :/

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    Main edits:

    See differences?

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    The sprites and pokedexes are cool but the ideas themselves could use a bit of work.
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    Maybe I should QUOTE myself.

    And why haven't you done anything else? You've just barely edited the sprites shading and coloring, the contrast between light and dark is too soft, to light for the shade of red you chose. The feet are still too straight, the legs are still too straight, why are you still only doing minimal edits? Everyone has basically pointed out the same things over and over to you again, yet you ignore it :/
    And excrepts;

    You've just barely edited the sprites shading and coloring, the contrast between light and dark is too soft, to light for the shade of red you chose.

    And:

    The feet are still too straight, the legs are still too straight, why are you still only doing minimal edits?

    You also haven't edited the outline, and if you have it's so minimal, it's unoticable.

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    Ok. But I usually improve parts of sprite, not all sprite.
    If nobody crit my work for a long time, I think it is good for my gallery.
    But nobody can do 100% good work- all in the world can be better.

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    It seems your english shows off your spriting skills. Really, you learn just enough english to SOMEWHAT get what you're saying across. But you don't learn enough to get what you completely MEAN across, leaving it a muddled, confusing excuses. Anyways.

    And checking the latest revesion of that fire pokemon, I found one place where you dithered too much, with two shades of red so close in shade, it was pointless to do so, and made me think it was JPGed parts you didn't want to fix up. You didn't highlight the claws, you didn't make the claws 'finish', you left the feet flat, you left everything just blah. They're sprites that are ok, but I wouldn't class them in the leags of pokemon sprites. As I've said, you've left out parts, you've left out outlines, and etc. Your skills border somewhere between RBYG/GSC, but NOt RSE/FRLG like you think, or others think. Yes you overshade, but there's no life or spark to the sprites.

    Stop making excuses and actually get around to 'revamping; your things :/ I mean it took me 3 seconds to 'finish' the toes, then highlight them to make them look better than flat things. It's not THAT hard to edit a sprite when it's small stuff like that.

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    i actually like ur smoking although it is the evolved form of weezing and he has three guys on his head

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    What do you mean "three guys"?
    Yami Ryu, ok, but I have my own style (I try to change it to Pokemon style).
    And please, crit my sprites, not me.
    Edited variant of Fires: changed shading and outlines:
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    Theres not enough contrast between the shades, they blend into each other and ruin the sprite.
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    I found problem- it was colors: (click to see example)

    (I must edit some shades and lines, but is it better than before?)

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    Way to spam bump delete. It is against the rules so stop being so stupid and quit doing it ¬¬ One infraction for each time. Yes, I can see all your deleted posts.

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    So say "good" or "bad" about sprites- I improved them long time ago. I want to know are they better and how much better. I have not much time to wait.

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    She's a mod, she can post not doing anything about your sprites, she was also pointing out not to spam like an idiot >>' but since it took you what, 30 posts to start listening to crit.

    The sprites are still iffy, as now you left the eyes dead and souless nearly. The highlighting you did wasn't even basic, or it borders on being basic. Look at pokemon sprites, then look at those eyes :/

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