I just have to say something. I hadn't read this because I didn't think that it was going to be very good, I've had experience with fan fictions on forums not being so good, so I haven't read any on here. But you have FLOORED me. It is amazing so far. I read it all in a day... I couldn't stop! I can't wait for you to get more up!
I just wanna see things work out and it be Dawn/Drew... and May could get with Gary. Which, by the way, when I watched your trailer I squealed everywhere when I saw Gary. I was excited, LAWLZ.
But add me to the PM list and I can't wait for you to get more up!
Oh and take this all as a compliment, I don't read much fanfiction unless it is Amazing. I'm a hard judge. =]