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    -I have half a mind to delete this fic, since no one's reviewing . This is now a triple post! And who rated this fic? I sure didn't.

    EF13:Have a Not so NIce Day, Part II

    Everyone in the stadium looked anxiously at the mess of snow where Ash and Croconaw got buried alive. The referee ran over to the same spot and called for medics.

    "We'd better go and see if we can help," Brock suggested. But before he even said it, May was already off her seat to join the referee on the field.

    Prima, meanwhile, was in her element. "Go, Blastoise, Glaceon!" Out came her Pokemon. "Go help with the rescue effort. You, too, Mamoswine."

    Various Pokemon came to help. Brock called his powerhouses Bastiodon and Toxicroak, Hikari called Prinplup, and May and Max called their fire Pokemon(Blaziken and Camerupt, respectively). Pikachu helped as well. After a few minutes of digging, they could hear a low groaning sound underneath the snow. May ordered Blaziken and Camerupt to thaw the ice in that direction.

    They soon found Ash leaned against the wall, holding Croconaw on his lap. It seemed that Ash shielded Croconaw from hitting the wall during the Avalanche. The groaning sound from before was Ash's.

    Later, Ash regained consciousness, but kept his eyes closed. 'Oh, have I got a headache.' Ash noticed that the object his head is resting on feels softer than a regular pillow. Ash opened his eyes, and looked up to see May's face over him. Ash's head was resting on May's lap.

    "May?" Ash squinted to see May's eyes, which were slightly red.

    "Ash!" May practically shouted, which made his head ache once more.

    "I thought that I've gone to heaven. For a moment I thought I saw an angel," he added, with a weak smile.

    His head still not rising from May's lap, Ash turned sideways to glance at everyone crowding around him.

    "You need work on your pickup lines, Ash," May said, relief in her voice.

    "Boy, Ash, you got us all worried, dude," Bryan spoke up.

    "That was crazy, pulling a stunt like that," Misty scolded him, but Ash could see her eyes were bloodshot like May's.

    "How long have I been out?"

    "Two hours. We thought of taking you to a human hospital, but then you woke up."

    Ash made to sit up, but couldn't. Ash got a better look at his surroundings, and realised he is back in his room at the Pokemon Center.

    A doctor came in, followed by Nurse Joy. The latter was holding five Pokeballs on a tray, accompanied by Pikachu. At that moment, the five Pokeballs opened by themselves, and Ash is now surrounded by his Pokemon.

    Grotle made a grab for Ash's head, as usual, but was stopped by Pikachu. Even Sceptile and Luxray couldn't hide their own concern for Ash. Corphish, who was on Sceptile's shoulder, jumped off his perch and landed on Ash's stomach. And Croconaw...

    Well, Croconaw felt that it's his fault that Ash got hurt, so he felt rather subdued.

    The doctor, excusing himself to the Pokemon, went on to examine Ash. "Hmm," he said, reading Ash's vital signs. "Things seem normal," he declared after a few minutes. "But I suggest that you get some bedrest, or, at least, go to the hospital for further examination."

    Ash sat up again, this time sucessfully. "I'm fine, doctor, really..."

    "Are you sure?" the doctor asked.

    "Don't worry, doc, we'll keep an eye on him and make sure he gets proper rest," Brock spoke up.

    "Very well, but I suggest he stay in bed for the rest of the day. I'll be seeing you all..." The doctor left.

    Ash positioned himself so that he could sit next to May, making Corphish slide from his chest to his lap. But May placed her hands on Ash's shoulder and dragged him back downwards to the bed. Ash 's head landed on the pillow, but the force of May's pull just worsened his headache more.

    "You heard the doctor, Ash, you need some rest," she said.

    Bryan chuckled. "Better take your girl's advice, dude. After the long and hard day, you deserve it."

    "Thanks, I'll think about it." Then Ash's head ached again. "Or maybe not."

    Brock called everyone's attention by yawning, very, very loudly. It was meant as a "signal", and everyone but Ash and May understood.

    Max joined Brock in his signal. "It's getting late. We'd all better get some shuteye ourselves."

    The entire group excused themselves out of the room, leaving only Ash, May and the former's Pokemon behind. As Max closed the door behind him, he whispered to the others, "Maybe we should have taken the Pokemon with us..."

    "No," Brock replied. "They want to be right by their trainer's side, so they should. Besides, any of you want to get on either Sceptile's or Luxray's bad sides? And we've got another problem."

    "What's that?"

    "Where are we gonna sleep?" Hikari picked up Brock's train of thought.

    "You dudes can room in with me," Bryan suggested.

    "And the girls can stay with me," Micah added.

    As the others left, Ash and his Pokemon have all fallen asleep. Pikachu and Corphish were sleeping on either side of Ash, Sceptile is leaning on the wall to the far left side of the room, Luxray is curled up on the floor, next to Grotle, and Croconaw, still feeling guilty, is sitting opposite Sceptile, at the far right side.

    May silently moved from her sitting position from the bed, and slowly strode to the room's window, and closed it shut. She turned around to face the sleeping figure on the bed. "Good night, Ash," she whispered.

    ----

    "I just heard the news. Is he-?"

    "Don't worry, Professor, he's fine. May is with him right now."

    It was early in the morning, at 5:30. Professor Oak wasted no time in calling the Cerulean City Pokemon Center after hearing the news of Ash's accident on T.V. Brock took the call, while everyone listened.

    "That's good to hear. If it would have been worse, think of what will happen to my lab when Ash's Pokemon-"

    "We get the picture. Has Mrs. Ketchum heard about it?"

    "Fortunately she wasn't able to watch the evening news. I'll tell her later anyway, this is her son we're talking about." Prof. Oak decided to change the subject. "What about the match with Prima? Have they decided how to finish it?"

    "The PLA will surely make an announcement soon. In the meantime, Ash is getting the rest he needed after three days of non-stop battling."

    Just then, Tracey's voice could be heard from the background. "No, Ambipom, NO! Leave some food for the rest of the Pokemon!"

    "Well, I'd better go. What a day for most of my staff to have a holiday, when all the Pokemon are getting restless."

    "Why?"

    "I don't know. But I think I experienced this sort of behavior before, I just couldn't put my finger on exactly when. Anyway, send my regards to Ash."

    Then Tracey shouted, "Hold it, Muk, stay back, back..."

    "Alright, Professor. We'll be seeing you." Brock signed off.

    ----

    As Corphish turned in its sleep, its pincer landed hard, right on Ash's face, waking the latter up. Ash rose from his slumber to find Pikachu and Corphish sprawled next to him. Maywas also asleep, on a chair right by the bed.

    Just then Grotle woke up as well(Good morning, Ash) and wasted no time in biting Ash's head.

    "OWOWOW, Grotle, stop it, I've still got a headache."

    The commotion woke the others. "How're you feeling now, Ash?" May asked anxiously, as Grotle let go of Ash.

    "I feel like a million Pokebucks-"

    "That's good to hear."

    "I'm not finished. I feel like a million Pokebucks' worth of coins just hit my head." Ash rubbed his head at the part where Grotle's jaws were locked on. "What time is it?" To answer his own question, Ash looked at his Pokegear. It was now 8:30 A.M. "I'm really hungry."

    May smiled to herself, knowing Ash is back to his old self. She took him by the arm. "Come on, let's go. I'll cook you a big breakfast."

    Ash recalled all his Pokemon, to their dislike for disturbing their sleep, and went out. Outside the center's hallway is surprisingly deserted. The two later heard voices(or more on a commotion) coming from the lobby.

    The two entered the lobby to find everyone in front of the large T.V. The news that was on:

    "After the unexpected accident the day before concerning Prima and her second challenger Ash Ketchum, the Pokemon League Association has decided that the match in question was a victory for the challenger. The Elite trainer Prima added that this is to honor the trainer's valiant effort to protect his Pokemon, a trait that should be possesed by any good trainer.

    "The awarding ceremony will take place today at 9:30 A.M., right before the third opening of the Prima's Cup. It's notable that this is the first time in fifteen years before an Elite trainer was ever defeated by forfeiting, or at least being defeated at all."

    "That can't be the right thing to do," Ash spoke up. Everyone turned to him. "I don't want to win this competition by forfeit. It's just not right."

    "There's nothing we can do, Ash," Brock said to his friend. "The PLA have already made that decision."

    "I can't win like this..."

    "What are you going to do about it?" Misty asked.

    "Just watch," Ash said, with a certain air in his voice.

    Ash completely forgot about his appetite. After the news broadcast Ash and Pikachu sped back to the stadium, closely followed by his friends.

    "Ash, wait up," May panted, a few feet behind Ash. But this time Ash didn't listen to her, and kept on going.

    He wasted no time in finding Prima. The latter was found conversing with an Officer Jenny. Prima saw Ash walking towards her, and stopped her conversation to speak to him.

    "How is your condition, Ash? I thought that you might still need a little rest after yesterday."

    Ash waved off Prima's concern and got straight to the point. "What's up with you forfeiting our match? I don't deserve to win that way."

    "I feel that it's my obligation, being partly responsible for your accident. Plus, like I stated in the news, you risked your own life to save your Pokemon, something that I admire."

    "But still... You know what? Over the years of my being a Pokemon trainer, I've met countless members of the Elite Four(ironically). Bruno, Lance, Agatha, Lucian, Steven, yourself, the list could go on for hours... You know what you all have in common?

    "Aside from being the world's best trainers, I have never defeated a single one of you guys. This competition is my chance to change that. Ever since being defeated by an Elite trainer, I've always trained my Pokemon harder with defeating you as my focus."

    "Thank you. But what do you suggest we do?"

    "What else? I want a rematch, and my Pokemon would love that too."

    By this time May and the others have caught up to Ash. "A rematch?" Prima inquired.

    "Yeah. Same rules as before. I want to earn my victory, not be sympathized for it."

    Prima thought for a moment. 'This boy, he has definitely matured since Mandarin Island. Is that what Drake sees in him?' "A rematch would mean that your wins from our previous battle would be null, you understand?"

    "Yeah, I understand."

    "Then I have no reason to object. Name the time and place."

    ----

    The time: late morning. The place: Cerulean Cape beach. Ash and Prima are all set for their rematch, and this time, aside from Ash's friends, there is no audience. The crowd is back in Cerulean City, watching the third wave of the Prima's Cup, which is now underway. However, there is a news crew present to cover the whole battle.

    Prima declared that the whole beach, and maybe the water, is their battleground. Ash stood on one side, close to the Cape Lighthouse, while Prima stood at the beach border closest to the city.

    "This time, it will be a 3-on-3 match. Same rules apply," the referee announced. "Whoever wins 2 matches first will be the winner."

    Ash thought that being on the beach would dampen Prima's chances since the heat would weaken her Ice Pokemon.

    However, Brock pointed out that some of Prima's Pokemon are also Water-type, and could use the water to their advantage. Plus, there are rainclouds overhead, so this may not be a hot day after all.

    "Let's make things a bit interesting, Ash," Prima suddenly said.

    "How?"

    "By changing each match into a double battle, giving us a full 6 Pokemon team apiece. A victory is earned in each match if at least one of the Pokemon of the opponent is knocked out."

    "Sounds good to me."

    "A double battle? Now this gets pretty interesting," Max spoke up.

    "Just the way Ash wants it," Brock added. "Though Prima may have a reason why she wanted it to be a double battle."

    "Okay, I choose Sceptile and Corphish!" Sceptile came out of its Pokeball, followed by Corphish.

    "And I choose Mamoswine and Glaceon!" The large mammoth-like Pokemon from before, accompanied by a light-blue fox with rhombus-shaped ears, tail- and cap-ends. Ash examined the new face in his Pokedex:

    Glaceon, the Fresh Snow Pokemon

    It is the 7th evolution of Eevee, a result of growing in a snowy evironment. As a protective technique, it can completely freeze it's fur to make its hairs stand like needles.


    "Sceptile?" Misty asked. "But that's risky. Grass-types are weak against Ice-types. I hope Ash knows what he's thinking."

    "Listen, guys, you have to work together, this time, okay?" Sceptile nodded though hesitantly, and Corphish clicked its claws in agreement.

    Sceptile(Just don't cramp my style, crabby.)

    Corphish(Just lighten up for a while, will ya?)

    The referee, stnding in a bouy a litte distance from shore, signaed the beginning of the match. "First match. Sceptile and Corphish vs. Mamoswine and Glaceon. BEGIN!"

    "Sceptile, use Leaf Blade on Mamoswine! Corphish, ram Glaceon with a Tackle attack!"

    Corphish dashed like a bullet towards Glaceon, and Sceptile's "arm" leaves began to glow light green as it jumped towards the topside of Mamoswine. both of Prima's Pokemon easily evaded the attacks, though Mamoswine avoided his by using Mudslap. Sceptile kneeled on all fours, trying to wipe the mud from its face, when it was suddenly grabbed by Mamoswine.

    Corphish, meanwhile, was being barraged by Ice Shards. The lobster evaded the sharp projectiles by digging into the sand.

    "Forget about Corphish, Glaceon," Prima ordered. "Go assist Mamoswine."

    Glaceon jumped to the top of Mamoswine's head, and with a little throw from Mamoswine's snout, Glaceon dashed towards Sceptile for an Ice Fang. But Ash has anticipated this.

    "Now, Corphish!"

    The sand between Glaceon and Sceptile erupted, and out came Corphish, going for a Crabhammer uppercut. It almost worked, as Glaceon barely avoided the attack.

    Sceptile smiled at its partner as Corphish began prancing about in front of Sceptile. Glaceon looked at the two of them in contempt, wiping dirt from its cheeks by the paws.

    "Good work, Corphish, I knew you woudn't let your best friend down, right?" Ash said, winking.

    Sceptile(Who said he was my best friend?)

    Corphish(Come on, aren't we, old buddy?)

    (Call me 'old' again and you'll regret it.)

    "Okay, you two, let's continue this battle," Ash stopped his Pokemon bickering. "Watch OUT!" Glaceon and Mamoswine used a joint Ice Beam and aimed it right at their opponents. Reacting quickly, Sceptile grabbed Corphish and jumped high to safety. The sandy ground below the two Pokemon began to freeze over.

    'Is Prima's Ice Pokemon this powerful that they can create ice floes in the beach?' Sceptile landed safely on a rock at Ash's side, still holding Corphish.

    Sceptile(You're gaining weight, a lot. Lay off the Pokefood.)

    (Heh, look who's talking. You're the one who keeps threatening Tracey about food when we were in the lab.)

    "Come on guys, stop fighting among yourselves. We have to-" Ash didn't finish what he said, as he suddenly fell flat on his back. The referee then halted the match. Pikachu looked anxiously at its trainer.

    (ASH!) the three Pokemon(Corphish, Sceptile and Pikachu) shouted his name together.

    "ASH!" May ran over to him, and checked if he was okay. He is feeling dizzy, with swirly-eyes and all. "What's wrong?"

    Ash stared at May right in the eyes and smiled sheepishly. "I'm really, really hungry."

    Everyone facefaulted. Pikachu and Corphish sweatdropped, while Sceptile had its mouth open that its twig fell out. Prima suppressed a smile on her face.

    "You got so occupied preparing for this battle the whole morning, that you forgot to eat breakfast," May said sighing.

    "We could all use a lunch break. Ref?" Prima half-heartedly suggested.

    "Well, if you don't have any objection, then... You have thirty minutes."

    Ash sprang from his spot immediately. "Thanks, ref!" May watched him carefully as Ash ate the special lunch she cooked for him. The other trainers and their Pokemon joined in, and Prima also was having her own lunch.

    "Hm-hm, now I know that your cooking can surpass Brock's, May," Ash mumbled, his mouth ful of stew. Brock snickered at this comment.

    After finishing his meal, Ash stood up, and ready for battle. He made for his spot on the battlefield. But May stopped him by pulling on his jacket edges. "Aww, come on, May, I want to finish this quickly!" Ash compained, as May held him in place.

    "No battles after eating. Besides, you still have fifteen minutes of break left."

    "You're beginning to sound like my mom."

    "I promised her that I'll look after you during this whole adventure, and so I am."

    Ash grimaced, but sat back in place. Sceptile looked at its trainer as it was chewing through some special chow Brock prepared, and sighed (The only human I respect, has now fallen to the dark side. The dark side of females.)

    Pikachu(You still haven't gotten over that rejection from Meganium, huh?)

    Corphish(Tsk, tsk. Poor, tormented soul.)

    Sceptile(Shut up, you two!)

    CONTINUED...

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    hey ive actually been reading since the beggining and i love it, so dont you dare stop, but I'll review from now on, I liked this chapter, I loved sceptiles 'dark side' speech that was funny, well hope for you to update soon
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    -Thanks. I'll always update as long as someone reviews.
    -From now on, all Pokemon are now referred in this fic in gender-based pronouns. In this dynamic, I'm folowing that most of Ash's Pokemon are male, except for 2: Bayleef and Ambipom. May's is opposite: only one of hers is male(Munchlax).

    EF14:Have a Not so NIce Day, Part III

    After their lunch break, Ash and his Pokemon are ready to battle again. Surprisingly, the iced part of the beach still hasn't thawed up.

    "This time no more interruptions, understood, Ash?" Prima called to him.

    "Don't worry, no more interruptions." Corphish and Sceptile poised themselves on either side of Ash, while Prima's Pokemon stood on either side of her.

    The referee looked at both sides, and announced the resuming of the match.

    "Okay, Sceptile, use Bullet Seed! Corphish, go for Bubblebeam!" Ash's two Pokemon fired their respective projectiles at Mamoswine. But Glaceon protected its partner by using Protect.

    After the Protect's shield wore off, Glaceon placed a well-rounded Slam on both Sceptile and Corphish. Then Mamoswine came bearing down on them for a Take Down. Sceptile used his speed to evade the attack, but Corphish wasn't so lucky, and he rolled out of the way after almost being stepped on.

    "Sceptile, find Corphish, quick," Ash ordered. But there's no need. Corphish reappeared from underground, a few feet rom Sceptile. "Okay, this time use another Leaf blade, Sceptile."

    Sceptile's leaves began to glow again and this time his target is Glaceon. The two combatants began exchanging blows in midair, with Leaf Blade and Slam, respectively.

    Ash diverted his attention to Corphish. "Corphish, use Bubblebeam on Mamoswine!"

    Corphish fired Bubblebeam at the massive Mamoswine charging towards him again. The Bubblebeam hit the giant right in the eyes, temporarily blinding him. Corphish jumped out of the way as Mamoswine crashed into a boulder.

    Meanwhile, Sceptile was nearly swiped by one of Glaceon's "cap" tips with Ice Spear. Sceptile barraged Glaceon with Bullet Seed, but his opponent used another Protect, which was then used to ram Sceptile. Sceptile shielded itself with his arms, but Glaceon tried to literally flatten the reptile by landing on him with Protect still in effect. Sceptile somersaulted backwards just as he hit the ground, evading Glaceon's attack.

    Mamoswine shaked its head to clear its vision. Corphish wasted no time in cimbing up to the giant's topside. Mamoswine, sensing the "hitchiker", tried to shake Corphish off. But Corphish grabbed onto Mamoswine's thick hide, as he was being swayed to and fro.

    Sceptile noticed Corphish on top of Mamoswine and then shifted his gaze towards his trainer. Ash understood what his Pokemon is trying to say. "Sceptile, go follow Corphish's lead!"

    Sceptile jumped onto Mamoswine as well. Corphish acknowledged his companion, and Sceptile grabbed Corpish and jumped off as Glaceon came after them.

    As they were in the air, Ash gave his next command. "Bubblebeam, Corphish!" Corphish fired Bubblebeam at Glaceon and Mamoswine below them. At pure instinct, Glaceon used Protect to generate a shield that was big enough to cover both of them.

    Sceptile and Corphish have finally landed on the ground. Mamoswine, with Glaceon's Protect still in effect, charged towards them again. Corphish went on one side, and Sceptile the other. Glaceon, still on top of Mamoswine, faced Corphish, and Mamoswine faced Sceptile.

    "Corphish, Taunt Glaceon!" Corphish danced a ittle bit, and stuck his tongue out at Glaceon. The latter, furious, jumped off her partner and chased Corphish, who found sanctuary by digging underground again. "Now, Sceptile, use Leaf Blade on Mamoswine!"

    Sceptile lashed out his blades again at Mamoswine. The latter countered with a Headbutt. Sceptile covered his front so that the Leaf Blade(s) hit Mamoswine first at the impact. A flash, and Sceptile and Mamoswine stood on either side of the beach, almost frozen in place, in the same positions that they were in when they attacked. Then on of Mamoswine's knees buckled, and the rest folowed suit. Sceptie fell to its knees, but remained upright.

    "Mamoswine is down. Victory goes to Corphish and Sceptile," the referee announced.

    Sceptile smirked and crossed his arms, and Glaceon, who was about to pounc on Corphish, halted at the announcement.

    "Good work, you guys," Ash said, as he ran over and congratulated his Pokemon.

    Pikachu(Great work, you guys, top rate.)

    Sceptile spat on the ground(Why does he get top billing when it was I who made the win?), as Corphish joined them.

    Corphish(Don't sweat it, pal, I always give you my credit.)

    Sceptile(Thanks a heap. Makes me feel a lot better.)

    Prima smiled as she called her Pokemon back to their Pokeballs. "This time I choose Blastoise and Abomasnow!"

    In the next match, Prima chose Blastoise, a large, dark blue tortoise with cannons jutting out of the top of its dark brown shell, and Abomasnow, a large, white creature resembling a white bear(or maybe the yeti).

    After returning Sceptile and Corphish, Ash looked apprehensive as he glanced at the two giants. "Pikachu, go get them!" he said to his best friend. "Luxray, go help Pikachu!" Luxray appeared beside Pikachu, and the two pokemon are both charged(literally) for batte.

    "Second match. Blastoise and Abomasnow vs. Pikachu and Luxray," the referee announced. "BEGIN!"

    "Pikachu, use Thunderbolt! Luxray, use Fire Fang!" Pikachu charged at Blastoise, and let out a powerful electric beam.

    "Blastoise, Iron Defense!" Just as Pikachu's Thunderbolt hit Blastoise, the latter withdrawed into his shell. A glint in the "armor", and the Thunderbolt had no effect! Both Ash and Pikachu were dumbfounded at this.

    "How did that happen?"

    Pikachu(How did that happen?)

    "It seems that Prima trained her Blastoise really well, that it can survive electric attacks," Brock concluded.

    'I should have seen this coming,' Ash thought, only half-listening to Brock. 'Didn't I see that Blastoise defeat a Jolteon before?'

    Meanwhile, Luxray jumped on Abomasnow, fangs flaring. Abomasnow easily swiped his opponent, knocking Luxray back first into the ground. Luxray somersaulted right before Abomasnow targeted him for an Ice Beam. Luxray continued running after Abomasnow trailed the Ice Beam after the lion.

    Luxray darted for Pikachu(Get on behind me, or we'll both be frozen over!)

    Pikachu had no choice but to comply, and immediately jumped onto Luxray's back. The yellow mouse hung on as Luxray darted in and around Abomasnow's Ice Beam.

    Pikachu(Won't he ever run out?)

    Luxray(Unfortunately, for us, maybe no.)

    Pikachu(Watch out!)

    The two of them were busy evading Abomasnow that they didn't notice the intimidating figure of Blastoise looming right over them. Luxray freezed right in his tracks, and made a U-turn, only to face Abomasnow. Ash's Pokemon are boxed in!

    "Blastoise, Hydro Pump," Prima ordered. Both of Blastoise's cannons aimed for Luxray and Pikachu, and a powerful stream of water gushed out.

    Reacting instinctively, Luxray, with Pikachu still on his back, jumped the highest he possibly can, made a landing for Blastoise's head, and jumped away to safety. The Hydro Pump kept on, and hit Abomasnow, but the latter wasn't even fazed. It is a part-grass-type, after all.

    As soon as Luxray made a safe landing, Ash gave his next command. "Pikachu, Luxray, Blastoise is vulnerable while using Hydro Pump. Go use Thunderbolt together!"

    Pikachu and Luxray charged themselves up, and used Thunderbolt on Blastoise. This time Ash's timing was correct, and Blastoise wasn't able to brace for the attack.

    As Blastoise plopped back to the ground, Ash congratulated his two Pokemon. "Nice one, you two," he said happily.

    "Don't celebrate just yet, Ash," Prima said, smirking. "Abomasnow, use Fling!"

    From underneath the white skin(?) Abomasnow took out a Sitrus Berry, and hurled it towards Blastoise. The turtle managed to eat it, and was able to stand up!

    "Isn't that against the rules?" May said, standing up. "Using items in battle?"

    "Actually, no," Max answered his sister. "Abomasnow is still using an attack move, so there's nothing against the rules about that."

    'Oh, c---,' Ash cursed silently. To make things worse, Blastoise began glowing a familiar blue color. 'Great, for the first time I'm not exactly happy to see THAT.'

    Blastoise turned around to face Luxray and Pikachu, a menacing smile crawling upon his face.

    Pikachu(This... Is bad...)

    Luxray(Thanks for pointing out the obvious.)

    "Luxray, get out of the way!" Ash frantically ordered his Pokemon. Luxray flexed his back, and launched Pikachu high into the air, and safely landing a good distance from Luxray. Just then Luxray was hit full-force with a Torrent-charged Hydro Pump!

    Luxray was carried off by the force of Blastoise's attack. He was then seen backed up against a rock, while Blastoise's Hydro Pump still kept on. The force of Blastoise's attack was so strong, that in no time at all the rock where Luxray was knocked back on crumbled, and Luxray was sent flying backwards through the rubble!

    "LUXRAY!" Ash shouted in concern. The shout snapped Luxray back to his senses, while still in midair, being juggled by Hydro Pump. 'Hold on, maybe Luxray can-' "Luxray, use Thunder on the Hydro Pump, now!"

    Luxray let out its most powerful Thunder. The Hydro Pump acted like a conductor, and was able to fry Blastoise, without missing. The Hydro pump finally stopped, and Luxray landed with all feet on the ground, panting heavily.

    Surprisingly, Prima looked calm. "Recycle." Blastoise stood up once again, after recycling its Sitrus berry.

    "You've gotta be kidding me," Ash said, hanging his head.

    Luxray(You and me both...) Just then Luxray's hind knees buckled. It seems Luxray had sustained too much damage.

    "Luxray, are you alright?"

    Luxray trembled as he stood up, with great difficulty(I'll manage.)

    Just then, Pikachu(Uh, guys? A little help here...)

    Both Ash and Luxray turned to see Pikachu covered halfway in ice. It seems that as Ash was concentrating on Luxray, that he forgot all about Pikachu, who was dodging Ice beams all this time.

    Luxray immediately darted towards his partner and used his tail to unfreeze Pikachu, the same way he did in his battle with Delibird. After that, Blastoise and Abomasnow surrounded them.

    Pikachu and Luxray stood side by side, emitting sparks, and this time poised for the next wave of attacks. Luxray(You ready for this, smallfry?), looking like he's ready for more, despite fatigue.

    Pikachu(Try to keep up.)

    Ash smiled at his two Pokemon. "Okay, guys, give it all you've got!"

    It seem that Luxray and Pikachu had a plan, as they had no hesitation in running towards their respective opponents. Ash seems to know what his Pokemon are up to, as well, as a small smile crept in his face.

    Acting like synchronized fighters, Pikachu jumped Blastoise, and Luxray jumped Abomasnow, both at the same time. It was like a still-frame, when Pikachu and Luxray are both in midair, and then Blastoise and Abomasnow fired their respective attacks, and, hit nothing! Pikachu and Luxray both have Double Teamed, and their opponent's targets are just the illusions!

    Facing each other, Bastoise unwittingly fired the Hydro Pump in Abomasnow's direction. The latter, knocked back by the water attack, accidentally hit Bastoise with Ice Beam, freezing Blastoise in place!

    The referee turned to Prima, to see if the Elite trainer will pull off another survival tactic. But this time Prima only smiled, and lifted her hands to the air, conceding defeat. And so the ref declared, "Bastoise is down. Victory goes to Luxray and Pikachu."

    Ash jumped the highest he possiby can in the air, joined by Pikachu and Luxray, as well as the other Pokemon, who let themselves out of their Pokeballs again. Of course, save for Sceptile, who is beyond jumping and merely celebrated with a grunt.

    ---

    "Here," Prima said, extending a closed fist to Ash. Ash took it, and Prima opened her fist to drop a small object in Ash's palm. It is a white, octagon-shaped badge with a stylized "4" in the center.

    Ash and Pikachu looked at it, puzzled. "A badge?"

    "That is called a Master Badge, signifying you defeated a member of the Elite Four. Right now the badge is shining in the color white, my colors. Defeating another member will make the badge flash two colors. Once all members of the Elite Four are defeated, the badge shines alternating between the four colors."

    Ash held out the MasterBadge, and the late morning sun, appearing right behind the clouds, reflected on the badge's surface. "I got a Master Badge!"

    Everyone gathered around him, and admired the new badge. Brock grabbed Ash in a headlock again.

    "Looks like you may have a small chance of winning this competition, after all," he said jokingly.

    "Thanks a lot," Ash retorted sarcastically.

    "So, Ash where are you headed up to next?" Max spoke up.

    Ash stared at the sea, facing north. "Back to Sinnoh. I feel that's where I should face my next challenge." He turned to Prima. "Who is the Elite member there?"

    "A woman who goes by the name of Bertha. She's seen a few years of Pokemon training more than anyone else I know, and that would mean-"

    "A large abundance of experience," Ash finished.

    "Ash, I don't know why Drake put you in such a situation, wagering your Pokemon. But you definitely show promise. I wish you luck further into the competition."

    "Thanks, Prima."

    ---

    On their way back to the city, Misty's Pokegear began ringing like crazy. "Oh, dear, I shouldn't have left the gym unattended for so long," she declared. Misty ran ahead of the others, closely followed by Brock, Max and Hikari, while May and Ash lagged behind.

    "So you're going to return to Sinnoh?" May suddenly asked.

    "Yeah," Ash said absentmindedly, still looking at his Master Badge.

    "You don't mind if... I come along, do you?"

    "Are you kidding? It will be like old times. Besides, I can't continue with a far-off relationship, I want us to be together longer," Ash joked, eyes twinkling puppy-dog style.

    "Again, Ash, it's 'long-distance', not 'far-off'," May said, eyebrows raised.

    "Hey, guys." Both Ash and May turned to see the others a few yards ahead of them. The one who called to them was Max.

    "What's up?" Ash asked as he and May joined them.

    Brock was cleaning his ear with his pinky. "Well, it seems my mom decided to extend her vacation with the rest of my family, and dad can't operate the gym on his own, so... I guess I'll be heading back to Pewter City."

    "So you're not coming with us?" Ash asked.

    "Sorry, buddy."

    "And I can't come along; I have to collect my Kanto Badges for the Indigo League," Max reminded them.

    Ash looked crestfallen. "It's going to be weird, travelling in a group where there are two girls and only one guy: me."

    Hikari raised her finger. "Correction. One guy and 'one girl'."

    May turned to her. "You're not coming, too, Hikari?"

    "I've only set foot here in Kanto, then if I travel with you guys, that means I have to return to Sinnoh. Not happening, that's for sure."

    Ash and May both narrowed their eyes at their friends. "Is there some reason why you guys are actually leaving, other than the ones you mentioned?" Ash questioned.

    Brock, Max and Hikari about-faced, and ran away, before Ash and May could get their hands on them. "COME BACK HERE!"

    CONTINUED...

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    I love your Pokemon descriptions, you have a really nice writing style as well, keep it up! Ash and May ALONE in a region? This is like a dream come true! Can't wait for more
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    EF15: Shippy Ship Shenanigans

    The S.S. Mollusk left Cerulean Cape Harbor, carrying about a hundred passengers, heading for Sinnoh. Among these passengers are Ash and May, the former of which is heading for the aforementioned region for his second Elite Four competition.

    The couple can be seen in the rear starboard side of the ship, bidding farewell to their companions, Max(May's brother) and Hikari, who are staying in the Kanto region for different reasons. Both Ash and May felt a bit awkward, seeing this is the first time that the two of them travelled alone together since becoming an item.

    Their uneasy feelings worsened when Ash placed a call to Professor Oak's lab. The professor greeted Ash in the same manner, and several of Ash's Pokemon appeared by his side to greet their trainer.

    "Hi, Professor, have you heard the news? I won against Prima, one of the Elite Four."

    "Yes, of course I heard. Your Pokemon kept bugging me to let them watch the broadcast of your battle. Congratulations on achieving such a victory."

    "Thanks. Right now, I'm calling from the S.S. Mollusk, headed for Sinnoh."

    "Back to Sinnoh already?" the professor inquired.

    "Yeah, for some weird reason I feel that the competition there should be my next stop."

    "I see. Well, I'm not one to dampen your spirits, Ash. And it's lucky that you called. I seem to hear a certain rumor regarding-"

    "Oh, HONEY!" Just then Delia appeared beside Prof. Oak. "I heard the news. You really make me so proud."

    Ash scratched his head. "Aww, mom, I never thought you were that enthusiastic about me defeating an Elite trainer like that-"

    "Who said anything about Pokemon battles?" Prof. Oak winked at Ash from the background and started whistling "casually". "I am talking about your lovelife, silly."

    'She heard? Uh-oh...'

    "Now where is the lucky girl?" Delia continued.

    "Uh, she's on the observation deck, with our Pokemon," Ash said sheepishly. He took care not to look his mother in the eyes.

    "Now, I want you to take good care of her. Don't hurt her feelings... Always make her happy... And don't do anything that you might regret..."

    Ash didn't quite understand. "What do you mean, mom?"

    Delia waved her finger in a scolding manner. "Honey, what do you think Mimey found when she was cleaning out your room one day, hm? Under your bed?"

    Ash choked back in his seat. "Hold on, mom, I can explain... T-those are not m-mine, I swear... I, uh, just borrowed them from Brock for the ads, or... Uh, or maybe from Gary-"

    "I HEARD THAT." Gary appeared on Oak's other side. "I don't involve myself for things like those."

    Ash laughed nervously. Just then May appeared, carrying Pikachu. "Hello there, Mrs. Ketchum."

    "Hello, May," Delia replied, and suddenly winked at her. "Now you take care, okay? And, sweetie(referring to May, just as Ash is trying to sneak out of earshot), make sure that Ash doesn't get strange ideas in his head."

    "Huh?" May said quizzically.

    "Oh, and also have him change his you-know-whats every-"

    "Okay, Mom, Professor Oak, Gary, 'bye, see 'ya," Ash said, very quickly. He turned off the videophone. As they signed off, Ash heaved a huge sigh. "That was close."

    May turned to him. "So, what did your mother mean by 'strange ideas', hm?"

    "Eh, he-he, heh?" Ash swallowed, hard.

    ---

    Ash luckily managed to avoid May's questioning. They spent the rest of the day lounging and chatting with the other passengers. There was a large pool for the passengers to swim with their Pokemon on the front deck.

    Ash's Sceptile is once again having a sparring match with his rival, Blaziken. They were "fighting" on an upper deck just above the pool. Munchlax is lounging on a floatation bed in one side of the pool. Squirtle tried to play a little prank. She jumped onto Munchlax, and together they sinked into the pool. Corphish is lurking deep at the bottom of the pool, hiding from another trainer's Bidoof, who he seemed to have angered.

    "GERONIMO!" Ash shouted, as he and Pikachu cannonballed into the pool. A few Pokemon, and trainers, got wet from his dive, but they didn't bother; they were all having so much fun.

    Ash floated alongside Munchlax, staring at the clear blue sky, and Pikachu has now hitched a ride with a Starmie. Croconaw, who disappeared for awhile, reappearred, carrying a huge tray of food. At the sight, Munchlax immediately jumped out, and made a grab for Croconaw's food. The two chased after each other around the perimeter of the pool.

    Ash spied the sparring match above and smiled. 'Looks like Sceptile is getting training from Blaziken.' Then he glanced at the chase around the pool, and sweatdropped. 'Eh, at least they're getting some exercise as well, I think.'

    "Ash."

    Ash snapped out of his trance, and looked at May, who just arrived. She is wearing an emerald green two-piece swimsuit. Ash grinned at her and said, "Come on in. The water's fine."

    May, instead of diving in, lowered herself into the pool, and swam towards Ash. "Is this all you're gonna do all day? Float in this pool? You know you have a competition to train for."

    "Come on, May, give me a break. We don't get to Sinnoh until late tomorrow afternoon. We have plenty of time to relax."

    Ash tried to get a little sneaky, and grabbed May's hand, pulling them both underwater. May was slightly annoyed at first, but Ash closed in for a kiss, to which she smiled and didnt resist. However, they were interrupted by Corphish grabbing onto Ash's left leg.

    "YEEEOWW!" Ash jumped high over the pool surface. "Come back here, you!"

    Acting nimbly, Corphish avoided Ash and joined the crowd in watching Sceptile and Blaziken. Corphish clicked his claws(Hmmph. Show-offs.)

    Sceptile stopped using Leaf Blade and turned to him(If you don't like it, why did you come here in the first place, crabby?)

    Corphish wasn't listening(I'm beginning to think that you're in this for more than battles, buddy.)

    Sceptile, annoyed, fired Bullet Seed in Corphish's direction, causing the lobster to scurry away. (These times I even wonder why he is my best friend.)

    Blaziken smirked(So much for your loner image.)

    Sceptile spat(HAH! Don't get me started, lady. Now, where were we?)

    Blaziken(Call me "lady" again, and I'll kick your sorry a--, which is what I'm about to do.)

    Sceptile grinned devilishly(Oh, that's what you think.)

    And they resumed their sparring match.

    ---

    May wasn't exactly happy about the rooming arrangements. As a bid to make their travelling more affordable, Ash requested for them to have the same room. But that's not a problem. No, the real reason for May's annoyance is that not only are they going to share the same room, but they have to share the only bed in the room!

    "Pikachu, you don't mind if you sleep between Ash and me, do you?"

    Pikachu(Don't worry, I don't mind.)

    "What do you take me for?" Ash asked, crossing his arms.

    "I just figured out what your mother was trying to tell me earlier. This is to assure her that it won't definitely happen."

    "But-"

    "Either that, or you'll sleep on the cold, hard floor."

    Defeated, Ash retreated to the far side of his portion of the bed. But Pikachu had other things in mind as Ash and May slept on either side of him.

    ---

    Pikachu made sure that the two people beside him are sound asleep. Then, smiling mischievously, Pikachu jumped out of bed, and ran over to the chair where Ash's and May's Pokeball belts were hung.

    Pikachu took one Pokeball from each belt, and opened them. Sceptile and Blaziken came out, stretching and yawning.

    Pikachu(Okay, guys, time to initiate Operation:AaMayL.)

    Sceptile(Now? It's...) He looked at the clock over the bed (It's already midnight. Can't it wait 'til-)

    Pikahu(No, it can't wait. Now help me move these two.)

    Blaziken moved May, while Sceptile did the same with Ash. Pikachu directed the two into "intertwining" the humans in their sleep. Then the three schemers took a look at their "work of art". Ash now has both arms around May, while May had both hands rested against Ash's chest. Their foreheads are lightly touching each other, and their lips are almost in contact.

    Pikachu snickered(Yep, we've done real good this time).

    Just then, Corphish let himself out of his Pokeball. As usual, he tried to grab Ash with Vicegrip, but Sceptile pulled him back. Corphish tried to struggle out of Sceptile's hold.

    Blaziken(What are you doing?)

    Corphish(My job, of course. I... Have... To... Interrupt... Ash... It's the running gag.)

    Sceptile placed Corphish underneath his arms(Come on, let's get out of here before they wake up. Besides, I have a little score to settle with you, dear friend of mine.)

    Corphish(Gulp... Uh-oh...)

    ---

    While Sceptile is having some alone time with Corphish(you could hear the lobster screaming), Pikachu wandered around the bottom deck. He smelled some food, and figured he must be close to the kitchens.

    The enticing aroma came from the double doors to the left. As a sailor walked out, and before the door closed, Pikachu darted inside.

    Pikachu held his nose out in the air and sniffed. But as he did, a yellow streak darted past him. Pikachu turned around, and found another Pikachu. The two rodents stared at each other, and (our) Pikachu started to turn red.

    AUTHOR'S NOTES: at this point to prevent confusion, Ash's Pikachu will be called A(sh's)-chu, the other Pikachu will be O(ther)-chu. And O-chu is female, so you know what that means...

    O-chu waved at A-chu casually(Hi!). Nervously, A-chu returned the gesture. (I didn't know that there's another Pikachu on board this ship.)

    A-chu(Eh, me, too...)

    O-chu(You hungry?) A-chu nervously nodded. (Wait here, I think I can ask my trainer to get some food for us. She doesn't mind, she works here.)

    A-chu waited outside the kitchen nervously. After a few minutes, O-chu walked out, carrying a trayful of goodies. A-chu offered to help carry the food, and together they went topside. They found a cozy spot next to the pool earlier.

    Unknown to them, Sceptile is looking down at them. Blaziken appeared beside him, and they gazed at the two Pokemon below.

    Sceptile gave his trademark smirk(Love is in the air.)

    Blaziken(I thought you've sworn off that sort of thing...)

    Corphish(No, he hasn't... He-) But Sceptile stuffed Corphish's mouth with a large piece of cotton.

    Back to the Chus, O-chu looked at her new friend, who seems to be putting an excess amount of ketchup on almost everything he will eat.

    O-chu(You must really like that stuff...)

    A-chu(This is the best condiment in the world...) A-chu stuffed a ketchup(uh, -laden, or -soaked, you decide) hotdog into his mouth. Some of the red stuff cluttered his entire lower face.

    O-chu shrugged, and decided to give it a try. She took another hotdog(with you-know-what) A-chu handed to her, and gulped it down in one swallow. O-chu moaned in delight.

    A-chu(There's a Pokemon after my heart...)

    The two continued their meal under the watchful eye of A-chu's friends. After that, O-chu left the tray outside the kitchens, and that left the two of them to explore the ship together.

    ---

    Back to Ash and May... Neither one has waken up yet, and strangely, they didn't seem to have changed the positions their Pokemon put them in. Just then, Ash stirred, and he brought his face closer to May's.

    ---

    The two Pikachus are now found running around the ship's deck. En route, they found a sleepy Croconaw and Munchlax resting against a wall(neither Ash nor May bothered to call them yet). Croconaw struggled to open his eyes as the two ran past them(Man, that's sweet. Young love, is it?).

    Munchlax shrugged(Isn't he supposed to be older? He has been in this show longer than any of us.)

    The Pikachus stood at the ship's bow(Titanic-style), and watched a few Wailord appear right beside the boat.

    ---

    May shrugged off the cold, but felt more warmth as Ash held her tighter.

    ---

    At a little before morning, A-chu woke up right outside Ash's and May's room. O-chu was nowhere to be found. Blaziken loomed over him, while Sceptile and Corphish have their backs to each other, snoring next to him.

    A-chu(Wh-where is she?). He rubbed the sand from his eyes.

    Blaziken(When we found you, you were all alone. The other Pikachu left before we could meet her.)

    A-chu looked a bit disappointed. Just then, Corphish's nose bubble burst, and he jolted awake. No one seeemed to notice, so he sneaked past all of them, right into the room, since the door is ajar. He found Ash and May still "entangled", on the bed. Corphish immediately jumped on the bed, and did his "job", Vicegripping Ash's ankle.

    "YEEOWWW!"

    The other Pokemon immediately ran into the room, but it's too late. Ash literally jumped, and May woke up from the noise. Corphish can be seen cackling underneath the blankets.

    ---

    After apologizing to their neighbors for the noise, Ash recalled all Pokemon into their Pokeballs. A flustered May is seen scolding Pikachu, after figuring out he and the 3rd-gen starters had orchestrated the whole "bed" scenario(don't ask me how they figured it out.).

    The rest of the trip went without incident. Soon the ship made port in Sandgem Town. As the passengers left the ship, Pikachu stayed at the plank of the boat, hoping he could see his new friend again.

    "Come on, Pikachu," Ash called to his partner, from the other side of the plank, on the harbor. "Professor Rowan is expecting us at his lab. I don't feel like making him wait."

    Dissapointed, Pikachu jumped onto Ash's shoulder. "What's wrong with you, buddy?"

    Pikachu(I feel like we're now on the same boat now, Ash.)

    ---

    Back at the ship, O-chu can be seen at the ship's bow. She gazed sadly upon Ash, May and Pikachu leaving the harbor.

    "What's wrong with you, She-Chu?"

    O-(oh, wait, it's actually She-)chu sighed(I feel like I've lost my best friend.)

    "Best friend? I thought I wuz yur best friend?"

    She-chu(This is different. He's really... Special...)

    "Uh-huh. Well, we'd better head back to the kitchens before that trainer of yours throws a fit."

    She-chu took one last look at the departing trainers, and walked off with her companion.

    CONTINUED...
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    EF16:Sinnoh Problems

    May looked at the large wall in front of them that is Professor Rowan's laboratory. Pikachu, still feeling sad, was moping on May's shoulder instead of Ash's.

    Ash, meanwhile, is talking to the voicebox next to the gate. 'Wonder why the Prof made this extra security? Last time I was here, the walls are half the size they are now today, and the steel gate?'

    "Professor Rowan? It's me, Ash Ketchum from Pallet Town, Kanto," Ash was saying.

    After a few moments, the gate opened, for the visitors to get through. They were met by a squad of howling Growlithe and Mightyena. A police officer(not an Officer Jenny) held the Pokemon back. But he only grunted to the newcomers, and ushered them in.

    May looked around as they walked the long path between the gate between the gate and the actual lab. The yard in between is as large as Oak's, but definitely has a grim atmosphere.

    "Ash, are you sure this is a Pokemon Lab, not a prison?" May asked.

    "Yeah," Ash replied, scratching his head. "Something big must be going on."

    Their escort led them to a small office at the back. Without a word, the guard left. Ash and May had no choice but to wait. Ash leaned on the wall next to the door, while May made herself comfortable on an armchair next to the Professor's desk.

    A few seconds later, Rowan appeared. He looked as intimidating as before(which made May more nervous), but he and Ash exchanged warm greetings, and ash introduced May to him. After that Rowan took a seat behind his desk.

    "It's nice to see you again, Ash. I see you've been doing well?"

    "Yeah." Ash motioned at the buzz outside, while taking his seat on another armchair next to May. "So what's going on? Why is everyone here in a panicky mood?"

    "There has been a large discovery on the Spear Pillar on top of the Tengan Mountains. They say a very ancient Pokemon resides there, but so far all we've found, is this..."

    Rowan opened a drawer behind his desk, and took out what seems to be a flute. It is light-blue, and different-sized holes cluttered the body. He gave it to Ash for the latter to examine. "That is the Azure Flute. It is a relic discovered wedged between two rock formations in the Spear Pillar. We believe that flute could be a key to another dimension. That's what we've been so busy here for."

    Ash turned the flute upside down, as May and Pikachu looked at it as well. As Ash handed it back to Rowan, the latter immediately placed the relic back in its drawer, and a lock can be heard clicking.

    "Apparently, this flute would have high value, and anyone who seeks it, will try at all costs to steal it from my desk. That's why I had the security added. Now, enough about my research...

    "Samuel called ahead, and he told me that you actually took Drake's challenge."

    It took a moment for Ash and May to realise that the "Samuel" Rowan is talking about is actually Professor Oak. Rowan continued. "Putting your Pokemon on the line for a title. That's-"

    "'A completely big risk'. Yeah, I know. I heard that from almost all my friends already. But you see," Ash took out his MasterBadge for Rowan to see, "I have defeated a member of the Elite Four already."

    Rowan sighed. "Just because you defeated one member, doesn't mean you defeated them all. Who knows? You could get defeated by the others, and then, your Pokemon..."

    Ash turned away. Rowan sighed. "I guess that I don't have the right to make you change your mind." Rowan stood up, and walked to the room's only window. "Why don't you two stay at my house for the night? My housekeeper would certainly be happy to have guests."

    "Sure."

    ---

    Ash and May left the lab, and following Rowan's directions, went to a quieter and more lively part of town. They arrived at the Professor's house(no, a mansion), standing on top of a hill overlooking the other houses.

    Pikachu jumped from May's shoulder and ran ahead of them. He smelled the same aroma that he sensed back at the ship, thinking it would lead him to She-chu again. However, to his dismay, as Ash knocked on the door, a woman around the same age as Rowan answered.

    "Ah, yes. Rowan called ahead to tell me that we'll be having guests."

    'What's with everyone calling ahead of us?' an amused May thought, as the woman, introducing herself as Gina, ushered them in.

    "You must be the Professor's wife," May assumed.

    Gina blushed herself silly. "Oh, no, it's not that. I'm only his housekeeper. Professor Rowan is still a bachelor." She changed the subject to save from further embarassment, as she led them into the living room. "Tell me, are you two travelling together?"

    "Yeah," May answered for both of them.

    "We've travelled together before, but not like just the two of us," Ash added. 'I swear to get at all my friends for this later.'

    "It must be wonderful, travelling alone with someone you love." Ash and May both slightly blushed.

    ---

    7:30 P.M. An hour after settling in Professor Rowan's house, the Professor came home. Together, the four of them enjoyed supper courtesy of May and Gina.

    After that, they all sat in the living room. Ash and May decided to let their Pokemon out, as long as they behave(primarily concerns a certain lobster). Blaziken sat close to the fireplace, where there is a warm fire. Munchlax and Croconaw sat between her, the former flat on his back, asleep after five servings of food. Corphish, surprisingly, is on good behavior.

    Espeon curled herself on the floor in front of May, and Squirtle is sitting on May's lap. Sceptile leaned on the balcony outside(the house is on a hill, naturally it would have a balcony on the 1st floor). Luxray is dozing off next to Espeon, while Pikachu is leaning on his back, asleep as well.

    "I have some news regarding the competition, Ash, I'm glad that I persuaded you to stay here for a while," Rowan began.

    "What is it?"

    "Due to the discovery of the flute, the competition will be moved from Tengan Mountains to the Sinnoh Underground."

    "I heard about that," May piped up. "Isn't that a place where trainers go to for intensive training?"

    Rowan nodded. "Yes. It's a popular tourist spot here in Sinnoh. A place where one can condition his/her Pokemon for harsh environments." Rowan hesitated, then continued. "A fitting example for the Elite trainer here in Sinnoh: Bertha."

    "You know her, Professor?" Ash asked.

    "Not personally. She is the oldest member of the Sinnoh Elite Four, and everyone here knows her name. Ash, she trains in ground-type Pokemon. And don't let her kindness fool you. There is a reason why she is a member, after all."

    Ash nodded. He clenched his fists, looking forward to the next day, when he and May will set off for the Underground.

    ---

    At a quarter to nine, Gina took them to the guestroom. May is ready to hit the large queen-size bed, but Ash has taken out his sleeping bag.

    "Don't ask me why, I don't want to be awakened deep in my dreams by Corphish again." 'Just what I needed. I am to Corphish just as Brock is to that Toxicroak of his.'

    But before they could get their shuteye, the alarm sounded! Ash jumped from his sleeping bag at the sound. He immediately put on his jacket and cap, and just as he and Pikachu stepped out of their room, Rowan ran into him.

    "What's going on, Professor?"

    "The alarm went off in my lab. I have to get there right away."

    "I'm coming, too."

    May ran after them. But Ash told her to stay in the house. "Be careful, Ash," she cautioned. Ash nodded at May's concern.

    Together, Ash, Pikachu and Rowan sped through the darkened streets to the lab. The steel gate was open, and a guard could be seen sprawled on the ground, unconscious. Rowan bent down to check the man's condition.

    "A concussion to the head. He was probably hit with something blunt. But he'll be alright." Rowan gestured to Ash. "Go on ahead, I'll try to apply some first-aid here."

    "I choose you, Luxray!" Luxray came out at Ash's command. "Luxray, scan the interior of the lab to see if you find anything."

    Luxray's eyes glowed, and he scanned the lab. He immediately found three intruders inside. (Three of them, and all of them in a single room at the far back.)

    Pikachu(Rowan's office! The flute!)

    Ash and Pikachu immediately ran after Luxray, and they entered the laboratory through an open door. Luxray and Pikachu snarled, as two shadows appeared in front of them.

    "It's only a snot-nosed brat," one of them said, a female. But it's not Jessie of Team Rocket.

    "What are you doing here? You have no right to enter this place," Ash declared.

    "None of your business," the other shadow retorted, also female. "We only came to get back what belongs to us."

    "But-"

    "ASH! Look out behind you!" Rowan suddenly called.

    After the warning, all Ash could see was stars before his eyes, then he blacked out.

    ---

    "He's going to be alright. a little bump, that's all."

    "I'm glad. Thank you, doctor."

    Ash snapped awake, with a headache, again. 'Oh, man. Dejavu.' He found himself lying on the sofa in Professor Rowan's office. May was kneeling next to him on the floor.

    "Ugh. Why do they always go for the head?" Ash said, smiling weakly. May breathed a sigh of relief.

    Ash sat up, and found the office in shambles. Desk drawers are cluttered everywhere, including one with a sophitsticated lock. Rowan is speaking to an Officer Jenny.

    "The thieves know exactly what they are after," Rowan was saying, while Jenny was taking notes. "The mysterious flute I had locked in my desk safe is gone."

    "We'll look into this matter further, Professor. In the meantime, you should get some rest. It's getting late."

    "Okay. I'll just finish up here, and look to my friend, and we'll go home." Jenny and the doctor left. Rowan strode over to Ash's side. "How are you feeling now, Ash?"

    "Fine, I guess. So this means the thieves got away?" Rowan nodded. "I should have been more careful."

    "Don't blame yourself for the loss, Ash," Rowan assured him. "I'm just glad that you didn't get too hurt..."

    "The Professor called the police right after the thieves got away. Then he called the house, so I rushed over," May added.

    Ash sat himself upright. "Let's go after those thieves!"

    Rowan shook his head, and said, "They got an awfully big headstart. They're long gone by now."

    Ash looked to the floor, defeated. There's nothing he can do, for now.

    ---

    Late the next morning, Ash and May are now seen at the doorstep of Rowan's house, bidding farewell to their hosts.

    The two of them walked the path on the way to the next city, Jubilife City. Ash is lost in his thoughts, but May has her mind on other things. Namely, and surprisingly, Pokemon. May spotted a bunch of Kricketot inspecting them from atop a tree, and checked her Pokedex for it:

    Kricketot, the Cricket Pokemon

    It shakes its head back to front, causing its antennae to hit each other and sound like a xylophone.

    "It creates a sound like music?" May asked Ash, who wasn't listening. only nodded.

    Pikachu looked at his trainer, and nudged him to get his attention(Hey, Ash, your girlfriend's talking to you.)

    "Huh? Wha-?" Ash said dumbfoundedly. "Oh, sorry, May, I wasn't listening."

    May and Pikachu sighed. "Ash, it's not your fault the thieves got away," May said.

    "Sorry, I just thought that I should have done better."

    "You should have other things to worry about for now, like the Bertha's Cup..."

    "Yeah, you're right!" At the sound of the competition, Ash's mood was lifted. He began talking with May about the Sinnoh Pokemon, pointing them out(sometimes taking out his Pokedex to show May the Pokemon she hasn't seen yet).

    ---

    They have been in this discussion until they reach Jubilife City. Once there they find the usual symptom of a huge event: the gathering of large crowds. As they walked through the crowd May hung on to Ash so they cannot get separated.

    At the center of the crowd, right next to the entrance of the Underground, is a large stage. Standing on top of the stage, facing them all, is a woman roughly around fifty-sixty. Despite the warm weather she is wearing a white coat over an old-fashioned dress and a brown scarf. Unknown to Ash and May(for now), this is Bertha, member of the Sinnoh Elite Four, and host of the competition.

    The crowd continued to speak in loud tones. An Officer Jenny, who was with Bertha onstage, tapped on a microphone, to get everyone's attention.

    "Today, due to circumstances of the Underground's availability, there will only be twenty competitors for this wave of competition." There was a loud groan from the crowd. Jenny continued. "Those wishing to participate will draw from this bowl here," showing a fishbowl full of folded pieces of paper, "and those who pick the paper with a brown mark will be the ones to enter."

    Pretty soon there was a large line for the stage. One by one, a trainer drew his/her paper from the bowl. There were shouts of excitement, and there were also sounds of dissapointment. When it was Ash's turn, he took his time drawing from the bowl. When he finally took his hand out, it was nervously clutching a piece of paper.

    Ash strode over to May before opening his paper. With May watching over his shoulder(along with about a dozen other spectators) Ash opened the folded paper. To his great disappointment, it was blank.

    Ash hung his head in defeat. He's out of this wave of competition.

    CONTINUED...

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    Huff, huff, I just read this thing up to chapter 12 and about to read 13, don't delete this fanfiction! Me want to read! Okay, lets sum up the whole 12 chapters in one review. Ash is very in character, romantic Ash is fun to see, May is nice but the not wining a single contest isn't so good, too sad about being away from Ash? Pervert Brock and his Toxicroak, alway nice to see, scheming Misty and Hikari, new people Micah and Bryan are all well-written, Pokemon translated and the cliffhanger, dun dun dun? Well onto CH13!

    EDIT: Read the rest, the double battle was very well written, Sceptile and Corphish, the duo which was written the best. Ash and May alone in Shinoh (yay!)? The pokemons in Chapter 15 were very funny, Corphish the comedian and Pikachu finding love (aww...), Ash not getting into the current wave of competition, unless he was looking at the wrong side, so set-up for more Advanceshipping? Good enough! Great story, looking forward for more.
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    its actually starting to get really interesting.. Please dont take this down. Will Ash goto johto next or hoenn?

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    I don't log on often to post, in fact I haven't logged on for three months, so consider my activity here as a sign that I may start becoming more active for the next few months.

    Anyway, this fanfic definitely has its ups and downs, but all-in-all it makes for a great read. It has a good overall plot, and its action scenes are portrayed well. It also has few errors that interfere with the reading, which makes it easier to follow.

    However, there are a few things I noticed that could make this good story great. For one, the way you portray AshxMay's relationship makes it hard for the reader to believe they are actually boyfriend/girlfriend. You have had the characters specifically state their relationship, but aside from that and other minor bits and pieces (i.e., blushing and jealousy; one kiss on the cheek, one on the lips in a flashback) your story does not back up the facts you have presented to us readers. You need to enhance the couple's relationship; you can make it look awkward, (in fact I would encourage it considering their respective ages) but you have yet to fully convince me (personally) that their relationship truly exists. You should be able to work that through with no problem.

    The other part that's holding down the story is that the chain of events doesn't 'flow' per-say. It seems almost sporadic the way you organize the events in some chapters, making it harder for the reader to get into the story and stay hooked on it. I'm not exactly sure what would be the best way to fix that, but I suggest reading some of the other stories like "May's Crush" by PikamasterADV, to get a better idea on how to organize your story's events.

    I can honestly say this story is showing the beginnings of a great read; just work out those small details and you'll bring it to a new level.

    Good luck.


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    Forever an Advanceshipper!

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    -Finally, review count is going up!
    -Me(and Ash) will work on improving the relationship bit, I promise.
    -By the way, Ash will stay for the next wave. I'm planning on the trend that Ash fights each Elite member in he same order the player fights them in each of the games:
    Prima(Kanto) 1st, Bertha(Sinnoh) 2nd, Bruno(as a Johto, not Kanto, Elite) 3rd, and Drake(Hoenn) last.

    EF17: Sinnoh Problems II


    Meanwhile, onstage, Bertha was speaking with a silver-haired man with glasses. This man is Bertha's comrade, Lucian, also of the Sinnoh Elite.

    "You choose a strange way of selecting my competitors, my friend," Bertha was saying.

    "It all depends on luck, Bertha," Lucian replied. "Besides, it was you who asked me to think of a way to select them."

    Bertha shook her head, and sighed. "True."

    "If you'll excuse me, I think I recognized someone from the crowd." Lucian was gone.

    Jenny clapped her hands. "Okay, everyone who had drawn the brown paper, follow me. Miss Bertha, if you please."

    Twenty competitors entered the Underground with Bertha and Officer Jenny. The crowd began to disperse, and Ash sat on a park bench, while May looked at him.

    "Shot down in the first round," Ash said, dejected.

    "You can try again when the competition is over, Ash," May assured him. "It's not the end of the Pokemon World..."

    "Funny you should say that," a voice behind them spoke up. Both Ash and May turned around and found Lucian smiling at them. "Long time no see, Ash."

    "Lucian! I should have recognized you." Ash sprang up, and shook Lucian's hand. "May, I'd like you to meet Lucian, a member of the Sinnoh Elite. We met during my earlier adventures in Sinnoh."

    "Wow! The Lucian?" May exclaimed. "I couldn't believe I will be meeting you. I've read all your books. "The Flight of the Psychics"? It's one of my absolute favorites!"

    Ash sighed, speechless at May's fangirlism. May continued to ogle at Lucian, which caused Ash to slightly get jealous.

    Lucian simply gave a bow to May. "Nice to meet you as well. By the way," Lucian added, to Ash, "where are your other friends? The one with the orange vest and the girl who has a volcanic temper?”

    "Ah, eh, they left to engage in other matters."

    Lucian shrugged. "Anyway, why don't we go find someplace to eat. My treat."

    ---

    Minutes later, Ash and May are enjoying a five-course meal courtesy of the Sinnoh Elite. In a restaurant, Ash and May sat next to each other, with pikachu in between, clutching(a you know-what).

    As Ash dug into his steamed lobster, Lucian was conversing with May, about the various books the former had wrote. Pikachu was slightly amused, seeing this is the first time he saw Ash jealous.

    To pipe Ash's interest, Lucian changed the subject to the competition. "Bertha asked me to help choose the platforms for this competition. She is a very good friend, and I owe a few favors, so I obliged. I arranged the drawing. With a little help from my Psychic Pokemon, the paper anyone picks out of the draw is supposed to show the brown color if they are chosen."

    "So does that mean that I'm not chosen?" Ash asked, sounding defeated.

    "Think of it as fate, my friend. There must be a reason why your paper didn't change color. You should try your luck the next time, after this wave."

    "Thanks, I feel a lot better," Ash said, with a little bit of sarcasm.

    Ash, May, Lucian, and about a hundred other spectators watched the competition going on in the Underground, aptly called "Location". It seems that the rules are:

    -Each trainer is allowed a full roster of six Pokemon.

    -The twenty trainers are given special tags at the start of the competition. They are also given one escort each, to make sure they follow the rules of the competition. Then they would each be transported to randomly selected locations in the Underground.

    -The aim for the competitors is to figure out the location of Bertha in the Underground. To do so, the trainer must collect the tags belonging to the other trainers.

    -Trainers, of course, have to fight other competitors to collect tags. New rules will apply:

    1) A trainer can wager up to three tags in his/her possesion. In battle, the number of tags wagered determines the number of Pokemon used. One tag allows two Pokemon, two tags allow four Pokemon, and three tags allow use of all six Pokemon. The escorts will verify this.

    2) Standard elimination, with the escort(s) refereeing. Whoever knocks out all of his/her opponent's Pokemon first will win the tag(s).

    3)Once a trainer runs out of tags, his/her escort will disqualify him/her from the competition.

    -Dotted around the Underground are Terminals. These special devices can only be activated by the barcode in a trainer's ID card. Terminals are used for various purposes:

    1)Allows the trainer to change his roster. Only one Pokemon can be swapped per Terminal.

    2)Heals all the Pokemon in a trainer's roster. Like the swap rule above, this can only be used by a trainer once per Terminal.

    3)If and when the trainer collects the 5 tags, the Terminal will be used for entering the tags' codes. Then the Terminal will reveal a map to Bertha's location.

    --If a trainer uses up the "1" and "2" functions in a specified Terminal, the Terminal will beep red to deny the trainer. This is so as not to confuse both trainer and escort.

    -Whoever trainer will reach Bertha first will be granted the right to face her in the challenge.

    Ash looked at the rules, and muttered, "Seems kinda complicated to me."

    "This is simply a game where one can test his skill and strategy," Lucian said, occupied with a not-so-official book-signing for the fans of his works.

    "That will be hard, considering how large the Underground is," Ash added.

    Pikachu(How true. I remember when you got lost in it once. If Shinx hadn't been with you then, we might not have found you.)

    As of now, the competition has started. At that moment, many pairs of trainers are battling each other simultaneously on 1-on-1 matches.

    "Pardon me for saying so," Lucian immediately said, excusing himself from his fanline, "but we can't stand around here all day. Why don't we have a little practice battle, Ash?"

    Ash looked at him. Lucian continued. "Don't worry, this won't follow the terms you have agreed upon with Drake. Just for my, and your, Pokemon, to get some exercise."

    "How did you know about Drake's challenge to me?"

    "Everyone in the Elite Four knows. Drake keeps to himself, even from his fellow Hoenn Elites, about his intentions, though."

    Ash agreed to battle the Sinnoh Elite. Soon, he and Lucian stood on different sides of an improvised field just next to the Underground's entrance. Lucian relayed the rules to him.

    "A simple 2-on-2 match, Ash." Lucian took out a Pokeball from his belt. Ash nodded. "Go, Alakazam!"

    From Lucian's Pokeball came a thin, yellow-and-brown bipedal fox-like creature with two spoons in each hand.

    "I choose you, Corphish," Ash called out his feisty water-type. Corphish clicked his claws, anticipating the battle. The two Pokemon looked at each other menacingly.

    "Aakazam, Calm Mind," Lucian ordered. Alakazam closed his eyes, and an aura began forming around his entire body.

    "Corphish, go for a Crabhammer before he finishes!" Ash quickly said.

    Corphish jumped in the air, and tried to land on Alakazam's head, claws first. But Alakazam suddenly opened his eyes and blocked the attack with one of his spoons. Then, usig only his spoon as a force, Alakazam easily hurled Corphish back to the air.

    Lucian immediately callled the next attack. "Psybeam!" Alakazam aimed both spoons in Corphish's direction. From those "cutlery" Alakazam fired a powerful beam of psychic energy. Corphish looked armingly at the blast coming straight or him, ad tried to shield himself with his claws. No avail. Corphish felt the full force of the Psybeam.

    Corphish fell to the ground, knocked out. Ash called his Pokemon back to its Pokeball. 'Shot down in the second turn. That was humiliating,' Ash thought. "Alright, Croconaw, I choose you!"

    From Ash's second Pokeball came Croconaw. The crocodile stretched his legs, and arched his jaws.

    From the sidelines, May was lost in thought. 'Lucian is definitely in a league of his own. I never saw Corphish easily manhandled like that. It's a good thing that the Sinnoh Elite of this competition is not Lucian. But I'll bet that Bertha woman would be just as hard.'

    A few feet(and spectators) behind May, two trainers catch our eye. They are both females, one with long blonde hair, while the other has a helmet-shaped red mane.

    "Are you sure it's the same kid?" the silver-haired girl asked.

    Her companion nodded. "Remember that I can see in the dark like a Crobat. This could jeopardize our mission."

    "What do you mean? I'll bet he hasn't even seen our faces."

    "True, but his Pokemon did. That Luxray can probably recognize us if it sees us. If only that Drill wasn't so foolhardy enough to go in the open like this."

    Just then a black-haired man appeared behind them. His spiky hair has one prominent feature: one spike swas spiral-like, giving the impression of a drill. He towered above the two women.

    "Don't worry about it, Bomb," he said to the redhead. "I'll deal with that kid. Just make sure that you keep that flute out of harm's way. It's more worth than any of the lives of the people gathered here."

    "That's easy for you to say, Drill," the woman called as Bomb retorted.

    "Calm down, you two," the third said. She then massaged her long hair. "We just silence that kid's Pokemon, and we're homefree."

    "You're the most relaxed of us, Wire," Bomb said sarcastically. "Mind telling us your secret?"

    To May...

    She was still paying attention to Ash's and Lucian's battle. Pikachu, who was in her arms, turned his head around in the direction of the three strangers. Pikachu's eyes narrowed, and jumped off May. He ran over to where Drill, Bomb and Wire stood, but they were gone.

    Pikachu(I have a bad feeling 'bout this. Who are those three?)

    Back at the battle, Croconaw managed to evade two of Alakazam's Psybeams. Both Ash's and Lucian's Pokemon seem to be tiring out. Ash smiled, and why? Croconaw is glowing blue again.

    "Alright, Croconaw, you know what to do. HYDRO PUMP!" Croconaw fired the powerful stream of water in Alakazam's direction.

    "Quick, Alakazam, Barrier!" Alakazam shielded himself with a Barrier coming from the spoons. But Torrent's power proved too strong. The Barrier broke, and Alakazam was hit full force!

    Alakazam slumped to the ground, unconscious. Lucian smiled. "Not bad," he said calmly as he recalled Alakazam. "You show a good bond with that particular Pokemon, Ash."

    Ash closed in on Croconaw, and placed his hand on his head. "This guy here, I plan on making one of my best," he said smiling, as Croconaw looked up proudly at his trainer. Just then May and Pikachu approached. "After Pikachu, of course."

    Lucian nodded, smiling, as the crowd cheered on the exhibition match. 'A good example of a trainer. Maybe he has what it takes to join our ranks, after all.'

    ---

    It was finally 5:30(after a good seven hours) in the afternoon when a winner is decided. A young woman named Dolor was able to gain the right to challenge Bertha. The match will take place early tomorrow morning, as a signal to start the second competition.

    Lucian introduced Ash and May to Bertha. The older woman greeted them warmly, and invited them to stay at her home, here in Jubilife City. But Lucian said his farewells, saying that he must head back to Foento City.

    Bertha took the kids to her mansion on the outskirts of the city. A number of servants greeted them at the door. Bertha immediately ordered her servants to cater to Ash's and May's needs.

    "You kids must be tired," Bertha said, as a maid helped her take off her coat. "Make yourselves at home."

    Ash and May looked at each other and shrugged. "Uh, maybe it's not a good idea for us to stay here," May said uneasily.

    "Yeah, your being an Elite trainer and all that," Ash added.

    "Nonsense," Bertha said, smiling. "I'm really happy to have guests. Now, care to join me for tea?"

    Ash and May had no choice but to accept their hostess's hospitality. As a butler served them tea on a second-floor balcony overlooking the city, the two told Bertha all about their adventures up to now.

    Bertha seemed impressed that Ash defeated an Elite(Prima), a feat that hasn't been done in almost a decade, she says. Bertha also was able to charm some of Ash's Pokemon, since she is an Elite trainer, one who cares deeply for Pokemon.

    At a quarter past nine, a maid directed Ash and May into the mansion's guestrooms. Ash and Pikachu plopped down to the massive bed in his room, and sighed.

    'Man, being an Elite sure has its privileges. Look at Bertha. She's pretty well off.' And without even taking off his clothes, Ash drifted to sleep.

    But Pikachu stayed awake. He jumped off the bed, and ran to Ash's Pokeball belt(again). He pulled out a Pokeball, and from within it came Luxray.

    Luxray(What's going on?)

    Pikachu(Boy, do I have a hunch that I wanna tell you...)


    CONTINUED...


    -Keep reviewing and I'll keep myself from deleting it.
    -HEADS UP:(what you call a chapter preview)

    At that moment, Ash's Pokedex bagan ringing like crazy. He took it out, and trained it on Swampert:

    Hydro Cannon. A powerful attack that can be learned by a Torrent-bearing Pokemon with a strong bond to its trainer.

    "Wow," Ash said. "So that was no Hydro Pump..."

    -I don't know how to use spoiler tags, so I'll just leave it like that...
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    Sorry I haven't dropped by. This site doesn't like me very much. It only lets me on at random times, and generally freezes up fight before I post. Anyway, your plot is getting better, that's for sure. I love how you're starting to incorperate the elemental hyper beams. I think they're cool. I also like Lucian. It's cool how you're bringing in so many characters from the anime, and I really can't wait for Ash's fight against Bertha. I think Pikachu'll have a hard time there.

    Keep writing, I really do enjoy it.

    ~Zant~

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    May's fangirlism! Ash got jealous and had a practice battle against Lucian. Who won? Anyway, Luxray is in trouble! As for the preview, Ash will be fighting a Swampert?

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    -Ash is yet to have his Pokemon learn those E Hyper Beams.

    EF18:Raw Power

    While Ash was silently sleeping, Pikachu held a little conference with the other Pokemon. While Sceptile, Croconaw and Corphish listened, Pikachu told Luxray of the conversation he has picked up earlier.

    Luxray(I won't be able to tell if it's them until I see them.)

    Pikachu(They're planning something, and maybe they'll do it tomorrow at the competition.)

    Sceptile(Then we have to stay on our toes.)

    Croconaw(Especially you, Luxray. Like Pikachu said, the thieves might have figured out that you can identify them.)

    Luxray snorted(Wait 'til get my hands on them. They won't get away with assaulting our trainer.)

    Pikachu(We'd better tell the others. So they can be on guard, as well.)

    Croconaw(Others?)

    Corphish(Yeah, you know, Sceptile's girlf-) Sceptile gave Corphish a menacing stare. (-I mean, uh, May's Pokemon.)

    Everyone rolled their eyes. But they all silently went outside and into May's room.

    ---

    Every Pokemon stood on their toes to make sure that Ash and May are safe. But, the next morning, even after making shifts, Ash woke up to find all his Pokemon dead-tired.

    "Oh, man," Ash said disapprovingly. "You guys stayed up all night?"

    Sceptile, annoyed(That's the thanks we get for guarding your life? What a ripoff.)

    Pikachu yawned(At least they're safe.)

    Ash knocked on May's door, down the hall to his room. The outside of May's room was also cluttered with her Pokemon. Munchlax, Squirtle and Espeon lay side by side, and Blaziken is leaning to the wall next to the door.

    "What's with you guys and staying up late?" Ash wondered aloud, as he knocked at May's again.

    This time there was a response. "Just a minute." A moment later, May came out, already looking refreshed. She, too, was surprised that her Pokemon were out of their Pokeballs all night.

    The two trainers recalled their Pokemon back to their Pokeballs, and headed downstairs. At the dining room, they were greeted by a maid, who already prepared breakfast for them.

    "The mistress has already gone down to the city to prepare for her battle," the maid said. "She instructed us to keep you well-fed for the events today."

    "Wow, thanks," May said humbly, as she and Ash hungrily glanced at the breakfast treats spread out in front of them.

    Ash and Pikachu stuffed themselves with all the French pastry they could get their hands on. Obviously, the two are very, very hungry. May sighed at the sight of her companions.

    ---

    After properly feeding their other Pokemon, Ash and May decided to go back to the city after Bertha. Once again, the crowd is at a large scale as before, if not larger.

    This time Bertha and her challenger stood on either side of the field where Ash fought Lucian previously.

    Bertha called out a Golem. Dolor made an obvious choce by selecting a Vileplume. The referee signalled the beginning of the match. "Bertha vs. Dolor. First match: Golem vs. Vileplume. BEGIN!"

    'Golem,' Ash thought to himself. 'One of the Pokemon I have to watch out for...'

    "Vileplume, Sunny Day!" Dolor ordered. The early morning sun began glowing so bright that everyone felt themselves sweating hard.

    "Golem, Rollout," Bertha ordered. Golem retracted his arms, legs and head and his giant form began rolling in Vileplume's direction. Vileplume managed to sidestep Golem, and many people had to run out of the way as Golem sped unintentionally in their direction.

    However, Bertha's Golem surprisingly has complete control of his attack. Just before he hit a wall, Golem managed to easily stop his tracks. And, still in his ball form, he rolled back in the direction of the arena, and his opponent.

    Vileplume was ready. She has quickly absorbed enough sunlight(due to Sunny Day) and fired Solarbeam straight at Golem's path. Once again, Golem showed total control of his Rollout, shown by sharply turning sideway, narrowly avoiding the Solarbeam.

    Golem turned abruptly again, and this time scored a direct hit on Vileplume in mere seconds. The large momentum Golem has gathered easily knocked out the Flower Pokemon in one hit.

    The referee signalled the end of that round. "Vileplume is unable to battle. Victory goes to Golem!"

    For the second round of the match, Bertha and Dolor each sent out a Hippowdon and Carnivine. May, who has never seen both Pokemon before, scanned her Dex for it. Ash provided the other one's data from his own Pokedex to show her:

    May's:

    Carnivine, the Bug Catcher Pokemon

    It attracts prey with its sweet- smelling saliva, then chomps down. It takes a whole day to eat its prey.

    Ash's:

    Hippowdon, the Heavyweight Pokemon

    The evolved form of Hippopotas, it blasts internally stored sand from ports on its body to create a towering twister for attack.


    True to the Pokemon's Pokedex data, suddenly the whole field is covered by a powerful sandstorm coming from Hippowdon's "openings". The crowd shielded their eyes. This time no one will be able to tell what's happening.

    After a single minute, the sandstorm subsided, and Carnivine lay sprawled on the ground, knocked out. Everyone stood stunned, speechless, at the sight. No one was able to tell how the Hippowdon defeated Dolor's Pokemon, maybe except for Bertha, who was the least surprised out of everyone.

    Even the referee was stunned at the result. After a moment, he called the match. "Carnivine is unable to battle. Victory goes to Hippowdon!"

    Ash shook his head. 'Maybe that Hippowdon would be Bertha's trump card.'

    If Dolor doesn't win in the next round, Bertha will be winner. As Bertha called her next Pokemon, which is a Steelix, Dolor was hesitating in what Pokemon to use next.

    'A Ground- and Steel-type?' Dolor thought. 'Maybe I should go for...'

    After making her choice, Dolor has now sent out a Swampert. Steelix the Iron Snake towered over Swampert the Mud Fish, but the latter was not intimidated by size.

    "Third match. Steelix vs. Swampert. BEGIN!"

    Dolor started by commanding Swampert to use Mudshot. The balls of Mud Shot through the air, aiming for Steelix's head. The large tail waved itself in front of Steelix to block the attack. But Swampert is now on the second offensive, with a Giga Impact.

    Swampert's attack hit Steelix by the jaw, knocking the latter backwards to the wall next to Bertha. Again, several spectators(and Bertha herself) had to get out of the way so as not to get hurt. the resulting impact caused dust and rubble to appear. Steelix is now covered by the dust, obscured from view.

    Swampert, meanwhile, was momentarily stunned for using the powerful attack. When she recovered, Swampert planted her feet on the ground, and launched herself in the direction of Steelix.

    When Steelix finally emerged from the debris, Swampert is already on him.

    "Swampert, use Muddy Water!" Swampert fired mud-brown water from her mouth and sprayed Steelix with it. Blinded, Steelix waved his tail for an Iron Tail, hoping to hit Swampert. But the Mud Fish easily avoided the blind attack.

    After Steelix recovered his vision, he charged Swampert for his own Giga Impact. Swampert used Hydro Pump to slow down her opponent's attack, but Steelix went on, and hit Swampert. This time it was the Mud Fish's turn to reel backwards towards her trainer.

    Dolor looked anxiously at her Pokemon, but Swampert managed to stand up, though barely. Swampert's Torrent is now acting up, and a smile spread across Dolor's face.

    'I think it's time to use it. Let's give these people a good show, Swampert.'

    Swampert stood proudly in front of her trainer, still glowing bright-blue. No one anticipated what Dolor's gonna do next.

    "Swampert, brace yourself!"

    Bertha sensed Dolor's confidence. She, too, won't be expecting Swampert's next move. "Steelix, don't give Swampert the chance she needs. Go for another Giga Impact!"

    "Okay, Swampert! You know what to do!"

    As Steelix began charging towards Swampert again, the latter arched her head back. Then, a powerful jet of water was fired from Swampert's mouth. Steelix was immediately stopped in his tracks by the force of the attack. Even for his size, Steelix was sent flying into the air. When he landed on the ground, Steelix is knocked out.

    At that moment, Ash's Pokedex bagan ringing like crazy. He took it out, and trained it on Swampert:

    Hydro Cannon. A powerful attack that can be learned by a Torrent-bearing Pokemon with a strong bond to its trainer.

    "Wow," Ash said. "So that was no Hydro Pump..."

    The crowd was completely speechless. "Steelix is unable to battle. Victory goes to Swampert!"

    Bertha clapped her hands. "That attack shows a definite sign that you've trained your Swampert well. I applaud you for that."

    "Thank you," Dolor replied. Her Swampert, though breathing heavily(due to the attack), stood proudly.

    "I expect as much for one who qualifies to challenge me. This time, I won't take it easy on you..."

    For the fourth match, Bertha chose a Torterra. Dolor, feeling confident, called out her Glalie. The Face Pokemon is, like Swampert before him, was dwarfed by Torterra's size.

    "Fourth match. Torterra vs. Galie. BEGIN!"

    "Ice Shard, Glalie!" Glalie spouted thin, sharp ice from his mouth. Bertha immediately had Torterra Withdraw, but even then the Continent Pokemon coud feel the sting of the attack.

    When Torterra emerged from his shell, Glalie rushed in for a Tackle attack. Torterra got knocked back by Glalie's attack, her giant feet leaving behind ridges as she was reeling.

    Dolor and Glalie didn't stop there. "Ice Beam!" A white beam spouted out of Glalie's mouth, and aimed for Torterra. The crowd watched on, speechless, knowing Torterra will be easily knocked out by the attack(4x weakness). But Bertha remained awfully calm.

    "Earthquake!" Torterra stomped both of her front legs hard to the ground. The ground rose upwards, and was hit by Ice Beam! Bertha used her Pokemon's attack to shield from Glalie's attack.

    Suddenly, Torterra broke through the wall created by the Ice Beam and Earthquake, throwing ice shards everywhere. Torterra hit Glalie with the Tackle. It was the Face Pokemon's turn to reel backwards.

    Torterra planted her feet on the ground, and it sems she is charging up for something. Ash thought it was Solarbeam, but then the tree on Torterra's back began moving violently. As Glalie shook the fog out of his eyes, suddenly finds himself being quickly covered by vines coming out of the ground. The vines kept intertwining around Glalie's body, covering him completely. All anyone could see right now is a tangle of root-colored vines in the center of the arena.

    Once again, Ash's and May's Pokedexes rang like crazy. This time it was May who checked the attack's data:

    Frenzy Plant. This devastating grass attack can only be learned by okemon with Overgrow.

    When the vines disappeared, Galie lay on the ground, knocked out. Torterra, even though breathing heavily, stood over her opponent, a victorious look on her face.

    "Glalie is unable to battle. Victory goes to Torterra! This match goes to Bertha of the Elite Four!"

    Bertha waved to the crowd humbly as they cheered her. She strode over to Dolor, who was cradling Glalie on her lap. "You've done well. I enjoyed our battle." Bertha offered her hand, and Dolor took it. The applause was deafening as the two combatants shook hands.

    'Frenzy Plant and Hydro Cannon, huh?' Ash thought. 'Cool...'

    ---

    The Bertha's Cup(2nd wave) will begin shortly after lunch. Bertha gave her young guests permission to use her large forest backyard as a training area.

    Ash is now determined to make his Pokemon learn the Elemental Hyper Beams, performed by Bertha's Torterra and Dolor's Swampert. May and the other Pokemon sighed as Ash tried to unsucessfully make Sceptile and Croconaw learn these attacks.

    "Okay, the Pokedex says that Frenzy Plant can be learned by Overgrow-using Pokemon. And Hydro Cannon is also learned, this time, by Pokemon with Torrent."

    Sceptile and Croconaw sat next to each other as Ash made his "speech". They looked at each other and sighed heavily.

    Sceptile(He want us to learn that? That's pretty extreme, if you ask me.)

    Croconaw(You got that right. Hoo-boy!)

    "We have to learn these attacks, so we can get the upper hand in the competition. Understood?" Ash began sounding like a drill seargent after this.

    "Okay, time for practice!"

    Ash has Sceptile concentrate hard on a couple of mango trees. Once, the branches of the trees were moving a little, but not enough to satisfy Ash.

    Sceptile, for the first time, complained(Come on, wasn't that enough? Sheesh!)

    Meanwhile, Croconaw is trying hard to destroy a large boulder on Ash's command. Croconaw actually suceeded, but instead of the Hydro Cannon Ash hoped for, it was only a Hydro PUMP. The difference betweent the two would be that Hydro Cannon takes a lot of energy out of the user, as Hydro Pump cannot, too much. Croconaw once tried to fake being tired, but Ash wasn't as easily fooled.

    Croconaw(Man, how could he tell I was faking it?)

    Sceptile(Easy. You can be easily distracted by anything, dope.)

    It was true, as Ash always waves a piece of chocolate cake in front of Croconaw(his favorite sweet) whenever the Pokemon tried faking. Croconaw just keeps springing up, and his obvious deception was discovered.

    As May fed the other Pokemon, she looked at the three of them: Ash trying to overwork his Pokemon, and Sceptile and Croconaw are gettingreally exhausted.

    May had enough of this as Croconaw and Sceptile slumped to the ground for the 4th time.

    "Ash, don't you think you're overdoing it? Just look at them." May waved her hand in Croconaw's and Sceptile's direction, in which the two prompted in taking heavy breathers.

    Sceptile(For the first time, listen to her. Don't you care about us, boss?)

    Croconaw, quickly nodding at each of his words(Yeahyeahyeahyeah--OW! What was that for?)

    Sceptile(We're trying a sob story here, and you end up being comic.)

    Both Pokemon struggled to stand up, their legs trembling. Ash said, "They seem fine to me," but then the duo stumbled again, backs to each other.

    May shook her head. "This is not like you, Ash. You're better than this. You know better than to overwork your Pokemon. So what if they don't learn those attacks? They managed to get this far without them."

    Ash sighed. "You're right, as usual." At this Croconaw and Sceptile sighed in relief. Ash turned to the two. "Sorry, guys."

    May clapped her hands. "Now, you all get something to eat."

    Croconaw sprang up again(Great. I get three-fourths of the cake!)

    Sceptile shook his head(Dope.)

    ---

    After enjoying lunch, Ash asked Bertha's permission to use her home PC to contact Pallet Town. It is once again time to prepare a team for the Bertha's Cup.

    'Luxray's x-ray vision will certainly be useful in the competition. He will have to stay. Pikachu, of course. Hmm, Croconaw and Sceptile, I guess I owe them a lot after that training... Now, for the final two...'

    Ash took a look at his Pokemon aligned next to Professor Oak's on the phone's vidscreen. All of them were trying to hog the whole screen to get Ash's attention, to the professor's annoyance. Donphan caught Ash's eye.

    "Yeah, Donphan, I think you'll be my 5th..."

    Donphan(Yahooo! Finally, some more action!)

    May appeared beside Ash. "Ash, the competition is about to begin. You'd better hurry..."

    Just then the other Pokemon were being pushed to the "far side" of the screen by none other than Snorlax. Ash grinned sheepishly. "Snorlax, I could use you for this one as well..."

    Snorlax thumped his enormous belly(You can count me in. Just as long as there's food around...)

    "Snorlax?" May asked uneasily. "Do you think that's a wise decision?" Snorlax's jolly expression fell, at May's words. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Snorlax... I didn't mean to..."

    Snorlax(I hear you're quite a cook. Just bake me a giant cake after all this and we're even...)

    "Alright, Ash," Professor Oak cut in, "just send back Corphish to the lab, and I'll initiate the transfer..."

    After the transfer was complete, it was sixteen minutes before 2:00 PM. Ash and May rushed out of Bertha's manor and ran back to Jubilife City.

    As they reahed the city square in front of the Underground, the drawing has just begun. What a close call. May retreated to the sidelines with the crowd as Ash joined the line for the drawing, but not before wishing him luck.

    After Ash drew his lot, he immediately opened the piece of paper. This time the paper was brown, meaning he has qualified. Ash and Pikachu breathed a sigh of relief at this.

    "All qualified competitors, please follow me," Officer Jenny said. The twenty qualifieds, including Ash, followed the officer down a set of stairs leading down to the Underground complex.

    The Underground is like a mineshaft, with narrow natural corridors. There are a number of lights dotted around the walls. Jenny led them around a series of winding paths, until they reach a wide area.

    Officer Jenny revealed a billboard containing the rules of the competition. The rules are the same as the previous competition(see EF28).

    Just then, about twenty probe-like devices appeared from different entrances of the area(similar to Kid's in the 8th movie).The only difference is that each probe carries around a visor-like device. Pikachu looked at the device curiously as it scanned him and Ash.

    Everyone's surprised at first, but each probe aligned itself with a trainer by giving him/her the visor. Ash looked at the inside brim of his visor, and saw it was like pitchblack.

    Jenny explained. "These devices are your escorts throughout the Underground. They will be with you to monitor your movements, referee your matches, and enforce the rules. If you've intentionally destroyed an escort, you are immediately be disqualified."

    An opening on the front of Ash's escort appeared, and a black tag appeared. Ash picked it out. At that moment, nothing is readable in the tag's context.

    "Any questions?"

    Someone from behind Ash raised her hand. "What are the visors for?"

    "Those visors wil serve as a form of communication from the officials outside. You can use these to interface with the Terminals. Plus, put them on." Everyone complied. They put on their visors, but the screen remains pitchblack. Ash feels his stomach churning, and the ground underneath his feet moving.

    Pikachu(H-h-hey! What's going on?)

    Ash was at first startled by Pikachu's cry. But just then a distant voice was heard. "You can take off the visors... The competition starts now..."

    CONTINUED...

    -They didn't even acknowldege the fact that Croconaw can't learn Hydro Cannon since Hyper Beam attacks can only be taught to fully-evolved Pokemon.

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    You update so fast that I can't even read them all! i didn't see Ash being the romantic type, but oh well. Good job so far!
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    Oh no, looks like the mysterious team strike! The pokemon stayed up to guard the pair and more Corphish hints. Ash training his pokemon too much with some comical results and some Snorlax goodness. Looking good, and Ash&May 4EVER, it's because, he already written the whole thing, if I am correct, so he is just cleaning up some things.

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    EF19:Cave-in

    Ash took off his visor, to find that he is alone, apart rom Pikachu and their escort probe. They were now in a narrow tunnel, far from the spot where Jenny gathered them before.

    "Alright, Pikachu, looks like it has begun," Ash said to his partner.

    Ash and Pikachu began running to the far end of their corridor. Suddenly, at the turn, they collided with an overweight Hiker. "Oh, man, an opponent already?" the oder man asked, as he and Ash stood up. "You ready for battle, kid?"

    "You bet I am." Just then both the trainers's escorts began beeping. The two machines stood between the two of them, and suddenly combined to make a larger, official-looking robot. "Trainer Ash vs. Hiker Troy. Please present the tags you wish to wager, please."

    Ash took out his black tag, and Troy did the same. They presented the tags to the referee, who immediately "swallowed" them. "You have one tag each. Which format do you refer? One-on-one, or two-on-two?"

    "I choose a one-on-one," Troy answered.

    "I agree." 'That way, I can save up my other Pokemon or later battles...' "Okay, Pikachu, go!"

    Pikachu jumped off Ash's shoulder as the two trainers backed away to make room, as the hallway was narrow. Tony sent out an obvious choice of a Graveler.

    ---

    From one end of the Underground, a lady named Cyndy is cowering in fear as her escort was destroyed. It seems that the thief Bomb has assaulted the poor trainer. Bomb has just recalled her Pokemon to its Pokeball, so we still don't know what it is.

    Out of fear, Cyndy fainted. Bomb picked up her victim's tag as her cohorts appeared beside her.

    "Hmmph. You were held up by a smallfry? You're losing your touch, Bomb," Drill said with a smirk.

    "Remember that we're only after that brat's Pokemon," Wire reminded her. "No collateral damage."

    Bomb bent down to check Cyndy's pulse. "Relax. She's just in shock. I tend to not get carried away in my battles, unlike you, Drill."

    Drill only gave Bomb a hard stare. Bomb looked at the tag, and passed it to Drill. "Here. You want this, right?"

    Drill caught the tag in midair. "Yeah. Thanks."

    "What are you going to do with it?" Wire asked curiously.

    "I just want to clear a little family matter..."

    ---

    Back to Ash... Pikachu smashed into Graveler with Iron Tail. Graveler reeled into the right wall. Graveler shook the cobwebs from his face, and tried to hit Pikachu with Rock Blast.

    Pikachu expertly dodged the bullet-like rocks with Agility. Then, Pikachu jumped high in the air to score another Iron Tail. Graveler, still by the wall where he crashed, got the wind knocked out of him.

    "Graveler is unable to battle. Victory goes to Pikachu," the ref-escort announced.

    Seconds later, the ref slipped the two tags out of its opening, to give to Ash. Then the ref disassembled into two escorts again, and, in the blink of an eye, Tony's escort teleported him out of the area.

    'Whoah. So that's how the escorts remove players from the competition. I'll bet that's how I got seperated from the others, too...'

    Ash looked at the two tags in his hands, as his escort hovered around him. Then he looked at Pikachu. "Are you alright, Pikachu?" The rodent nodded. "Okay, then, I don't think we'll be able to find a Terminal near here. You can manage, right?" Pikachu nodded again. "Then let's go. we still have three tags to collect."

    Ash took out a Pokeball, and called Luxray. "Luxray, it's time to put your eyes to good use."

    Luxray scanned beyond the walls. He found a Terminal in a hallway to the left side, and a trainer, a male Breeder fast approaching it. Ash followed his Luxray, to where the latter found the Terminal.

    ---

    May was given permission to watch among the officials, who are closely monitoring the competition. There were about ten officials each watching up two monitors.

    On one monitor, May could see Ash, with Pikachu and Luxray, running through a corridor. On the sensor map over all screens, it shows that one of the twenty dots(labeled Ash) is on the far southwest portion of the Underground.

    One monitor, however, was in static. The official watching was baffled, placing a call to the other officials underground.

    "Trainer Cyndy's Escort is out of commision. We don't know how or why.You have to check it out."

    "Roger," someone from the other end of the line replied.

    "What's going on?" May asked.

    "Someone destroyed a competitor's Escort," the official answered, without turning to her. "It could be just a malfunction, or the competitor's plea for help, or..."

    "Or?" May repeated.

    "Or trouble."

    ---

    Ash engaged the Breeder, named Marky. Marky only had one tag with him, so Ash had to wager only one of his. Ash used Luxray while Marky had sent out a Linoone.

    Linoone used Take Down, but Luxray managed to jump right on top of his opponent. Linoone stopped is her tracks, and Luxray delivered a Discharge. Linoone dodged the attack, which then smashed to the wall to the right of Ash.

    The referee declared Ash the winner. Marky's escort teleported him out of the area, while Ash now glanced at his three tags.

    Ash also glanced at the Terminal. It looks no different from an ordinary computer. But, where the mouse pad would be, was replaced by a slot-like input device. 'That's probably where I have to place my trainer card to use the Terminal.'

    Ash immediately slid his card across the slot, and the Terminal's screen lit up. The following were shown:

    >SWAP

    >HEAL

    >TAG

    Ash chose "Heal", and placed Luxray's pokeball on one of six circular slots on a tray, that appeared from under the Terminal. 'Uh, how do I heal Pikachu this way?'

    As if to answer his question, another opening appeared, this time beside the Terminal, on the wall. It was large enough for Pikachu to walk into, so Pikachu walked in. A yellow light engulfed the rodent, and seconds later, the lights disappeared, revealing a refreshed Pikachu.

    Pikachu(Ahhh. That felt good.)

    The Terminal announced that Luxray is also healed. Ash took the pokeball, and the "Heal" option is blackened out on the screen. Ash took his card off the Terminal's slot, and ran off, to find his next opponent.

    ---

    A few minutes later, Wire appeared at the Terminal Ash used. "Shoot. He's already gone," she said, to a small microphone that is attached to a micro-receiver in her ear. "I believe he's heading in your direction, Bomb."

    "Got it. Relay that to Drill. We have to corner him before all this is over." Wire looked at the Terminal, and called out her Pokemon. However, before we can even see what it is, the unlnown Pokemon shorted out the Terminal, blowing it up.

    ---

    Leaving Wire, we turn our attention back to Ash. He is now engaged in a double battle using Sceptile and Snorlax against a triathlete's(named Joseph) Ampharos and Gabite. Ash had to use his Pokedex again to examine the latter pokemon:

    Gabite, the Cave Pokemon

    It habitually digs up and hoards gems in its nest. Its loot is constantly targeted by thieves.


    If Ash wins this, he will have five tags, and after that all he needs to do is to use them to find Bertha.

    Sceptile is exchanging blows with the Gabite, with Leaf Blade and Dragon Claw, respectively. Snorlax, meanwhile, is holding his own against Ampharos. The latter used Thunder Punch. Snorlax felt currents running through his entire body as the punch connected, but only shook his head to recover from the blow. Snorlax countered with Ice Punch, but the Ampharos, remarkably nimble for its species, managed to evade Snorlax's punch.

    Sceptile, meanwhile, was taken down by Gabite's Dragon Rush attack. Sceptile braced his arms(with Leaf Blade still in effect) in front of him while rushing backwards through the air. Sceptile fired Bullet Seed in Gabite's direcion, and the latter shielded himself with his wings. Sceptile ran around Gabite, while still firing Bullet Seed, and jumped Gabite from behind for a Slam. Caught offguard, Gabite reeled backwards.

    Back to Snorlax, he is now being pounded by several hunder Punches from Ampharos. The larger Pokemon is now being backed agains the far wall. While his opponent is still recovering(out of sight), Sceptile ran towards them to help Snorlax. But the ground from underneath him suddenly exploded, and revealed Gabite(who used Dig), and dragged Sceptile under the ground.

    "Snorlax, try a Body Slam," Ash ordered. Snorlax loomed over Ampharos, and jumped over him, face first. Ampharos tried to hold up Snorlax, but it was too much. Joseph wached in fear as Snorlax flattened the poor Light Pokemon. Snorlax rolled over to reveal a "pancake", ala Ampharos.

    "Ampharos is unable to battle."

    Deep below them, Sceptile is struggling to get out of Gabite's grip. Sceptile bombarded with Bullet Seeds and consecutive Leaf Blades, but Gabite wouldn't budge. Gabite in turn launched a Crunch attack, and almost hi Sceptile's neck. Sceptile kicked off Gabite, and now the two of them stood face to face, several feet below their trainers. Sceptile rushed in for Leaf Blade, and Gabite did the same with Dragon Claw. Both fell to the ground, knocked out.

    Topside, the referee made the announcement. "Both Sceptile and Gabite are unable to battle. Victory goes to Ash." The referee took out the four tags, and handed them to Ash. Then the referee Teleported Joseph and his Pokemon out of the competition.

    Ash had his Snorlax dig the ground to recover Sceptile. Ash sighed, thinking, 'Man, why didn't they help me in digging up Sceptile?'

    ---

    May looked at Ash happily from the monitor, seeing him hat he has already gathered five tags needed to qualify for the fight against Bertha. But that's only partially the contest, as Ash has to pinpoint Bertha's location as well.

    Beside her, an official was now reporting the case of a Terminal being destroyed. "You have to check this out as well. Make sure that there will be no competitors harmed."

    ---

    When they are in a clearing, Ash once again called Luxray out. "You know what to do."

    Luxray scanned the area again. From beyond the walls he could see three trainers coming from three directions. And all of them sparked recognition on Luxray's face. Luxray snarled heavily as Ash tried to figure out his Pokemon's sudden hostility.

    From where he came from, Wire appeared. Ash turned around to face her, but just then, Bomb and Drill also appeared, from the north and west paths. Wire shot Ash's escort with a gun.

    "Hey!" Ash shouted in alarm.

    ---

    May sounded her alarm as she found out that Ash's escort(camera) was cut off. "What happened?"

    The official supervising Ash's progress, was also baffled. "Something hit Trainer Ash's escort. go check it out immediately. It's at X 5.6 and Y 7."

    ---

    Pikachu and Luxray(It's those guys!)

    "Oh great," Ash said. "Just when I complete five tags, I get ambushed by three trainers. Fine, it would be good practice."

    "We're not here to fight you..." Wire started.

    "Unless you don't meet our demands," Bomb started.

    Baffled, Ash asked, "What do you mean?"

    Luxray(Ash, don't listen to them. They're the thieves who broke into Professor Rowan's lab!)

    Drill eyed Ash apprehensively. 'By the looks on his face, he doesn't recognize us.' He shifted his gaze towards Luxray. 'But Bomb is right. His Pokemon does.'

    "So what do you guys want, if it's not to battle?" Ash asked.

    Pikachu(Ash, I really wish you understand our speaking. They're after us because we've seen them in the lab!)

    This time Ash sensed Pikachu's warning, and braced himself for anything that could happen. "Whatever you want, you're not getting it from me."

    Wire smiled to herself. "We only want to make a clean job. But you running around the lab that night, that certainly tarnished our record."

    "Lab?" Something clicked in Ash's mind. "You were the ones who broke into Professor Rowan's lab!"

    Pikachu slapped his face(About time.)

    "Wire, you should keep your mouth shut," Drill spoke up. "Now, not only do we have to take his Pokemon, but we'll have to take him, as well. His life, that is..."

    Ash, Pikachu and Luxray backed away from the three criminals, to make room for a Pokemon battle, if necessary. Sceptile certainly won't be up for this one, as Ash hasn't found a Terminal since his fight with Joseph.

    The three smiled at each other. Then they all sent out their Pokemon: an Electivire, a Magmortar, and a Rhypherior(guess which Pokemon is which)! Ash eyed the giants apprehensively. 'Not good.' "Hey, that's not fair!"

    Drill smiled mischievously. "Don't you know? There's no honor among thieves."

    Ash thought, 'Oh, yeah. That...'

    Surprisingly, Drill and his cohorts gave Ash enough time to scan the three Pokemon on his Pokedex:

    >Rhyperior, the Drill Pokemon

    The evolved form of a Rhydon. It stuffs rocks into the holes in its palms, then shoots them out with the power of its muscles. On rare occasions, it will fire off Geodudes.


    >Electivire, the Thunderbolt Pokemon

    The evolved form of an Electabuzz. It pushes the tips of its two tails against the foe, then lets loose with over 20,000 volts of power.


    >Magmortar, the Smoke Breath Pokemon

    The evolved form of a Magmar. It shoots 2000°C fireballs from its hands. It lives in volcanic craters.


    'Oh, cr--' Ash thought to himself. "Then I'll just have to even the playing field." Pikachu and Luxray keep on leering at the three Pokemon as Ash called out Croconaw, and Snorlax.

    "This will be pretty interesting," Bomb said with a smile. "Magmortar, use Flamethrower!"

    Magmortar aimed one of her hollow hands at Ash and fired Flamethrower. Croconaw stood in front of Ash and countered with Hydro Pump. The connecting attacks produced steam, engulfing the whole area.

    When the smoke cleared, the battle has begun.

    Snorlax was then sneak attacked by Rhyperior with Stone Edge. And Luxray is now engaged with Electivire. It is a three-on-(er)three battle. But, no rules. Once, Electivire tried a Thunder Punch in Ash's direction. Luckily, Luxray blocked it.

    Rhyperior used Vital Throw on Snorlax, but found the latter was too heavy. Snorlax countered with Ice Punch, but Rhyperior merely shrugged the cold off.

    'How the-?' Ash wondered, as Ice Punch should have easily defeated Rhyperior(4X weakness). Flustered, Ash looked at Drill.

    "Solid Rock, kid. Super effective attacks do mere normal damage. You should study more."

    Meanwhile, Croconaw is losing stamina just evading Magmortar's double(from both hands) Flamethrower. Croconaw couldn't even land a water-type attack. And Luxray is also having a hard time with Electivire.

    'Luxray won't be up to it, either. I remember Gary saying something about Electivire's Motor Drive...' "Luxray, return!" Ash returned his Luxray to his Pokeball, and sent out...

    "Donphan! Rollout attack!" The powerful elephant-like Armor Pokemon appeared, and immediately curled into a ball, rolling straight into Electivire. The impact had the yellow Pokemon reeling backwards, into a wall. Donphan then jumped backwards to avoid being countered.

    "ENOUGH!" Everyone looked at Drill. "No more fun and games. Bomb, Wire, let's finish this brat and his Pokemon! Rhyperior, Horn Drill!"

    Rhyperior broke out of his struggle against Snorlax, and smashed his spinning horn at the wall. The wall began to crumble, as Drill, Wire and Bomb(the latter two returning their Pokemon) dashed out into the east pathway. Drill laughed maniacally as he returned Rhyperior, standing on the opening of the pathway.

    "You better save your breath, kid. You're gonna need it..."

    Just as Drill left, the roof fell on Ash and his Pokemon!

    CONTINUED...

    -i forgot about this one in the previous chapter:
    -HEADS UP:

    Rhyperior positioned himself on all fours, and his horn began spinning again. Croconaw was rushed headfirst into a wall. Luckily, the latter managed to grab Rhyperior's jaw, so the Horn Drill didn't hit, though was just a few inches away.

    "CROCONAW!" Just then, aside from the blue glow, another light began emanating from Croconaw!

    -Please someone tell me how to make spoiler tags. I try and I try, but I can't get it right...

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    Ash is really good, beating 3 trainers that fast. Drill who has a Rhypherior, Wire with Electivire and Bomb using a Magmortar attacked Ash, that not good with the cave-in, first an avalanche than a cave-in? Ash sure is unlucky, to post spoiler,[SPOILER="Your Spoiler Here" ][ /SPOILER], have no blankets in the boxes and put your spoiler in between the two boxes.

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    this is getting interesting.. I think bertha will come down and maybe help out?

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    Excellent fic, keep the work up, Sceptile is really funny though (Made all the better by the fact he's my fave Pokemon)
    Comp has died, borrowing brother's to edit this, won't be on much if at all.
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