Earthborn just letting you know, you double posted somehow.
Anyway, thanks for the happy wishes, cept my birthday is technically on Sunday, Earthborn. Friday's just my party. ;-)
Well, it took a lot of thought and development into creating him... (actually not really since he's pretty much like me when I'm in one of my various moods ie. bored)Altair is really starting to get his own character, and I like him. I can understand his liking of cheese... When he was getting watched by Dawn, I thought it was strange... But I like how well you write Dawn's character, very manipulative.
Yea, I actually didn't give the fact that she just missed Ash and Brock a thought. I just kinda left her out there... missing... guess I just assumed she went to another Pokemon Center, I dunno. Ah well at least it flows. =DIt seems like May JUST missed them all, she went to check the centers, and Ash and his friends JUST left... Too bad. But, that gave Dawn time to get Ash into the contest as well.
Mmm, I shouldn't answer that, in fear of spoiling something, though I know it was rhetorical.I'm really wondering what Altair's ALTAIRior motive is, could he be a Pokemon Ranger?
Dawn's just trapped in that stage between childhood and the teenaged years. Can't blame her for being... curious. =PNow, we got to see a little side of Dawn we haven't seen before.
Poor May's having a hard time finding Ash though. I still wonder what might have happened to her.
Uh, "The Girl that Resembles May" will be revealed next chapter, and her story shall be told.
I actually didn't know what a Pokemon Ranger actually was. Had to do some research on Bulbapedia to figure it out, they seem pretty nifty.Interesting idea. However, I don't think rangers carry/own pokemon in pokeballs. He could be an exception though...
All right, I should go work a little harder...