Mm, perhaps, but knowing me, there are gonna be twists. =OHey, welcome back. :P
The new chapter was kinda entertaining, especially with the last part. I guess the Advanceshippy feeling is starting to grow on Ash's side now. I have a feeling that he'll be meeting May at the Lightcrown Contest, whenever you're ready to reach that part of the story.
This fic is really as much about Advanceshipping as it is about Altaďr's origins and a much larger event that is taking place. Circling a fic completely around love and whatnot just isn't my style, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy writing about it in general. This may as well have been in the normal fanfics section, but I did want to have the Advanceshipping element in my fic, which makes it fall into the shipping fics forum.I wonder what's up with Altaďr now, his character is one I'm not all that familiar with. All in all, that was a worthy update. Just remember that good art cannot be rushed, and that I'm going to keep following this closely.
As for rushing, I guess you're right about that, but let's not ignore the fact that we all get apathetic once in a while, which was probably one of the factors in my absence.
...Oops. Guess copying and pasting isn't the best idea all the time.Your PM states that chapter 8 has been posted, and I don't think you can triple post, even in your own fic.
Mm, perhaps not. I'll look into that.I highly doubt that downtown must be capitalized.
Well, sometimes I feel that the speech I write in the fic is too much like my own everyday speech, instead of what the characters would really say as if in they were in the anime. Not watching a whole lot of the anime dub is probably a reason for that, but I hope I write it without it being too slang-ish in my own way.You have speech down pretty well, at least better than my attempts...
...Oops. Gotta get that word out of my system. =PThat's the second time you've done that!