Like you, elyvorg, I am still alive but very distracted. So distracted that I've allowed all these chapters to pile up to where it would take forever to make a full-fledged review.
I'm terribly sorry for my laziness, and I just want to let you know that I just might write up my opinion of the whole fic when you're done, as a sort of reconciliation.
PS: I read your oneshot- very creepy, but very well done, too.
Oneshots and perhaps fanfics coming soon.
In the meantime, want your fic reviewed or beta read? Send me a PM asking! I'll see if I can make time.
(Keep in mind I'm not usually partial to really dark fics, so I may take longer to get to those.)