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    Default Cooper's Sprite stuff.

    Howdy.
    Please give me a pretty good critique, especially on revamps and stuff where I've changed the light source. Those are my weakest areas


    Recolours:





    Fusions:
    Yansparce

    Cromanyte


    Other:
    Lineless Dunsparce

    Bad revamped G/S Dunsparce

    An Electivire, I swapped some of the limbs on the two animation frames with eachother so one is more aggresive and th other is a more neutral battle stance.


    All C+C is much appreciated, and I'll add more as I go, so keep checking back If you like my stuff.
    Last edited by Cooper; 5th October 2007 at 10:43 AM.
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    Your Torterra recolour is nice, but I would fix the outline on the tail and the legs, the black makes it less brown.
    The Yansparce is cute, but its right wing looks detached.
    Your revamp is nice, but the head is too pale, and theres a clump of black on the tail.
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    Three more.
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    As I said, there's some weird black outline left on some of the recolorings, on the Tropius' wing and neck, and on the Qwilfish's underbelly.
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    Yansparce looks O.K apart from the wings.

    All your recolours have this black outline that does not look good.

    TIP: Recolour the outline with a slightly darker version of the colour that you are recoulouring in.

    EDIT: But don't remove the black, kinda keep it there, but just change it a little.
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