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    *Cue opening song ‘Let’s Get Started In Here’ by Black Eyed Peas*

    Year 1, June

    “Okay, is everybody ready?” Miss Jasmine asked casually after the school bell rang, ending the class. “The end-of-year exams are coming and I hope you have all been studying. If you fail most of your exams, you’re going to have to repeat a year. I know that hard working people like Misty will have no problem with them at all.”

    She then turned towards Ash with worried eyes. “But if you’re someone like Ash who copies homework from her… I’m afraid, you’ll struggle quite a lot,” she said.

    Ash tried to respond to get himself out of trouble. “Um… some of them are Drew’s too,” he replied absentmindedly.

    “You’re a bigger idiot than I thought,” Drew said in annoyance.

    Pikachu, who was standing next to Ash, showed nothing but a look of embarrassment. “Pikapi…” he squeaked, scratching his head. If his memory served correctly, Ash often wore a dunce cap back in elementary school.

    Normally, first year students who pass their exams would be able to advance into another class next year. Those who don’t pass the least amount would be retained, meaning they would have to repeat the grade. Ash for one would do whatever it took to get into next year’s class. Besides, he doesn’t want to be embarrassed by repeating the same year. During break time, he asked Misty for help with his revision, which she replied…

    “Sorry, Ash. But no, I can’t help you,” she said this in a down tone, feeling sorry for her friend.

    “C’mon, Mist. Why not?” Ash replied

    “Didn’t Miss Jasmine gave you a warning about getting help from me and Drew? If you keep on doing that, you’re never going to learn anything.”

    “I’ll tell you what, the next time we get homework, I’ll do them for you. How’s that?”

    “Forget it! You’re just going to get everything wrong!”

    “Pika…” Pikachu squeaked, nodding his head signalling that he’s agreeing with her.

    “Pikachu! You’re supposed to be on my side!” Ash barked dejectedly.

    Pikachu shrugged in return while letting out a small sigh before Ash turned his attention back to her. “Well… is there anything you can do to help me?” he asked pleadingly.

    “I can give you one advice… do the revision yourself!” Misty replied moodily.

    “Misty, you know I’m not good at that,” Ash said. “So I might as well get you to help me.”

    “I’ll never help you!” Misty shouted angrily. “If you keep on doing that, you’ll be asking for help for the rest of your life! Honestly, are you really that dumb, Ash Ketchum!? Is your mind like a sieve or what!?”

    Ash and Pikachu became scared of that reaction. “But… Misty…”

    “Um… Misty, can you help me… please?” a girl’s voice asked pleadingly. They both turned their attention to the girl behind them and it turned out to be May, showing her puppy-like eyes. “Drew is refusing to help me. And my dad is forcing me to do the revision myself. I know I ask a lot from you and I didn’t want to bother you this time… but this is turning for the worst…”

    Misty sighed in a sad tone. “Sorry, no can do,” she said.

    “Well then, what about us?” shouted the third voice. It turned out to be Kim and his Invincible Brothers, Ken and Kai. “We’re not doing any good either.”

    “If I said no to Ash and May, then it’s highly obvious that I won’t be helping you guys either.”

    “What’s the matter with you, Misty?” Ken complained. “The exams are coming up and all we’re asking for is a little help.”

    “Please,” Misty said moodily. “Kim needs more help being restrained when Barry’s around, Kai focuses on eating so much that he’s got the potential to be a sumo wrestler if he’s going for a martial arts career, and you don’t stand a chance of getting Rui’s attention!”

    “Hey! Don’t call me fat!” Kai complained. “I have a thyroid problem!”

    “Then stop eating thyroids!” shouted a familiar voice outside the classroom. They all recognised it as Barry’s from the other class.

    “Shut up! No one’s asking you, you dope!” Kim shouted back angrily.

    “See what I mean!” Misty said angrily. “I bet with all of you studying together, you dimwits won’t be able to beat Pikachu’s score if he took the exams!”

    “Pika!” Pikachu squeaked dejectedly at Misty, not wanting to be compared with them.

    “What!? What did you say!? Tell me you didn’t just call us dimwits!” May shouted in horror, not liking that name. He noticed that May and the Invincible Brothers didn’t show a reaction. “What’s the matter with you people? Aren’t you going to say anything?”

    “She was referring to you as a dimwit, wasn’t she?” Ash asked.

    “Dimwit-s!” May said, emphasising the ‘S’. “She was referring to us as dimwit-s!”

    “Oh no! She did not say that!” the brothers shouted in unison, now finally understanding what that meant.

    Misty looked down in anger and frustration. Huge auras of those two emotions could be seen by psychics and anime fans. “Fine then, Misty!” Ash barked. “To prove you wrong! We’re gonna team up, study together and pass those exams together!”

    Feeling slightly relieved that they came to that solution, Misty packed up her stuff and got up from her seat. “Good luck,” she said moodily before she left with a huff.

    And so, Ash, May and the Invincible Brothers quickly got down to studying. They were all alone in the classroom with Pikachu watching them like a hawk. He was looking mainly as Ash’s math equation as his ‘trainer’ wrote the down an answer to one of the questions.

    After seeing the answer, Pikachu shook his head signalling that it was the wrong answer while squeaking, “Pikapika.”

    Ash crossed it out and wrote down another answer. Again, Pikachu shook ‘wrong answer’ signal…


    And again…


    And again…


    And again…

    “I’m not getting anywhere, aren’t I?” Ash complained being frustrated, tossing his pen away before rubbing his head.

    The Invincible Brothers were staring at their respective books, trying to figure out the answer to one of the questions being showed on the book. Kai picked up this book and showed it to Ken. “Hey, can you explain this one?” he asked.

    “I’m on the same question as you are,” Ken replied after taking a quick look.

    “Ken, what about you?”

    “Yay, study,” Kim sobbed sadly.

    “Ash? Can you help me out?”

    “Are you even trying?” Ash asked moodily before going into panic mode. “Aw! I got to get ready!”

    “May, can you…”

    “Mmm… doughnuts…” she said dreamily. She was already fast asleep after spending sometime studying and no one noticed.

    Sometime after the end of their next class. Ash came to the conclusion that studying with May and Invincible Brothers proved to be useless so he decided to get help from the other classes. First person to get some information from was Wes. He was sitting inside Class Three’s classroom studying for the exams when Ash came in. “Wes,” he called out to him, catching his attention before walking over to him. “Remember me? Ash Ketchum. We competed against each on Sports Day.”

    Wes had a confused look on his face. “Er…”

    “You don’t remember?”

    “Uhn… no.”

    “What about that Christmas party at that hamburger place, we both saw each other onstage singing karaoke.”

    Wes was silent for a moment. “I don’t remember that either. Sorry,” he said.

    An awkward silence came between them. “You… don’t remember? You actually don’t remember?” Ash asked shocked that his ‘rival’ Wes doesn’t remember anything. “Well then… never mind! Bye!” he said in an embarrassed tone as he walked away and out of the classroom.

    The Invincible Brothers decided to give Macey a spot of bother, asking her to help them out. “Please! Pwetty, pwetty, pwetty, pwetty please!” they asked in a begging fashion.

    “Alright! Fine!” Macey complained, handing them her notebook. “But keep it here in this room where I can keep an eye on you and you better give it back to me when you’re done!”

    “Yes, yes, anything! Thank you!” they replied gratefully as they took the book and brought to the other table. As they read through the pages, they tried to learn what Macey wrote down in her book but…

    “Don’t get it,” they said in unison before turning the page. “Don’t get it.”

    And another…

    “Don’t get it.”

    And another…

    “Don’t get it.”

    And another.

    “Don’t get it! Don’t get it! Don’t get it!”

    More pages later, they found a strange doodle of a young kid in a hat. “What in the world?” Ken asked.

    “I guess Macey’s not the best artist here,” Kai said.

    “Yeah… let’s make it worse!” Kim said as he took out his pen.

    Soon, they returned the book to Macey. “Hey, thanks for the help,” Ken said.

    “We didn’t understand much of it but still…” Kim said with a shrug.

    “We gotta go now. See you later,” Kai said before they walked away, attempting to find any more help.

    After they left, Macey opened her book to find the strange doodle kid with now a moustache and an arrow sticking through his head, much to her dismay. Her anger burned with rage. If this was an anime, viewers would most likely see a fiery background and some burning flames would be showing in her eyes. “That was my beloved Ash, you punks…” she snarled. “I’ll make you three pay for this!”

    Elsewhere in the classroom, May was trying to solve a math equation to no avail. “I just don’t get it,” she said. “I just don’t get it at all.”

    “Need some help?” asked a voice. She looked up and saw the green haired student, recognising him as Drew.

    “From you, Drew?” she said almost smugly before she whimpered, “Yes, please,” in a begging way.

    Drew sat down next to her, taking a look at the textbook she was using. “Okay, so this is algebra,” he said as he got started. “If you take this X and place it with another X…”

    While he explained the whole equation, which was quite a lot, May couldn’t help but feel sick after having to digest all that information in her head. She felt that her head was swirling. “Hey, your face is all green,” Drew said noticeably.

    “I need the bathroom,” May whimpered before quickly running out of the room.

    Meanwhile, Ash has been going round person-to-person randomly, desperately seeking help but…

    “Please! Can you help me?”

    “Get away from me, freak!” this person replied.

    “Dude! Can you help me?”

    “Ten bucks per question!” the second person responded.

    “Please! I’m desperate here!”

    “If you keep on asking for help, you won’t learn anything…” the third person replied before going further into this lecture and Ash had to go to another person.

    “I’ll do anything! Please!”

    “I’d keep that to myself if I were you,” the fourth person replied.

    “Please! Can you explain this part to me?”

    “Aren’t you even trying?” the fifth person replied.

    “Please! Pretty, pretty, pretty, please!”

    “Additional words of refusal!” the sixth person said.

    Meanwhile, the Invincible Brothers were walking down a corridor, wondering what to do to pass the exams. “Hey, guys,” they heard a voice say, catching their attention. They turned and saw Wally nervously walking towards them.

    “Great, it’s that loser who hangs out with the losers. Just what we need,” Kim said in an annoyed tone.

    “Shut up, he might offer us some help,” Ken whispered to him before turning to the green haired shy guy. “What’s up?”

    “A friend of mine told me that there’s a place where you can get a lot of help,” Wally said still being nervous. “It’s in one of the men’s bathrooms. I’ll take you there and in there, you have to call out ‘King of Tests’. The rest is up to you.”

    “And who’s this friend you’re talking about?” Kim asked.

    “He told me not to say. He just told me to spread the word around.”

    “And who’s this ‘King of Tests?’” Kai asked.

    “That, I don’t know.”

    The brothers gathered around speaking to each other as though they were strategising. “This sounds very suspicious,” Kai whispered. “Could be a trick.”

    “This may be the only chance we have though,” Ken said. “We may not get another one.”

    “Might as well jump into an Arcanines’ den,” Kim said. They all turned around to face Wally, who was still showing a nervous look on his face. “Show us the way,” he said.

    Soon, Wally guided them to the men’s bathroom. “Your turn, I’ll be off then,” he said before making his way back to the classroom.

    Ken was going to call him but Kim stopped. “Let him go. We can take it from here,” he said. “Hey! King of Tests!”

    “Yes?” replied a loud scratchy voice, coming from behind one of the toilet doors. That surprised the Invincible Brothers.

    “We need some help with our studying,” Kim said loudly, trying not to sound nervous.

    “Teacher? Subject?” the ‘King of Tests’ asked.

    “Every teacher! Every subject! Just give us everything!” the three cried in a panicking fashion.

    “Hmm… that’s quite a lot you’re asking for. How much have you got?” the voice asked.

    “We’ll give you everything! Even our clothes!” the tall brother cried.

    “Just give me all your money and snacks, not your clothes,” the voice said.

    The brothers did as they were told as they emptied their pockets of their loose change and snacks, sliding them under the door. “Is that all of them?” the voice asked suspiciously.

    “Serious! If you want you can check our pockets!” Kim asked.

    “Hmm… good enough,” the voice before sliding out a small sheet of paper, which the brothers frantically picked up. They looked at the note and read numbers written next to each subject.

    “What’s this?” Kim asked.

    “Page numbers from your textbooks for each subject,” the voice replied. “Good enough for the amount you paid. And because you checked the information already, no refunds. Just follow the information on those pages and you’ll be fine.”

    “What else can we do?” Ken said. “No one else is going to help us out.”

    “Guess we got lucky on this one,” Kai said. “Thanks, King of Tests.”

    Ken and Kai left the bathroom first to get started with their revision. Kim suspiciously looked back at the closed toilet door before taking his leave. After they left, the ‘King of Tests’ let out a small chortle… a chortle of a familiar blond. Soon, Brendan entered the room hearing that chuckle. “So there you are, Barry,” he said. “You’re supposed to be studying!”

    A week later, the exams have started. A number of people were nervous about the exams while others were feeling quite confident. The Invincible Brothers were quite confident after studying the pages given to them by the ‘King of Tests’ himself. However…

    “It’s not on here!!” they cried during the examination after reading their respective papers and discovering the worst thing that happened to them.

    A week later, everyone got their marks from their exams and compared them to the their other classmates. Ash did pretty badly in a number of subjects. For example, for Mathematics he got a score of thirty-nine and wanted to compare scores with Misty but accidentally sneaked a peek at her score, which was eighty-nine, much to his shock and quickly changed his mind.

    He overheard other two students comparing their scores. “It was pretty easy this exam,” said one of them.

    “I can’t believe that I lost to you by one point,” said another, slightly displeased with his score.

    “Don’t worry, the important thing is that you passed. I checked out the other guys’ scores and I think the average is going to be pretty high this year.”

    “High… average… score?” Ash murmured to himself. “This could be… very bad.”

    The Brothers Invincible also failed this test as well. If their scores were to be added up, their total scores would be up to being around sixty. They snarled in anger, angry at the ‘King of Tests’ who gave them fake revision notes. “I swear. When I find out who this “King of Tests’ is, I’m going to tear him a new hole,” Kim snarled.

    In the other classroom, Barry felt his left ear starting to itch.

    Back in Class Five, May was checking her score for Science, which was fifty-nine. She was glad because she passed the exam. “Fifty-nine, huh?” Drew said, looking over her shoulder.

    “Wah!” she yelped in fright, not knowing that he was standing right behind her. “How long have you’ve been standing here!? You can’t creep up on people like that!”

    “And for the moment there I thought that I was going to get a little thanks,” Drew said.

    “Oh… sorry,” May responded in realisation that if Drew didn’t help her, she wouldn’t have passed that exam. “Uh… thank you, Drew,” she said, bowing her head down towards him.

    “No problem. Somebody’s got to stop your whining at some point.”

    May angrily raised her head in anger. “I’m not whiny, Drew! How dare…!”

    She stopped as soon as she felt some angry and sad tensions behind her and turned around to see Ash and the Invincible Brothers glaring daggers at her while Pikachu looked on in a dull way because of the way this was going. “What…?” she whimpered nervously.

    “May… you traitor…” Ash said softly yet distastefully.

    “He’s right! You’re a traitor!” Kim shouted. “If you had Drew’s help! Why didn’t you say anything!? You big traitor! Judas!”

    While the boys continued blaming May, Drew let out a small sigh as he took his leave. “Guys, I don’t think Judas was involved in some examination.”

    “Wait! Drew! Don’t leave me here!” she cried, sounding like she was begging.

    Luckily for Ash and the Invincible Brothers, they passed a number of exams to get through to next year, much to their relief. Each one was good enough to exceed the passing marks.

    “So, what did you learn?” Misty smugly asked the Brothers Invincible. Each one of them answered uninterestedly.

    “We learned that if we study hard and not focus on anything else, we can manage anything,” Ken said.

    “Relying on someone else too much would be a lot of trouble,” Kai replied.

    “And never trust a guy who hides behind the door of a toilet room who claims to the ‘King of Tests’,” Kim said.

    “Huh? King of Tests?” Misty asked.

    Meanwhile Ash and Pikachu was staring vacantly outside the window and Macey sneaked over towards him. “Hey, Ash,” she said happily. “How did you do?”

    “Brilliant. Passed them all,” he replied in a monotone voice.

    “Then why aren’t you happy then?” she asked worriedly. “You look really down, Ash.”

    “No, everything’s fine.”

    “You don’t have to say anything,” Macey replied, trying to cheer him. “I know! How about we go out on a date to celebrate the end of our exams.”

    “I’m broke,” he replied, still speaking in his monotone voice.

    “Um… okay then,” Macey said, still worried and concerned. “You have games at home, right? How about we play some?”

    “I don’t have any games… not anymore.”

    Macey became shocked with disbelief. “Well then… what will you do in your spare time?”

    Soon, it was the end of another school day. Marley was at a good, quiet spot as she sat next to a tree. “…Two ninety-nine… Three hundred,” she murmured as she finished counting her money.

    Her best friend Rui walked over to her and noticed the amount she held in her hands. Surprised and curious, she asked her, “Where did you get all that money?”

    The emotionless girl looked up at her and calmly replied, “Ash Ketchum sold me his soul.”

    Rui’s next expression was quite expected.

    *Cue closing song ‘Girls Just Wanna Have Fun’ by Cyndi Lauper*
    Zoey: *Sighs* So mum and dad left on some emergency about their fashion company. The least they could’ve done is leave me a note!

    Mrs. Nozomi: But we did leave you a note, darling! On the fridge!

    Zoey: Oh, yeah. So you have.

    Mrs. Nozomi: Before I forget, someone will be there in case you need a helping hand.

    Zoey: Mum, I’m fifteen years! I don’t want anyone to… D-Dawn!?

    Dawn: Hi, Zoey!

    Zoey: Dawn! D-Don’t trouble yourself! You don’t have to!

    Dawn: Please… I want to help.

    Zoey: Whoa, Dawn. No need to get overdramatic.


    A/N: Don’t forget to ask the characters questions for their upcoming interviews! ^^ Check the upper posts to see who’s available to answer. ^^
    Last edited by Brian Powell; 24th June 2009 at 1:17 PM.
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    Thanks for the Pm Brian. The story is fine. I love class 3 special. Poor May, got chase by Ash and the Invincible Brothers ^o^. Good chapter as always
    Last edited by junpearl63; 21st June 2009 at 9:41 AM.

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    Junpearl63: Thanks for review, mate. I checked your earlier post, saying that you were quitting but I guess things got sorted out, huh? Let me know if there’s a problem, okay? And I agree, poor May being bullied by Ash and the Brothers Invincible.
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    *Cue opening song ‘Let’s Get Started’ by The Black Eyed Peas*

    Year 1, July

    This is the time of year where students look forward to their summer holidays. Barry was the most excited on this occasion. He was inside the classroom, physically hearing the clock ticking while Miss Whitney and the students were exchanging words. Mentally, he was hearing the pleasant chimes from ice cream vans, small splashes of the sea coming onto a beach… also seeing girls in bikinis. And suddenly…

    Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding!

    “Scho-o-o-o-ol’s out forever! In your face, Miss Whitney!” Barry yelled excitedly after hearing the school bell before picking up his stuff and dashing out of the classroom, leaving everyone who remained seated, giving him an awkward glare.

    “And at the beginning of the lesson,” Miss Whitney moaned dully. “What an idiot.”

    A whack of the kendo stick was heard outside. “Ow!”

    Hours later, school finished for the day. This also started the summer holidays and ended the school year. Zoey walked down the streets, getting back to her place. “(I can’t believe how fast this year went),” she thought to herself. “(I better start thinking about what I want to do in future).”

    She was a girl with many interests: Sports, pokemon coordinating, travelling, art, fashion design…

    That last possible plan sent an awkward shiver down her spine before she spotted her house. The exterior looked very normal, not so rich and yet not so poor. It had a black roof with windows on the white walls.

    Putting the ‘fashion designer’ thought aside, she opened the door using her key. Upon entry, the interior looked very beautiful with the wooden floorboards, yellow painted walls and a white ceiling. The kitchen and the living area looked to be in one room, leading to the other rooms.

    “Mom! Dad! Glameow! I’m home!” she yelled. There was no response apart from a small grey cat with white paws and a very long tail slowly walking out from one of the rooms, letting out a small meow before purring relaxingly to Zoey’s petting on the head and under the chin. “Aw, haven’t mommy and daddy fed you yet?” she asked in a caring and playful tone. “Let me get changed and I’ll get you some food.”

    Letting out a small sigh of relief, she was about to go to her room to get changed into her home clothes when suddenly her home phone rang. “Wait one second, Glameow,” she said before picking it up and answering it. “Hello?” she asked curiously and casually, responding to the ringing.

    “Zoey! Darling!” the woman cried excitedly in a high-pitched posh tone.

    The voice was so loud that Zoey had quickly to move her head away slightly to avoid getting deaf. “Hi, mom,” she replied dully after placing the phone back to her ear. “What’s up?”

    “Sorry, darling! But it looks like your father and I are going to have a very busy week! We are in Celadon City on some fashion emergency right now so we won’t be coming back on the daily basis!” Mrs. Nozomi said.

    “I’m not surprised, mom. You and dad always leave your work at the last minute.”

    “Oh! Did you saw the list of things I got for you?”

    “What list?”

    “It’s on the fridge door, darling!”

    Zoey turned towards the said object and walked over to it. She took a small sheet of paper off the fridge and read it carefully. “Uh-huh… pay rent and bills, get it done by Monday,” she read aloud, checking if she had the right tasks. “Buy food, buy decorations, get flowers, invite friends, set up big party…”

    Suspicious of what the list as for, she became silent for a second or two, taking in all the information. Then it hit her. “Wait a minute! All that for a party!?” she shouted, thinking how ridiculous those chores were, knowing what work she would have to go through and what the guests would expect, accidentally scaring the cat. “What’s going on here!? What’s it for!?”

    “It’s for your Cousin Solana’s bachelorette party, darling. She’s getting married in two weeks time.”

    “What!? Already!? She’s only been going out with that… what-sis-name for two months!”

    “Yes, but they’re so madly in love with each other. Oh, sweetheart, if only I can have something like that again…”

    “Mom, you’re married… with me as your child. Just don’t make too much noise every night like you do at home,” Zoey said. Her mother was about to say something in reply but she continued talking. “Anyway, can’t Cousin Solana have that party elsewhere? I mean, why here?!”

    “She made me her maid of honour and I promised that I would hold it here.”

    “But you’re not going to be here for the rest of week, that’s just great,” Zoey moaned. “When is the party?”

    Her mother was silent for a moment. “This Sunday coming, four o’clock, darling,” she answered sheepishly.

    “Sunday!?” Zoey shouted. “Today’s Friday! I only just finished for the summer holiday and you’ve given me a day’s notice to do all this!? Honestly, when did you agree to hold the party here!? On second thought, don’t answer that!”

    “I’m sorry, darling,” her mother cried, sounding as though she was about to go into tears. “I promise I’ll buy you something fancy!”

    “Don’t bother! Just don’t make me do your dirty work again!” Zoey complained before hearing the doorbell ringing. “Hold on!” she moaned angrily towards both her mother and the person at the door. She headed over to the said location and opened it, revealing the person at the door as…

    “Oh. Hi, Dawn,” Zoey said in a relaxing manner. “Come in, have a seat. I just have to finish talking to this idiot on the phone.”

    “I heard that!” her mother yelled.

    “I said it out loud, mom,” Zoey replied calmly, much to Dawn’s surprise as she walked in before noticing the Glameow sitting on the sofa in the living room. “I promise to get everything done by Sunday.”

    “Thank you, darling,” Mrs. Nozomi cried. “It won’t be too much of a bother for you now anyway, I hired Dawn to help you.”

    Surprise showed on Zoey’s face. “Dawn’s going to help me?” she asked. “But she… how did you…?

    “We met once during a seminar at a clothes shop,” Mrs. Nozomi replied. “She told me that I was such a big inspiration to her and showed me so many beautiful designs of her decorations and clothes from her book. You should see them for yourself, darling! Also, my credit card is on my desk. Use it but please, I repeat, please, don’t go overboard.”

    “Okay… uh… thanks, mom,” Zoey replied, now even more surprised that Dawn would fascinate her own mother who was a self-proclaimed fashion expert.

    “I got to rush now, darling,” her mother cried. “Make sure the party’s ready by Sunday at four! Dawn will be staying with you until everything’s done and remember to get your Cousin Solana a present! Cheerio! Cheerio, darling!”

    “Bye, mom!” Zoey said stressfully before she hung up the phone, ending the call before she angrily blurted out, “I have to get Solana a present!?”

    The yell scared Dawn and Glameow quite a bit. “Whoa! Calm down, Zoey-san,” Dawn said.

    “That woman is so irresponsible and disorganised! She’s the last kind of person I want to grow up into!” Zoey complained before turning around to see her two friends sitting on the sofa. Realising that she’s now got a guest in the house, she sighed to relax herself. “I’m sorry, Dawn. My mom and dad keep leaving their work until the last minute and everything.”

    “It’s okay, Zoey-san. I sometimes do my homework at the last minute,” Dawn replied.

    “Maybe so but you’re not annoying,” Zoey said, trying to calm down after the stress she had to take in. “But, Dawn, you don’t have to help me out if you don’t want to. I mean, all I have to do is buy some snacks and something to wash them down with, right?”

    A small sweat drop showed on Dawn’s forehead. “Um… that’s not what Mrs. Nozomi or your Cousin Solana had in mind…” she said timidly.

    “I thought so,” Zoey murmured dully in annoyance with her two elders.

    “Besides, I would love to help you with the food and decorations,” Dawn continued, which surprised Zoey. “Your mother called me on the phone today about your situation.”

    That surprised Zoey even more. “She knew your number? How?” she asked.

    “We exchanged numbers,” Dawn said happily. “I hope she lands a job for me after I graduate.”

    Zoey’s eyes became widened in shock. “Trust me, you don’t want to work under her,” she said, hung her head down, looking as though she was sick. Suddenly, she heard a stomach rumble. That’s when she remembered. “Sorry, Glameow, I need to get you your dinner.”

    Her pet cat let out a small meow in response.

    Soon, after having their takeout for dinner, due to the fact that Zoey’s family don’t know how to cook, Zoey said to Dawn, “Hey, if you want, you can sleep in my room. I’ll sleep on the couch.”

    “What? No way,” Dawn replied. “I’ll be okay on the couch.”

    “Are you sure?”

    “Yeah, sure I’m sure.”

    “Well, if that’s what you want, then it’s settled.”

    “By the way, I need to take a look at your garden. You know, for the party.”

    “Sure,” Zoey said before noticing the setting sun. “But it looks like it’s getting dark. Maybe tomorrow morning before we set out to buy some stuff.”

    “Good idea,” Dawn replied admittedly, despite wanting to see the garden so badly. “I’m feeling a little bushed.”

    “Why don’t you take a shower and everything before going to sleep? I’ll clear up first,” Zoey said.

    Dawn agreed and set off to do her nightly routine while Zoey cleared and cleaned everything up in the kitchen. It took her sometime to get it done. Afterwards, while carrying a blanket and pillow over to the couch for Dawn, she found Glameow playing with one of Dawn’s books that was placed on sofa. “Glameow, don’t play with things that don’t belong to you,” she said in a disciplining manner before seeing a beautiful picture of Dawn in a wedding dress. Amazed by the image, she motioned the cat to move away before picking the book up. Being in the middle of the book, she turned to the front pages and more stunning pictures showed of Dawn in different styles of wedding dresses and decorations for ceremonies and reception halls as she continued turning the pages. Some of the pages showed lists of romantic songs and wedding venues.

    “Zoey-san,” she heard Dawn’s startled voice say, inadvertently dropping to book to the sofa, which Glameow scurried away from to avoid getting hit. Upon landing, the book showed its title to Zoey. “‘Dawn’s Wedding Ideas’, huh?” she asked before turning towards Dawn in her yellow nightgown.

    “So… how much did you see?” Dawn asked nervously.

    “Nothing much,” Zoey asked. “Just you in wedding dresses, lists of songs and stuff.”

    “Oh, okay,” Dawn replied, feeling quite relaxed. “So what do you think?”

    “The pictures you drew looked fantastic,” she replied. “As much as I don’t like my mom’s taste in clothes, I think we both can agree that you have brilliant designing skills.”

    Dawn blushed out of happiness. “Really? Thanks!”

    “So, I’m off to take a bath,” Zoey said, “Do you want to watch telly or are you going to sleep straightaway?”

    Dawn replied that she would to watch some TV before she’d go to sleep as they walked past each other.

    “Oh, and by the way,” Zoey before she was about to enter her bedroom to get her clothes. Dawn sat on the couch at the time, turning towards her. “I think you would look great in any wedding dress, whether or not they’re designed by you,” she said with a gentle smile.

    With that, she went to get her clothes and enter the bathroom, leaving Dawn feeling so bashful that she covered her face with Zoey’s spare blanket, letting out a small excited squeal.

    Soon, Zoey came out of the bathroom wearing her blue pyjamas. She spotted Dawn and Glameow already lying on the couch sleeping together, with the cat in her arms. The blanket was covering them up to their upper chests. The TV and the lights were still on. Smiling at their sleeping posture she turned the TV off before moving the blanket up to their necks so they would be kept warm. After that was done, she walked away and turned off the lights.

    The next morning, Zoey woke up pretty early to get everything sorted out by the next day. Upon her exit out of the bedroom, she saw Dawn looking outside into the back garden. It was a large garden with a lot of space. A small number of trees and flowers were planted on one side and there were some white garden furnitures in front of the glass doors where Dawn was. “Wow! What a lot of space,” she said in amazement.

    “Yeah,” Zoey said being unimpressed, walking towards her. “My parents bought this house because of that. They said that it’s for those so-called special occasions like this one.”

    “I’d say it’s beautiful,” Dawn replied looking at her cheerfully. “It’s a perfect place to hold the party, with ideas I’ve got in mind and everything!”

    Zoey looked at her still with a dull look, due to the fact she had just woken up and she didn’t think much about the garden. And yet…

    “I hate to admit it,” she said before looking back into the garden. “But I think it looks beautiful too.”

    Soon, they both got themselves ready to leave after having their breakfasts and getting changed into their casual summer clothes. “Okay, Glameow, you’re in charge of the house while I’m gone,” Zoey said to the cat who responded with an acknowledging meow. Then they set off. “So, where to first?”

    “Well, we ought to hit the malls first,” Dawn replied. “Buy decorations for the outdoors and indoors. Unless we want the flowers delivered the next morning it’s probably best if we buy plastic ones if we’re to carry them home. Also, it’ll be pain if…”

    While they discussed, Ash and Barry walking away from a nearby basketball court after Ash won the game of twenty-one points to eighteen. They were both in their basketball player uniforms, different coloured. “Boy, I am so beat,” Ash said, sweat trickling down his face and body.

    “You wanna go again some other time?” Barry asked, wiping away his. “Same rules as today’s game?”

    “Sure, I start at zero, you start at eighteen.”

    “Hey, want to get something to eat?”

    Ash let out a small chortle. “I know a place to eat and I’ll treat you… for free!” he said with pride, leaving his friend quite curious.

    Soon, they arrived at a dojo, where the Invincible Brothers lived. They had a large amount of food on the table and a number of martial arts students were there, including the brothers themselves. “So, you’re here again, Ash, huh?” Ken asked dully. “If you want, you have the leftovers.”

    “Wha…?” Barry said becoming dumbfounded.

    “Yesh!” Ash cried excitedly before he started guzzling up the food.

    “These are… leftovers?” Barry asked awkwardly, noticing how much food was left and it was quite a lot.

    “I told you I treat you for free! Don’t complain!”

    “Don’t you have any pride!? Besides, that knucklehead took a bite out of those things. His stupidity might be contagious!”

    “I heard that, you stupid blond!” Kim shouted angrily. “Get out!”

    Back at Zoey’s and Dawn’s location, they made their way into the busy part of the town. They already bought a good number of decorations for the party. Now, they’re making their way to a…

    “Clothes shop?” Zoey said. “I’ve already got enough clothes to last me a lifetime.”

    “It was your mother’s idea,” Dawn replied. “She said to look best for the wedding.”

    “Not that again. I have a tux and I don’t plan to change that any time soon. Just tell mom that we couldn’t find any.”

    “Tux…” Dawn murmured with bliss in her tone as she imagined her ‘girlfriend’ wearing such type of clothing as they entered the shop before she mentally snapped herself back into reality.

    They began searching trough dress after dress, trying to find the best one for Zoey. It was a hard task to do but they finally found one suitable for her. It was a beautiful white dress, almost as beautiful as a wedding dress but to Zoey…

    “I hate it,” she said awkwardly, her voice quivering as she cringed.

    Dawn became concerned for her friend. “What’s wrong?” she asked. “I thought this had potential.”

    “It’s not you, Dawn,” Zoey said. “It’s me. Ever since I was little, I hated wearing female clothing. They just never suit me. But my parents always insisted that I wear them but I get bullied about it at school.”

    She let out a small sigh of stress as she closed her eyes, reminiscing all the bullying and teasing she had to endure. “It’s okay,” Dawn said reassuringly.

    “You’re not mad at me?” Zoey asked.

    “Of course not,” Dawn replied reassuringly. “I always preferred you in men’s clothes, especially tuxes. It’s just that your mother suggested it.”

    “As usual,” Zoey moaned.

    At Rui’s flower shop, she was standing behind the counter while her grandparents were away on business. A small yellow rabbit with red ears, cheeks and tail leapt onto it and cooed out a small cry. “Plusle!” he cried.

    Rui turned towards her before beaming a bright smile while petting it on the head until…

    Ding ding! Ding ding!

    That caught Rui’s attention as she turned towards the shop door being opened. It turned out to be…

    “Wes!” Rui cried excitedly. “I was expecting someone to come round and help me but not you! I mean, what about your other job?”

    “My boss sent me here after he spoke to your grandparents. I’m going to be helping you today.”

    “Wha…!?” she cried in surprise.

    “Usually, I work at the pokemart but my boss sometimes send me to different places to help out…”

    He stopped when he saw the little Plusle looking at him. They both looked at each other for several seconds, with Wes admiring Plusle’s cuteness and Plusle becoming curious about Wes. Rui noticed that and introduced them to each other. “Ah! Wes, this is our family pokemon, Plusle. He helps around the flowershop. Plusle, this is my friend, Wes. We go to school together.”

    The two kept looking at each other in the same kind of trance. “Can I pet him?” he asked nervously. “He won’t bite or shock me, will he?”

    “Oh no,” Rui replied reassuringly. “Plusle would only people or pokemon who tries to rob this shop… but I think he likes you, Wes. So yeah, you can pet him.”

    Wes moved his hand towards Plusle’s, hesitant to pet it because of his past experience with some particular cat. His hand shook nervously until he finally placed it on his head. Amazed of this accomplishment, he happily went on stroking it while Plusle looked on, now liking his touch. Rui noticed and kept on watching admirably. “(So cute)!” she thought to herself.

    Soon, Dawn and Zoey walked into the shop and noticed two familiar faces. “Hey, you guys!” Dawn cried.

    “What’s going on here?” Zoey asked before noticing Wes petting the little rabbit-like creature.

    The girls stood still for long minutes, admiring the way he was still petting him. “(So cute…),” they thought in unison.

    Soon, Brendan entered the shop and noticed everything. He looked at his watch and began counting each second, thinking how long they stood there with trance looks. After one minute elapsed, he said, “Er… maybe we should all be doing something?”

    Everyone snapped back into reality, now blushing with embarrassment. “Oh! Hi, Brendan!” Rui cried.

    Soon, it was early evening and the two girls came back home feeling bushed while Glameow welcomed them back. They placed everything away and had dinner, agreeing to set the party up tomorrow morning. They also decided to have an early night because of that.

    But before Dawn would go to sleep on the couch, Zoey had something to show her. “Hey, Dawn,” she said nervously. Dawn turned towards her friend who was now wearing a tight Chinese dress that almost reached down to her knees.

    “Z… Zoey-san,” Dawn said in surprise, blushing furiously. “When did you…?”

    “I bought it when you were busy dealing with that sales person,” Zoey replied still being nervous. “I thought I give I give this one a try… So… what do you think?”

    “It… it looks nice on you… Zoey-san,” Dawn said bashfully, turning away, trying to hide away her blush. “But… if it’s for tomorrow’s party, you should wear what’s comfortable for you.”

    “You didn’t have to shy away, Dawn,” Zoey said.

    “I’m not! I’m not!” Dawn cried in a panic. “It’s just that you caught me by surprise and you look fantastic in it! But still, if you don’t like it, than just wear a tux, Zoey-san! I mean, I always liked you in men’s clothes!”

    Zoey slightly blushed at that. Dawn became startled when she caught a glimpse of that. “(Oh no! Did I say something I shouldn’t have)!?” she thought worriedly.

    “Thanks, Dawn,” Zoey replied. “What you said there gave me such a relief.”

    Dawn became confused at remark. “What do you mean?”

    “On every party, my parents are always getting me to wear a dress. I always hated wearing them for some reason. I guess the dresses don’t suit me. I think I’ll be wearing a tux tomorrow. Thanks again, Dawn.”

    “Uh… you’re welcome.”

    Silence came between them as they both looked at each other sincerely. “Well, it’s getting pretty late. We better be up early tomorrow to get everything set up,” Zoey said.

    “Right,” Dawn replied in acknowledgment.

    The next morning, delivery men arrived with the food and decorations sometime after Dawn, Zoey and Glameow finished their breakfast. While they got started, Zoey heard the doorbell rang, which caught her curiosity. “Who is it?” she asked as she walked to the door.

    “Flower delivery,” Wes’s voice said from outside.

    “And extra help!” another voice shouted.

    “Barry?” Zoey said as she opened the door, revealing to be her friends, wearing casual clothing, Wes, Rui, Barry, Brendan Marley, Wally, and some of their pokemon were carrying flowers.

    After the greeting and letting everyone in, Zoey asked, “So, the flower delivery is okay and all, but why the extra help?”

    “Long story short! Brendan told me the news, I accepted it like a challenge, Marley called up Rui, Rui spilled the beans, Marley loves flowers and she convinced Wally to go. Don’t forget, Wes is still working at that shop while Rui’s grandparents are away, and the flower shop’s closed today,” Barry said, finishing the question as quickly as he could.

    “Even shorter story, we all wanted to help,” Brendan said. “Broke your record, Barry. Put that in the Guinness book.”

    Annoyance showed on Barry’s face. “Guys, I don’t know what to say,” Zoey said in shocked happiness.

    “Just say ‘thank you’, tell us what you need and we’ll do our bit!” Rui cried enthusiastically. “Right, Wes?”

    “Right, no problem,” Wes replied in usual calm self.

    “Yes. I see some parts of this room that could use a facelift,” Marley said as she observed the room.

    “You’re not going to put black ribbons and roses all over the place are you?” Wally said nervously.

    Soon, Dawn came out into the living room, getting surprised in the process when she saw them, also happy. “Hey! What are you guys doing here?” she cried.

    “We came to brighten up your day!” Barry exclaimed before pointing at Brendan and shouted, “Ha! Top that!”

    They had only hours until the guests would come around. While they decorated the rooms and the garden, and laying food on the tables, Zoey couldn’t believe what great friends she had, despite that this party didn’t concern them. At one point, she stopped and took a step back, looking at the beauty of the decorations, admiring how much effort they were putting into the garden section of the party.

    She suddenly felt a hand placed on her shoulder, startling her slightly. It turned out that it was Barry when she turned her head towards him. “Good work, Zoey! Good work!” he said in a proud. With that, he walked, much to her bewilderment.

    “Is that all?” she asked herself.

    Brendan came along and spotted something. “Zoey… there’s a muddy handprint on your back,” he said.

    “I thought so,” Zoey said in annoyance. “I’m off to change my shirt.”

    So, despite Barry’s antics, such as attempting to set up chairs and tables in record time, which caused him to fall down many times and numerous quarrels with Brendan, everything was set up just in time. Everyone looked in amazement.

    Soon, it was time for everyone to leave. “Well, we’ll be off then,” Brendan said as he and the others were about to leave.

    “Thanks for everything, you guys,” Zoey said. “I don’t think we would’ve gotten this done without you.”

    “But really, we were expecting Rui and Wes to come but not you guys,” Dawn said. “But still, thanks.”

    “Don’t sweat it!” Barry said. “We’re friends, right!? There’s some lyrics to this kind of stuff! ‘I’ll be there for you because you’re there for me too’!”

    “I gotta owe you guys something…” Zoey said before she thought up an idea. “Ah! Would you guys to stay for the party!”

    “This is a bachelorette party, isn’t it? It’s girls only, we can’t stay here,” Wally said.

    “Then may I suggest that only Rui and Marley stay then?” Brendan asked.

    “What!?” Rui cried in shock. “The others would be wearing neat dresses! I can’t stay here wearing gardening overalls!”

    “Yes… my dress seems to be a little bit dirty after all that work,” Marley said calmly.

    “Are you trying to get us to buy you girls dresses?” Brendan asked slyly.

    “No! No! No! No! I can’t have you guys doing that for me!” Rui cried in panic.

    “I’m afraid there’s not much time left anyway,” Marley replied. “The shops will close soon.”

    “Hang on, I think I have the solution,” Zoey said reassuringly.

    Soon, Rui and Marley were dressed in tight Chinese dresses. Rui was dressed in the red dress with patterns of green leaves placed in. Marley was wearing black with a picture of a white snake-like dragon on it. Zoey and Dawn were now getting changed. The boys looked on it in amazement and silence. “Hubba…” Barry said flabbergasted.

    “Stunning. Absolutely stunning,” Brendan said clapping his hands in approval.

    “You… you girls look good,” Wes said.

    “Um… yeah, what he said,” Wally said, pointing over to Wes.

    “Loss for words, I see,” Marley said, sounding slightly smug. “Although, it surprises me that we’re both about the same size as Zoey.”

    Speaking of which, Zoey came out wearing a tux that she was comfortable with. “Same old thing, huh?” Barry said slightly disappointed. “I knew she was going to wear that.”

    “Come on, Barry. Let her be,” Brendan said.

    “Still, she looks nice in it,” Wally said, which Wes nodded in agreement.

    Soon, it was Dawn’s turn to come out. She was wearing a pink dress that showed her shoulders and reached down to her ankles, along with long white gloves. “You don’t think this is too much, do you?” she asked.

    Zoey smiled relaxingly at the sight of this girl in the dress. “Dawn…” she said. “You look…”

    “That’s it!” Barry yelled excitedly. He couldn’t contain himself anymore after seeing so much of the pretty girls in dresses. “I can’t take it anymore! If every girl is going come in here dressed like that then I wanna stay!”

    “Okay, Barry! You’ve been warned! We can’t break traditions like that! Wes!” Brendan shouted as he and Wes grabbed hold of him.

    “Hey! Two against one is unfair!” Barry shouted as he struggled to be free from their hard grasp to no avail as they began dragging him away. “Girls! Please let me stay! I belong here!”

    “Um… enjoy the party, girls,” Wally said embarrassed by this turmoil.

    “See you later, girls!” Brendan said.

    “Bye,” Wes said calmly.

    “At least let me take some pictures!” Barry cried before Brendan slammed the door shut, leaving the girls dumbfounded. “Wa-a-ah!!”

    An hour later after the party started, a number of female guests arrived at the party. Many of them were relatives, and friends of Solana, Zoey’s cousin. They were congratulating the bride and others complimented the decorations and food set up by Zoey and her friends. Even Solana was happy, thanking her for taking over her mother’s duty to set the party up. However…

    “Zoey,” one of the guests called over to her, getting her attention. She had a serious look on her face as Zoey walked towards her in response.

    “Yes?” she asked in curiosity.

    “Did you hire a stripper?” the guest asked.

    “My mother never told me anything about that,” Zoey replied, a look of sudden guilt showed on her face.

    “You idiot! It’s a tradition for every bachelorette party!” the guest said. “It’s your cousin’s last night of freedom and…”

    Suddenly, a cell phone beeped and vibrated inside Zoey’s pocket, catching their attention. She took it out and read the phone’s text message, ‘Stripper is here, answer the door, darling. Mom.’

    Zoey showed a grimaced look on her face. “And so bluntly,” she said as she placed her phone away. “Good news, I’ll be back,” she said to the guest before walking away with a smile.

    She entered back into the living room and then towards the front door. Upon opening the door, she saw a very familiar face. “Y… you!” she said in shocked disgust.

    Five minutes later, almost all of the girls were having a good time with the stripper, with the exception of Rui, Zoey, Marley and Dawn sitting around the kitchen table in disgust and total silence. “Mr. Brawly’s twin brother… yeah, right,” Zoey said in disbelief.

    *Cue ‘Girls Just Wanna Have Fun’ by Cyndi Lauper*
    Barry: *Sings* Well, these girls are cute, I really dig those styles they wear. And the southern girls, with the way they talk, they knock me out when I’m down there. The mid-west farmers’ daughters really make you feel all right. And the northern girls, with the way they kiss, they keep their boyfriends warm at night. I wish they all could be Goldenrod High, I wish they all could be Goldenrod High, I wish they all could be Goldenrod High Gi-i-i-i-i-r-r-r-rls! Yeah!

    Brendan: I’m taking a different car to the beach. See you next episode, folks.

    Barry: Hey! Where are you going!?

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    Awsome! Another chapter! Okay, time to review....

    Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding! Ding!

    “Scho-o-o-o-ol’s out forever! In your face, Miss Whitney!” Barry yelled excitedly after hearing the school bell before picking up his stuff and dashing out of the classroom, leaving everyone who remained seated, giving him an awkward glare.

    “And at the beginning of the lesson,” Miss Whitney moaned dully. “What an idiot.”

    A whack of the kendo stick was heard outside. “Ow!”
    Haha, same old Barry. This is my favorite part.

    “Oh. Hi, Dawn,” Zoey said in a relaxing manner. “Come in, have a seat. I just have to finish talking to this idiot on the phone.”
    Uhm, it seems to me that this isn't really a way to talk to your mother but... she's an idiot.

    “That’s it!” Barry yelled excitedly. He couldn’t contain himself anymore after seeing so much of the pretty girls in dresses. “I can’t take it anymore! If every girl is going come in here dressed like that then I wanna stay!”
    Everyone does It's not like you can normally see a lot of girls wearing dress and make up in a day.

    You idiot! It’s a tradition for every bachelorette party!”
    I think it's a little rude to call someone idiot when you don't really know them, but, who cares.

    Cool chapter as always Brian! You've outdone yourself. And, thanks for the Pm. I've wait for this for a long time.

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    Thanks, Junpearl63. Yep, those were some funny parts… and some ‘graphically astonishing’ parts if you have some good imagination. And Barry, he’s my one of my most favourite characters to write. ^^ Wait until the August chapter, the beach chapter where there will sun, sea, sand and… you know the rest. ^^
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    Brian, the fanfic is going really well. I couldn't find any mistakes(then again, I'm not the best reviewer out there). Take your own time and post the next chapter. If and when you start a PM list, please put me on it.
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    Hailflameblast: Thanks, mate. If you want to be ‘the best reviewer out there’, you must think of constructive criticism. Think about what could be improved, list your favourite bits, give advice, keep your eye out for mistakes and errors, and most importantly lay off the drugs and alcohol. I’ve been pretty busy with other stuff to keep up with this fic as we speak. Don’t worry, I’ll keep you updated when the new chapter comes up… you’re going to love the beach. ^_^
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    Questions for Marley(Not too sure if its over yet)
    1.Are you emo?
    2.Do you have a crush on Wally?
    3.Did Ash give his games and money so that you would help with his exam preparations?
    4.Is this true:- All your base are belong to us?
    5.Do you like the beach?
    6.Do you know the muffin man?
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    hey i just finished reading all of this and i love it sooooo much!!!!!! ur really good and good idea with the questions. i havent come up with any but ill tell you wen i do. keep going cauz ur really good brian powell!!!!! 2 thumbs up!!

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    Hey simon, big fan of ur work!
    been reading since it started!
    but when are u going to include wes`s umbreon and espeon that is if ur going too..
    it would be so cool if wes took them to the beach as a surprise! btw have u heard the song lucky by jason mraz with colbie caliant? hint hint wes and rui duo!
    keep up the great writing!
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    Mew-mew: you need more chapters with May
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    Mew-mew: LET ME AT HIM!!!! LET ME AT HIM!!!!
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    advance shipping will prevail!!!

    tips: why is dawn liking Zoey? make a plot where zoey reads the rest of dawns book!

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    Great Fic. Additional words of _____ is Win.

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    Sep 2004


    Hailflameblast: Thanks for the questions, mate. I’ll pick out five and have Marley answer them sometime after the August chapter.

    Lexibee88: Why thank you, Lex, and I’m sure that you’ll come up with some… as long as it’s not where babies come from. XP

    Arceus7: Consider yourself added. Concerning the shipping, that’s for me to know and for you to find out. Yeah, poor Wally and his innocence and I had to pick a character that would be suitable for the perverted teacher role… and Mr. Brawly was it.

    Nataria: Hey! Someone who gets the joke in my username. ^^Thanks for checking out the fic, bud. Like I said before, like the shipping stuff, that’s for me to know and for you to find out. I never heard of that song but I’ll check it out when I have the time. I will keep on writing and you’ll be reading. Thanks for the endorsement. ^^

    Mew-mew: Indeed, there will be more chapters with May in it so don’t get mad or anything.

    Arceus7: Thank you for the tips but I already have things thought up.

    Piewhichilike: Thank you. I couldn’t agree more with that statement.

    Everyone else, remember it’s only early December but consider this as a gift: A brand new chapter for Goldenrod High. It may be cold in real life, but it’s going to get pretty hot here. ^_^

    *Cue opening song ‘Let’s Get Started’ by Black Eyed Peas*

    Year 1, August

    “Today’s task! Bring all the plants to Rui’s Delight Flower Shop! Starting destination! Marley’s house! Mission shall commence… now!” Barry shouted excitedly in a public place where everyone in the scene couldn’t help but glare.

    He was standing outside a public train station along with Wally, Brendan and Drew. After seeing this embarrassing moment, Brendan and Drew decided to do one thing to avoid getting noticed hanging around with him.

    “We quit,” they said in unison as they started walking away.

    “Hey! You quit all of the sudden!? Where are you two going!? Don’t leave me here!” Barry cried as he grabbed hold of them.

    “Your rowdiness is embarrassing us,” Drew said.

    “Yeah, everyone is looking, you know,” Brendan said.

    “Suppose you could turn the volume down a little bit,” Wally said nervously.

    “Alright! Alright! I get the message!” Barry complained, now being a whiny kind of person. “Let’s just go to Marley’s and get it over with!”

    “You’re still being loud!” Brendan complained.

    “You don’t get always get what you want, you know!” Barry shouted.

    It took them quite a while to get to her house, seeing that it’s their first time visitng her. To their amazement, it was rather large with walls and a gate surrounding it. “Shouldn’t she be in a rich, private school?” Drew asked.

    “Yes, but don’t tell her that,” Brendan said nervously. “She might tear you a new hole.”

    “I would never do that,” Wally said before seeing a red button, a speaker and a screen attached to the wall. Shaking with fear, he slowly reached his finger towards the red button.

    “Be careful, Wally,” Barry said, also being scared. “It might self destruct.”

    “If it did, they probably had guys like you in mind,” Brendan said.

    Wally hesitantly yet quickly pressed the buzzer. “Run for it!” Barry yelled as he did that, only to be caught by Brendan and Drew by the back of his shirt.

    “Why are you running away for?” Brendan asked calmly.

    “He just wants Wally to follow him, doesn’t he? I can’t believe that my poor cousin would hang out with guys like him,” Drew said.

    “You actually care for your cousin?”

    “Ah, good afternoon, my friends,” Marley said calmly through the intercom. Her face was being shown on the screen. “I’ve been expecting you. Please come on inside. Hamlet will open the doors for you.”

    The gate slowly opened, allowing the boys to come through. “Maybe we should’ve brought something with us. Like a cake or a watermelon,” Barry said, still being nervous.

    “Just shut up and be yourself,” Brendan said as they came closer to the house. “Better yet, don’t be yourself.”

    They saw the door opening, revealing a creature showing a dark purple aura with an evil smile and red devilish eyes. Wally’s eyes widened with shock and fear as he shouted out the following words. “Wa-a-ah! A Gengar!” he cried as he tried to make a run for his life, only to be caught by Brendan and Drew by the shirt.

    “Relax, it’s only Hamlet, like Marley said,” Brendan said.

    “He’s afraid of ghosts, including ghost-type pokemon,” Drew said. “But since you’re Marley’s friend, you two should be able to get along.”

    “Drew! Please don’t put ideas in my head!” Wally screamed.

    They all entered the main hall after walking though the entrance door. They suddenly heard some loud barking above them. They looked up and saw Marley with a red furry dog, twice her size, with white mane and tail, and black stripes on its back, standing next to her. “Ooh! An Arcanine,” Brendan said with interest.

    Marley and the Arcanine were standing on the gallery of the second floor until the dog jumped down to the ground floor, causing a small but thunderous earthquake. The boys began losing their balance, with Barry and Wally falling to the floor. The big dog quickly ran over to Wally, licking him on the face in a loving manner, unintentionally making him scream in fear.

    “Romeo,” Marley called out calmly.

    The dog growled in response as he walked away from him. “Please pardon him,” Marley said as she walked down the stairs. “It’s his way of welcoming guests.”

    “It’s okay! It’s fine, Marley!” Wally said reassuringly as he wiped the drool off his face wile laughing, still being nervous.

    “You boys must be thirsty,” she said. “Why not have some tea in the living room before you make the delivery? Please, make yourselves at home.”

    Marley’s living room was quite large. It was a classy and historic looking room decorated with a number of large paintings and furnitures, much to boys’ surprise. “Man, she’s got a gold-digger magnet room here,” Drew said.

    “Drew,” Wally said, not pleased with that statement.

    While Marley was making them tea with Hamlet’s help, the boys took their seats. They found the seats so very comfortable. They even felt the…

    “Leather…” Barry whispered pleasantly, sitting on one of the sofas. “O-o-o-oh…”

    He lifted up his feet and rested them on the other side of the furniture, feeling more relaxed. “O-o-o-oh yeah!” he yelled loudly in an orgasmic tone, much to everyone’s awkward feeling.

    “Tea’s ready,” Marley said as she, Romeo and Hamlet entered the room carrying trays of the hot beverages and snacks. They too had awkward looks on their faces as they glared at Barry who reacted out of the shock when he heard her announcement, quickly moving his feet off the sofa.

    Wally looked around and saw a picture of a young man wearing a suit standing next to a girl in a black and white dress. The girl looked like Marley, only years younger, while the young man was taller and had a haircut similar to hers and showed a more moody expression. “Marley, the two people in the picture,” he said. “Are they…?”

    “Yes, that would me and… my brother,” she replied, being slightly solemn before she sat down while her two pokemon rested on the floor. “So, does anyone have any plans for this summer?”

    “I don’t have any,” Brendan said.

    “Me neither,” Wally replied.

    “Me neither,” Barry replied.

    “What they said,” Drew said.

    They all sighed and hung their heads low, knowing how boring this summer holiday would be without anything fun to do. After a moment of thinking, Marley came up with the solution. “Then how about we go to my family beach house in Olivine City?” she asked politely.

    It took a few seconds for the boys to take in the verbal offer before…

    “BEACH HOUSE!?” they screamed in shock.

    A few days later, Brendan was sleeping on his own bed. When his alarm clock struck seven o’clock in the morning, a familiar voice was heard. “Good morning, Goldenrod City. This is your host speaking on your favourite show. It’s a bright and beautiful sunny day at twenty-six degrees centigrade, which is good news for fire-type pokemon and it’s a good excuse for water pokemon to take a dip in the sea. Hey, it’s the summer holiday for most people. It’s a good time to stay home, sleep in, or… wake up the idiot that’s hanging over the bed! Get up, Brendan!” Barry shouted as he picked up a klaxon device and pressed on its button.


    Brendan woke up in shock and fell out of his bed.

    Everyone invited gathered around Marley’s house. Marley, Wally, Barry, and Brendan invited their usual type of folks: Rui, Zoey, Wes and Dawn. Drew invited Ash, May and Misty. It was noticed that Ash didn’t bring Pikachu but that was because his pokemon buddy went to Pokemon Paradise, a holiday camp for pokemon. “This is going to be great!” Barry cried excitedly. “We’re going to hit the beach! The beach, baby! Think about it, people! Drinks! The sea! The sand! And best of all… the babes in their bikini-clad glory!”

    “You’re not going to drool over us, are you?” Misty asked in annoyance.

    “Maybe, maybe not, depends on how good you girls look in your swimsuits.”

    The girls let out a disgusted growl at this pervert.

    “Don’t worry, I’m not gonna take advantage of you. We’re all friends, aren’t we?” Barry said reassuringly, noticing their angry glares but was still happy at the perverted thought, before turning his attention to the three other female teenagers, standing by their respective cars. They were older than the Goldenrod High students. They all had pretty looking faces and shoulder length hair but at different colours. One had blond hair, another had dark blue hair and the third one had pink hair. “Maybe I would to take my chances with them, huh?”

    “I don’t think so,” Misty said. She earlier introduced the older teenagers as her sisters, Violet, Lily and Daisy.

    “Oh, ple-e-ease,” Violet the dark blue haired teen replied sarcastically.

    “You have a better chance of going out with a girl who wore a straightjacket,” Lily said. She was the one with pink hair.

    “As much as I see Misty as the runt of the family, I couldn’t agree more,” Daisy the blond teen said.

    Misty gave a frustrated growl at Daisy in response while Barry dropped his head down in failure.

    “Well, this is a surprise, even for me. I was going to buy us train tickets for us to go to get there but thanks for giving us the ride, ladies. Along with us, you can come too,” Marley said. “But I got to wonder how they knew about our trip.”

    “I would prefer it if we go there by train,” Misty grumbled. “You see…”

    The other day when Misty was on the phone to Drew, Daisy overheard their conversation. When Misty mentioned the word ‘beach’, Daisy became incredibly excited.

    “Okay, then, I’ll see you tomorrow,” Misty said. The moment she placed the phone down…

    “Misty! You’re going to the beach?” she heard her sister said loudly, making her almost jump out of her skin.

    “Daisy! You…!?”

    “We’re coming along too, right!?”

    Misty held her arms up, motioning her sister to shut up for a moment… but to no avail. “No! Wait a minute! I…!”

    “That’s great! I’m going to get Violet and Lily later and I bet that they’ll want to come too!”

    “If you’d just listen to me!”

    “I’m off to get a swimsuit! A sexy one! See you later!”

    “Daisy! Wait…!”


    That was the door being slammed shut. To Misty, that felt like being locked up by the police who gave some ‘silent’ speech, ignoring her pleas and explanations and soon she would be in community service. She hung her head down in defeat and her arms flopped like dead flowers. “Oh, this is going to be fun,” she said feeling depressed.

    Back to the present, Misty had finished saying her reasons why her sisters were here. “And that’s how it came to be, unfortunately,” she said. “Speaking of which, I’ll be taking Violet’s car.”

    “Why are you taking Violet’s car?” Daisy said dejectedly. “My car’s bigger and more expensive than hers.”

    “But your car’s got dents and scratches on it,” Brendan said noticeably.

    “She plans to take part in the movie business. She’s been studying on being a method actress and has been taking her car for doing stunts every time, even when she’s not studying,” Lily said.

    “Gives you an uncomfortable feeling, doesn’t it?” May asked worriedly.

    “Yes, very uncomfortable,” Marley replied, despite still keep her cool and calm expression and voice.

    “It does look roomier than the others though… right?” Wally said nervously, trying to not make Daisy feel bad.

    “Before everyone makes any rash decisions about going into Daisy’s car, let me give you a tip,” Lily said warningly. “Unless you have a death wish, don’t go in there.”

    “Death wish…” the others cried.

    Everyone was shocked at that and fear struck into their hearts. None of them wanted to go in… with the exception of Barry. “I’m going in, baby! I live for danger!” he yelled excitedly. “In middle school, they used call me Daredevil as a nickname! Me wanna go on the front seat!”

    “Idiot was a more common and better nickname for you,” Brendan said as he watched Barry quickly ran to his chosen seat with glee.

    “Have a nice trip wherever you go,” Zoey said nervously. “Anyone else?”

    “W… Wes? Which one would you like to go to?” Rui asked.

    “I’ll take Daisy’s,” Wes replied calmly.

    Everyone was shocked at that decision, Rui being the most. “Fine! I’ll take Daisy’s too!” she cried, having a strong desire to be next to Wes.

    “You guys are incredibly brave!” Wally said admiringly before noticing everyone else took their seats in Violet’s and Lily’s cars while he just nervously glared at the damaged car. “Hey! Wait! Does that mean…!?”

    Soon, at some point during the ride, Daisy was speeding along, not knowing why her two sisters had to stop their cars… until Rui and Wally screamed, “Red light!!”

    And at another point, Daisy’s car hit a speed bump and went flying into the air. Still being in excitement mode, Barry screamed, “Yee-ha-a-ah!! We’re flying!!”

    Two hours of driving later, they all made it to Marley’s summer home with everyone being unharmed… almost. “Yahoo! Hey, that was fun! Haha! Let’s go again!” Barry yelled excitedly as he quickly got out of Daisy’s car. Everyone else was already out of the Violet’s and Lily’s cars they were riding in.

    “Yeah, ain’t that the truth,” Brendan said unenthusiastically while Marley looked through Daisy’s car window, seeing Wally completely white and shaken after experiencing Daisy’s terrifying and dangerous driving.

    “Are you okay?” she asked.

    “Am… am I… am I dead yet?” Wally asked quivering with fear.

    Wes, on the verge of being carsick, helped Rui out of the car as she too was shaken after taking a ride like that. He had her arm draped over the back of his neck. “Are you okay?” he asked.

    “No… again…” Rui whimpered, responding to Barry’s request while trying to stand. “I never thought doing stunts would be bad as this.”

    “Hey! Who broke the side-mirror!? That’s seven years bad luck, you know!” Daisy said sternly after seeing that part of the car broken.

    Rui fainted in shock after hearing that.

    The exterior of Marley’s summer home was just as big as her house back in Goldenrod City, much to the surprise of her friends. “Are you sure we’re not in Goldenrod anymore?” Ash asked. “This place looks the same as your other house.”

    “No, the beach is only a couple of minutes walk from here,” Marley replied. “Why don’t we rest for a while before going there?”

    Everyone agreed to do so. “But is anyone in there already?” Wally asked. “Not putting anyone off but I heard that people leave their summer houses unclean until their next visit. And I mean something like yearly… or never.”

    Everyone was surprised at that statement. Marley turned towards him with a smile. “You’d make a wonderful husband,” she said making him flinch. “Don’t worry. We hire some good people to clean the house so everything should be okay.”

    Upon entry, they looked around in amazement. But what was more amazing was everything looked the same as the interior as Marley’s Goldenrod home. “Okay, seriously, are we back home or what?” Barry asked.

    “I must warn you, even though we have rooms big enough to fit a good number of people in but not enough beds. Luckily, we have some sleeping bags here. I suggest that there should be a room for the boys and a room for the girls,” Marley announced.

    “Yes, that’s exactly what I was thinking,” Brendan said giving Barry an evil stare.

    “What?” Barry replied feeling accused.

    “Let’s get changed for the beach and meet up back here in ten minutes,” Marley said.

    “No need for me to do that then,” Barry said. “I’m already wearing my swimming trunks underneath.”

    “You just couldn’t wait, huh?” Brendan said.

    Two minutes later, Brendan and Wes were dragging Barry away from the girls’ room. The door was closed and locked, yet the hyperactive blond wanted to peep through the keyhole while the girls were getting changed. “One little peep!” he cried loudly. “Just one little peep!”

    Soon, everyone was down at the beach. Each boy and girl were wearing their trunks, bikinis and swimsuits… much to Barry’s excitement. “Holler! Holler! Holler! Hormones, man! Hormones!” he exclaimed observing the sexy swimwear the girls had on, much to their annoyance.

    “This is the last time we’re bringing you to the beach. We warned you about that while we were getting changed,” Brendan complained.

    “Oh, come on! How can you deny me of this experience!?” Barry cried.

    “You can still experience it with your mouth shut,” Brendan replied until he and the others noticed that Ash and Zoey brought… surfboards. “Guys… you surf?” he said in surprise.

    “Been doing that for two years every time I get a summer vacation,” Ash said. “Misty knows that but I’m surprised that Zoey did some of that too.”

    “I’ve been doing for a couple of years too during summer time,” Zoey said. “So, Ash, want to challenge me to a surfing competition?”

    “I challenge you!” Barry shouted determinedly pointing at her. Everyone looked at him silently, waiting a few seconds for him to add to his actions. “…If I knew how to surf,” he said in shame, sitting himself down on the beach.

    After that strange moment, Zoey turned her attention back to Ash. “So, are you game?” she asked.

    “No thanks,” Ash replied, waving a ‘no’ sign. “I don’t challenge girls.”

    “Oh, I see,” Zoey said smugly. “Is it because you’re some sort of gentleman… or is it because you’re afraid to lose to a girl?”

    A vain began throbbing on his forehead. “Oh dear, she had to say that line,” Misty said sheepishly.

    “Me? You taunt me! Me afraid to lose to a girl!?” Ash shouted. “I accept your challenge!”

    “Yeah, that’s more like it!” Zoey said enthusiastically.

    “Victory will be mine!” Barry shouted, now fired up by Ash’s attitude.

    “Barry, you said you don’t know how to surf!” Brendan shouted as he grabbed him by the trunks.

    It was a matter of time before the water waves come crushing in on the shore. They both charged into the sea while they friends looked on, cheering them on while Misty’s sisters were distances away, sunbathing and being gawked at male bystanders. “Daisy, is there anything bluer than the sky and our swimming pool?” Daisy asked.

    “If there is, I wouldn’t care,” Violet replied.

    “Me neither,” Lily said.

    It was a matter of time when both competitors stood up on their boards and began surfing the waves, feeling the excitement while keeping their balance for a long while as the waves got bigger.

    Their friends were amazed at the skills of the two surfers. That was until they noticed that another surfer was there… and not just any surfer. “No way,” May said in shock. “It can’t be…”

    And it wasn’t long before he came into Zoey’s view. “Mr. Brawly!?” she said in shock. She suddenly lost her balance and fell into the watery waves, much to shock of her friends, especially Ash’s as he lost his as well. Luckily, they were unhurt. “Zoey, you okay?” Ash cried, hoping that she could hear as she rose to the surface.

    “No, I’m not okay!” Zoey said feeling frustrated. “Mr. Brawly’s here!”

    “What!? No way!?” Ash cried.

    They both took their boards and swam back to shore.

    Meanwhile, Barry raised the hand of the History teacher. “And the winner and first ever Goldenrod High Surfing Champion, Mr. Brawly!” he said with pride in his voice before bowing down to him. “I’m not worthy!”

    “Hi, kids,” Mr. Brawly said. “How are things?”

    “We’re… having fun,” Drew said, trying to keep calm despite seeing this lecturer, or lecher for a better term. “What about you, sir?”

    “I’m here with my friends and girlfriend,” Mr. Brawly said while a girl was coming his way with short pink hair, wearing a black and blue swimsuit and a first aid plaster on her nose.

    “(Did he just say girlfriend)?” the students thought in unison and in shock.

    “Hi, sweetheart,” the girl said as he came up close to him.

    “Hey there, sugar,” Mr. Brawly said as he lovingly wrapped his arm around her neck before he kissed her on the lips, which shocked the teens even more. Ash and Zoey also saw that when they arrived on the scene. “Kids, this is Maylene,” he said introducing her to them. “Be very careful with her. Not only is she my girlfriend, she knows martial arts. So that goes double for the boys.”

    “Sweetheart, you’re such a charmer,” Maylene said bashfully before she kissed him on the hand.

    “(Look who’s talking)!?” Ash thought angrily.

    “(I bet that no matter what fighting style she does, she’s vulnerable and would always submit to him)!” Misty thought.

    “(This is just wrong! This is so wrong)!” Dawn thought, concerned for Maylene. “(Does she have any idea what this man does in school)?”

    “(Mr. Brawly’s amazing)!” Barry thought happily. “(I think I’m dying of jealousy. How did he get a girl like her? Wait, she looks to be around the same age as Misty’s sisters).”

    “I know what you’re thinking,” Mr. Brawly said smugly. “You’re thinking about you can get yourself a chick like her.”

    “(We’re not as perverted as you are),” they all thought.

    Soon, after some chatting was done, Mr. Brawly and Maylene went away. The students got themselves in a group discussion, talking about their hideous teacher and his girlfriend. “I can’t believe that the poor girl is going out with that creep,” Misty said in disgust. “I bet someday that both of them are going to get hurt in more ways than one, not that I care about him anyway.”

    “Now, hang on,” Wally said, trying to not make things worse for everyone. “What if she already knew about him… well, admiring other girls?”

    “Then I smell a conspiracy brewing up,” Drew said suspiciously.

    “Maybe it’s just their taste in people,” Wally said.

    “Well, it would’ve been a fair contest if he didn’t show up,” Ash muttered. “I feel like I cheated someone.”

    “He didn’t know we were going to be here, Ash,” Wally said.

    “Let it go already. I’m just annoyed that he’s here right now,” Zoey said as she dried herself up with a towel, much to Dawn’s bliss when she saw her do that in an ‘appealing’ way. Then again, she liked looking at the glistening of the seawater on her. Brendan looked around and realised someone’s missing. “Wait a minute, where’s Marley?”

    A distance away, Mr. Brawly and Maylene were getting for their lunch. He opened up his basket to find no food but a small rat creature, known as a rattata, jumping up to his face and grabbing it. “What the heck!?” he cried before taking the pokemon off and then saw nothing but crumbs in his hamper. “Ah! The food!”

    Back at the teens’ location, Marley had a verbal report to make. “I was just having some fun,” she said calmly before she held up a ‘V’ sign. “…And it was a success.”

    That night inside the summer home, Misty’s sisters were out and one of the Goldenrod High students thought of an idea for a nightly activity. They all sat on comfy sofas, letting in the cool night air breezing into the opened windows. “Let’s say we tell some horror or ghost stories?” Ash suggested. “It’s a good way to spend summer nights with your friends.”

    “Um… I don’t want to hear any! Please, no horror stories,” Wally said fearfully as he covered his ears with his hands.

    “I got one!” May exclaimed. Everyone paid attention to what she had to tell. Rui held Wes by the arm for comfort. Barry held the emerald shy guy down to his seat. Wally still kept his ears covered, mumbling to himself. “When the bread popped out of the toaster, no one knew what to put on it,” she started, sounding like a sinful person. “Jam? Margarine? Sugar? I suggested chocolate spread… crumbs were everywhere…”

    “Uh… May,” Brendan said interrupting this little horror fiction. “Ash said to tell ghost stories. Not ‘toast’ stories.”

    “Oh, sorry… I don’t know any ghost stories,” May said, feeling rather embarrassed.

    “I got one,” Drew said. “There are stories of beasts, ghosts, demons and psychopaths. But mine… mine is about this one creature who at night would sing a beautiful song, lulling her victims into sleep and making them most vulnerable…”

    His friends were quite surprised that he would make up such an intriguing story. They began to listen to him quite intently, except for Wally who still had his ears covered. “And!? Go on!” Barry said impatiently after Drew stopped for a moment.

    “…And uses a marker pen… to draw random images on their faces…”

    Everyone’s face faulted into bafflement after hearing about the usage of a marker pen, wondering why such a creature would use such a thing to do those evil deeds.

    “…The name of this creature… is Jigglypuff!”

    Everyone moaned in disappoint, except Marley and Wally. “Aw! That sucks!” Barry said in annoyance, standing up. “I thought that you were going to say something cool like sucking their blood out or eat away their souls! Little pink puff balls like that are just as scary as a Marril with the word ‘boo!’ on its belly!”

    “Then it’s a good thing that Wally didn’t hear that,” Drew said. “Besides, I didn’t say it was going to be good. But I had a lot fun since you guys fell for it.”

    Everyone groaned, feeling like fools after that statement.

    “I guess I’ll go,” Brendan said calmly before clearing his throat. “There was once a young man living in a normal house. He was thirsty, quite desperate for a drink before he saw a glass of juice on the table. Thinking that it was a gift from the heavens above, he thanked them and downed the cool juicy beverage in one go. But then after quenching his thirst, he took one last gaze and saw a hideous creature laying inside the glass before him… it was a cockroach.”

    Almost everyone’s eyes widened in as they took in the details for a brief moment until they screamed in fear and disgust at the thought of the said insect inside someone’s glass. It was then followed by a series of shouting in shocked reactions.

    “Oh, my god!” Barry shouted in horror.

    “That’s it! No more! I hate bugs! I’m going to the girls’ room!” Misty shouted angrily before storming off, shivers going up her spine.

    “Wait up!” Ash cried following her into the room, hoping that she wouldn’t do anything drastic.

    “Wah… I think I’m going to be sick,” Rui whimpered as she felt some small churning. She covered her mouth and headed towards the bathroom.

    “I… think I’ll join you,” Wes said as he followed her. He too felt queasy, still suffering from being one of the victims of Daisy’s driving.

    Wally was confused as he still had his ears covered. “What happened!? What happened!?” he cried fearfully before Marley gently grasped his hands and moved them away from his ears.

    “It’s okay, Wally. It’s over,” she said calmly and reassuringly. “It wasn’t bad.”

    “Wasn’t bad!?” Barry yelled angrily. “Dude! Brendan just told us the most disgusting and scariest thing that could ever happen to a man!”

    “The next story will be about a cheese grater,” Brendan said calmly.

    “No! No more!” everyone yelled angrily.

    “Honestly, who told you that story?” Drew said feeling nauseous.

    “I got the stories from…”


    That was Miss Whitney, back in Goldenrod City, letting out a small yet loud sneeze after someone from far away mentioned her name and then started talking about her and her habits.


    A couple of troubling hours later after that harrowing story, everyone was asleep, with the exception of one person, Barry. He waited for the right moment so he could sneak a peek into the girls’ room, knowing that his male friends were asleep. When he reached to their door, he let out a small snigger as he slowly crouched down until…


    Barry felt the big sting on the side of his head and let out a small, quiet scream in pain. He quickly covered his mouth as to not make any further noises before making his way back to the boys’. Inside the girls’ room, Rui woke up from her sleep as she sat from shock when she heard a noise from outside. “Don’t worry… it’s only Barry,” Marley whsipered quietly in her sleep. Knowing that her friend was most likely to be correct, she shrugged the idea off and went back to sleep.

    Outside, a familiar Gengar picked up an elastic band from the floor and chortled at the prank he just pulled on the hyperactive, and perverted, blond.

    A couple of weeks later, it was time for everyone to back to their hometown. Incidentally, Brendan and Wally bumped into Macey and Ken after getting their photos developed. They let them take a look at the pictures and they soon found out the shocking truth.

    “WHA-A-A-A-AT!? Ash was there!?” Macey screamed after seeing the picture of him with his red and green swimming trunks on.

    “Uh… yeah,” Wally said.

    “Why didn’t anyone tell me!?” she cried.

    “Drew tried calling you but you never answered,” Brendan said.

    “I’m going to sue my phone company for this!” she snarled before flipping through the photos and saw Ash sitting on a bed with his hand on the back of Misty, who was seating in a fetal position. “WHA-A-A-A!?” she screamed in terror.

    Brendan took a look at the photo and remembered the scene. “Oh that, well, I was telling a horror story that evening and Misty didn’t like it,” he said. “If you want I can tell you.”

    “No! Don’t!” Wally said warningly, shaking his head in panic.

    “No way!” Ken screamed as he saw a picture of Rui wearing her blue and pink bikini. “Rui was there too!?”

    “Yes,” Wally replied, more scared than before.

    “Drew tried calling you as well,” Brendan said. “But I guess you were all pretty busy at the time I guess.”

    Ken flipped through the pictures before he saw Wes and Rui sitting next to each other while everyone was having fun. “This isn’t what I think it is, is it?” he said calmly, though his eyes were screaming out murder.

    “They’re just sitting next to each other, what’s the big deal? Besides, they were feeling carsick so they didn’t join in much,” Brendan said.

    “Car… sick…” Wally mumbled, on the verge of feeling sick.

    Angry, both Ken and Macey began breathing deeply as they flipped through the photos again until they came across a picture of Barry standing next to a badly damaged car holding up a ‘V’ sign with his fingers, which switched their expressions to curiosity. “Hey, what’s that?” she asked, pointing at the vehicle.

    “Oh, that’s Daisy’s car,” Brendan replied. “Boy, did she take Wes, Barry, Rui and Wally for a ride? They had to take it twice. Isn’t that right, my friend?”

    They turned towards the emerald haired shy guy, who was now white as ghost while showing a frightened look on his face. They tried to snap him back to reality by snapping fingers, waving in front of his face and roughening his hair as well.

    “Wally? Are you okay in there?”

    “Yoo-hoo. Earth to Wally.”

    “Please don't drive fast, Daisy...” Wally said tonelessly, scaring his friends slightly. "Red light's there, Daisy... I'm sorry... So sorry… Wait… Stop…”

    He continued speaking like that until...


    Brendan sighed out of awkwardness while Macey and Ken tried to calm him down in panic. “Wally! Get a hold of yourself!” she cried.


    *Cue ending song ‘Girls Just Wanna Have Fun* by Cyndi Lauper
    Barry: Class shuffle, baby! This means that there’ll be more challenges for me!

    Brendan: And more failures along with that.

    Barry: You have no faith in me, do you!?

    Brendan: Whatever. But knowing Miss Whitney as a gambler for sports day, I’m pretty certain who she’s going to pick.

    Barry: Me?

    Brendan: Take your ‘I’m an idiot’ sign, stick it on your back and go.

    Barry: Brendan! You heartless creep!

    Wes: Honestly, I’m a little worried. Just who is she going to pick?

    Miss Whitney: Don’t you worry, Wes. I know exactly who I’m going to pick for my team! Join in next time when we get back to school!
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    over the rainbow


    Thanks for the Pm Brian Overall, the story is quite good (of course, especially with our favorite blond) but, don't you think the part when they went to Marley's summer house was too short? They were there for a few weeks, and I thought maybe in they would have something more, like, I don't know, maybe someone drown, or they saw ghost but it turned out to be only a ghost pokemon or a prankster? Or love confession (not so sure about this, too quick)?

    Still, I always love your sense of humor (now I got Drew's story stucked in my head) and who knew Brendan could get such a disgusting story from someone like Miss Whitney (who knew a person with Milktank and pink hair could think of that?). Poor Wally...("Am I dead yet?")

    A few days later, Brendan was sleeping on his own bed. When his alarm clock struck seven o’clock in the morning, a familiar voice was heard. “Good morning, Goldenrod City. This is your host speaking on your favourite show. It’s a bright and beautiful sunny day at twenty-six degrees centigrade, which is good news for fire-type pokemon and it’s a good excuse for water pokemon to take a dip in the sea. Hey, it’s the summer holiday for most people. It’s a good time to stay home, sleep in, or… wake up the idiot that’s hanging over the bed! Get up, Brendan!” Barry shouted as he picked up a klaxon device and pressed on its button.
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  17. #92
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    In the Andromeda Galaxy


    Found a few grammar errors, but I have to get to sleep soon, so I'll cut to the point.

    This is NOT fair. How come you only get the Romeo and the Hamlet? Where are Juliet and Horatio?

    Ok, even I expected that the beach would take up the whole chapter. IMO, Wes is as dense as Ash in the anime. He STILL hasn't suspected anything about Rui? Seriously, I mean come on...

    Coming to the bit about Marley, Wally and the whole husband thing, I lol'd. makes me feel that I already know the shippings(dunno the names of all of them).

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    Vocaloid household


    Mew-mew:good chapter I have been waiting forever for it.
    May:Yay I was in the chapter
    Drew: Wally are you alright
    Mew-mew,May and Drew: *laughing really hard*
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    The goddess realm


    I love it it is awesome *squeals*
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    I support ColosseumShippping - Wes & Rui and Specialshipping (Red x Yellow), and Pokeshipping (Ash x Misty)

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    and Absol (and alot more)

    and the songs "Still waiting", "Every time we touch", "Animal I become" , "Breaking the Habit", "My Immortal" and "Bring me to Life".

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    Junpearl63: I admit, I could’ve made the last chapter a little bit longer but I thought I leave the rest of the two week beach time to your imagination. And about Monster’s Inc.? Homage!

    Hailflameblast: It’s okay, mate. When you have the time, use it to check out the errors. The two names I picked out, I thought they would be fitting for Marley’s pokemon. The beach, I think I’ll leave it to your imagination. ^_^ Thanks for pointing out the good bits, though.

    Mew-mew: You have to admit, the moment with the baby psyducks were great. XD

    Legandlover989: Thank you.

    Now for the questions given from one of our beloved readers, Hailflameblast, to Marley. The guy asked a bunch but we’ll choose five and move on.

    Are you emo?
    I go to a good school and I have great friends. They mean a lot to me. How can I be emo?

    Do you have a crush on Wally?
    I’m sorry. The writer doesn’t want me to answer that one.

    Did Ash give his games and money so that you would help with his exam preparations?
    Yes. He told me that he would sell his soul to me. To him, games are like souls and he gave them to me in exchange to help him with his preparations. Pity how he turned out after he passed his exams. He had to get some jobs done to get his console and games back.

    Do you like the beach?
    Who doesn’t?

    Do you know the muffin man?

    Not personally, but I heard that he lives in Drury Lane.
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