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    Quote Originally Posted by Brumrha View Post
    The initiative is mine! HUZZAH!!

    Ahem... that aside, as I started reading this, the first thing that I've noticed is that there are a bunch of asterisks dotted all over the place. Unless there's a good explanation as to why they're all here, get rid of them, because for me at least, they stick out like a sore thumb.
    Well that was annoying >=C, cause I sure didn't put those in... And I don't remember Serebii censoring the posts either... =/ Guess there will be three asterisks that'll just have to stay... -_-

    Thank you for letting me know BTW. Probably would have taken longer for me to notice if you didn't mention in. =)


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    Hello, I'm a closet reader who decided to show her face.

    I love this fanfic. Description is lovely, and your characters are awesome!

    I love Ashley, though she seems to be down in the dumps now. I hope she joins back with Team Supernova soon. I'm rooting for her!

    All in all, 100/100 for a great storyline and amazing characters. Good job!

    Keep it up!


    (I also love Sanngot. He's an awesome baddie! =D )

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    Quote Originally Posted by JirachiTheAnimeAddict View Post
    Hello, I'm a closet reader who decided to show her face.

    I love this fanfic. Description is lovely, and your characters are awesome!

    I love Ashley, though she seems to be down in the dumps now. I hope she joins back with Team Supernova soon. I'm rooting for her!

    All in all, 100/100 for a great storyline and amazing characters. Good job!

    Keep it up!


    (I also love Sanngot. He's an awesome baddie! =D )
    Always nice to see a new face! =D

    I'm glad you've been enjoying it so far and I look forward to see more of you! ^^

    Yeah, Ashley seems to be a popular character. But will she come back? She seems to have set her mind on leaving right now. What will happen? I guess only time will tell. O.o

    Thanks again! =)

    And yes, Sanngot is pretty awesome. XD


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    WHOOOOAAAAMIGOSH I should really think about mebbe making a return to this forum once in a century, shouldn't I. O_O; ...sorry! D: *ducks under a table*

    Hmm. Maybe I should've caught the elipses as well? :/ I dunno, though, those have already been pointed out, so I wouldn't feel very useful repeating that... XD;

    ...although personally, my favorite's still Geoff. :/


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    Quote Originally Posted by Koridojo_Blaziken View Post
    WHOOOOAAAAMIGOSH I should really think about mebbe making a return to this forum once in a century, shouldn't I. O_O; ...sorry! D: *ducks under a table*

    Hmm. Maybe I should've caught the elipses as well? :/ I dunno, though, those have already been pointed out, so I wouldn't feel very useful repeating that... XD;

    ...although personally, my favorite's still Geoff. :/
    Geoff is your fave? The one who has only gotten, like (oops O_O), 2 lines so far? XD lol, jk, jk.

    What's this? You think I overdid it with the elipses? =P


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    Oh my god, terrific twist you have here... but I guess Tristan has a point, Torchic is sounding like a lost cause, and if he ended up managing to convince her then everything would've been cliche and unrealistic. So well done on that. (:

    Can't wait for the next chapter! I better start writing mine too...

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    Quote Originally Posted by sweet_piplup123 View Post
    Oh my god, terrific twist you have here... but I guess Tristan has a point, Torchic is sounding like a lost cause, and if he ended up managing to convince her then everything would've been cliche and unrealistic. So well done on that. (:

    Can't wait for the next chapter! I better start writing mine too...
    Well thanks for mentioning that. ^^ I'll let you in on a not so important secret. This scene never originally happened when I was posting this on Nsider, and Torchic never revealed her tragic past. I think it is much better this way, though.

    It is coming to a point where the chapters are so different compared to the original that they don't resemble each other, and it has been like that for a while. Surprisingly, though, I am pretty sure that there will be some stuff in the next chapter that will make it from the Nsider version unscathed. O.o


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    Quick update. I went and edited over chapter 2. Somehow I missed the fact that Plusle and Minun just seemed to disappear into thin air. That's been fixed now. In updates for later chapters I might end up slipping in 4th gen Pokemon here and there. Just so ya guys know.


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