
Originally Posted by
kyogreblue3
There's too much space on the banner's left side. It's just a . . . . yellow dotty pattern that still looks good but there's too much of, if you get what I'm sayin lol. But the font you used pretty much goes with the render IMO, so kudos to you. The text could've been a little higher up, maybe . . .
I think the text is a bit too close to the key. And the swirly lines and dots in the corner doesn't really fit 'Fading Memories', IMO. I would've done a sparkle effect on the banner or something xD. And you MUST tell me the font you used! I <3 that font but I don't know the name of it >.<
The 'I' looks like it's about to fall off the banner. And I think the subtext could've been a bit smaller and right under the main text, and also the main text be a bit smaller and placed better. But, y'know, I kinda suck at typography xD. That banner had more potential, too. Do more with the render!
I don't really have a problem with this one, only that it's pink and pink and KB3 do not go together, but that's besides the point here.
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Keep in mind that I'm not the best reviewer in Digital Media xD.