summer school is finally out huzzah for my summer semester being over.....anyways finally read the chapter very interesting. The pokedex entries are always fun to read although a bit weird at times too the oh so perverted dex which i now nickname pevdex for short is great. You did have great description and just about everything seemed to flow smoothly I say just about because at some points there were times where I had to re-read it to make sure what you mentioned before otherwise great and looking forward to the rest.
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