Murcott (Pokéshipping, PG13)

[HikariTajiri]

Okay, this is going to be my first full-length fic that I actually complete. Yes, I've really sworn to complete this one. It's rated PG-13 for several reasons, although the rating may change as the fic progresses. I give you no guarantees that this will actually be any good, since my writing skills are pretty bad... D=
Basically, this will be a Pokéshipping fic set mostly in Kanto, the Sevii Islands and the Orange Archipelago. Several characters from the Pokémon anime may appear. Currently, I only have the prologue, which is very short, but I'll update every time I write a new chapter.
Okay, here goes nothing...

Prologue

Ash Ketchum sat on the high rock, the sea wind buffeting his untidy black hair. His cap lay on the ground beside him. Looking out to the crystal clear ocean, he could make out the blurred outline of the Sevii Islands on the horizon. East of those islands, a second collection of isles...
Ash turned away. He didn't want to think about it. He mustn't think about it. Dont think of what happened there. Don't think of what happened on the Orange Archipelago two months ago. Don't think of her...
Suddenly it all burst into his head; the Water Pokémon tournament on Kumquat Island, how he had met up with one of his oldest friends, how she had beaten him and gone on to win the tournament, how she had followed a group of Luvdisc to Murcott Island, how she had turned to him and said;
"It's alright, Ash. I'll be back."
And Ash had answered, "See you, Mist"...
Only he never did.
Twenty-four hours later, Misty Kasumika was officially missing.
Now, two months later, Misty Kasumika was officially dead.
Misty had been his best friend for as long as he could remember. In fact, he wasn't sure if their relationship stopped at "best friend". He didn't know what it had gone on to, but they were more than best friends. And now he would never know what the extent of their bond had been...
Even though he was the only one on the cliff, even though there was no one to see him, Ash pulled down the brim of his cap to hide his silent tears.

End Prologue

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...So what'd you think so far? Reads and reviews greatly appreciated! ^_~

[Teddiursa fan forever]

first things first: make it longer before a mod gets ahold of it. it needs to be at least a page on microsoft word. =/

but i'm a big fan of pokeshipping and this is really a story i'd like to read. just give it a lot of detail as far as ash's feelings and how blown away he was by his saddness of misty's parting. it is very short, like you said, and that's never a good thing if it's under a page long... i don't want to sound bossy or anything... =/

i'd love to offer any assistance if you want. i love reading other people's work and can give you some advice if you'd pm it to me before posting it. best wishes.

Tff

[HikariTajiri]

first things first: make it longer before a mod gets ahold of it. it needs to be at least a page on microsoft word. =/

but i'm a big fan of pokeshipping and this is really a story i'd like to read. just give it a lot of detail as far as ash's feelings and how blown away he was by his saddness of misty's parting. it is very short, like you said, and that's never a good thing if it's under a page long... i don't want to sound bossy or anything... =/

i'd love to offer any assistance if you want. i love reading other people's work and can give you some advice if you'd pm it to me before posting it. best wishes.

Tff

I get the feeling I might end uyp dumping this fic already now you've said that the mods'll get it... That's just the prologue, mind, and I tend to write extremely short prologues. Anyway, thanks! By the way, I have no idea how long they are, as I don't use Word since there's no internet at school...

[midnightmoon]

Wow the prologues sounds really good. It might be short but you have very effitive describing words in it. I'm looking forward for chapter one.