I'll put it in PG besides this is my first ikarishipping fanfic
It was a cloudy day as Ash, Dawn, and Brock were heading through Hearthome. The clouds were all puffy and gray. "Guys I think that its going to rain soon" Ash said. "Ash we can handle rain besides what about your gym battle" Dawn said. "Yeah I forgot I already got four badges let's go" Ash said as he and Brock raced towards Hearthome Gym. "Boys" Dawn muttered and went to Amity Square
But Ash was right it was going to rain but not just rain a storm was coming. Dawn went out of Amity Square since the workers said it wouldn't be safe. Soon Dawn felt a rain drop on to her nose. Eventually rain was shooting down from the clouds and loud booms of thunder were heard. All of Hearthome's citizen's were running towards the nearest shelter. Dawn ran to the Pokemon Center bu it was too late. She was struck by lightning!
During the storm Ash brought Dawn inside after she was hit. "Nurse Joy Nurse Joy this an emergency" Ash called. "What is it" Joy asked. "You need to fill my broken heart with love that's why" Brock said with heart eyes. "Not now Brock" Ash said as Dawn was in his arms. "Croagunk" Croagunk said as it jabbed Brock with it's Poisen Jab. "Croa croa croa oa oa" Croagunk said as he dragged Brock away. "What happened to her" Nurse Joy asked. "She was hit by lightning" Ash said while looking at his friend. Soon Nurse Joy checked on what went wrong.
"It appears Dawn has a severe coma" Joy said to Ash and Brock. "Oh no" Ash said. "Let's hope she makes it" Brock said. "Ka" Pikachu said in agreement. Soon the three were inside a room that Nurse Joy booked them into until Dawn recovers. "You think Dawn will wake up" Ash asks. "I'm sure of it Ash she'll pull through this" Brock said. Pretty soon Paul arrived in Hearthome City as well. He heard some of the people talking about how a blue haired girl go hit by lightning in that storm las night. *The only blue haired girl I know is that one traveling with Ash and that breeder* Paul thought as he walked to the Pokemon Center.
"Ash you sure you don't want to challenge Fantina again" Brock asked as they were sitting on a couch in there. "Brock I told you I don't want Dawn to miss my victory' Ash said angrilly. "Yeah but who knows when she will wake up" Brock said as he thought of the young coordinator. "Where's that pesky girlfriend of yours" Paul asked as he looked at them. "Why would you even care" Ash said rudely. "I was just saying since usually your and her are talking about pokemon,battles, or contests" Paul snapped. "She got hit last night" Brock said. "By the lightning" Paul asked. "Yeah we're waiting for her to wake up" Brock said.
Pretty soon Ash and Brock went outside to train their pokemon for Ash's second gym challenge. "Since Fantina has Ghost types it will be hard guys but we will win our fifth badge" Ash said. Then his pokemon cheered. "Finally those two left" Paul said and walked up to the counter. "Can I help you" Nurse Joy asks. "Yeah do you know where Dawn's room is" Paul asked. "Yes it's the second door on the right side of the hallway" Nurse Joy said. "Thanks" Paul said. Then he went inside the room and saw Dawn sleeping. He slowly shut the door so nobody could see what was going to happen. Then he walked up to Dawn's bed and looked at her.
"Hey troublesome" Paul said and snapped his fingers near her face. She didn't even stir "Guess I have to do this then" Paul muttered and put his hand on her's. "If you can hear listen I wouldn't say this if you were around but if I might not ever see you again I just want to let you know that I love you" Paul whispered into her ear. Then he kissed her and was just going to leave when Dawn opened her eyes. She turned and looked at him. "Wait" Dawn started to say but Paul left.