View Poll Results: Which boy goes with May the most?

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  • Ash

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  • Drew

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Thread: Behind these Hazel Eyes. (Advance, pokeshipping song fic. One shot)

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    Default Behind these Hazel Eyes. (Advance, pokeshipping song fic. One shot)

    Hi Drew_and_May_fan here! And this is my very first song fic. It may suck. Please don't blame me. I had always sucked at story writing and grammer. HEH ^_^

    Rated PG incase.


    Seems like just yesterday.
    You were part of me.
    I use to stand so tall.
    I use to be so storng.
    Your arms aroung me tight.
    Everything felt so right.
    Unbreakable, like nothing could go wrong.
    Now I can't breathe.
    No I can't sleep.
    I'm barely hanging on.



    May stared at the cell phone screen. Ash was just breaking up with her

    by text messaging her. Why? What did she do wrong? It was just yesterday

    when his arms were around her and he was telling her that he loved her.

    What went wrong? She just had to look for him, she needed a reason. She

    turned of her phone and headed to the places Ash would usually be at. She

    searched everywhere, the park, movie theatre, his house, the arcade. But he

    was no where to be seen. Finally she gave up and went to her best friend,

    Misty's house.


    Here I am, once again.
    I'm torn into pieces.
    Can't deny it,
    Can't pretend.
    Just thought you were the one.
    Broken up, deep inside.
    But you won't get to see the tears I cry.



    Ding Dong.

    She heard a shuffle of feet, probably Misty's. But then the person who

    did open the door surprised her greatly. Standing in front of her was

    Ash, his top was off, and his hair was a mess of black.


    May's POV

    I just stared at him, and he stared at me. I broke the silence by bursting into

    tears and loud sobbing. Which got Misty to come running out to see what

    was wrong. The moment she saw me, her eyes widened like saucers. I was

    ready to slap her any moment now. But Ash pulled me asking if he can talk

    with me. No, no way was I going to talk with him or Misty ever again.

    I just took off like that.


    Swallow me then spit me out.
    For hating you I blame myself.
    Seeing you it kills me now.
    No I don't cry on the outside anymore.
    Anymore.


    I don't want to speak to them ever again. Plus there are many other boys

    in the world. And I'm a single girl. I really don't need Ash anymore.


    Drew_and_May_fan speaking: Done and done. ^_^ I really was going to do Contestshipping and Belleshipping, but I really like Contestshipping and I don't think they should seperate. So yeah. Hope you like it and I also hope Advanceshippers won't kill me. Cause, just don't. R&R please!

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    Hmmmmmmmmm a little sad but I wasn't teary eyed but keep trying Drew_May_Fan

    Also what other shippings do you like best

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    Your really good with one-shot's! Kinda sad.... thankfully i'm not an Advanceshipping fan!! Great One-shot, still kinda short but it's still great!!!!!!

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    Aww, that was sad! And it didn't suck at all!! I loved it - it was short but sweet as well.

    Poor May.

    *sigh* rarely on here anymore. if you want, find me on my DA

    my serebii twin is nightning. banner credit goes to them too. ^^

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    pikachu200: thanks for the comment, well truthfully I really wasn't teary eyed either. Umm, what shippings do I like? I guess I also like pokeshipping, that's why I made Ash cheat on May with Misty. And I also like penguinshipping.

    Waste My Time:Hey thanks. I do try! Sorry you think it's short, but when your the person typing it, it seems like it's so long. And I am not an Advanceshipper as well. Actually at first I liked the idea of May and Ash, but then Drew just came to the pic. ^_^ So yeah.

    xXContestShipperXx: Glad you think it doesn't stink, as I said, I try! ^_^ Yep poor May. But when one door closes another opens, an hopefully May will find another person that makes her happy. (I'm sure you all know who I'm talking about.)

    Anyways I'm glad you all liked it! ^_^

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