Off-topic: I'm also doing NaNoWriMo. This is first attempt.
I liked the Torterra's personality. It seemed to fit such a large creature.
The Starly were hilarious though. It really does sound like thats what birds are talking about when you listen to them
As for the Persian/Nido one: I like all the cameos in your stories. It makes them seem to be more, I don't know, "canonical" I guess.
Lol. That Persian was a wimp.The Persian screamed. “<Murder! You’re trying to murder me!>”
“<Uh, I don’t think that’ll kill you,>” Nino said, puzzled.
“<Yeah, that’s kinda a normal battle wound,>” Nina added.