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Thread: Only for Her (AU Contestshipping, PG-13)

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    ^Ah, thanks for pointing those out. Stupid typos >_<

    Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, this was on of those fics where I really worked hard on my descriptions to make them as good as possible, without (hopefully) going overboard. =P

    Thanks for reviewing (and showing me those mistakes)!

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    That was an awesome fic! Poor Ash, May had to dump him in the end. Although, I prefer Drew and May. Ash could've just stayed with Misty cuz their so cute together! Not exactly sure about Drew's playboy attitude and Dawn's unfaithfulness. But seriously, the way you changed their personalities made the fic so awesome! Good job ^^!
    Life is full
    Of pain
    You cry, you smile,
    You suffer
    Fighting for a loved one
    Is full of pain
    Does it matter?




    Love hurts
    But it's a feeling that people find
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    ^Thanks for reviewing.
    Since it's an alternate universe fic in which the characters are older, I decided to give them a little twist to add more fun. I dunno, I guess that's the way I picture the older versions of the characters.
    I'm changed the personality changes helped with your overall enjoyment of the story!

    While I do like Pokeshipping, having Ash go back to Misty and taking her away from Gary would result in too much drama that I didn't feel like writing. There was already enough with the AshxMayxDrew triangle! ^^;; Haha.

    Once again, thanks and I'm glad you liked it!

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    it's okay, though~
    Sorry for just pointing typos only, I must say I'm really bad at grammar >.<

    Yea, it's good to have AshxMayxDrew triangle!
    May n Drew, then Ash and May!
    *evil laugh*

    btw, your descriptions are not overboard at all, really >.>


    Rafe from Destiny Deoxys is my hot bishie, YOOHOO!

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