Originally Posted by chosen_one386
Thank You for the review...they just keep gettng better from you and I hope thats a reflect of my improvements...lol! And I'm happy that the Murkrow scene worked out and the Murkrow he cuaght will have so much development between now and the league
The cliffhanger is important..what is it? Well its not going to be explained much in the next Chapter but it is needed
Originally Posted by Infernapeman
Thank you...is nice having new readers and what bits do you like?
Originally Posted by Torpoleon
Thank you for the review and yes time will tell to see how Murkrow fits in and what role he plays in Max's Team! And I like the idea of a possible foe to them but some things will be seen in the next Chapter!
Originally Posted by super riolu31
Well yes there is that but thats evolving too fast and Max doesnt need to fly anywhere really but nice idea