Originally Posted by super riolu31
Well Budew did kick Ryperior to kingdom kum before being sent back to her normal time in the multicoloured spirlay light! But if you re-read Chapter 2 the Ryperior battle you'll understand that the attacks help Roxanne
Thank You for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Originally Posted by Blue Snover
Thank You Snovy for picking that part out as I want people to concider what reprocusions could of occured if he had succeeded and also what it shows of Max. He loves Charmander but he saw an opportunity to enhance his life and took it which will help in Character development.
Originally Posted by chosen_one386
It's always nice to get a review from you and well this has to be the best so far. My improvement hopefully was helpful in understnading some things that occured early on and also hopefully was able to show a new part to Max's character.
I will try and sort out paragraphing next Chapter and go over this one and make edits as soon as I've completed complete revamps of Chapters 2 - 3 and 4.