Originally Posted by Shadow XD001
Yes - some revenue already - lol - but thank you for responding in such a positive manner, I expected people going oh kinda thing but thanks and I hope to achieve it along with the other 2 books I'm writing. One Pokemon and the other something created by me which I will most likely post as well!
Originally Posted by TheFarmboy
Thanks you for reviewing as its nice to have reviews - how cheesy - anyway the plot develops quite a bit from 10 onwards really or you could even say 8 but I like to play safe and so the whole Petalburg Arc starts then and from now on I wont be posting any fillers at all as they will all have plot relevance!
Enjoy the rest of your read!
Originally Posted by rlivi5
Thank You - great stories are good - in your next post just a litte request if you can add in what you like and so on to give me help and crit so I can improve and realise where I work well!
Thank You for your comment!
Chapter 16 News
You all probably want to kill me for the lateness of this chapter however I've been on work experience all week and so the edits have taken longer than expected as all I've done is slept really! It will be up by this week end the latest if all goes well and the next Chapter should be posted on schedule! So sorry guys!