Well, here it is. I've been thinking of trying to do a fic, but I never seemed to be able to get the courage to actually post it. But I've finally decided to because I would like to imporve upon all aspects of my writing. I'm not that good, I'm only in grade 9 but I enjoy writing and would really like to improve. Plus, it's fun! If you are wondering what this fic is about, it's about the first Rescue Team who founded Wigglytuff's guild. So without further ado, I present to you my first attempted fic, Believe in Dreams.
Five very young, pokemon with a desire for adventure slowly dragged themselves over to a pile of neatly placed logs surrounded by a vast amount of sand that seemed to stretch on forever. The immense sea crashed up against the sand, and made an unusually calming sound that cut the silence of the night. The loud waves splashed up near the circle of figures that had gathered around a crisp new fire. The flames warmed their blood and soothed their bones. They all plopped themselves down near the dancing flames that where thrashing wildly due to the cool evening winds. They looked around at the pokemon gathered. The faces, shadowed by the night, all smiled in unison and finally the first words were spoken.
“So were really going to do this...” said a rather nervous looking figure. The fire on its back glowed brightly and lashed waves of heat up against the creature to its right it who was looking rather nervous itself. It tucked the leaf on its head behind its body a good distance from the fire. The dark feathered pokemon to the fire types left spoke next:
“I find this concept hard to grasp. I mean, were just kids... But I guess we really don't have any other choice now do we. Our parents probably--” He was interrupted by Audaize.
“Light, come one... Don't be such a downer, this is an exciting moment in our lives!” The fin on the pokemons head swayed left and right in anticipation. It smiled over at the bird and watched as it looked down to the ground, letting the small hat rim on its head cover over his expression as it tried to hide a smile. The fish pokemon shook its head and looked around at everyone gathered around the fire. Beside her was a creature that resembled a beaver. It looked up at her and gave a slight smile before re-focusing on the fire. She looked to the pokemon on the other side of her. The small grass type paid her no heed as she watched the fire type, positioned beside her, cautiously. The fish looked to the pokemon beside Light. A purple ball of gas giggling quietly to itself was watching the flame as well. She glanced back over to Light, through the fire and flames, he nodded to her as if to say “it's time.”
“Everyone, tonight is the night we finally fufill our dream. The dream we have been--” She cut herself off, then continued “Well dreaming about since we were just little kids. That glorious dream of exploring the world, solving its mysteries, helping the good pokemon of the world, finding glorious treasure, exploring the many dungeons scattered around this land”
The pokemon, now concentrated on Audaize, looked on and listened intentively. “Tonight, my companions, we will create the first ever known faction in the pokemon world. We will rally together pokemon of all types, shapes, sizes and natures. We will provide the pokemon of this world with a means of protection from the growing amount of criminals and outlaws.”
“We will need a symbol... A distinguishing flag, or item for all members of this society to carry with them so that others will recognize us.” The purple ball of gas, Verz, now spoke to the group. As the last words slithered off of his tongue, Nomekop, the beaver pokemon, dispersed from the group and trodded over to the shore. He reached into the shallow waters and pulled out a ball. He showed it to his companions. The design was rigid, and hard to distinguish. A ball, with the top half and bottom two different colours. They were faded. The pokemon nodded to the beaver, as if to say that will do.
Audaize looked around at her companions. Tears of joy came to her eyes, as she watched the birth of something truly beautiful.
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