This here folks is a Pokeshipping fanfiction. Some of you might actually recognize this one. My sister and I have written this one a long time ago back when Pokeshipping was the big thing. Being able to write a fanfic kinda felt good, you know? When I looked back at this one, I decided to give it a remixing and remastering. I've been working hard at this for a while and now, I can be able to give you guys a few chapters to read. Some of the stuff has been altered from the original so you may recognize some changes. Back then, it was just making this fic because it's something to do, but now, I wanted this fic to be more serious so it can be appretiated more. There will be more soon, but for now, I will give you two remastered chapters to read. Don't be afraid to ask any questions about this fanfic.
PG-13 for some violence, crude language, sexual themes.
Reader discretion advised
When a Promise Breaks
Ash/Gary - 16
Misty - 18
Brock/Tracey - 21
Part 1 - Retribution
It was a nice summer night and Ash, Misty, Brock, and Tracey were sleeping. The breeze is nice and the night sky is bright. Everything is all peace and quiet; that is until this one particular person made the wrong move.
"What are you doing?!?!?" Misty shouted at Ash as she moved away from him. "Uhhh...." Ash turned red as he was rubbing the back of his head in embarrassment. Brock, Tracey, and Pikachu woke up from the noise and noticed what was going on: Ash had given Misty his little surprised he had planned. There was an awkward silence. Then finally Ash broke the silence. "I’m sorry, Misty…I guess I didn't what I was doing..."
"ASH KETCHUM!!! YOU DID KNOW WHAT YOU WERE DOING!!!!"
"Misty wait! I can explain it!!"
"Explain it to someone who cares!!!!!" And with that, Misty quickly packed up her things and walked away towards Pallet Town. It was now about 6:30 in the morning and everyone was fully awake by now. Brock and Tracey looked at Ash in confusion.
"Well, at least you got to kiss her..." Tracey said sheepishly.
"It didn't go as well as I expected it to..."
"Hey, Ash. Don't feel bad. She'll get over it." said Brock comfortably.
"Pikachu...(Don't feel guilty...)
"O.K..."They also packed up their stuff and went to catch up with Misty. The place where they had camped for the night wasn't so far from Pallet so they would get there shortly. They soon have sight of the redhead and was about to run up to her but Ash remembered what he did earlier this morning. They reached Pallet Town and Misty, instead of going to the Ketchum residence, headed for the beach. So Ash, Brock, and Tracey took a quick change in to their bathing shorts and followed Misty without her knowing. She set up her stuff near the water and just lay down on her towel relaxing. Ash, Brock and Tracey set up their stuff not too far from Misty. Ash was still sulking and feeling guilty about what he did. He was drawing figures in the sand and drew the word 'Misty' with a heart around it. He stared at it for a while then broke out of his trance as he heard a way-too-familiar voice. He looked up. It was Gary! And he is talking to Misty.
"Hey Misty! So where are your loser friends?"
"I ditched them...I mean Ash did something to make me mad so I kinda left them for now..."
"Well...since you’re not hanging out with them anymore...wanna join me?"
Misty thought a while, about how she would look in a cheerleading outfit with pom-poms and all. Then she suddenly noticed Ash, Brock and Tracey in the distance listening to the whole conversation. Misty thought of something quick.
"Uhhh…I'll go with you!"
"WAAAAA!!!" Ash said in shock. Brock and Tracey just had their jaws dropped. And Pikachu just cannot believe what is happening.
"Great! So come on! What are you waiting for?!" said Gary
"Oh" Misty quickly packed up her stuff and followed Gary to his red Corvette with all his cheerleaders. Ash, Brock, Tracey, and Pikachu watched as Misty drove off with Gary and the rest of his cheerleaders.
"Come on!! We have to follow Gary!!" said Ash. So they packed up their stuff as quick as they could and followed Gary to an expensive hotel. There were gates in front of the hotel and security guards on each end of the gate. They let Gary and everyone else in. Then they saw Ash, Brock, and Tracey attempt to go through the gates.
"I’m sorry, young man. You don't have permission to enter," one of the security guards said.
"But I need to get in!!" Ash shouted.
"No can do..."
"Go home now!"
So the group pretended to head home but instead, hid in the bushes in the parking lot. They snuck through the gates by hiding in the back of a truck while it was getting checked. They had gotten through the gates and went inside the lobby.
"Welcome! How many rooms will you need?"
"Uhh…" Ash looked at Brock and Tracey. "One room please..."
"O.K. Here are your keys, Sir! Have a good night!"
"Umm...Ash, tell me why we only got one room?"
"Because the rooms here are really expensive, Tracey!"
"Oh, right. I knew that."
"O.K. Here's the room! Room 218." Ash slides the key into the slot and opens the door. There are two beds in the room, one consisting of a water bed. The group drop their stuff down and sat on the beds facing each other. Pikachu felt like taking a nap so he chose the water bed.
“Look Ash, don’t feel bad about yourself,” said Brock. “I’m sure Misty will learn to forgive you.” “Besides,” adds Tracey, “That kiss you gave her should make her less of a monster towards you.”
“Cheer up, old pal. You just need to find her and talk to her. I mean, she is somewhere in this hotel,” Tracey said.
“Somewhere in this hotel with Gary…” corrected Brock.