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[ophren115]

Ok lets see how my edits are

Name:Xalex (Z-alex) Phaylorun (fay-low-run) Nick name Phaze

Age:24

Gender:Male

Description:He is 6'4" with long silvery white hair that goes down to about
his thighs and covers both his ears, most is pushed back with some
hanging over his right sholder, thin looking face with dark red eyes, thin
eyebrows and long eyelashes pale skin and a scar on his left cheek right
above his jaw line about 3" long heading twords his left ear, he normaly
wears a crude smirk on his lips and casually shows a smile now and then
and a small chuckle, he also has a roughly small and thin jaw line almost
pointed at the end.

As I have said he has pale skin roughly normal sized
muscle but not alot, still looking tough while whereing a long dark black
punk gothic leather trench coat, (underneath) is a black outfit with shirt
long pants and a pokeball pouch and belt (for holding mass amounts of
poke balls but keeping them hidden from sight, his shoes are tight black
boots with a thick sole and black and silver buckles acros them.

Personality:his personality Is mainly silent twords
people, but around his pokemon psylor he is gentle and will stand up for
her, he wont mutualy talk to anyone he tries not to be around people he
knows if there were any... and anybody that gets in his way... well best
way to say this is they dont get in his way.
he is constently vigalent always
watching and listening to his surroundings, he does not like when people
tell him about themselves he prefers to pay attention to more importent
things like his mission or his pokemon, it takes a lot to get him stured up
but if he is angry theres nothing left for you, emotion is a weakness of ours
he threw it away so its not a distraction.

History:Xalex's father worked at a lab that was studying
pokemon species 15 years ago, that day when xalex was viseting his
father there was a mysterious explosion in one of the rooms that
demolished the entire lab xalex survived but was hurt and knocked
unconscious but everyone else in the lab was killed.

Except one pokemon, it
was a syther(psyther) the syther saw xalex laying on the ground
unconscious and hurt badly as she looked at him she felt an emotional
bond butween xalex and herself, so she picked him up off the floor and
caried him out of the rubble and took him to a hospital to get taken care of
and sat by his side until he got better.

As xalex woke up in the hospital and
looked around wondering where he was, he sudenly rememberd about the
lab and jumped up to take a better look around, and saw the syther laying
next to his bed sleeping, just then a nerse walked by the door to the room
where xalex was, she noteced he was awake and started talking to xalex.

Xalex asked the nerse what happend, but all she could say is you have
been asleep for two weeks and by the marks on your body and the news
you must have come from that lab that was destroyed, xalex asked about
his father and how he got to the hospital the nerse says shes sorry but
there was no one else from the lab that servived and for how you got here
well that syther brought you in.

After that xalex and the syther got along
really well and when he was able to leave the hospital syther went with him
she became his first pokemon and he named her psylor, not long after he
joined a group called teamrocket, as he grew older he started to get
stronger and more trusted by teamrocket.

But all that time inside he
started to blame everyone for his fathers death up untill alittle while ago
Xalex found out that team rocket was the cause of his fathers death and he
left teamrocket and swore revenge on them, he now finds any way to make
teamrocket suffer any way he can.

Other:Deep voice with a sort of grawl to it, (if aloud in
your rp has a very close bond and is very trusted by pokemon cause his
father tested a humon pokemon dna mix (for communication perposes) on
him but the resalts were not pirfect, he can not talk with pokemon but sort
of knows how they are feeling and pokemon are kind to him as they see
him as one of there kind.)


Pokemon name:psylor

pokemon species:syther (if aloud it will be a "psyther" a
syther X psychic dna mix)

pokemon personality:psylor is a very happy pokemon and
treats Xalex with respect after saveing his life a couple times and
on "rare occasions" him saveing hers, but none the less she will always be
by his side and stick up for him, she is careing and gentle twords others,
pokemon and humen alike.

pokemon gender:Female

P.S Im also looking for some people to just have a small fun pokemon adventure if anyone knows of where I could find the people or if anyone is interested message me.

[SimplySuicide]

This is a character sheet for my own RPG I want people to have a good example to follow for their own character sheets so yeah

Name: Terrance Leigh Barkley
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Physical Description: Terrance is Half African-American so his skin is quite dark. He has short spiky black hair and chocolate brown eyes. Fairly tall (6'1)and has muscle on him though not quite as much as he used to have. His general attire is fairly simple, usually a Tank top or T-shirt and shorts, he however does have a sports drawstring bag he constantly wears. Terrance also has a couple tattoos, a large cross on his back stretching shoulder blade to shoulder blade and down to his tail bone, he also has a much smaller cross on the inside of his left wrist and two very large black rings on his right upper arm and on the inside of his bottom lip is the word 'King'. He also has a few piercings, he has both ears gaged and his tongue pierced.

Personality: Generally a jerk, when you first meet him he may be an extreme introvert and just sit alone. However after he gets comfortable around you he may still be a little shy but not as much. But if you get extremely close to you if you're younger or older he'll go all Big Brother on you aka swirlies stealing your food and things. At times he can be pretty hard headed and jump to conclusions, quick to temper. However due to his own morals his only violence would be to protect himself if he was attacked first or if you were putting an innocent into danger.

History: Terrance grew up in the rough part of Chicago with a drug-abuser mother and a absent father. Terrance was malnourished as a child and his mother did drugs around him and while she was pregnant so he's not the brightest crayon in the box. Years later he fell into the same cycle as his mother and became a drug addict soon going to Jail and toughening up.

Other: Terrance loves playing old video games and new.

Pokemon:

Name: Quill (Treeko)
Gender: Male
Personality: Rash and acts like his trainer, Quill is very hot headed and is quick to resort to violence of a battle.
Attacks: Pound, Leer, Absorb.
Destined Attacks: Giga Drain, Energy Ball, Acrobatics, Cut, Dig.

Name: Ero (Mankey)
Gender: Male
Personality: Unlike most of his species is closer to Slakoths, he hardly listens to his trainer and often sleeps and eats.
Attacks: Leer, Low kick, Focus Energy, Covet, Fury Swipes.
Destined moves: Seismic Toss, Cross Chop, Close Combat, Final Gambit, Smack Down, Brick Break, Dig, Bulldoze. (He uses these more on Terrance than foes)

Name: Ace (Pidgeot)
Gender: Male
Personality: Cool headed and rational acts more as a baby sitter for Terrance
Attacks: Tackle, Gust, Sand attack, Quick Attack.
Destined attacks: Twister, Air Slash, Tailwind, Hurricane, Return, Aerial ace, sky Attack.

Name: Flora (Meganium)
Gender: Female
Personality: Motherly and kind always wants to help and protect her team mates
Attacks: Tackle, Growl, Razor leaf,Poison Powder.
Destined attacks: Sweet Scent, Body Slam, Aromatherapy, Solar Beam, Return, Grass whistle, Nature Power, Heal Pulse, Frenzy Plant, Grass Pledge.

Name: Niche (Darmanitan)
Gender: Male
Personality: nonchalant seemingly uncaring, when in all actuality he owes his trainer his life and will sacrifice himself to protect him.Terrance used a hyper potion on him when he was stuck in the desert as a statue he had been there for 20 years and no one had bothered to help him.
Attacks: Tackle, Roll out, incinerate, Rage.
Destined attacks: Belly Drum, Flare Blitz, Hammer Arm, Super Power, Overheat, Protect, Return, Flamethrower, Fire Blast, Flame Charge, Bulldoze, Flame Wheel.

[Purcible261]

Name: Kilian "Bastille" Hartwig

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Description/Appearance: Kilian is a little above the average height for most teenage boys of his age. He has straight white hair that partially obscures his sharp crimson red eyes. His bottom lip is adorned with two silver colored snake bites that seem to switch to a bronze color when introduced to any type of liquid. He has slightly toned olive colored skin, that has a couple of abrasion marks from constant adventuring. Along his neck, he wears a silver necklace that is adorned with a pendant that is in the shape of a Durant. He wears a red short sleeved shirt with several black and white lines that run vertically along his chest leading down to his waist. Although this is some times covered by a grey sweater that is usually half zipped; to allow some of his shirt to be visible. He wears a pair of faded blue jeans with tears along the jeans and bottom, and a black leather belt to keep his pants from sagging. He also wears a pair of black knee high socks and a pair of Black leather shoes with red laces that are also made of leather. Kilian also carries around with him a black one-strap backpack that is rectangular in shape.

Personality: Kilian doesn't have a problem working with others, but prefers working alone since that's where he can show his true his full potential. But, although he works pretty well in groups, he only travels with a few Pokemon, and literally has no friends. Although, he has no problem with meeting new people, and considers himself to be extremely trustworthy. Kilian is extremely intelligent when it comes to reading his opponents and pin pointing their weaknesses and blind spots. When in battle he loves to show off how captivating his Pokemon are by using moves in a way, in which some would only see in a Pokemon Contest. He tends to follow orders unless he sees them as unjust and just plain wrong. Even though Kilian is shy, he enjoys company. But, has tendencies of being emotionless at times, which he tries to improve from time to time. (With no avail.) He tends not to get himself tied up in the affairs of others unless he is personally asked to do something.

History: When Kilian was born, he was diagnosed with three different cancers. Doctors said that the probability of him even being able to make it through surgery was highly improbable, but his parents didn't believe it at the time. Some how though, he managed to survive the surgery but still with much of the cancer left in his body. He continued to go through several surgeries and many treatments until he was at the age of six. But, since he was not allowed to interact with the outside world what so ever before he had finally overcome his diseases, he became home schooled and eventually winded up developing a shyness towards just about everything and everyone. But, since he was sick, he had a lot of time to himself and found reading and problem solving to be his best friends at the time. Eventually he enrolled into elementary school late, but exceeded at top of the class. Due to his good grades, his parents promised to take him on a hiking trip in also small celebration to be able to take Kilian outside now without any worries of him getting immensely sick. But, it was on that day, that his parents were oblivious to the fact that there was a thunder storm approaching, and a nasty one at that. While trying to find some shelter from the monsoon, Kilian got separated from his parents and eventually wandered into, of all things, Bouffalant territory. Due to the vast downpour of rain, visibility was greatly impaired to where you wouldn't even be able to see your hand an inch away from your face. But everything was fine until the rain eased out a bit, and Kilian's vision became normal, only to see a field of Bouffalant, and they were anything but happy. He had heard that Bouffalant were extremely territorial, and was scared out of his wits. What was even worse was that several Bouffalant noticed him and began to charge. Kilian knew it was fight or flight, and since he could do neither, he ran as fat as he could. Eventually he escaped the Bouffalant territory only to run up to a river and spot what seemed to be several Drilbur attacking a silver colored bug Pokemon. It was a Durant, and an abnormally small one at that. Feeling emotional for the first time, Kilian attempted to stop the Drilbur by scolding them, but with no avail. He was soon attacked by those same Drilbur as they felt that he was being intrusive, and started attacking him by scratching, pushing, slashing and headbutting. That was, until more Durant from the other Durant's colony appeared and quickly decimated the Drilbur. Not to protect Kilian, but to protect that other Durant. But, the small Durant noticed that Kilian tried to help and deterred the other members from attacking Kilian. Trying to wash off whatever run off of small cuts and bruises, he went for the stream, but was quickly joined by the miniscule Durant. It turned out that the Durant appreciated Kilian's efforts in trying to help the it. So, to help Kilian the two went on a look for his parents. With the help of the Durant, Kilian eventually managed to find civilization and with familiar surroundings found his house with both him and Durant intact. And was quickly taken into the arm of his parents, while wondering if to keep the Durant as a guest. But, during the adventure Kilian had grown sick, and had to be rushed to the hospital. It turned out that on of the cancers had come back, and he would probably have to go through surgery. Though the Durant was small, it understood what was going on, and wanted to come with Kilian and his parents to the hospital. It turns out, that the two developed a strong bong while out looking for Kilian when they were on their 'misadventure'. When surgery came up with a slight positive, it turned out to be lung cancer and they had almost removed it completely but, Kilian would require a lot of bed rest. Acting upon loyalty, the Durant stayed with Kilian while his parents left to do important thing like going to work. Eventually within the next day, he awoke refreshed and to his contentment woke up to a small Durant sleeping by his side. That experience alone made their bond grow exponentially. When he turned the age of thirteen, Kilian decided that it would now be tie to his the road within his Durant, who had grown exponentially in and was already slightly bigger then that of the average adult Durant.

Other: He carries an inhaler on him at all times and usually keeps Aeon out of his Pokeball unless specified to keep him contained.

Pokemon

Name/Nickname: Aeon

Species: Durant

Gender: Male

Personality: Aeon has an expressive, positive, and self-confident
nature. Like many of his species, he tends to work well with others, but performs better in battles alone. Although, when working in a group or team, he tends to take charge as leader. He strives to be the best Durant possible, but is always happy with where he is. No matter what situation Aeon is in, he can always find something good in it, but not everything comes with a pro.

History: Aeon was born just like any other Durant, and lived the normal life of a colony ant. Except for the fact that he was the runt of the liter and looked abnormal compared to the other fellow Durant, kind of like the pink elephant in the room. Since he was born abnormally small, and his pair mandibles both had two spikes on each side. It was only thought to be a slight mutation or some type deficiency in the small Iron Ant Pokemon's body while in the hatching process. But, his curiosity was like that of no other Durant. Instead of working, he would sometimes scurry out of the nest and explore the vast surroundings of the forest. It was usually that curiosity that always got him into trouble. And eventually it did, big trouble. Upon exploring, Aeon unknowingly traversed into Drilbur's 'territory' in which he was attacked by a group of three Drilbur looking to have some fun. The 'fun' lasted for about several minutes before it was interrupted by some child who only winded up changing the target of the attacks to himself. Luckily his colony was on Aeons trail and quickly found him and the Drilbur which were attacking the boy. In return for the boys somewhat heroic gesture, Aeon tried to help boy who later revealed his name to be Kilian, by traversing through the forest and eventually civilization. Along the way they were faced with serious problems and Pokemon who felt like causing trouble. But through those experiences developed a friendship and eventually the two made it to civilization.

Attacks:
Iron Head
Superpower
Thunder Fang
Hone Claws

Description: Aeon is anything but a normal Durant, standing at about two feet tall which measures twice the size of the normal adult Durant. From far away he may seem to be normal, but upon close inspection, his carapace is actually tinged in an egg white coloration, which glimmers in the light of the moon and the sun. His eyes are a calming light blue color, which are abnormal compared to the rest of his species whose eyes are usually a deep red. His incisors are longer then that of a normal Durants jaws and contain spikes along the front and sides, mainly from constant battling. His Carapace is covered in scratches and dents from previous battles. He wears a yellow scarf that is layered with black stripes.

(I will continue to add Pokemon if needed.)

[Fallen Icarus]

Is this even a thing anymore? If it is, I have a SU from Catalyst: Falling Stars that I want you guys to review

Name: Icarus
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Family: Parents: Deceased

Appearance: Icarus is a blonde and handsome individual. He holds a respectable height of 5’11 along with a boxer-esque body, and is moderately athletic, having followed Tennis for the majority of his life. He weighs in at 154lb, and his posture is better than most. Friendly turquoise eyes look at you from his face, which is complimented by medium-length hair. I picture him looking a lot like this, but with dirty blonde hair and blue-green eyes.

Icarus prefers to be fashionable and wears appealing outfits that are continuously changing during the course of the story. However, most of his clothes follow some kind of guideline. During the winter, he commonly wears a navy blue north face jacket along with a pair of his favorite jeans and stygian fingerless gloves. In summer/spring time, Icarus most often wears some kind of t-shirt or sleeveless shirt (Jerseys and whatnot) with matching shorts. Fall season is met with a hoody and jeans. All of these are usually worn with beaten red basketball shoes, a gift from Icarus’s late father. Depending on his mood, Icarus also wears a set of white and black headphones.

Country of Origin: His origin is of French, but at the start of the story, he was currently in Greece.
Notable Skills: Has a mastery of Archery, sword-play, and horseback riding which is enough to hold his own in a fight. Is able to operate a firearm, but so far has little to no experience in utilizing it.

Icarus has a degree in Law & Psychology and is masterfully eloquent in speech. Thus, most debates against Icarus are lost, and depending on the target’s frame of mind, they can be convinced into thinking a specific way.

Training in stealth and combat. Mixed Martial arts, specifically Judo, Chinese martial arts, and Taekwondo.

Icarus’s partnership is also a bit more powerful than the other catalysts as he had already been training with Hyperion for a year.

Personality: Icarus is, on the outside, very pleasant and charming. There is a certain attraction, a certain charisma to him that draws others to him. Everywhere he goes his politeness follows, and it feels very genuine. In his journeys, Icarus has made many friends that sincerely believe that Icarus deeply cares for their needs and wants, and are willing to repay that debt whenever the need arises. Icarus appears philanthropic and charming, yet does not seem to have an ongoing relationship, attracting the attention of many women.

Despite his charms, Icarus is in actually a dark and manipulative person. Currently, no set of morals define him, and no ethics confine his way of action. Other than Hyperion, who Icarus somewhat trusts, Icarus puts his hopes and aspirations on no one, and therefore really does not care for anyone. He can feel, and has emotions, but the world has rendered him cold and calculating towards it, and feels no guilt from using humans as tools, which is easy, considering his high intelligence.

He hasn’t always been this way, and so he many occasionally lapse into brief moments of emotion and kindness.

History: On November 13th, a night filled with howling winds and freezing ice, Icarus was born to a young, wealthy, and loving couple. From an early age, Icarus was adored and cared for. Every need of his was provided, and constant murmurs of “Love you” were commonplace. All Icarus experienced during his childhood was to love and be content. In this environment, Icarus grew to be an intelligent, sympathetic, heartfelt, and likeable person. His mother was the epitome of beauty and kindness, some would go as far to say an angel; his father was gentlemanly and gently greeted every visitor with the equal attitude. Their philanthropic endeavors were the stuff of legends and they revolutionized the business revenues they participated in.

Icarus grew up learning the ways of horseback riding, archery, and sword fighting, and was surrounded by tutors of various topics year in and year out. The cello was also taught, which Icarus seemed to have a natural affinity for.

All good things must come to an end, and in Icarus’s 12th year, it would end at an opera house. The recent earthquakes and natural disasters had devastated a majority of the population, and that majority deeply resented the few rich and prosperous. The opera playing was a relatively popular and well known one, so a few members of a gang named the Chilly Joes (I know, cheap Batman rip-off, but what’s a guy going to do?) lay ambush to rob people as they came out. As luck would have it, Icarus’s family entered out as one of the last, because it turned out that one of Icarus’s father’s friends had a major role. The Chilly Joes jumped out and repeatedly shot at the family, and ran away with some money.

Icarus, while shocked at the horrific amount of blood spilling out, remained stable and called the police. The medics came and rushed away both parents, while a few servants came and took Icarus home. Operations began for parents, but only the father made it. The funeral for the lovely lady was attended by many of the city’s people, and it began a program to help the needy and poor.

Meanwhile, Icarus’s father sunk into a period of deep depression. He refused to eat most of his meals, and began to pour his energies into his work alone. As a result, Icarus was left unattended, and all Icarus could was watch as his father wasted before him. Communications were rare on all but the special occasions, and even those were sporadically missed.

On Icarus’s 17th birthday, a small party was laid out, and his father gave Icarus a pair of red basketball shoes. The next day, Icarus’s father committed suicide. The pent-up sadness was too much for his father to bear.

Icarus had no longer any love for this world. To his mind, it was full of trash that killed good men and women like his parents, trash that was easily expendable. Icarus flew to Stanford and completed a degree in Psychology in 2 years, as well as finishing up Law school in one with his genius. During that time, Icarus learned the ways of manipulation and the powers of speech, and carefully used them to make connections. After college, Icarus left to train his body, learning martial arts and combat training from the best for a year.

On a sudden whim, Icarus decided to travel out and discover the world in perhaps an attempt to redefine and redeem the world in his eyes. Even if it was his purpose, it didn’t work. Everywhere Icarus looked, there was pain and evil. Children robbed money from their parents, and blood was shed daily on the streets. Disgust was the one thing on Icarus’s mind. His journey took him to Athens, Greece, where he prepared to once again meet the corruption brought on by the natural disasters.

While walking through the Parthenon and whatnot, Icarus saw a shining light hurl from the sky. It was a huge and burly man who introduced himself as Hyperion, the titan of light. He offered the position of Catalyst to Icarus, who offhandedly accepted. The sensation of being drawn to Hyperion filled Icarus, and Icarus commonly followed his gut instincts.

Hyperion trained Icarus, and Icarus taught Hyperion, and the duo remained that way for a year till the news of the breaking of Yggdrasil’s core reached them via Icarus’s sources. They decided to follow this news back to Paris, where a fragment of the core was said to remain……

Others: N/A

DIETY

Name: Hyperion
Alias: Titan of the East, Lord of Light, Lord Hyperion
Gender: Male.
Origin: Greek
Family: Wife: Theia
Kids: Helios, Selene, Eos
Siblings: Oceanus, Iapetus, Cronus, Crius, Coeus, Rhea, Tethys, Theia, Phoebe, Themis and Mnemosyne
Parents: Gaia and Uranus
Weapons/Divine Relics

As one of the greatest titan warriors, Hyperion carries the signature weapons of the Ancient Greeks: the doru (spear), xiphos (sword), shield, helm and armor. Hyperion’s weapons all have special characteristics fitted to them, as should a weapon of the Titans.

αστέρι που καίει (Star that Burns), His Xiphos capable of slicing through toughest armor, Hyperion wields this terrible golden blade. It has drunk the blood of gods and mortals, strengthening itself with every life. The shining sword holds to a diamond shape, its burning wrath lasting long. Its metal is said to be mined from the sun itself, molded by Hephaestus, and its essence seems to be of light. All who star into this blade’s hateful mirror are said never to live again…..
Abilities: The xiphos glows with a strong light that is likely to blind mortals and gods alike who directly stare into it, and is wrapped around by searing flames. The flames are hotter than the furnaces of Nebuchadnezzar, and inflict severe burns to whoever it touches. The blade is as long as Hyperion’s arm and the hilt is the length of 2 of Hyperion’s palms.

Κόσμος που διαπερνά (World that pierces) His Doru, hateful sprit of war, spearing the hardest of enemies. The wound that is inflicted, for it never heals, its influence spreading and hatred warping. Its poison flourishes in a god’s blood, and it destroys in a mortal’s womb. Purified in Hades’s realm, under the cool frosty moonlight shower, the doru was forged to smite the enemy bare. Fear the Doru, for it comes your way…..
Abilities: The doru gleams with a dark light that is sure to strike fear in any that see it. The wounds that the doru gives are likely to fester and other nasty things, and it gives a heart of hate and general bad behavior to those it pierces. The doru is dipped at full moon in the deadly poison of a black mamba, so when applied to mortals, it more likely than not will leave them instantly dead, and other gods are severely crippled, even ones with immunity to diseases.

Φεγγάρι που παρακολουθεί (Moon that watches) Shield that blocks all, blinds all, and defeats all, this shield Hyperion wields… (I got kinda lazy with this one… >.>)

Slumber Mode Appearance: The best way to describe Hyperion is this. Take the Rock. (Dwayne Johnson) Now imagine if he was Greek, covered in scars, and 10x buffer and a couple inches taller. That’s basically Hyperion. He towers at an incredible 7 feet and 1 inch, and weighs probably at around 450-500 pounds of pure muscle. When his golden eyes take one look at you, all you want to is prostrate before his feet and preferably run. A long scar etches across his nose, and the curly black hair helps with his appearance as some kind of Yakuza.

Although Hyperion prefers to be always be in his golden armor, Icarus has meticulously explained to him that mortals don’t take well to weapons and such. Icarus promptly took him to a clothes store and outfitted him in a black leather jacket, sunglasses, and crisp black pant, all over spanking new cowboy boots. That’s his outfit every day, somehow kept clean by his god powers. Hyperion also wears black fingerless gloves, a trade mark of their team, along with his everyday outfit.

Combat Mode Appearance: Hyperion changes his size to match who he is fighting; if Hyperion chooses to fight an overpowered 60 mile high god of death, he will grow to match that size. Hyperion immediately clad in golden armor, reminiscent of medieval suits of armor, and wears a Spartan helmet. In this form, Hyperion seems to take the very essence of light, and his entire shape is bathed in heat and radiance. Hyperion has the xiphos and doru slung over his back, and the shield on his left arm.

Basic Abilities: Immunity- Hyperion boasts a resistance and immunity to other god’s abilities; the weaker ones will be all but naught, and the more powerful ones will be less effective.

Immortality/Regeneration- Hyperion, while not invincible, is practically immortal. As so, he will not be affected by diseases, can regenerate lost body parts, and will not die. He will only be affected by either other god’s weapons or weapons forged from special metals specifically made to fight gods.

Instantaneous Speed- Since Hyperion is the lord of light, he can travel to places or move at the speed of light, which looks as if he had teleported.

Photokinesis- The absolute control of light. Hyperion can do anything with light; he can summon it, he can absorb it, he can meld it, he can focus it, he can become it, he can create an absence of it, etc. When fighting during the daytime, his powers are amplified, but his fighting prowess does in no way decrease during the night. Hyperion can also harden light to become harder the most adamant of diamonds. When focused, his light can incinerate most anything, and he can probably control light over a distance of Alaska before his concentration falters. Please allow a bit more freedom with this and the below abilities, cause the uses are unlimited.

Pyrokinesis- To a lesser extent, Hyperion can control fire. Flames and such do not affect him, and Hyperion can even absorb them. It is largely similar to his control over light, but it is not as great, and there is a possibility of his control being overpowered by say, a god of fire. This ability probably ranges the size of Chicago.

Battling Prowess/Strength/Extended Stamina- Hyperion is a merciless and skilled fighter, and is one of the very best. His strength matches with Atlas himself, and can easily take Zeus on a 1 v 1. His stamina is beyond words; as long as he isn’t fighting in an ocean, Hyperion can go on for days and days.

Size Growth- As described in the Combat mode appearance.

Omniscience- Hyperion hears of many through his light communication channels, but he may miss certain conversations blocked by skilled gods.
General god abilities- Telepathy, limited control of mortal’s minds, materializing clothes, etc.

Catalysed Mode Appearance: Icarus glows with the power of three suns, and his usual aquamarine eyes are replaced with cocky gold ones. Icarus is also clad in Hyperion’s armor, but no longer wears the helm, and Hyperion’s form seems to hover over Icarus’s body. His hair is brighter then his usual shade, and radiates as if it was made of pure gold.

At Icarus’s hands, he wears a gold glove that has a picture of a sun etched onto the backhand. Like Hyperion, the xiphos and the doru are slung over Icarus’s shoulder, and the shield is latched onto his left hand. Icarus’s expression is also substituted to a warrior like and mischievous face, deeply contrasted from his usual laid back face.

Catalysed Mode Abilities: Enhanced Immunity- Any god’s abilities used toward Hyperion are significantly weakened, if not completely nullified. Weak to medium power abilities are completely repelled, and strong abilities are damped.

Enhanced Immortality/ Regeneration- Same except for a few things. Regeneration will cost a lesser toll in Hyperion’s energy and is activated in much quicker time. Hyperion is now slightly resistant to other god’s and god-killing weapons.

Enhanced Instantaneous Speed- Hyperion is slightly faster than the speed of light and is more agile.

Enhanced Photokinesis- All Hyperion’s light controlling abilities and his light’s strength are greatly amplified. His range now extends to about the size of the United States.

Enhanced Pyrokinesis- All Hyperion’s fire controlling abilities/strength of fire are greatly amplified. He is less likely to get overpowered by fire-specializing gods and his range now extends to about the size of Illinois.

Enhanced Battling Prowess/Strength/Stamina. Hyperion’s strength, stamina, and battling abilities are greatly multiplied. He is less affected by water

Size Growth-same

Enhanced Omniscience- Hyperion is less likely to get blocked by the barriers of other gods.
General God abilities-same

Concentrated Light Destruction- Hyperion begin by summoning 5 equal length blades of light that are about 6 feet long. They shoot at the enemies torso, and impale him/her while fiercely glowing bright. Light surrounds the foe and incases the foe in a box which keeps him/her from moving. Hyperion punches the box and the light shatters, breaking apart the foes body, and making it impossible for the foe to regenerate.

Mecha Mode Appearance: Giant Mecha time YEAH! Hyperion grows to a size of about 20 feet in length, but can grow or decrease depending on the opponent. He takes on a golden robotic form, which is, in basics, largely identical to his combat form other than that he is now a robot. Sort of like a golden gundam. His helmet is looks as if merged, and has machamp like things on top. His eyes are of a golden shade, and is the same configuration as a transformer.

Hyperion has 4 cannons. One on each shoulder and one on each arm, located right above the hand. A jetpack is attached to his back for convenient flying, and his fist has 4 round spikes for each knuckle. At his feet, there are 3 holes on the bottom on each foot, maybe for assistance in blasting off or in-flight fighting. The xiphos and doru as slung crossing each other on his back, and Hyperion no longer uses the shield.

Mecha Mode Abilities: Advanced Immunity- Hyperion is now completely immune to most god’s abilities; only the absolute strongest of abilities can affect him

Advanced Immortality/Regeneration- Regeneration costs little energy and takes only a few seconds depending on the size of the regeneration. Hyperion is now largely resistant to other god’s and god-killing weapons.

Advanced Instantaneous Speed: Hyperion is now largely faster than the speed of light, so fast that even the most eagle eyed of gods cannot catch him. All god’s movements appear stopped to Hyperion, and he can easily run circles around them

Advanced Photokinesis: Hyperion’s light controlling techniques and his power of light are tremendously amplified. In conjunction with the manipulation of corpeal and material light, Hyperion can manipulate the “light” inside people, that is to say their moral tendencies. If there were any limitations with his previous power, those chains are broken. His range is about the size of the continent of Asia.

Advanced Pyrokinesis- Hyperion’s fire manipulating techniques/strength of fire are tremendously amplified. Hyperion can now summon vast quantities of flame; he could do so before in more limited quantities (read: He can summons fires and such to temperatures of the sun, but couldn’t summon as much flames as say, a volcano) but not as much now. (read: he can summon as much fire as a volcano) His range over fire probably increases to the size of Texas.

Enhanced Battling Prowess/Strength/Stamina. Hyperion’s strength, stamina, and battling abilities are tremendously amplified. He is hardly affected by water. As he is right now, Atlas could probably do nothing but scratch his paint job, and would be in turn be knocked out with a flick of Hyperion’s pinky. Hyperion can probably go on for months without getting tired (not that mecha mode lasts that long but :/)

Size Growth-same

Advanced Omniscience- Hyperion will hardly ever be blocked by other gods other than God (Yahweh) himself.
General God abilities-same

Advanced Concentrated Light Destruction- Hyperion begin by summoning 5 equal length blades of light that are about 10 feet long. They shoot at the enemies torso, and impale him/her while fiercely glowing bright. Light surrounds the foe and incases the foe in a box which keeps him/her from moving. Hyperion punches the box and the light shatters, breaking apart/incinerating the foes body, and making it impossible for the foe to regenerate. The power and speed of this attack is multiplied tremendously.

Shining Cannon Fire. Hyperion can shoot bullets of light out of his cannon, which instantly disintegrates most anything it touches. It can be charged for a bigger radius, or it can be fired machine gun style.

Shining Beam Fire. Hyperion opens his mouth and shoots a beam of light about 10 meters wide and is as long as Hyperion wants/puts into it. Same attributes as the shining cannon fire.

Absolute Supremacy. Everything within a twenty-mile radius from Hyperion (sphere) is frozen and disintegrated beyond repair. Instantly kills if life forms are in its vicinity. No exceptions other than Icarus. Impossible to avoid, block, and run away from. If there is an ability that says, “haha durr this shield blocks ur poop attcks” (or anything similar) this attack will override it. This automatically puts Hyperion out of Mecha mode and leaves him vulnerable and without abilities for one week.

Personality: Hyperion, whilst being a great warrior, suffers occasionally from the tendencies found in these types of men such as rowdiness, recklessness, love of alcohol, and boasting. Most of the time, Hyperion is wise and fierce, a brilliant mind in the battlefield. Hyperion is at all times vigilant and hawk like.

Despite being on the “bad” side, Hyperion is the honorable enemy type. He has a code of conduct which he will only occasionally breach, and does not use dirty tricks in battle. Hyperion merely enjoys the feeling a good fight, and will more often than not kill someone who he has just enjoyed a great battle with. To those Hyperion considers allies, he is loyal and a great teammate, but hates being confined. To Icarus, Hyperion acts as some type of father figure; a talent obviously gleaned from his times with Helios and the others.

Hyperion also enjoys more respectable pastimes such as philosophy and reading, and will regularly be found sipping coffee in his free time.

History: Born to Uranus and Gaia, Hyperion was one of the foremost titans. Wielding the absolute control of light, Hyperion was one of the four corners of the world along with Crius, Coeus, and Iopetus. Uranus sought to restrain his sons by way of Tarturus, but with the help of Gaia, Cronus and the titans overthrew him.

The Titanomachy. The terrible and bloody battle between the infidel gods and the tyrannical titans. Father clashed blades with sons, brother murdered brother, and comrades betrayed allies. The conflict waged for ten years, day in and day out, but eventually the gods emerged victorious. Fortunately, Hyperion, at that time, sided with the gods; a result of a brief and much heated argument between Cronus and Hyperion. Zeus though, fearing and envying the remaining titan’s powers, turned his back upon Hyperion and threw him within the depths of Tarturus.

Hyperion cursed and raged against the Benedict Arnold of ancient Greece, but his cries fell on deaf ears. To escape from Tarturus without outside help was an impossibility. Hyperion really, really hated Tarturus. Over the millenniums, Hyperion grew bitter and angry, his power ever growing even as Zeus’s dwindled.

On a night forever sung by the muses, Loki’s voice rang in Hyperion’s mind. Loki presented a tempting offer. Loki would rip the dimensional barriers of Tarturus free and would allow Hyperion to obliterate Zeus; the only condition being that Hyperion fight on his side. Though wary of Loki’s clever plans and his manipulations, Hyperion reluctantly accepted those terms and saw light (ironic) for the first time since his betrayal.

Hyperion, for lack of a better word, was a hit. Gods of various mythologies all fell to his sword, and even Poseidon and Zeus took a “strategic retreat” when he led. The legions in control of him and the other 3 pillars, Crius, Coeus, and Iopetus struck fear into every enemy god and goddess. For a time, Loki’s faction was undefeatable.

The Fates deem an end to every story, no matter the sheer power of the individual. The blanket to Hyperion’s light was the Battle of Raging waters, a fate that was unavoidable by Hyperion.

Put simply, Hyperion’s legion was ambushed on all sides by Poseidon and Oceanus. See, though Hyperion’s strength is unparalleled, fire and light can always be dampened by water. Poseidon, who knew this from a previous battle against a Heliopath, carried out this tactic. Unfortunately, since Hyperion is the incarnation of light, not fire, its effectiveness did not exceed Poseidon’s expectations.

Nevertheless, Hyperion’s power was slightly weakened, and with the legion surrounded, it would only be a matter of time. Thus, as Hyperion hacked and slashed at the multitudes of gods, his strength was whittled away at little by little. Hyperion finally fell to his knees, at the peak of exhaustion, but a flash of light whisked him away to Midgard.

Groggily blinking the stars out of eyes, Hyperion looked straight into a handsome and cunning looking French man. “Who the bloody hell are you? You just fell out of the sky.” At these words, Hyperion felt an indescribable tug and remembered Loki’s description of the Catalyst.

When all hope is lost
Look towards Midgard
In the land you were birthed
There the partner who was foretold
Will come to your aid
So choose who you must
And choose who you will
But in their power you will
Grow even greater still.

“I am Hyperion, Lord of light and Titan of the East. How would you like to become my Catalyst?”

Explanation of what was going on: Hyperion was one of the few gods to have a Catalyst before the Yggdrasil Core was destroyed. During the battle of Raging Waters, Loki’s faction was defeated by the Tyr in a battle with the highest casualties during the whole war. Near the end of the battle, Hyperion was finally exhausted by the fight, but vanished to Midgard in a brilliant flash of light. He landed in his old birthplace Greece, and was met by his current Catalyst. There Hyperion waited, quietly gathering his power and training his catalyst. Recently though, hearing of the destruction of the Yggdrasil Core, he has decided to look for his old allies and the remaining pieces.

Faction: Sorry bout that, but I’m inclined to put Loki here. There’s too much Tyrs crowding the aisles.

Others: Relationships between Icarus and Hyperion: After finding Icarus in the ancient city of Athens, Hyperion took Icarus in as a surrogate son. Even though they are on the side of “evil”, Icarus and Hyperion have more of their own agenda, and will have no qualms about deserting Loki’s faction. Hyperion and Icarus have a more “Tyr” sort of relationship, the titan is not just using Icarus, and they have a growing comradeship. They hate being bound down to one authority, and if pushed hard enough, the duo will leave. Icarus and Hyperion will never join the Tyr faction, reasons being many, one of which is the fact that Zeus will probably be in the Tyr faction.

Favorite Quote: Frankly my dear, I don’t give a damn.