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    Quote Originally Posted by purple_drake View Post
    Echoing Diddy on the first one (though I'm going to take a stab at it being Mars or Jupiter? If so, maybe you should/could talk to Blackjack Gabbiani--I'm sure she'd love you forever).
    You know me too well bb.

    But yeah, if you want to write this and need some help, I could offer some assistance if you need. You clarified Jupiter, and there's not enough fics about her. I also know an excellent Jupiter RPer, and there's Mystery Cowriter...so I could see if they could help as well.
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    Cool Well, since every body's doing it...

    I got a couple of ideas for fics myself. Who knows, if an army of muses hit me simultaneously, I just might get motivated to finish my running works and start them.

    OK, idea #1: Three youths show up unannounced on the morning when Prof. Oak is to send three juvenile trainers on their epic quest and steal the starter pokemon. Feeling mixed degrees of rage and being cheated, the original recipients steal three more young pokemon and give chase, all for different reasons.

    Set in Kanto, yet outside major characters, is an AU representation of canon characters. May present recurrence of OC characters from older fics.

    and idea #2: Following the destruction of Team Rocket's labs by Mewtwo, and several years later, the scientists find a fragmented strand of experimental DNA and begin to tweak it to create a warrior capable of bringing their prize creation back under their control. Things go familiarly wrong and get even worse when a little girl get involved in the crossfire

    Set in Kanto, and may contain elements of Mangaverse and the first movie.

    As both ideas are set in Kanto, there might be a convergence of both stories into one. But let's see what we have first.

    Last, and hopefully not the least, idea #3: The local Johton police are baffled by a string of assassinations performed by an enigma who goes by the name BlackJack. fearing for her safety, the chief of police sends his only daughter, a budding pokemon photographer, to a new region to keep her away from the murderous menace. the snobbish and domineering girl meets a smiley boy names Jay who after breaking her camera is forced to escort her while she gets the money to buy a new one. but things aren't quite what they seem as the BlackJack investigation takes a startling turn...

    This one is a new region fic and may stand alone from the other two.

    I may start one of them this coming NaNoWriMo, but that remains to be seen...

    so, whaddya think guys? Don't hold back! and that includes you too, Yami!

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    Only really going to comment on one thing.

    Last, and hopefully not the least, idea #3: The local Johton police are baffled by a string of assassinations performed by an enigma who goes by the name BlackJack. fearing for her safety, the chief of police sends his only daughter, a budding pokemon photographer, to a new region to keep her away from the murderous menace. the snobbish and domineering girl meets a smiley boy names Jay who after breaking her camera is forced to escort her while she gets the money to buy a new one. but things aren't quite what they seem as the BlackJack investigation takes a startling turn...
    To. Much. Like. The. Anime.

    Ash break bike. Misty hunt Ash down. Force Ash to allow her to travel with him. And tbh it's overused, why would she want someone who breaks her things, around her? And a STRANGER at that, I mean while pokemon is a safe world, it's still a strange kid/teenager she doesn't know anything about Edit AND your world is NOT exactly rainbows and sugar as you tell us. And she wants him, around her? Just to get money back? What the hell, sorry just what the hell.

    And why would the Chef of Police be scared about his own daughter- you mention nothing about the targets of this mysterious killer, no rhyme or reason as to what or who he kills. Sure he's an Enigma, but Enigma's still can be profiled pretty much, and still have an Motive for their kills.

    So it seems random that oh the girl is possibly in danger and the chef punts her off to areas unknown instead of possibly using Witness Protection Program.

    It just seems to unreasonable AND to much like the anime, concerning Ash and Misty.
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    Only really going to comment on one thing.

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    Last, and hopefully not the least, idea #3: The local Johton police are baffled by a string of assassinations performed by an enigma who goes by the name BlackJack. fearing for her safety, the chief of police sends his only daughter, a budding pokemon photographer, to a new region to keep her away from the murderous menace. the snobbish and domineering girl meets a smiley boy names Jay who after breaking her camera is forced to escort her while she gets the money to buy a new one. but things aren't quite what they seem as the BlackJack investigation takes a startling turn...

    To. Much. Like. The. Anime.
    Too. damn. True. :P

    When i thought of idea #3, that was basically the only snag. I just had a brainwave for an alternative: Jay could break the camera and the girl could brush off his attempts to replace it. feeling guilty, he would follow and help coach her in her gym battles, contests, or whatever schemes she gets to get money herself for the new camera. Come to think of it, that ties up pretty well with the story line and helps link the beginning to the end! Thanks, Yami!!

    as to BlackJack's targets, I merely didn't elaborate to build an air of mystery. Whether it worked or not is still up for debate... :P

    Such a swift reply. Thanks a lot, Yami.

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    Ah, if I wrote that story, it'd be from the perspective of BlackJack xD

    I had to read the first idea a few times to get the gist. So three kids turn up at the Oak Ranch, get pissy 'cos they aren't getting pokemon, so steal the Kanto starter Trio (I assume) so the three kids that were going to get the Kanto starter Trio STEAL three more pokemon to give chase, even though they could probably ask Oak for three replacements to help bring the ruffians to justice.

    Is that it?

    Second idea. I really like, be sure to make it dark and epic, as all mewtwo related things should be.

    Third idea, Yami already said it. Although I'd like some elaboration on BlackJack if I was reading it.
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    Well flush out the girls character a bit would be a good thing Air, cause tbh she sounds dangerously close to Misty [snobby arrogant selfish or how she was at the begining]. And maybe give this 'Smiling Jay' character a bit more oomf, I mean there are several examples of this. Vash- carefree, loving, caring, but when the going gets tough he kicks ***.

    Naruto- Idiot [sorry naruto fans, he's been turned into one]

    yada yada yada. I've not read any books recently enough to remember characters so sorry for the anime/manga references.

    Or ooh, one good example could be, urg, I forget his name but he's the main male character in the manga 'Code Breaker'.

    And I agree with Diddy about Blackjack, but then I already pointed out some deepening of his character/motives, so I guess we agree with eachother.

    Omg parado-

    *boom*

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    I am heavily amused by that code name.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Blackjack Gabbiani View Post
    I am heavily amused by that code name.
    OMG I FOUND THE KILLER!

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    And tbh: I agree with everyone who has said that idea number 3 is just like the anime.
    And if she is a photographer, her pokemon will be barely stronger than the average pet pokemon (and the only reason I can assume she has pokemon is because she is in the wild, where pokemon could target her).
    Still, even though they are meant for protection, a pokemon photographer wouldn't have the time to train her pokemon to be strong enough to be gym leaders!

    Although, contests don't require that much training, just a load of creativity. The only training required is that to master the appeal. But if you do anime style contests, those include elegant battling, so a pokemon photographer wouldn't be able to train that type of battling as much as someone who actually aspires to be a coordinatour would.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yami Ryu View Post
    Alright so you blatantly don't say if this is AU [alternate universe]. Anime, Game or Mangaverse. But from what you say I deduced it's based on the manga. Now while I'm not up to date, haven't they all encountered, used, released and etc so many legends already? Wouldn't the legends be wary of humans now or unobtainable anymore? [Since catching and releasing is theorized to make a pokemon uncatchable]

    And yes this does seem cliche and a bit bad, as why would Lance freeze Lorelei, and how would Lorelei be frozen well when ice is her element and she's a damn strong trainer in the manga afaik.

    Overall this seems rushed and not that thought out- and why just Blue? Wasn't she teamed up with Silver or something?
    First off, you are indeed correct in that it's based on the manga.

    Second, only five legendaries are "caught" so to speak, and three of those are the birds, who will be used by Blue again at one point. Mewtwo comes back to help out. The other is more "controlled" than anything else.

    Not Lance freezing Lorelei.

    It does seem a bit rushed I know, but there's much more to it than I posted. If you want, I could send you a message with the full details. I just don't want to give away everything.

    And Blue just starts the investigation. She's not the only one featured. The focus is back on Red, Green, and Blue.
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    Overall this seems rushed and not that thought out- and why just Blue? Wasn't she teamed up with Silver or something?

    Anyways. As said maybe you should refresh yourself up on the manga or something, because sofar it just seems a bit strange, rushed and not well thought out still, even after you barely explaining/expanding on a few things I pointed out.

    If you don't want an idea discussed about, talked about or you having to reveal some plot points and etc, then you shouldn't post in the idea thread- it's for full idea's not just poorly described pieces that you don't want to expand upon further or even fully clarify for us, alright?

    Or you could give a better summary of everything like Air Dragon did, it was about the same length as yours but we got the basic gist of plot, characters, actions.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yami Ryu View Post
    Anyways. As said maybe you should refresh yourself up on the manga or something
    Yeah, you're right there. I've only read up to the end of the GSC arc.

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    Default Thinking of a Fan Fic.

    Recently I have not had much of a thrill with RPing. Mainly because I cant find a RP that has not only a good (Pokemon) plot, but activity. Prime example IMO, Pokemon Battle Island Revolution. Great plot, but seriously no activity to keep it going (sadly!).

    One thought for a Fan Fic is a war. A Pokemon war of sorts. Armies using their Pokemon to fight (instead of the tipical soldier using a weapon, they use their Pokemon). Everytime I think of this I get this great picture in my mind, of just a barren field and one guy pointing towards the other side of the field, with Pokemon running/flying towards eachother.

    But thats not just it. Im thinking of another plot that would interfere with the war. A group of people who are not for either of the sides in the war, but against both of them. They think that the fighting should end immediatly, because (for some reason, still trying to think of why the war had begun in the first place.) it had been going on for so long, and each cause was completely rediculous.

    Any feedback/thoughts would be GREATLY appreciated.
    Constructive criticism anyone?

    EDIT: I also forgot to mention. Sorry if this seems unoriginal. The more I think of it the more Im thinking that without a doubt someone else has had this plot in mind before.
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    The Fan Fiction Idea Thread

    Did you even look?

    Edit: Your idea just described the prolouge of the Legend of Lucario Movie, so it is not original.
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    I haven't really read much of it at all, only a bit here and a piece there.

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    Yeah sorry about that. I was looking at it last night, but I completely forgot about it.

    And also. Ive only seen the first 4 Pokemon movies, so I really wouldnt know about the Prologue.
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    That doesn't really have much to do with anything. I've seen all the ones out in the UK, except the deoxys one, and I can still write stuff.

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    Good point, but when you share it, people around the internet will flame about stealing an idea, when really you didnt. Sometimes I hate forums.
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    It's RIDICULOUS ok? Ok.

    Anyways, not only does this sound like the Lucario movie, it also sounds well ridiculous itself. One man each, is controlling each side of the pokemon? No other humans? Nothing? Can we say lol? How would one man raise that many pokemon- or two men, just for a war? It makes less sense than Team Rocket still employed by Giovanni.

    There's also a FAN FIC IDEA THREAD.
    Good point, but when you share it, people around the internet will flame about stealing an idea, when really you didnt. Sometimes I hate forums.
    Oh god what are you calling this flaming? You post a skimpy idea of bare bones for a lol!warfic with lol!mon, and you're whining now? Because no one has leapt up and down for joy because of what you wrote out? I'm sorry but this idea is bland and boring. It's the standard cliche of 2 fighting forces and some people neutral EVEN ROMEO AND JULIET WAS LIKE THIS.

    There's very little shown for plot, for characters, for anything.

    So yeah it's cliche, it's bad/poor and there's not much to it.

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    Yami, I don't think he meant one man for each side... But yeah, your right, it is quite a terrible idea, it doesn't really go... with anything, really.

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    Goodness, you're all quick to get on the offensive.

    I will admit right off the bat that what ReidonX139 has posted is not the plot to a fan fic. It is, however, a scene, and one with quite a bit of potential to wow a reader and paint a spectacular picture in their mind, at least at that one moment. And there is nothing wrong with that. In fact, it ios a terrific starting point, and a great place from which to draw inspiration to get writing.

    The simple fact of the matter is that this is not a full fic idea, and so there is little for us to look at. This does not, however, mean that we should go on attacking the living daylights out of the writer. It is a scene, nothing more, and it's fairly ridiculous to be bashing it when you know nothing of the context.



    Quote Originally Posted by Yami Ryu View Post
    One man each, is controlling each side of the pokemon? No other humans? Nothing?
    I think you may have overlooked what ReidonX139 said.
    Quote Originally Posted by ReidonX139
    Armies using their Pokemon to fight (instead of the tipical soldier using a weapon, they use their Pokemon).
    The idea was that the men depicted would be at the head of the army. The rest of the humans would assumedly be within the Pokémon force, giving individual commands from there.


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    Oh god what are you calling this flaming? You post a skimpy idea of bare bones for a lol!warfic with lol!mon, and you're whining now? Because no one has leapt up and down for joy because of what you wrote out? I'm sorry but this idea is bland and boring. It's the standard cliche of 2 fighting forces and some people neutral EVEN ROMEO AND JULIET WAS LIKE THIS.
    Nobody ever said anything about flaming, and nobody is whining about any lack of praise, so please keep the accusations to a minimum. And how can you call a story these things when you don't even know what the plot is? This "two opposing forces with a neutral group" isn't cliché in itself, either, and that is not what the story of Romeo and Juliet was about.


    Quote Originally Posted by Intelligence View Post
    it is quite a terrible idea, it doesn't really go... with anything, really.
    If you're going to say something is bad, please explain why, or your posts will be treated as rude SPAM. What on earth do you mean, "it doesn't go"? This is hardly helpful.



    ReidonX139, we do ask that the next time you post you make sure to have worked out a basic plotline, figure out who the opposing forces are and get out some rough character ideas so that we'll actually have something to give opinions on. It is your job to come up with basic points such as these, and there is little point in posting an idea until you have this figured out.

    To the rest of you, while this writer was hasty in psoting an idea for which he had little background, that is not an excuse to jump down his throat. Please contain yourselves, and aim to be a little more helpful in the future.

    *moves to the Fic Ideas thread*

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    Sorry I didnt make it clear. Nor did I have any intention at meaning that you were flaming at all Yami. To answer one of your well, not necesarilly a question ^^ Yami, the plot would not be based on a one man army, as Psychic has posted above. Im simply stating what picture comes into my mind when I think of this plot. I guess I didnt mention the other people in the back controlling the other Pokemon as well.

    The main character in the story would be a character from the neutral side. Ive also come up with an idea that maybe natural resources would be the cause of the war, but this has many flaws in it. Energy can be produced by certain Pokemon, and so can most other resources needed. But maybe what Im starting to think is that the opposing faction is a group of people who feel that Pokemon should not be used as the human's means for survival. Each faction with a logical cause, but the neutral side Im having a problem with deciding on terms of their views. Maybe perhaps they feel that Pokemon should have a say in what they do, and that both sides are not giving them any freedom either way.

    Once again, Im posting this out of curiosity of what others around these forums think.

    Also, as I have said before, I have yet to see the Lucario movie, so to be honest with you, if anything is like the Prologue of this movie I apologize, and I have no means of stealing ideas from others.
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    Then this is what I suggest you do from now on- concerning writing ideas out for people to view. You don't chug out a couple of non informative lines that have to be explained, then explained again pretty much. You open up a word writing program, and you spin your idea out on there, you brush it up you polish it and then you post it, explaining as much, without giving all of the story away [aka ending and most drama], this means your ideas concerning the army/why such an army would exist in the first place. Why these people are neutral, and why they aren't for or against either side. Etc etc etc.

    WHO WHAT WHY WHERE WHEN, that's ALWAYS what you need to remember.

    But ONLY NOW are you explaining and going into detail :/

    And tbh they wouldn't be neutral- neutrality wouldn't get them noticed or the pokemon saved from a life of war and slavery just about. So your side if they are concerned over pokemon, would atleast act like P.E.T.A. Even they do crap.

    Even if it's crazy and hurtful for all animals ever.

    Edit: Neutral usually means they don't give a crap what's going on they aren't going to do anything for the most part. So your group of pokemon lovers aren't truly neutral.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yami Ryu View Post
    Then this is what I suggest you do from now on- concerning writing ideas out for people to view. You don't chug out a couple of non informative lines that have to be explained, then explained again pretty much. You open up a word writing program, and you spin your idea out on there, you brush it up you polish it and then you post it, explaining as much, without giving all of the story away [aka ending and most drama], this means your ideas concerning the army/why such an army would exist in the first place. Why these people are neutral, and why they aren't for or against either side. Etc etc etc.

    WHO WHAT WHY WHERE WHEN, that's ALWAYS what you need to remember.

    But ONLY NOW are you explaining and going into detail :/

    And tbh they wouldn't be neutral- neutrality wouldn't get them noticed or the pokemon saved from a life of war and slavery just about. So your side if they are concerned over pokemon, would atleast act like P.E.T.A. Even they do crap.

    Even if it's crazy and hurtful for all animals ever.

    Edit: Neutral usually means they don't give a crap what's going on they aren't going to do anything for the most part. So your group of pokemon lovers aren't truly neutral.
    I am starting to realise that "neutral" isnt really the word Im looking for. And also, me being dumb again, never mentioned that this third group of people is conducted of people from both of the other factions. Run aways perhaps. Who created a group that supports the idea of having Pokemon do what they wish to do, not Human's deciding their fate.

    I remember learning something about a group of people (I want to say in France, but I cannot remember) who held meetings for people to share their belief on the politcal acts going on, and they all had the same view together. I was thinking about using this into the plot for the Run Aways (Im thinking I may have a title).
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    And I am going to suggest AGAIN take your idea, put it into a word writing program, and start working on it and flushing it out, instead of just throwing random pieces out here and there now.

    Writing. Program. Use it- come back and post the full idea when you have 'everything sorted out' so it can be viewed and critiqued in full please.

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    Will do, thanks for your help Yami.

    Sorry if Im frustrating you at all. Thick skull of mine :\.
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