Only really going to comment on one thing.
To. Much. Like. The. Anime.
Last, and hopefully not the least, idea #3: The local Johton police are baffled by a string of assassinations performed by an enigma who goes by the name BlackJack. fearing for her safety, the chief of police sends his only daughter, a budding pokemon photographer, to a new region to keep her away from the murderous menace. the snobbish and domineering girl meets a smiley boy names Jay who after breaking her camera is forced to escort her while she gets the money to buy a new one. but things aren't quite what they seem as the BlackJack investigation takes a startling turn...
Ash break bike. Misty hunt Ash down. Force Ash to allow her to travel with him. And tbh it's overused, why would she want someone who breaks her things, around her? And a STRANGER at that, I mean while pokemon is a safe world, it's still a strange kid/teenager she doesn't know anything about Edit AND your world is NOT exactly rainbows and sugar as you tell us. And she wants him, around her? Just to get money back? What the hell, sorry just what the hell.
And why would the Chef of Police be scared about his own daughter- you mention nothing about the targets of this mysterious killer, no rhyme or reason as to what or who he kills. Sure he's an Enigma, but Enigma's still can be profiled pretty much, and still have an Motive for their kills.
So it seems random that oh the girl is possibly in danger and the chef punts her off to areas unknown instead of possibly using Witness Protection Program.
It just seems to unreasonable AND to much like the anime, concerning Ash and Misty.
Last edited by Yami Ryu; 3rd August 2009 at 7:50 AM.