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    Default Tales Of Mao-Doku

    Please comment when you read. Thanks

    Hay there!
    The comic I'm making may look like a typical Pokémonstory in the beginning, but it's going to turn out quite different.

    I'm just a beginner, remember that while reading ^^

    C ya!

    #1 The first catch
    #2 Prof. Beech
    #3 Start your Journey!
    #4 The mummy Pokémon
    #5 Collision
    #6 Cat Fight
    #7 Package Delivery
    #8 Dan again
    #9 The contest begins!
    #10 Package? What package?
    #11 Activity
    #12 Odd
    #13 Round 2
    #14 Speechless
    #15 Dead End
    #16 What's going on?

    EXTRA
    Protest

    Character Bio's:
    Jason
    Alice
    Prof. Beech
    Dan


    Credits:
    Sinnoh tiles by: Kymotonian and Speeddialga
    Sprites from: The Spriters-Resource
    Last edited by MrRandell; 8th March 2010 at 9:52 PM.

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    This comic is really good for a beginer; not sure if thats a custom region though. I think you should make custom characters instead of recolours.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meguel13 View Post
    This comic is really good for a beginer; not sure if thats a custom region though. I think you should make custom characters instead of recolours.
    Thanks ^^
    Except for Prof Beech I designed the haircuts myself though.
    Last edited by MrRandell; 13th June 2009 at 8:21 PM.

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    Episode three is ready!

    #3 Start your Journey!
    Last edited by MrRandell; 13th June 2009 at 8:21 PM.

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    This is very well-done. The sprites are used very effectively, as are the backgrounds. You display impeccable management of textboxes and panel layouts, especially for a beginner. Your spelling and grammar are excellent, which is rare for beginners. And your writing ability seems to be strong, leading us in an interesting direction. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~MC
    For various reasons, (not least because I've grown tired of this username), I've moved my operations over to other websites. If you're interested in following my adventures as I explore and subvert the many worlds of Nintendo through prose, look for me on Archive of Our Own, Bulbagarden, or OverClocked ReMix as "Daidalos."

    And if you're a fan or a comic-maker from the old days, thanks for more than five unforgettable years of community, comics, and creativity. And thanks for remembering.

    Peace out.

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    Yay an aother reader! ^^ Thanks for the comment ^^

    #4 The mummy Pokémon

    And new Character bio's:

    Jason
    Alice
    Prof. Beech
    Last edited by MrRandell; 15th June 2009 at 9:53 PM.

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    It's pretty good for a begginer.
    It's original which pretty much means it's not a journey comic. It's not boring and bland, and it includes a small amount of comedy. So far it's shaping up to be a pretty good comic.
    The only thing is that it might be a little too small. It might just be my opinion though.
    I look forward to more episodes!
    Currently playing:
    Wii- All Zelda's available for Wii, Final Fantasy IV: The After Years
    DS-Pokemon Platinum, Final Fantasy IV

    Proud Owner of a Pkmn Ranger Darkrai!

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    3 episode. I notice it has missing one word. "Why? O,God why did hey leave me like this!" Adds ? and T in hey.
    This is a good comic. ^^

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    i liked them they gave me a laugh!
    Yes visit it and i made the banner

    I'm more active on bulbagarden than here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dawsoc View Post
    i liked them they gave me a laugh!
    That's so nice to hear!

    #5 Collision
    Introducing some new characters

    Hope you like it ^^

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    Good new episode. Nothing really special, but the plot's advancing. These episodes might not be the best, but they're necessary. You'll learn little things like this as you make the comic. I wonder what'll happen next?
    Currently playing:
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    DS-Pokemon Platinum, Final Fantasy IV

    Proud Owner of a Pkmn Ranger Darkrai!

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    2 new episodes!

    #6 Cat Fight
    #7 Package Delivery

    I just noticed that I wrote 'Skitty kom back' instead of come.
    'Kom' is Dutch for 'come', I think I wans't realy paying attention ^^
    And now you've learned a word in Dutch =D
    Soon you'll be speaking it fluently!
    Last edited by MrRandell; 21st June 2009 at 8:40 PM.

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    Wow.
    I read all of them so far and they. are. brilliant!!
    are we gonna see more of those wierd people who dress funny?
    you know the three people who shouted MOVE!

    NOTE:
    *Yanmega instead of Vespiquen*
    *Magmortar instead of Arcanine*
    *Arcanine instead of Camerupt*

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    Whoa, I liked it ^^ hope to see some more soon

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    Hope you're happy with this one!
    (I do hope you didn't expect 3 episodes or something, because I went on a camp with my youth movement and didn't have any time to make some more)

    #8 Dan again

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    And an other one!
    I hope you like the way I show the battles, let me know!

    #9 The contest begins!
    Last edited by MrRandell; 15th July 2009 at 10:11 PM.

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    That's pretty good and I don't see Dan in the contest. Is Dan in it? I want to see more!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zero-Wolf View Post
    That's pretty good and I don't see Dan in the contest. Is Dan in it? I want to see more!
    He's standing right next to Alice.
    His battle will come ^^

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    I see Dan. It's hard-ish to see the comments in people saying when some of people are blocked by it. lol

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    I tried the zooming-stuff. And I like it ^^
    So I'll use it more often.

    #10 Package? What package?

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    I sure hope more people are going to reply, 'cause I wanna now what you guys think about the zooming-in and out stuff and wether the size of the frames are better...

    #11 Activity

    Bio:
    Dan
    Last edited by MrRandell; 19th July 2009 at 5:29 PM.

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    Hahaha! I love to see it when people's heads are too big(on animes) xD

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    i dont know why i havent commented this yet.
    Ive been watching this for a while and...
    well...
    i love it!
    your style is amazing, keep it up



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    Ghaha, thank you both =D

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    Prepare for episode 12!

    #12 Odd

    Dan

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