Oh... My... Gosh....
I'm sorry I'm just speechless. I don't even know where to start!!
Ok lets start at the beginning. That was so sad about May's past. Spoiler:- I'm not sure this is even a spoiler but I don't wanna ruin it for anyone:
At first I thought she was moving because of Drew -you know like they break up and May just can't stand him anymore, unless that's also part of the reason.
Oh and I have a feeling who that mystery guy May saw was. (I don't wanna put a spoiler because I'm too lazy to.)
That fight. That's what got me speechless. *claps* Wonderful, just amazing how you described it. Ash the Hero saves the day once again. Also, total shippyness w00t w00t!!!!
Favorite Part in this Chap:
" As long as I'm your friend, nothing wont ever happen to you." I was suddenly overwhelmed with the words that slipped out of him mouth. I was his friend! I giggled, my face was heating up again, Thank god for miracles...
*squeals* Congrats, you made the little shippy girl in me come back. Anyways, that was superly sweet. *squeals*
Great, no scratch that, AWESOMELY BRILLIANT chapter!!!!