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    Quote Originally Posted by GalladeRocks View Post
    Grovyle nodded weakly. "Y-yes. Th-this is Sceptile. And he's...he's..."

    "Allow me to finish!" Sceptile, the Boss, interrupted. "I am...his father!"!!!!!!!!!!
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    Well, I when it was mentioned about the spiderlike thing, it was obviously Sceptile. i thought the chap might be, I dunno, an uncle of Grovyle, but the father bit makes me think that something relating to the paralysis of Time and more Time travellers being revealed is coming up.
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    ...His Father? Why on earth did his father attack Grovyle? O_o;
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    Default Holy Bananas!!! THAT'S HIS DAD?!

    "Allow me to finish!" Sceptile, the Boss, interrupted. "I am...his father!"
    Holy crap! I wasn't expecting that one!

    Wait, if that's his father, THEN WHAT THE HECK IS HE DOING HERE IN THE PAST?! *brain fries from confusion*

    Anyway, great chapter! 10/5!

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    That was a really good chapter!

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    WHAT?! Sceptile is Grovyle's father?!?!!!!!!! Holy pie! That is totally shocking! I knew it was a Sceptile! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!!
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    Woah I thought it was a garchomp lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mudkip43 View Post
    Woah I thought it was a garchomp lol
    Well, I doubt a Garchomp could hang on a wall like a gecko.

    I never would have guessed that the boss was a Sceptile especially one that is Grovyle's dad. I hope we find out why Sceptile is doing all this and why he is in the future and how his allies came into play. So many unanswered questions I hop get answered.
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    Actually, GalladeRocks dropped a few hints if I'm not wrong.

    The passage of Time. Obviously, Sceptile must have come through that ALTHOUGH, seeing as we don't know the timespan between the present and the Dark Future, he MIGHT be from this present generation after all. As for those allies, well, he probably bullied some chaps into joining him in bounty hunting.
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    Well, I can't keep you guys going any longer! Here's the next chapter!


    Chapter 16
    Calm is So Calming


    "You are NOT my father!"

    Everyone turned back to Grovyle. "What?" they all asked simultaneously in confusion.

    Sceptile smiled cheekily. "He's right. I'm not his father. But I really got you guys, right?"

    "So you're not Grovyle's father?" Piplup sighed in exasperation. "Ugh, I can't take much more of this."

    "Well, if you're not Grovyle's father, who are you?" Chimchar inquired.

    "I already told you that!" Sceptile growled. "I'm Sceptile, and I'm a bounty hunter hired by Bastiodon to eliminate you!"

    "Th-that's not all!" Grovyle grunted. He slowly rose to his feet and stepped forward to face Sceptile face to face. The entire time, he staggered precariously, on the verge of collapsing again. "Th-this Pokemon is from the future!"

    "The future!?!?" Piplup and Chimchar gasped simultaneously. "You're from the future, too?"

    "Ok, this is too much for me!" Lucario groaned. "Why is everybody from the future?"

    "Yes, that is correct!" Sceptile declared. "I am from the future!"

    Grovyle struggled ahead another step. "You're not just from the future! You plotted the world's downfall right along with Dusknoir, Dialga, and the Sableye!"

    "Aaargh!" Piplup screamed.

    "What?" Lucario jumped in surprise. "Why are you screaming?"

    "What is it, Piplup?" Chimchar asked.

    Piplup spasmed violently. "I just can't take this many surprises in one day! It's too much for me!"

    "Really, Piplup?" Chimchar frowned.

    "What? You're not surprised?"

    "No, I am."

    "And you're not spazzing out from too many brain messages?"

    "No, I am."

    "But you don't look like it."

    "Well, I am."

    "But you're so calm!"

    "Yes, I am."

    "But you said you're freaking out!"

    "I am."

    "But you're calm!"

    "I am."

    "But you can't be both!"

    "I can."

    "No!"

    "Yes."

    "No!"

    "Yes."

    "No!"

    "Yes."

    "No!"

    "Yes. Really, it's quite simple how I'm this calm."

    "How? Tell me! Tell me!"

    "Well, aren't you used to getting this many big surprises in a single day?"

    "Well, I guess that's true."

    "Yeah. We've faced bigger surprises than this."

    "Yep. That's true."

    "And now you're calm, right?"

    "On the outside."

    "Yep. And you're freaking out on the inside?"

    "Yep."

    "Yep. Me too."

    "Being calm is so calming."

    "Yes, it is."

    "Wonderful weather we're having."

    "Yeah."

    "Are you two quite finished?" Lucario interrupted.

    "Yep."

    "Yep."

    "We're calm."

    "Yeah. Calm."

    "Well, there are better times to be calm!" Lucario interjected. "We've got bigger problems on our hand!"

    Behind Sceptile, Abomasnow and Machamp rose back to their feet. No.88 and 89 still lay slumped against the wall.

    "You were fools to believe you could defeat me!" Sceptile snarled. "Yes, I'm from the future! Yes, I worked for Master Dialga! But that was a different world!"

    "Sceptile, what are you talking about?" Abomasnow asked. "You've never told us about any of this."

    Sceptile whirled on Abomasnow. "Shut up! My business is my business, and not yours!"

    "Y-yes, sir," Abomasnow mumble.

    "You guys are going down again!" Chimchar declared. "We're not letting you get away with your wrongdoings!"

    "Right!" Piplup agreed. He stepped up to face Sceptile. "You're going down!"

    "Alright, you asked for it!" Sceptile roared. Before Piplup even knew what was happening, Sceptile was right on top of him, Dragon Claw coming down like a guillotine.

    "Aaaaaaaarrrrrrgh!!!!!!"

    Piplup opened his eyes and gasped. Sceptile stood a short distance away from him, eyes wide open in surprise. Then, his mouth twisted into a hideous smile. "Ha ha ha! Always the hero."

    Sprawled on the ground before Piplup was Grovyle. He wasn't moving.

    "Grovyle!" Piplup screamed. "Grovyle, no!"

    "It was his own fault!" Sceptile spat. "He knew he'd already taken an enormous amount of damage. If he'd just be less of a hero, why, I would dare to say that his life span would be years longer! That is, if he's even still alive."

    "You'll pay for this!" Piplup scowled. "You will pay!"

    "Oh, really?" Sceptile grinned. "You and what army?"

    Piplup whirled around. Chimchar and Lucario were gone. "What the-"

    "Boss, where did they go?" Abomasnow asked. "I never saw them leave!"

    "Ha!" Sceptile scoffed. "They probably ran away while we weren't looking! Cowards!"

    "No!" Piplup hissed. "They're not cowards! Chimchar would be standing right here by me if he could! Something happened!"

    "Well, that doesn't matter to me!" Sceptile laughed. He stepped forward towards Piplup. "All that matters is eliminating you! I'll catch the others later!"

    "I'll take you down!" Piplup challenged, stepping up ahead of Grovyle's limp body.

    "Oh, no you don't!"

    Before Piplup knew what was happening, he felt himself being grabbed from beneath. Then, the world disappeared and all he could see was blackness.



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    That surely was quick! Too bad Sceptile wasn't Grovyle's dad.......... Well, at least I know he is from the future and worked for "Master" Dialga. Chimchar probably used Dig and that was why he disappeared. Where are Mew and Dusknoir are though? I can just picture Machamp and Abomasnow abandoning Sceptile in the future. (I mean near the end of Book 2) Great chapter! Can't wait for more, as always!
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    Gyaooooooooooh! Ah, you just absolutely RUINED that argument I was having with Torpoleon(jk)! Nice chapter. Smell ya later!
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    Could No. 88 and No. 89 have taken them?

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    Quote Originally Posted by nathaniel2222 View Post
    Could No. 88 and No. 89 have taken them?
    Taken Dusknoir and Mew? I doubt it. I am pretty sure that they did not.
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    More Piplup and Chimchar arguments huh? They never get old xD

    By the way, nice chapter, can't wait for the mysterious stranger back at the cafe though
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    MY prediction is that chimchar is going to burst out of the ground with dig.

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    *Random closet burns down*

    And so, I leave the closet- I've been reading this since Book One first started, but I was too lazy to post anything.

    Anywho, my theories-

    Dusknoir used Shadow Sneak.
    Chimchar and Lucario used dig.
    Mew used either one.

    Theory on Sceptile-

    He's from farther in the future than Grovyle, or from an alternate future.
    And- Sceptile IS Grovyle.

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    Ok, I'd like to take a poll. Sometime towards the end of Book 2, or maybe in Book 3, I'm not sure yet, I will introduce a new exploration team, which will be a group of freedom fighters. What name would you guys like better?

    1. Team Adventure
    2. Team Quest
    3. Team Liberty

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    Team Liberty. Nuff' said.



























































    All your base are belong to us.


































    I say to you welcome!



















    Back on topic.

    Chimchar used Dig!
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    All of them sound fine. Which ever one seems best, GalladeRocks. The team would join Pipulp, Chimchar, Grovyle and Dusknoir, right?
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    I liked the part when Machamp told Grovyle to stand still. Hillarious. I also liked the long Piplup-Chimchar dialougs. Your'e right, it never gets old. Sorry I took so long!

    By the way, my vote's for team Liberty.
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    I'm going to vote for
    Team Liberty also

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    hmmm..... i must say i am inclined to vote for team liberty as well.
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    Yep, you're on! And it's starting to seem obvious what the new team's name is going to be, wouldn't you guys say?
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    I finally finished reading Book2! (I finished Book 1 like last week) I'll only review Chapter 16, though.

    Oh man! I wished Sceptile was Grovyle's father, because it makes. Both from the future. Both on the same evolutionary line. Anyway, I think Chimchar used Dig and pulled Piplup underground and Lucario is hiding somewhere nearby waiting to strike. great Chapter, Gallade!

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